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    [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    Greetings, Professor Sarutobi.

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed.
    Terrain: Plain grassy field, no water source.
    You may use the Fourth Raikage's abilities up to your current rank as well as Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know.
    We start mid range from each other.
    If you have any questions please ask them through VM.


    I will be using a Kage-ranked Sasuke (MS) and Jugo (SM) for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that you're testing for and I will make the first move.

    No one other than myself and the participant may post here. If required, administrators/moderators and official senseis can input their opinion as well.

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    Thanks so much Gobi :D

    Pretty sure I can't use NB tai in the test but I'm at S ranks instead of A like the bio says
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=345082
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    Quote Originally Posted by Professor Sarutobi View Post
    Thanks so much Gobi :D

    Pretty sure I can't use NB tai in the test but I'm at S ranks instead of A like the bio says
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=345082
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.
    Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
    Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
    Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.



    Sasuke lifted his head, starring at the Raikage with his three dotted crimson coloured eyes, and immediately trapped him within an illusion. A dark shadowy figure appeared before him, as everything turned black. The blackened figure stretched his arms out, grabbing hold of the Lightning Shadow, restraining his movement as well as putting a mental stress upon his body(Paralyzed.).

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will cast a Genjutsu upon the target in which they will see a shadowy figure appear infront of them bearing the Sharingan and then the figure will grow to an enormous size over shadowing the target in pitch-black darkness. The figure will then grab hold of the target and then will cover them in black threads, leaving them paralyzed for a period of time. (This was shown by sasuke against Shi)
    Note: Must have tomoe 3 to use and paralyzing effects last 1 turn.



    At the sametime as Sasuke lifted his head, casting the Raikage under his spell, Jugo sprints in an arc to the right, keeping mid-range distance, while weaving a string of seals together, resulting in a fire sphere being released diagnoally towards the Raikage. His left, fired from Sasuke's right by Jugo.

    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse → Tiger exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.



    Sasuke whos having trapped the Raikage in his illusion, clasps his hands together forming a singular hand sign causing the ground beneath him to spin inwards on itself, forming a pit, sucking the Brute-looking Raikage into it.

    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.



    The antlion and fire sphere would happen simualtaneously - The fire sphere will if succesful, hit against the side of the antlion and erupt into a maelstorm of fire, catching the Raikage in it, while hes being trapped in the antlion itself.
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    A arrives , throwing his Kage Haori off with a quick swing of his arm, Sasuke's eyes ablaze with the red and black Sharingan as he is looking straight into the mighty Raikage's eyes. Being a man of honor A looked straight into his eyes unafraid of the powers they wield. Suddenly, almost expectantly the world around him changed rapidly, a huge black monster appeared and grabbed him, the strength of this thing was unbelievable. Having prior knowledge of the Sharingan's Genjutsu abilities and the fact that Sasuke especially was a talented user of the eyes along with the sudden change and appearance of the creature let A quickly analyze that Sasuke had caught him in an illusion. Reacting quickly the Raikage released a burst of lightning chakra from his body to spike his spiritual energy and bring him back to reality.

    (Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.


    With his chakra flow normal now A comes to see a huge ball of flames headed for him as well as the ground suddenly dropping below him changing into a sandy pit sucking into a hole. Once again needing to react quickly A channels more lightning chakra into the ground through his feet, the lightning chakra neutralizing the earth chakra temporarily stopping it's flow.

    (Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.


    This allowed him a solid footing just for a split second, more then enough time as A is suddenly wrapped in his family's signature Lightning Release armor and leaves the pit by dashing to his right at immense speed leaving the fireball to crash into empty space. A second after the armor is upon him the Raikage arrives at Jugo's position to his left, slamming his left fist into the psychopath's skull sending him flying back towards Sasuke violently slamming into his partner sending them both flying back and landing skidding across the grass.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

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    A arrives , throwing his Kage Haori off with a quick swing of his arm, Sasuke's eyes ablaze with the red and black Sharingan as he is looking straight into the mighty Raikage's eyes. Being a man of honor A looked straight into his eyes unafraid of the powers they wield. Suddenly, almost expectantly the world around him changed rapidly, a huge black monster appeared and grabbed him, the strength of this thing was unbelievable. Having prior knowledge of the Sharingan's Genjutsu abilities and the fact that Sasuke especially was a talented user of the eyes along with the sudden change and appearance of the creature let A quickly analyze that Sasuke had caught him in an illusion. Reacting quickly the Raikage released a burst of lightning chakra from his body to spike his spiritual energy and bring him back to reality.

    (Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.


    With his chakra flow normal now A comes to see a huge ball of flames headed for him as well as the ground suddenly dropping below him changing into a sandy pit sucking into a hole. Once again needing to react quickly A channels more lightning chakra into the ground through his feet, the lightning chakra neutralizing the earth chakra temporarily stopping it's flow.

    (Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.


    This allowed him a solid footing just for a split second, more then enough time as A is suddenly wrapped in his family's signature Lightning Release armor and leaves the pit by dashing to his right at immense speed leaving the fireball to crash into empty space. A second after the armor is upon him the Raikage arrives at Jugo's position to his left, slamming his left fist into the psychopath's skull sending him flying back towards Sasuke violently slamming into his partner sending them both flying back and landing skidding across the grass.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography
    Sasuke observes A activating his lightning shroud, followed by avoiding the fire sphere. Once avoided, the explosion from the two jutsus impacting one another, occurs. He proceeds by following the track of the Raikage, observing from a distance before acting.

    Jugo, the moment sound of the lightning crackling at his face, along with covering his entire view - Instinctively appendages of flesh shoot out from his forehead and along way down his right arm, giving protective properties, taking the impact from the thunderslam delivered by the Raikage.

    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: C-A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15-30
    Damage: 30-60
    Description:
    Sage Transformation (Senninka) is an ability wielded by Jūgo's clan, which increases their physical abilities and allows their bodies to perform various shape-shifting feats due to their innate ability to passively absorb natural energy. It is a multifaceted ability that permits them to achieve feats ranging from creating various weapon-like appendages to altering their body structure, as well as a general increase in their physical capabilities. In the experiments created by Orochimaru, this ability is referred to as "Cursed Seal Transformation" (Juinka). The transformation can be used countless times in battle and sustained while Jugo has enough chakra to do so. The damage the technique can produce is proportionate to the body part altered and the way it was altered. This technique enables the user to produce melee attacks or defenses through the alteration of his body.
    Note: Can only be used by Jugo bios



    Launched back, Jugo flips mid-air and like claws, he pushes his hands into the soil slowing the mometum of the delivered punch, stopping him fully inbetween Sasuke and the Raikage. Standing in a cat-like position he without delay, lunges himself forward, back at the Raikage.

    Once Raikage appears before Jugo already launching his attack, Sasuke takes the courtesy to fall down on one knee, slapping his palms onto the floor. A surge of earth chakra was emitted, and as Jugo is launched back, two slabs of rock arise. One at either side, slamming onto the lower parts of his legs, crushing them inbetween in a splatter of blood.

    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user slams their hands on the ground and giant rocks rise up and jag the opponent from underneath.



    Quickly followed Jugo made his dash at the Raikage, once in range his right arm is lunged forward as a bundle of flesh opens at his elbow emitting a powerful burst of chakra enchancing the speed and not least, his power behind the punched aimed at the Raikage's chest. As he deals with the two rocks.

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (+40 to a Taijutsu move)
    Description: Jūgo, will manifest jet like appendages from his body to boost the damage of a punch, kick or other taijutsu related move by triggering them in the right point and adding more power to his attack. It can also be used supplementary to, for example, increase his strength to throw an ally or a projectile or to help defend from a technique by putting more strength behind a defensive move.
    Note: Can only be used by Jugo.


     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    As A moves at great speeds and his fist is about to make contact with his first obstacle the orange haired villain mutates rapidly before his eyes. Nonetheless his foe is sent flying away from the force of his punch, however a violent shaking of the ground begins, not unnoticed by the experienced Kage. Past his deflected foe A can see Sasuke with his palm to the ground, using his legendary level of reaction time and mental processing speed A deduces the Uchiha has learned a few Doton techniques in the past and is utilizing them, thinking quickly the Raikage kicks off the ground to get into the air a few meters up to get a good look at what the young criminal was releasing from below him. As giant rocks come raising up towards him the Raikage quickly reacts by swinging his left arm and releasing a whip of lightning from his hand that whips about like a tornado and cuts the rocks to pieces with ease, the lightning's energy dispersing after serving its purpose.

    (Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent


    the Raikage immediately returns his attention to the two ninja before him seeing the orange haired follower running back at him foolishly as the Raikage lands on the ground once again. As Jugo's body is mutating further A can see his arm becoming more deformed and as the enlarged fist comes closer the Taijutsu master simply grunts dismissively as if to say "The nerve of this punk, using Taijutsu against me!"

    "Out of my way! Erubo!"

    The Raikage roars as he moves forward in a burst of speed to close the little gap left between them, his left shoulder moving to the side and tilting his right side towards Jugo, moving his body out of the way of Jugo's punch in the split second movement, at the same time as lifting his right elbow he supports it with his left hand slamming his right elbow into Jugo's nose stopping him abruptly and causing serious damage if not killing the young foe from the force.

    (Erubō) - Elbow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio


    This powerful blow sends Jugo once again flying away, but learning from the last time A doesn't let up after just one hit. Using another burst of speed the Raikage vanishes form normal eye sight, following after the weakened mutant and grabbing him by the left ankle as he flying by Sasuke, using him like a weapon and swinging him into Sasuke's side releasing Jugo's ankle upon impact letting them both go flying away to come to a skidding halt across the grass tearing up the ground until they do.

    Are you done letting weaklings fight for you, Uchiha!? You got away at the Kage Summit but the Kazekage isn't here to save you this time!

    The Raikage then focuses a huge amount of lightning chakra into his hand forming a Raikiri on his left hand and pulling it apart to create a second blade on his right hand. Then using the speed granted by the lightning armor A comes rushing towards his two enemies in a zig zag pattern that will make it hard for even the sharingan to track, as A gets in close enough range he slams his lightning coated fists into the young villains finishing both their lives in unison.

    (Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

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    As A moves at great speeds and his fist is about to make contact with his first obstacle the orange haired villain mutates rapidly before his eyes. Nonetheless his foe is sent flying away from the force of his punch, however a violent shaking of the ground begins, not unnoticed by the experienced Kage. Past his deflected foe A can see Sasuke with his palm to the ground, using his legendary level of reaction time and mental processing speed A deduces the Uchiha has learned a few Doton techniques in the past and is utilizing them, thinking quickly the Raikage kicks off the ground to get into the air a few meters up to get a good look at what the young criminal was releasing from below him. As giant rocks come raising up towards him the Raikage quickly reacts by swinging his left arm and releasing a whip of lightning from his hand that whips about like a tornado and cuts the rocks to pieces with ease, the lightning's energy dispersing after serving its purpose.

    (Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent


    the Raikage immediately returns his attention to the two ninja before him seeing the orange haired follower running back at him foolishly as the Raikage lands on the ground once again. As Jugo's body is mutating further A can see his arm becoming more deformed and as the enlarged fist comes closer the Taijutsu master simply grunts dismissively as if to say "The nerve of this punk, using Taijutsu against me!"

    "Out of my way! Erubo!"

    The Raikage roars as he moves forward in a burst of speed to close the little gap left between them, his left shoulder moving to the side and tilting his right side towards Jugo, moving his body out of the way of Jugo's punch in the split second movement, at the same time as lifting his right elbow he supports it with his left hand slamming his right elbow into Jugo's nose stopping him abruptly and causing serious damage if not killing the young foe from the force.

    (Erubō) - Elbow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio


    This powerful blow sends Jugo once again flying away, but learning from the last time A doesn't let up after just one hit. Using another burst of speed the Raikage vanishes form normal eye sight, following after the weakened mutant and grabbing him by the left ankle as he flying by Sasuke, using him like a weapon and swinging him into Sasuke's side releasing Jugo's ankle upon impact letting them both go flying away to come to a skidding halt across the grass tearing up the ground until they do.

    Are you done letting weaklings fight for you, Uchiha!? You got away at the Kage Summit but the Kazekage isn't here to save you this time!

    The Raikage then focuses a huge amount of lightning chakra into his hand forming a Raikiri on his left hand and pulling it apart to create a second blade on his right hand. Then using the speed granted by the lightning armor A comes rushing towards his two enemies in a zig zag pattern that will make it hard for even the sharingan to track, as A gets in close enough range he slams his lightning coated fists into the young villains finishing both their lives in unison.

    (Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.
    As the Raikage landed on the ground once more, Jugo's appendages opened at the front of his fist, and as the Raikage set off, from the flesh opening a burst of chakra occured.

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (+40 to a Taijutsu move)
    Description: Jūgo, will manifest jet like appendages from his body to boost the damage of a punch, kick or other taijutsu related move by triggering them in the right point and adding more power to his attack. It can also be used supplementary to, for example, increase his strength to throw an ally or a projectile or to help defend from a technique by putting more strength behind a defensive move.
    Note: Can only be used by Jugo.




    Doing so would end up in a clockwise spin, a pivot on his feet, as he goes into a low-stance to keep balance. The Raikage's elbow would by all means pass right above Jugo's face, touching his hair if anything, while Jugo's own elbow would hammer right into the right side of the Raikage. A thrust into the gut. The partial sage transformation conceded. The left arm following right behind the elbow thrust, a palm strike was delivered to the chin of the raikage launching him skywards.

    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: 15
    Description: The user strikes the opponent with a forwarding palm thrust.



    Once airborne Jugo makes a somersault backwards out of the way, as Sasuke fires a barrage of lightning needles at the Raikage's location, piercing through several places on his body.

    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    As Jugo mutated his arm once more and a burst of chakra came from the same arm causing him to spin the Raikage quickly analyzed the situation as his elbow was thrusting forward, just barely missing the mark. Jugo's elbow slams into the Raikage's side, A grunts from the impact but Jugo was a fool if he thought such a weak attack could affect the son of the 3rd Raikage! (For further reference of being able to "brush off" the attack, Jugo hit Bee straight in the face right after he was electrocuted with a chakra jet boost powered punch and he was perfectly fine a few seconds later, even moved a large distance in a short time right after and A has shown to be just as tough if not tougher in most cases then Bee)

    As Jugo moves his left hand to strike A's chin he quickly moves his torso back a few inches allowing the strike to pass by and A then ruthlessly and in one fluid motion grabs Jugo's wrist with his left hand to hold it in place for a split second as A quickly slams the palm of his right hand into the elbow of the mutant shattering and noticeably bending the arm and causing blinding amounts of pain to Sasuke's follower. As Jugo screams A uses the wrist control he still holds and yanks down on the shattered arm and slams his left knee upwards into Jugo's nose knocking him out , sparing him from continued agony for the moment.

    (Shōshitsu) - Rising Knee
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: 15
    Description: The user will strike their opponent with an upwards thrust with their knee


    After rendering the first enemy useless A turns to face Sasuke (I assume you don't do the needles since I wasn't thrown into the air as a target for the combo) and lets his armor fade away

    Now.

    A reactivates his Lightning Release Armor, his hair flairing up as he does, seemingly more chakra being put out then before, his rage about to boil over, his eyes becoming bloodshot as he stares the Uchiha in the eyes

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    Here I come!
    The Raikage roars as he raises his left foot and to the naked eye vanishes from sight in a burst of speed.

    A bursts towards Sasuke at about 3/4 full speed (knowing his foe is a dangerous one he doesn't use his full speed in case he needs to react and change course in an instant) and slams his left arm into his neck and chest area blowing them open and spraying blood everywhere.

    (Rariatto) - Lightning Plough Hot Sword
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move, coated in chakra. A successful strike can blow away a target's entire chest with a direct hit. The attack is rather straightforward, but very quick and powerful. Killer Bee was shown using this technique in his chakra cloak form, and the Raikage was shown using the Lightning Armour technique.
    Note: Technique can only be used whilst in a chakra cloak and can only be used and taught by a Raikage bio or Killer Bee bio
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    Quote Originally Posted by Professor Sarutobi View Post
    As Jugo mutated his arm once more and a burst of chakra came from the same arm causing him to spin the Raikage quickly analyzed the situation as his elbow was thrusting forward, just barely missing the mark. Jugo's elbow slams into the Raikage's side, A grunts from the impact but Jugo was a fool if he thought such a weak attack could affect the son of the 3rd Raikage! (For further reference of being able to "brush off" the attack, Jugo hit Bee straight in the face right after he was electrocuted with a chakra jet boost powered punch and he was perfectly fine a few seconds later, even moved a large distance in a short time right after and A has shown to be just as tough if not tougher in most cases then Bee)

    As Jugo moves his left hand to strike A's chin he quickly moves his torso back a few inches allowing the strike to pass by and A then ruthlessly and in one fluid motion grabs Jugo's wrist with his left hand to hold it in place for a split second as A quickly slams the palm of his right hand into the elbow of the mutant shattering and noticeably bending the arm and causing blinding amounts of pain to Sasuke's follower. As Jugo screams A uses the wrist control he still holds and yanks down on the shattered arm and slams his left knee upwards into Jugo's nose knocking him out , sparing him from continued agony for the moment.

    (Shōshitsu) - Rising Knee
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: 15
    Description: The user will strike their opponent with an upwards thrust with their knee


    After rendering the first enemy useless A turns to face Sasuke (I assume you don't do the needles since I wasn't thrown into the air as a target for the combo) and lets his armor fade away

    Now.

    A reactivates his Lightning Release Armor, his hair flairing up as he does, seemingly more chakra being put out then before, his rage about to boil over, his eyes becoming bloodshot as he stares the Uchiha in the eyes

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    Here I come!
    The Raikage roars as he raises his left foot and to the naked eye vanishes from sight in a burst of speed.

    A bursts towards Sasuke at about 3/4 full speed (knowing his foe is a dangerous one he doesn't use his full speed in case he needs to react and change course in an instant) and slams his left arm into his neck and chest area blowing them open and spraying blood everywhere.

    (Rariatto) - Lightning Plough Hot Sword
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move, coated in chakra. A successful strike can blow away a target's entire chest with a direct hit. The attack is rather straightforward, but very quick and powerful. Killer Bee was shown using this technique in his chakra cloak form, and the Raikage was shown using the Lightning Armour technique.
    Note: Technique can only be used whilst in a chakra cloak and can only be used and taught by a Raikage bio or Killer Bee bio
    Jugo's murderous side kicks in, as his palm strike misses, swaying just beside the Raikage, resulting in the natural energy taking a hold of him. An unnatural transformation takes place as the Raikage grips the arm of the mutant and cracks it, however much to the Raikage dismay as he is about yanking him down along with a knee strike, an omnious blast of chakra emits itself from Jugo's chest directly into the Raikage, blasting him off into the distance as the grip around Jugo's arm loosens. (Insert the laughter of a madman)

    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (-15 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Sage Transformation (Senninka) is an ability wielded by Jūgo's clan, which increases their physical abilities and allows their bodies to perform various shape-shifting feats due to their innate ability to passively absorb natural energy. It is a multifaceted ability that permits them to achieve feats ranging from creating various weapon-like appendages to altering their body structure, as well as a general increase in their physical capabilities. Jugo can fully infuse his body with the gathered natural energy and transform it completely. When he fully transforms, Jūgo gains a massive power boost but loses his mind to his murderous side, signified by a change in his voice. When transforming, Jūgo's skin turns dark and his sclera turn black. He also gains a black stripe running from the middle of his forehead and down the bridge of his nose. In this full form, Jūgo is incredibly resilient, being able to take Taijutsu attacks up to A-Rank with little damage and being able to function even when severely injured. He can further manipulate his body into suitable weapons and manifest chakra cannons from it to attack with powerful chakra blasts. He can manifest chakra boosters from his extremeties to power his taijutsu moves or to "dash" in speed or even to soften a fall. His physical strength becomes greatly increased, adding +25 to his Taijutsu techniques and his chakra becomes stronger, adding +10 to his elemental chakra. He becomes faster and can regenerate minor wounds easily. His resilience is such that he can take C-Rank Ninjutsu and not suffer hindering damage. Because of his rage and his anger, he becomes unable to use techniques that would otherwise require precise chakra control such as Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu or similar complex fields/techniques. After its deactivated or deactivates as it times out, the user is left drained of his stamina and unable to use Taijutsu techniques for 2 turns.
    Note: Can only be used by Jugo bios
    Note: Lasts 6 turns and can only be used once



    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: While in his Complete Sage Transformation, Jūgo grows more of his jet booster like appendages, extends them, and then uses them to gather chakra which then forms a huge powerful chakra blast.
    Note: Can only be used by Jugo.



    Meanwhile, Sasuke starts darting towards the two, channeling chakra into his right hand.
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    As the two monsters clash Jugo unveils just the kind of monster he is, his whole body changing shape this time into a brown skinned creature, being undeterred A simply continues to break the man's arm but notices as he prepares to finish the job that the mutant's chest now houses a cannon type shape and a gathering mass of chakra quickly growing in front of it. A rethinks his plan as his lighting armor fades off of him the middle aged Kage decides he has had more then enough of playing with this abomination and using his immense natural physical power performs a spinning back kick twisting his body from left to right to bring himself around to the side and behind Jugo, his left hand letting go of Jugo's now badly damaged arm in a pulling motion to help twist the monster towards Jugo's right allowing A to get to his back just a little bit quicker as he then slams his left heel into the middle of the back of Jugo to kick him away sending Jugo flying with his chest facing away from the Raikage (and I believe towards Sasuke who is running at us) possibly causing Jugo's chakra blast to be fired towards his partner in crime in sync with the kick.

    (Konoha Gōriki Senpū ) - Leaf Strong Whirlwind
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: A taijutsu using a combination of speed and power. The essence of this technique is concentrated in a spinning back kick, with such speed that makes it hard to follow the user's movement, smashing his enemy with overwhelming strength. This is a more Powerful leaf great whirlwind.


    even though the now very tough monster feels little to no pain from the kick the technique serves it purpose to redirect the blast towards the other foe. As Jugo is sent flying at his partner A quickly becomes coated in the Lighting Release Armor once more, a split second later his left hand becoming wrapped in an even higher concentration of lightning as a Chidori is formed on it.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    A bursts forward into Jugo's back as he is still flying through the air just barely off the ground from the force of the kick and slams his lightning coated hand into the monster's lower back and extends the lighting chakra to form a spear that impales Jugo's spine and gut and pushes the creature at Sasuke at an even faster pace, so fast that even with A's previous knowledge of the Sharingan's powers he doubted that the young Uchiha would be able to react quick enough to avoid his plan. As the two criminals are slammed into each other (or more likely, Sasuke dodges/blocks successfully) and Sasuke is also stabbed by the lightning and pushed away from the Raikage, A increases the power of his lightning further causing an explosion of electricity to swallow them.

    ( Raiton: Chidori Shinsō ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
    Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    Quote Originally Posted by Professor Sarutobi View Post
    As the two monsters clash Jugo unveils just the kind of monster he is, his whole body changing shape this time into a brown skinned creature, being undeterred A simply continues to break the man's arm but notices as he prepares to finish the job that the mutant's chest now houses a cannon type shape and a gathering mass of chakra quickly growing in front of it. A rethinks his plan as his lighting armor fades off of him the middle aged Kage decides he has had more then enough of playing with this abomination and using his immense natural physical power performs a spinning back kick twisting his body from left to right to bring himself around to the side and behind Jugo, his left hand letting go of Jugo's now badly damaged arm in a pulling motion to help twist the monster towards Jugo's right allowing A to get to his back just a little bit quicker as he then slams his left heel into the middle of the back of Jugo to kick him away sending Jugo flying with his chest facing away from the Raikage (and I believe towards Sasuke who is running at us) possibly causing Jugo's chakra blast to be fired towards his partner in crime in sync with the kick.

    (Konoha Gōriki Senpū ) - Leaf Strong Whirlwind
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: A taijutsu using a combination of speed and power. The essence of this technique is concentrated in a spinning back kick, with such speed that makes it hard to follow the user's movement, smashing his enemy with overwhelming strength. This is a more Powerful leaf great whirlwind.


    even though the now very tough monster feels little to no pain from the kick the technique serves it purpose to redirect the blast towards the other foe. As Jugo is sent flying at his partner A quickly becomes coated in the Lighting Release Armor once more, a split second later his left hand becoming wrapped in an even higher concentration of lightning as a Chidori is formed on it.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    A bursts forward into Jugo's back as he is still flying through the air just barely off the ground from the force of the kick and slams his lightning coated hand into the monster's lower back and extends the lighting chakra to form a spear that impales Jugo's spine and gut and pushes the creature at Sasuke at an even faster pace, so fast that even with A's previous knowledge of the Sharingan's powers he doubted that the young Uchiha would be able to react quick enough to avoid his plan. As the two criminals are slammed into each other (or more likely, Sasuke dodges/blocks successfully) and Sasuke is also stabbed by the lightning and pushed away from the Raikage, A increases the power of his lightning further causing an explosion of electricity to swallow them.

    ( Raiton: Chidori Shinsō ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
    Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.
    Alot of things could happen the moment you kick him around, when the blast goes off. Such as the recoil, not having any balance at all at the given moment would fire him right back at you, since you hit will cause him to pivot around, along with being launched back. The blast however, gradually stronger than the momentum of the kick. Which would go right back at you, as you prepare to launch the spear. But to keep it simple - I will go along.

    Sasuke sways his already chakra charged hand forth, unleashing a torrent of lightning needles at Jugo's vicinity, as he is being kicked. The needles would penetrate right through his back, and as small as they're, and as much as a surprise they will be for the old war veteran of a Raikage to be, it would pierce him as he charges for the lightning spear. Several places on his body.

    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.



    Obviously they would disrupt your move, and eventually have you cancel out the lighting spear even before it pierces Jugo, or well, atleast discharge into an explosion.

    At the sametime, Sasuke closes his eyes a sheer moment and re-opens them, while taking a step out of his fallen buddy's way. His changed eyes intensively keeps watch of the Raikage as he continues his charge.

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50 (-25 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Description:
    The Mangekyo Sharingan, literally meaning "Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye", is the highest known form of Sharingan, said to be feared as the strongest form of Sharingan. Awakening MS requires the user to have possession of 3 Tomoe Sharingan and to witness or simply go through some extremely dramatic emotional event. Upon this event, the user awakens MS. The most noticeable MS users gained it by witnessing the death of someone important to them, sometimes by their own hand. Once activated the appearance of the pupil drastically changes, differing from the tomoe seals, and gains a shape unique to each user. When active the user can track speeds even further beyond that of the third stage sharingan. The timing of the users counters, the chaining speed of multiple techniques and the ability to see through the enemy's moves greatly increases. Not only that but the user gains the ability to see through visual illusions A-rank and below. The link to Genjutsu is further increased and, if the user has gained full mastery over Genjutsu, he gains the ability to cast any and every genjutsu without the need for Handseals as long as he has a line of sight to the target. Also, the Mangekyo Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques, unique to each user. Extended use of the Mangekyo Sharingan after some time, deteriorates the user's eyesight to the point of blindness. The chakra cost is so high that it drains the users stamina and chakra at increasingly high speeds. Once the side effects of it's use take place, the user is left blind and unable to activate his sharingan. While keeping it active is already quite hard, the user will drain the time he can keep it active at each MS technique he uses. While some can decrease one turn, others can decrease even more.
    Note: The user needs to have activated his 3T Sharingan beforehand
    Note: Can only be activated twice, requiring a 2 turn coldown to activate again
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 8 turns for the first activation and 4 turns for the second
    Note: After the first activation wears down, his eyes revert to their normal appearance and the user can't activate his sharingan for 1 turn
    Note: The first activation drains the users stamina and leaves him tired, while the second activation leaves the user blinded and almost unable to move if he doesn't deactivate it before the time ends
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.

     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    The Raikage with himself and his hand bathed in lightning begins his mad dash towards Jugo and suddenly through Jugo's body several small needles of lightning pierce through the mutant.

    The scum will even attack through his own follower!?

    Taking A by surprise but thanks to his increased through process speed from the lightning causing all of his neural synapses to be firing all at once the lightning shadow quickly twists his left hand while extending the chakra in his hand to form a spear and the twisting motion uses the spear to deflect the needles of lightning just before they hit the monster of a man.

    (Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.


    After having deflected the needles A stops to take into account what else Sasuke is doing and sees his eyes have changed once again, this time a six pointed red star in black eyes. From the information gathered by Kumogakure on the Uchiha and his older brother Itachi another famed criminal A easily realizes he is facing the Mangekyou Sharingan and watches Sasuke's eyes for any further changes that would indicate an attack.

    You think I'm afraid of you boy!? The eyes are windows to the soul and I can tell from your eyes that your soul is tainted by darkness.

    the spear of lightning shrinks back as A focuses more chakra to his hand and then thrusts his hand upwards to the sky and releases several bolts of lightning that rage outwards and severally damage Jugo who until now had only suffered minor wounds from the needles and having his arm broken.

    Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    Quote Originally Posted by Professor Sarutobi View Post
    The Raikage with himself and his hand bathed in lightning begins his mad dash towards Jugo and suddenly through Jugo's body several small needles of lightning pierce through the mutant.

    The scum will even attack through his own follower!?

    Taking A by surprise but thanks to his increased through process speed from the lightning causing all of his neural synapses to be firing all at once the lightning shadow quickly twists his left hand while extending the chakra in his hand to form a spear and the twisting motion uses the spear to deflect the needles of lightning just before they hit the monster of a man.

    (Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.


    After having deflected the needles A stops to take into account what else Sasuke is doing and sees his eyes have changed once again, this time a six pointed red star in black eyes. From the information gathered by Kumogakure on the Uchiha and his older brother Itachi another famed criminal A easily realizes he is facing the Mangekyou Sharingan and watches Sasuke's eyes for any further changes that would indicate an attack.

    You think I'm afraid of you boy!? The eyes are windows to the soul and I can tell from your eyes that your soul is tainted by darkness.

    the spear of lightning shrinks back as A focuses more chakra to his hand and then thrusts his hand upwards to the sky and releases several bolts of lightning that rage outwards and severally damage Jugo who until now had only suffered minor wounds from the needles and having his arm broken.

    Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.
    As the lightning spear started to shrink and the Raikage rambled on, Sasuke eye closed for a mere moment and opened once more, followed by a drip of blood, running at its outline and proceed down his cheek. A mere hit was all he needed, the flames of Ametarasu ignited and spread across the Lighting Shadow's left arm, as he started charging for his next jutsu, caught in his vigor and speech.

    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage Points: 120 (-30 to the user)
    Descripton:
    One of the basic techniques awoken with MS, Amaterasu is the ability to ignite the undying black flames. The jet-black flames of the Amaterasu, said to be the fires from hell that are as hot as the sun, ignite at the focus of the user's vision. This dispiction is somewhat linked to the fact that, because of the damage produced in ones eyes, as the user closes his eyes and prepares to use Amaterasu, tears of blood flow through his face. The black flames lack momentum and impact (being unable to break through strong solid inert defenses) but have a very high parasitic ability, spreading through anything that comes in contact with them and consuming with enormous ease, any type of fire. Though the flames have been stated to be unavoidable (since they are not a projectile but "happen" on focal point), this has been proven as false. While quite hard to avoid, its been proven that ninjas with enhanced speed and reactions (such as Third and Fourth Raikage in Lightning Armor) when facing the user can move out of the focal point before the flames actually ignite. This is related to the somewhat slow ignition and burn of the flames. While they burn for 7 days, can't be doused and are hard to avoid, they spread and burn through the target slowly. Also, its been noticed that Dojutsu users (3 Tomoe Sharingan, Rinnegan, Byakugan) and skilled chakra sensors can see/feel the overflow and increasing chakra pressure in the eye, right before Amaterasu is used, but that in itself is not enough to dodge or block it, as target would need to move faster than the user can focus his eye on it. Another thing that has been shown capable of blocking Amaterasu are "sentient" automated defenses, like Gaara's sand shield. By coming between the user and his target, a fast enough defense can block the intended focal point (the enemy) and defend him from the black flames, as long as its tangible and completely blocks the users line of sight.
    Note: Requires the user to have his MS active
    Note: Can only be used 4 times and reduces MS duration by 2 turns each use
    Note: Cannot be dodged unless the user has an ability that fits the ones described
    Note: If hit, enemy has 1 turn before losing conscious and eventually being completely consumed, during which he experiences excruciating pain and damage.



    Hopefully catching the veteran off-guard and interrupting his doing he with his already charged chakra palm, caused lighting to envelop it, and lunged it forward at the chest of his opponent. Quickly pulling the palm back out, allowing the blood to flow before being cautorized by the spreading flames. (If not, the Raikiri makes impact with the nearest lighting bolt, clearing it - Though leaves you open for Amaterasu)

    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.



    (Jugo is K.O'ed - Tihihi)
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

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    As the lightning spear started to shrink and the Raikage rambled on, Sasuke eye closed for a mere moment and opened once more, followed by a drip of blood, running at its outline and proceed down his cheek. A mere hit was all he needed, the flames of Ametarasu ignited and spread across the Lighting Shadow's left arm, as he started charging for his next jutsu, caught in his vigor and speech.

    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage Points: 120 (-30 to the user)
    Descripton:
    One of the basic techniques awoken with MS, Amaterasu is the ability to ignite the undying black flames. The jet-black flames of the Amaterasu, said to be the fires from hell that are as hot as the sun, ignite at the focus of the user's vision. This dispiction is somewhat linked to the fact that, because of the damage produced in ones eyes, as the user closes his eyes and prepares to use Amaterasu, tears of blood flow through his face. The black flames lack momentum and impact (being unable to break through strong solid inert defenses) but have a very high parasitic ability, spreading through anything that comes in contact with them and consuming with enormous ease, any type of fire. Though the flames have been stated to be unavoidable (since they are not a projectile but "happen" on focal point), this has been proven as false. While quite hard to avoid, its been proven that ninjas with enhanced speed and reactions (such as Third and Fourth Raikage in Lightning Armor) when facing the user can move out of the focal point before the flames actually ignite. This is related to the somewhat slow ignition and burn of the flames. While they burn for 7 days, can't be doused and are hard to avoid, they spread and burn through the target slowly. Also, its been noticed that Dojutsu users (3 Tomoe Sharingan, Rinnegan, Byakugan) and skilled chakra sensors can see/feel the overflow and increasing chakra pressure in the eye, right before Amaterasu is used, but that in itself is not enough to dodge or block it, as target would need to move faster than the user can focus his eye on it. Another thing that has been shown capable of blocking Amaterasu are "sentient" automated defenses, like Gaara's sand shield. By coming between the user and his target, a fast enough defense can block the intended focal point (the enemy) and defend him from the black flames, as long as its tangible and completely blocks the users line of sight.
    Note: Requires the user to have his MS active
    Note: Can only be used 4 times and reduces MS duration by 2 turns each use
    Note: Cannot be dodged unless the user has an ability that fits the ones described
    Note: If hit, enemy has 1 turn before losing conscious and eventually being completely consumed, during which he experiences excruciating pain and damage.



    Hopefully catching the veteran off-guard and interrupting his doing he with his already charged chakra palm, caused lighting to envelop it, and lunged it forward at the chest of his opponent. Quickly pulling the palm back out, allowing the blood to flow before being cautorized by the spreading flames. (If not, the Raikiri makes impact with the nearest lighting bolt, clearing it - Though leaves you open for Amaterasu)

    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.



    (Jugo is K.O'ed - Tihihi)
    A, who had been watching Sasuke's eyes as his chakra pooled at his hand saw what he was waiting for, blood falling from his eye and intense vein display as the boy opened his eye. Letting the lightning chakra in his hand disperse the Raikage instead focused his attention on the boy's eye and the dangerous change in his eye. Moving quickly the lightning coated shinobi burst to his right as the amaterasu's flames ignited where his arm was a moment ago.

    (Chiratsuki Kaihi/Undō) Flicker Evasion/Movement
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/A (+20 when used with a Taijutsu move)
    Description:
    Using the amazing abilities of the Lightning Armor technique, both the 3rd and 4th Raikages are able to move at insanely high speeds to dodge or evade incoming attacks, even those that would normally be unavoidable such as Amaterasu. This fast movement can also be used in conjunction with a Taijutsu move, including their own signature Lightning based Nintaijutsu moves, to use the momentum one can gather and add even more damage if the move allows it. The technique also alows the user to move in more elaborate patterns that one would think, although following a more or less linear path. The only weakness of this technique is that, since its purely fast and enhanced movement, you cannot use it in all battle grounds but only those that would otherwise enable its use. Not only that but although the user moves fast, he is still trackable by high Doujutsu users (3T, Byakugan and Rinnegan), Sensors and EIG Masters. This doesn't mean the opponent can react (that depends on his speed, mastery of taijutsu and techniques used) but rather that he can perceive the attack.
    Note: This version can only be used by 3rd and 4th Raikage bios, while having the Lightning Armor active and only once per turn.


    Continuing his immense speed burst straight ahead from his spot a few meters to the right of where he had been before after avoiding Amaterasu. A then, to the naked eye, vanishes for a split second only to reappear as his giant self in Sasuke's blindspot on the young uchiha's left with his left hand drawn back.(just like in the manga, this would be where Sasuke had just survived Liger Bomb and used shield of flames on his sussanoo's rib bones because he wasn't able to track where A went when he dodged Amaterasu at first)

    the large man then brings his hand screaming forward dealing a neck shattering backhand chop to the top of Sasuke's neck where his spine meets the base of his skull sending him flying forward, blood spewing from his mouth (like when hit by this through the sussanoo's ribs) his left eye feeling the backlash from his use of Amaterasu would be pouring blood down his cheek and his body would be stiff from pain at first, skidding face first across the ground to become limp upon stopping, rendered unconscious by the blow.

    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.


    After the blow sends his foe flying A takes a deep breath, keeping his eyes on the two fallen shinobi criminals in front of him as his lightning armor shrinks and fades off of him.

    Its over. Now neither of you will harm the ninja world ever again.
     
         

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    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    I've seen enough. I will submit this for grading.

    If I was to proceed, we would just re-live the events in the manga. Theres no need to further drag the test then. The outcome is predicted.
     
         

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    story is the real thing!
     



    Re: [Fourth Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    ~Test Passed~

    Apologies for the long wait on getting the verdict but with the tournament and the bio you were using at the time I couldn't approve the bio or anything. But aside from that, the test is a solid pass. Despite being against two characters instead of one, you were still able to shows strong expertise in Taijutsu and the Raikage's other abilities. You were able to keep the pressure on him for the most of the fight and able to control the flow of the battle. Congratulations!

    (I can't do much about the bio, just remake it.)
     
         

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