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    Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    So guys this is my first attempt at predicting the upcoming edition of manga , your critisism is appreciated

    Upon seeing orochimaru

    TSUNADE : Oroc... , how is it possi.. !!!!!!!!

    OROCHIMARU : Tsunade i stand before u again , but u r the one who is in need of help

    ( Orochimaru notices the other kages at various positions unconscious but have so signs of physical damages)

    OROCHIMARU : So u were able to save the other weaklings , it seems that i shud never expect anything less from u even in ur condition

    TSUNADE : What r ur intentions ?? How r u even .........

    OROCHIMARU : (interupts tsunade ) Karin !!!!!!!

    KARIN : I will get on it orochimaru sama

    (orochimaru makes a dark brown coloured snake slyther from his left arm while he brings the other half of tsunade's body and places it on the ground , the snake immediatly surrounds tsunade's abdomen as if joining the two halfes)

    OROCHIMARU : KUCHIYOSENO JUTSU (summons a never before seen snake , white in colour with deep green eyes)

    (it slythers to tsunade's neck and bites her secreating special enzymes into tsunade's blood stream , and disaapears)

    OROCHIMARU : Karin start healing her ( and performs hand signs , following which the snake joining tsunade's body glows with a very bright light , and then we see orochimaru's tongue doing wat it does best)


    THE SCENE CHANGES TO THE KANUI DIMENSION

    (both obito and kakashi are spotted panting a little while kakashi is bruised a bit more)

    OBITO : Let's finish this pathetic game of urs now shal we , u know u can't beat me kakashi

    KAKASHI : Obito u shud understand this , u were the one who opened my eyes......

    OBITO : And i was the one who gave u my eye , let me show u the true power of an uchiha

    (obito starts making handsigns , kakashi notices this with his sharingan and performs shadow clone jutsu and at almost the same time performs the very same handsigns)

    OBITO : .....................FIRE STYLE PHOENIX WAVE........................... : KAKASHI

    (the waves of fire collide with each other , but it is clearly visible that kakshi's jutsu is weaker)

    KAKASHI'S SHADOW CLONE : EARTH STYLE STAIR MUD WALL

    (obito's fire wave is approaching kakshi pushing his fir stly back , while the shadow clones jutsu makes a sort of staircasemoving towards obito)

    (kakashi runs a starts climbing the mud wall stairs thus avoiding obito's jutsu, while the stairs kakshi crosees have been burnt to dust)

    KAKASHI : Obitoooooooooooooooooooooo........................ ..............

    (leaps into the air , and quickly makes hand signs for shadow clone , and throws the shadow clone forward at obito , obito uses reverse intangibility letting kakashi clone pass through him and immediately stikes the clone , but to his surprise it was kakashi's lightning style shadow clone , hence obito is struck by lightning)

    KAKASHI : I have got u now..............

    (strikes at obito's head with lightning blade , but obito was gud enough to react to kakashi even after struck by lightning jumps diagnally trying to avoid the strike , but fails to avoid it and get's stuck by lightning blade on his left arm , which then falls to ground )

    (both stand a fair distance away from each other and stare)

    OBITO : (in his mind , well done kakashi , ur better tan i thought but a weakling none the less)

    KAKASHI : ( in his mind , I am running out of the nine tails chakra , i will have to find a way to finish this now!!!!!!!!!!!!)

    THE SCENE CHANGES TO THE BATTLE FIELD

    SHINOBI ALLIANCE : What on ear... , how is this pos ............???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    HASHIRAMA : This thing..................

    TOBIRAMA : Expressionless , deep in himself

    HIRUZEN : To even think that it was capable of this ........

    MINATO : Calm expression on his face looks towards the other kage who acknowledge by nodding slightly

    NARUTO : How can it be , we hit it with our best justu , but somehow .............

    SASUKE : ( a small expression of disbelieve but get's back to his normal self)

    SAKURA : What is going on ?????????!!!!

    ALL THE RUMBLING SOUND SETTLES DOWN AND THE SMOKE STARTS TO CLEAR AWAY......................

    THE JUUBI CAN BE SPOTTED BUT THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG , THE SHINOBI ALLIANCE IS AWESTRUCK !!!!!!!!!!


    ....WHAT DID THEY SEE ?????? , WHAT R THEY GOING TO DO ????????!!!!





    THE END


    Hope u liked it guys , I know it ain't epic nad that there a lot of areas where i can improve

    Anyways ur criticism is much aprreciated
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Great prediction. Felt so real lol. Orochimaru is the best. I hope his part is real.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    I sort of think that the up comming chapter would be of tsunade and oro n the current kages....Anyway nice prediction..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Quote Originally Posted by Jinchuriki Brawler View Post
    Great prediction. Felt so real lol. Orochimaru is the best. I hope his part is real.
    i tried to minimise the action to a part where it would feel like it was close to real , i am happy that u liked the prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    You really captured Tobirama very well
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Quote Originally Posted by hyuuga teddy View Post
    You really captured Tobirama very well
    haha i tried to atleast make him say something but that would just not fit well with his badass nature :scorps:
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    nicely done!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Quote Originally Posted by Markomil View Post
    nicely done!
    thank you
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Quote Originally Posted by ajaya3028 View Post
    I sort of think that the up comming chapter would be of tsunade and oro n the current kages....Anyway nice prediction..
    that might very well be true but i felt this would happen coz they have not shown the kamui dimension from the past two chapters , anyways welcome to the base , enjoy and r u from india ?
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by ajaya3028 View Post
    I sort of think that the up comming chapter would be of tsunade and oro n the current kages....Anyway nice prediction..
    I agree with you, but nice prediction.
     
         

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    That made my skin crawl, nice work man! haha
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    hope atleast a few of u enjoyed
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Nice one dude, I loved it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Quote Originally Posted by P3IN View Post
    Nice one dude, I loved it
    thank you ,so do u feel i could improve anywhere?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Wow, props my man. This was a fantastic prediction, wasnt too long like the usual ones & the ending even gave me the chills slightly

    Although my AC is on
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Quote Originally Posted by Draphsin View Post
    Wow, props my man. This was a fantastic prediction, wasnt too long like the usual ones & the ending even gave me the chills slightly

    Although my AC is on
    hahah very funny , i kinda tried to limit the action , iguess that was a gud thing coz people seem to like it that way rather than a helloff a lot of action which makes it unrealistic i believe
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Well...wow for dat man. I felt lyk i was in an Hd version of ur work
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Quote Originally Posted by wilraspid View Post
    Well...wow for dat man. I felt lyk i was in an Hd version of ur work
    that was my only work guess u enjoyed it huh ?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Good prediction , I love kakashi and obito part :
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Quote Originally Posted by Katkot View Post
    Good prediction , I love kakashi and obito part :
    Nice prediction. I can't see Oro approaching Tsunade and she's dead. Of course he's going to make fun of her for being in half, but he will put her back together. Then she gone sucker punch him for making fun of her......lmao kinda a Sakura and Naruto moment. lol Naw, but nice prediction.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by PYROVT View Post
    thank you ,so do u feel i could improve anywhere?
    Nope, it's flawless
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    It was cool, but you should upgrade your orthography.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    Very good, keep up the good work brah
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 635 by PYROVT

    This is a pretty good prediction.
     
         

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    Great Prediction Bro....
     
         

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