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    A Pokémon Adventure

    some Information on the characters in this FF



    The hudson Family

    Mother: Anthea (Pokémon Breeder)

    Farther: Aiden (Pokémon Day Care Manager & ex Gym leader)

    both parents run the pokemon day care and breeding centre in Burnie town

    Older Sister: Natsume (Leader of Brighton Town Gym & Pr. Assistant) she also helps her parents from time to time.

    Twins: Adam & Aurora

    Younger Brother: Ethan


    A Pokémon Adventure


    Chapter 1 A new Pokémon companion

    Narrator: Today in the Tasmoto Reign in a small town called Burnie two siblings will be starting on their Pokémon journey.

    Anthea: ADAM & AURORA you are going to be late.

    Adam & Aurora: OKAY Mum we will be down in a minute.

    Narrator: A few mins Later Aurora and Adam where packed and ready to go they then made their way down stairs.

    Aiden: I bet you’re exited.

    Adam: I cannot wait to get started.

    Aurora: I cannot wait to meet my Pokémon partner.

    Anthea: no one is going anywhere until after breakfast.

    Adam & Aurora: Okay Mum

    Aurora: mum where’s Ethan

    Aiden: up stairs packing hoping he can go with you, all children want to go before it is their turn. We have already said he has to wait his turn.

    Ethan: I am ready

    Adam: sorry little bro not this time.

    Aurora: yeah you will get your turn

    Ethan: Mum Please

    Anthea: your still to young dear and beside dad still needs you to help out around here and so do I, now let’s all finish breakfast and let Aurora and Adam be on their way to Professor Cynthia’s Lab.

    Ethan: Okay Mum.

    Narrator: An hour had passed and everyone had finish breakfast.

    Aiden: come on you two I will give you a lift into the next town otherwise it will take you two days to get to Brighton, and get your first Pokémon and this way I can tell your Sister to meet us there.

    Adam & Aurora: okay Dad, See you later mum and Ethan.

    Anthea: take care of yourselves now, Ethan let’s begin today’s work.

    Ethan: okay Mum.

    Narrator: They then flew off in dad’s helicopter, it did not take them to long to get to the Lab Natsume was waiting along with the Professor.

    Pr. Cynthia: Welcome to my lab I have surprise for you both there are two sets of starter Pokémon in there, Adam you will choose from group A and Aurora you will choose from group B shall we go inside.

    Aurora and Adam: YES!.

    Pr. Cynthia: Adam this is your group; we have Chimchar, Piplup & Turtwig.

    Adam: they look so cool.

    Narrator: He thought for a moment.

    Adam: I choose Chimchar.

    Pr. Cynthia: great choice Adam now its Aurora’s turn for you Aurora we have Snivy, Tepig & Oshawott.

    Aurora: they all look so cute but I will have go with Oshawott.

    Natsume: Great choices you two now I have a favour Adam when you think you are ready come and challenge me.

    Adam: I was planning on it sis.

    Natsume: looking forward to it then, oh and Aurora good luck in all the Pokémon contest’s you enter as well, oh and I think they will be holding one here not sure when yet but I will be sure to tell you.

    Aurora: thanks sis.

    Adam: we should be on our way.

    Pr. Cynthia: before you two go here are your eight poke balls and Pokedex’s, you can only carry eight Pokémon with you at one time.

    Aiden: well I will be off take care Adam and Aurora, oh and Natsume if you need a ride home you can come to if you’re done today.

    Natsume: thanks dad lets go take care you two, oh that’s right mum wanted me to take a photo of you two with your very first Pokémon so bring them out.

    Adam: Chimchar come on out.

    Aurora: you to Oshawott.

    Natsume: okay say cheese.

    Adam & Aurora: Cheese.

    “Snap”

    Natsume: cool well I better be off take care and be safe both of you.

    Pr. Cynthia: may I suggest you head to Hillwood town first there is a gym there and a contest happening in a few weeks from today, good luck you two & have a great journey.

    Narrator: Once everyone had left and the two where alone.

    Adam: hey Aurora let's spend today at the Pokémon centre and head off tomorrow, we can also have a Pokémon battle at some point while we are there and we may meet other trainers.

    Aurora: sure it will give us a chance to get to know our Pokémon better.

    Narrator: Not long and they had arrived at the Pokémon centre.

    Adam: Nurse Angela, are you there.

    Nurse Angela: yes what can I do for you?

    Aurora: we going to spend the night here can you please be the ref for our Pokémon battle later.

    Nurse Angela: sure and very well have fun just give me a yell if you need help with anything else.

    Adam & Aurora: Okay.

    Aurora: well I am off to spend time with Oshawott see you in a few hours.

    Adam: see you later then.

    Narrator: quite a few hours had passed.

    Aurora: let’s go find Adam so we can have our battle what do you think Oshawott.

    Oshawott: Oshawott.

    Adam: hey Chimchar its time for lunch then we will have our Pokémon battle lets go find Aurora and Oshawott.

    Chimchar: Chimchar.

    Narrator: As Adam walk into the Pokémon centre Aurora was there talking to Nurse Angela she then turns around and sees Adam.

    Adam: I think we should have Lunch, then after that we can have our battle.

    Nurse Angela: okay well just give me a yell when you are both ready.

    Aurora: we will thank you.

    Narrator: An hour had then passed and they had finished eating and talking they then called for Nurse Angela.


    Adam: we are ready to get our Pokémon battle underway.

    Nurse Angela: okay then follow me.

    Narrator: She then led them to the Pokémon battle field.

    Nurse Angela: here we are.

    Narrator: They then both then got into position.

    Adam: Chimchar I choose you.

    Aurora: Oshawott I choose you.

    Nurse Angela: the Pokémon battle between the Hudson family twins shall begin.

    Adam: Chimchar use Ember.

    Aurora: Oshawott use water gun.

    Adam: Chimchar use tackle.

    Aurora: Oshawott you use tackle as well.

    Narrator: Half an hour had then past.

    Adam: let’s make this move count Chimchar.

    Aurora: same goes for us Oshawott.

    Adam: Chimchar use Ember.

    Aurora: Oshawott dodge then use tackle.

    Narrator: both attacks hit and they both waited to see what would happen, Nurse Angela waited then said.

    Nurse Angela: both Pokémon are unable to battle this battle is a tie.

    Adam: good job Chimchar.

    Aurora: good job Oshawott.

    Narrator: they then congratulated each other.

    Adam: Nurse Angela can you take care of our Pokémon to the morning.

    Aurora: yeah can you.

    Nurse Angela: sure.

    Narrator: they then headed inside.

    Aurora: well it is still pretty early I may go talk to Nurse Angela some more then head up to my room I will be down for tea.

    Adam: okay I may keep an eye out for other trainers I see you at dinner then.

    Aurora: yeah mum prepared something for us just for tonight.

    Narrator: quite some time had passed Adam was waiting for Aurora so they could have dinner, she then walked in.

    Aurora: I asked Nurse Angela if I could use her kitchen to warm something’s up lets dig in then head up to bed.

    Adam: yeah it has been a long day I cannot wait to catch my first Pokémon.

    Aurora: me to.

    Adam: well I am done thanks for the meal.

    Aurora: night.

    Adam: yeah night see you in the morning.

    Narrator: day one is now over what will tomorrow hold.




    Next Chapter the Journey Begins

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Great work, can tell you put a lot of effort into it
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Been a while since you posted anything, eh, Serena? Looks pretty interesting. Did you just create the Tasmoto region or does that one already exist?
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Quote Originally Posted by Hypemaster View Post
    Great work, can tell you put a lot of effort into it
    Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by chakrawizard555 View Post
    Been a while since you posted anything, eh, Serena? Looks pretty interesting. Did you just create the Tasmoto region or does that one already exist?
    Thank you & yeah I know its been awhile since I have done any thing at all and to answer your question no the Tasmoto Reign does not already exist I made it up
     
         
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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    It's amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Nice work serena ... I read it full ... And one thing i want to suggest .. Please describe the pokemons ... I m not a pokemon fan ( i know abt it though ) ... So it was hard to imagine piplup and chimchar etc ...
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Quote Originally Posted by uzumaki antonia View Post
    It's amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter
    Thank you glad you enjoyed it & I will be releasing the next one soon

    Quote Originally Posted by EL MAGNIFICO View Post
    Nice work serena ... I read it full ... And one thing i want to suggest .. Please describe the pokemons ... I m not a pokemon fan ( i know abt it though ) ... So it was hard to imagine piplup and chimchar etc ...
    thank you glad you enjoyed it Piplup sort of looks like a penguin and chimchar looks a little like a monkey
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Oh my!!! Do I see Pokemons? xD

    A bit rusty eh serena?

    I only know about the first 151 lol so its a bit difficult to understand who's who unless you describe them. Also, don't they (Pokemons) make any noise....like Pikachu says pika pika (you know what I mean lol)
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    good work.
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    This was pretty cool! Cheers for sending me the link :D
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    OMFG great read ^^ i love adventure FF's Notify me on the next chapter please.
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Quote Originally Posted by Flash07 View Post
    Oh my!!! Do I see Pokemons? xD

    A bit rusty eh serena?

    I only know about the first 151 lol so its a bit difficult to understand who's who unless you describe them. Also, don't they (Pokemons) make any noise....like Pikachu says pika pika (you know what I mean lol)
    O.O there is 600 plus now and they are still making more.

    Quote Originally Posted by Braveknight View Post
    good work.
    Thank you


    Quote Originally Posted by Zyynn View Post
    This was pretty cool! Cheers for sending me the link :D
    no problem & ty

    Quote Originally Posted by M3U View Post
    OMFG great read ^^ i love adventure FF's Notify me on the next chapter please.
    ty and I will
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    it was good i like ur last one more still o-o
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Quote Originally Posted by Zawar View Post
    it was good i like ur last one more still o-o
    thank you & I will be going between the both of them don't worry, ty for rep
     
         
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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Let me initially start off by saying that I love Pokemon and I’m thrilled that you decided to do a FF based on this franchise! ^^

    Wow, Adam and Aurora’s father can operate a helicopter! I wonder what he is employed with lol So it is revealed that the professor’s assistant is the main protagonists’ sister-cool. Okay, we have two sets of starters from two different regions and the limit for carrying Pokemon on your person has always been 6 but it appears this region is the exception-very interesting. It was a nice first chapter and I’m looking forward to see how this story unfolds
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    Let me initially start off by saying that I love Pokemon and I’m thrilled that you decided to do a FF based on this franchise! ^^

    Wow, Adam and Aurora’s father can operate a helicopter! I wonder what he is employed with lol So it is revealed that the professor’s assistant is the main protagonists’ sister-cool. Okay, we have two sets of starters from two different regions and the limit for carrying Pokemon on your person has always been 6 but it appears this region is the exception-very interesting. It was a nice first chapter and I’m looking forward to see how this story unfolds
    I am glad you liked it and that's only where she helps out when she is free I just added info I should of had there in the beginning.
     
         
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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    impressive .
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Impressive, great job
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Guess it my turn to dive in, no weird cryptic message this time.

    I enjoyed Serena I'm a huge Pokemon fan, however there is only one thing lacking for me and that is discription. I can't stress that enough buddy. Get more discritive like describe the Pokemon moves and how they look. I already know because I'm a fan but others are not and they need that discription. Besides that you did well keep it up.
     
         

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    Re: A Pokémon Adventure

    Quote Originally Posted by seventhboa View Post
    Impressive, great job
    Thank you glad you liked it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Cobra73 View Post
    Guess it my turn to dive in, no weird cryptic message this time.

    I enjoyed Serena I'm a huge Pokemon fan, however there is only one thing lacking for me and that is discription. I can't stress that enough buddy. Get more discritive like describe the Pokemon moves and how they look. I already know because I'm a fan but others are not and they need that discription. Besides that you did well keep it up.
    thank you Cobra for your Comment and I am glad you liked it
     
         

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