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    Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

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    This is full chapter 9 no parts.
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    ~Previous chapter~

    [Sally]
    Is a young Blond 16 year old girl ... she wears a red hair clip that was given to her by her mother. Her casual clothes are a white T-shirt and a red skirt.
    [Ageria]
    Is a young black haired 19 year old boy... His casual clothing is a White shirt and a black pants.
    [Valton]
    Wears a Black suit and a red coat hanged on his shoulders as a cloak and has Long black hair and usually wears Red Sunglasses.
    [Reed]
    Wears black jeans and a red long coat with a naked chest.Has white hair and blue eyes.
    [Kuroko]
    Wears a white cloak with a white uniform has black hair and brown eyes.
    [Junto also known as the "guy in the black cloak"]
    Wears a black cloak which is torn from every edge....is bald and has a tattoo near his eyes.
    [Muaro]
    Wears a scarf around his neck and a blue cloak and is neatly dressed, has white hair combed backwards and wields a katana



    Muaro : How rude of you to jump in between our battle.....Guess i have no choice but to finish you off first...Muaco na Dutendo *Releases a shockwave of energy* ...
    Kuroko : So you decided to release a portion of your blitz huh ? This seems interesting ...
    Valton : .... So ?....Shall we begin ..
    Kuroko : I don't see the reason to not to ......
    *They clashed at the same time at the speed of light*
    Muaro : *Attacks Kuroko*
    Kuroko : *Teleports at a distance and charges and throws a shock wave at Valton*
    Valton : *Dodges it and Releases a explosion of light and releases a striking attack* *Suddenly looks right* What the !?
    Muaro : You haven't forgotten that their are no friends in this battle....have you ? *Strikes Valton*


    Mean while ....


    Sally : I have been running for ever.....i'm not getting anywhere... i wonder where that guy went, and mostly where is Valton ?..
    *sits next to the rock*
    Reed : Found you ..... Sally.
    Sally : Huh *Looks at Reed* R-Reed !?
    Reed : I need you to come with me ....
    Sally : To where... where are you taking me ?
    Reed : To Plato.....
    Sally : Plato ? where is that ?
    Reed : Away from Earth....Come on let go *Grabs Sally's arm and teleports*
    Sally : Huh !? hey wa...!!

    ....

    Valton : Seems as if i under estimated you..... but now its time for this show to end...
    Muaro : I've been waiting for you to do this.... Show me your true POWER !
    Kuroko : True power.....what you mean all this time he was not ....
    Valton : I thought i could get through this mess without it, but guess not..[Reed you took Sally to Plato because you knew i would do this, huh ....thank you] .... Now....

    ???? : Are you sure thats a good idea ...... Valton !?


    Untill next chapter ^^
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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

    I was finally going to get to see Valton get serious for the first time ......

    Why such a short chapter bro...
    Well looking forward for Valton to go all out but considering the last line its seems I would have to wait for couple of chapter now. Valton Rules

    Nice read bro excellent chapter as always but its short for me
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

    What's the deal with the short chapter?! Hahaha! I'm kidding, this is getting so good. I wonder who this mysterious new comer is and what is going to happen next for Sally? At first I thought that Muaro and Valton were fighting together against Kuroko but was surprised, and happy, that it tunred into a three-way deadlock. Can't wait to see teh next chapter! Looking forward to it as always!
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

    Why is it too short?!? I want moore~ and I want more Valton Hahaha. just kidding But good chap M3U. Nice nice, but I want more actions and more Valton nice chapter again~ and yeah, there's a new character.. ooh, sweet. Nice job M3U keep it up but I hope next time you're going to make it longer.
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

    That was so short.... Nice one Bro....
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by HazuRima View Post
    Why is it too short?!? I want moore~ and I want more Valton Hahaha. just kidding But good chap M3U. Nice nice, but I want more actions and more Valton nice chapter again~ and yeah, there's a new character.. ooh, sweet. Nice job M3U keep it up but I hope next time you're going to make it longer.
    Quote Originally Posted by YokoKurama View Post
    What's the deal with the short chapter?! Hahaha! I'm kidding, this is getting so good. I wonder who this mysterious new comer is and what is going to happen next for Sally? At first I thought that Muaro and Valton were fighting together against Kuroko but was surprised, and happy, that it tunred into a three-way deadlock. Can't wait to see teh next chapter! Looking forward to it as always!
    Quote Originally Posted by ~Zonta~ View Post
    I was finally going to get to see Valton get serious for the first time ......

    Why such a short chapter bro...
    Well looking forward for Valton to go all out but considering the last line its seems I would have to wait for couple of chapter now. Valton Rules

    Nice read bro excellent chapter as always but its short for me
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    That was so short.... Nice one Bro....
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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

    Amazing! But why so short ?
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by BlackAnbu View Post
    Amazing! But why so short ?
    Yohohohoho its classified Yohohoho !
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

    I thought this chapter would only target the fight between Muaro, Valton and Kuroko but you shifted back to Sally which I thought was a nice move. I wondered what happened to Reed and it appears that he slipped through the battle at some point unnoticed. So Valton somehow knew where and why Reed took Sally and I wonder who this new character is who seems to know Valton. Great chapter again even though it was pretty short lol
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    I thought this chapter would only target the fight between Muaro, Valton and Kuroko but you shifted back to Sally which I thought was a nice move. I wondered what happened to Reed and it appears that he slipped through the battle at some point unnoticed. So Valton somehow knew where and why Reed took Sally and I wonder who this new character is who seems to know Valton. Great chapter again even though it was pretty short lol
    I can continue the next chapter in peace i never make an chapter till you haven't posted on my latest one
     
         

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