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    Kakuzu's Betrayal | The Will Of Kumo | Pt.2

    Kakuzu's Betrayal | The Will Of Kumo | Pt.2
    Prologue

    Kakuzu has just beheaded his ex-partner Hidan in an outrageous argument which turned into an intense battle between the two Akatsuki members, who were on the path to capture the Two-Tails Jinchuriki; Yugito Nii. What will Kakuzu do now that he is the sole member of his squad? What will be his ultimate decision? And what lies in store on his path to capture Yugito Nii?

    Scenario Information

    Knowedge:
    Team Samui: Full
    Kakuzu: None

    Scenario:
    Northern Gates Of Kumogakure

    Distance:
    20 Meters

    Dialogue #1

    Yondaime Raikage: We must protect our Jinchuriki at all cost, if we lose her, we lose one-third of our military power! It's been said the Akatsuki have been capturing them, and evidently from our sources Yugito Nii is next to be captured.

    Darui: Boss if I may pose a preposition: I say we should have a patrol team of skilled sensors stay on watch that way we'd predict the Akatsuki's presence, and pinpoint their location before they could even notice.

    C: That's a good idea Darui. But don't forget the Akatsuki are a group of S-rank criminals simple thinking such as yours would more than likely be deciphered quickly. I propose we set up two divisions: Division A: Several Skilled Jōnin taking watch from the outskirts of Kumogakure from the North, East, & West. Division B: Two proficient Sensors at the North, East, & West Gate. This will enable optimal security rather or not the Akatsuki show up, this would be a versatile set up in which would aid us further in the future.

    Darui: Tch! As expected from you C..

    Yondaime Raikage: That's that then! Plan Secure Kumogakure initiate!




    After the violent confrontation between Kakuzu, and his ex-partner Hidan, Kakuzu progressively moved onward getting closer, and closer toward the North Gate of Kumogakure. As Kakuzu had soon reached the outskirts of the North Gate he realized something was wrong; as if the Northern Gates were emitting a disturbed presence of chakra. Kakuzu than deployed his hearts in which he positioned them: The Katon, & Fuuton Mask within the front, and The Raiton Mask covering his 6 O'clock. After positioning his Masks, Kakuzu then goes on to perform the hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger enabling the Katon Mask to emit Katon: Zukokku within Kakuzu's 12 o'clock direction, while simultaneously performing the Ram hand seal causing the Fuuton Mask to emit Fuuton: Atsugai integrating into Katon: Zukokku causing everything within Kakuzu's frontal view to be charred to ashes.

    Three shadows jump out of the direct impact in which the Zukokku + Atsugai combination was aimed. The three shinobi then position themselves in a triangular formation encasing Kakuzu within the space, surrounding him completely.
    Dialogue #2

    Samui: I don't know who you are, but it's apparent you're a threat to Kumogakure, along with being a fellow Akatsuki member. You will step no further in obtaining the Two Tails!

    Karui: You Akatsuki scum won't evade Kumogakure that's for sure!! We will crush you here, and now you bastard!

    Omoi: Karui.. Do not underestimate him. He is after all, an Akatsuki member.

    Karui: Shut up Omoi! Are you siding with the enemy?! Should I kill you too!

    Omoi: No No! Karui just calm down, and focus on the problem at hand. This guy is named Kakuzu, Darui, and C gave me a bit of information on him; he has five hearts in which are contained in his body, and those threaded mask creatures, he also uses the nature affinities: Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, & Doton. Samui, Karui be weary!

    Kakuzu: You know about me, a pleasure indeed .. But this is all a meaningless act. Give up now, and leave with your lives..

    Samui: You severely underestimate us, and that will ultimately be your down fall! Team Samui! Protect Kumogakure Initiate!


    Karui being the hot-headed member of Team Samui goes in to attack Kakuzu head on from his 12 o'clock. Karui while running at Kakuzu full speed reaches behind her back with her right arm to unsheathe her sword, while doing this she is confronted by both the Katon, and Fuuton mask, in which Karui quickly takes to the ground, and slides to evade confrontation from either mask. Once she is out of harms way she upturns her sword, and sends it straight into Kakuzu's chest aiming for his heart.

    Omoi seeing his teammate Karui take up the courage to make the first attack takes the initiative to attack Kakuzu as well striking from his 6 o'clock in which Omoi went head on against the Raiton mask. Omoi at the beginning of the confrontation unsheathed his sword, and used his chakra affinity to his advantage by channeling his Raiton chakra throughout the blade to increase his lethality. Once Omoi channeled his chakra flow, he jumps in the air gaining momentum in which he uses to bypass Kakuzu's Raiton mask, and completely beheads Kakuzu using Kumo-Ryū Uragiri in sync with Karui's assault.

    Kakuzu being confronted by a infuriated Karui aiming to pierce his heart, activates Doton: Domu in which solidifies his skin to block all physical techniques that oppose him. Once he does this he is blitzed by Omoi who completely avoided Kakuzu's Raiton mask, and went for him instead. Kakuzu not having enough time to dodge relies on his Doton: Domu in which is rendered ineffective due to Omoi's Raiton channeling throughout his sword. Kakuzu is then beheaded, and stabbed within the heart causing him to quench in pain, while dropping to the ground lifelessly.

    Dialogue #3

    Karui: Hah! What a let down, I thought the Akatsuki would be some elite group, this guy died in such a pathetic way.

    Omoi: Were you not just listening Karui? This guy has five hearts, we've only successfully destroyed one, stop being impulsive, and think strategic!

    Samui: Excellent teamwork you to, keep your guard up though the worse has yet to come..


    Kakuzu: You were given a choice.. And you've secured your death. Hopefully you Kumogakure pest have a bit of a bounty on your heads..

    Seconds later after Kakuzu is beheaded, and ridden of his Doton heart, his threads come together to stitch his head back together, along with Kakuzu's Raiton mask integrating back into Kakuzu's body to revive his lifeless body. Kakuzu then swiftly blitzes Karui who was distracted by her gloating, and insults, taking her by the neck with his right arm squeezing her neck until she stops breathing, in which Kakuzu then places his left arm upon her chest unleashing his Jiongu threads attaching them to the area in which her heart is located forcefully infiltrating, and removing her organ.

    Omoi in fear, scurries to Samui's presence positioning himself side by side Samui in which he can feel her trembling as well. Omoi than looks back at a dead Karui, then glances at the monster in which was Kakuzu who held Karui's heart within his left hand. Omoi due to utter fear, and obvious inferiority to Kakuzu, puked kneeling on the ground clinging to life itself as if these would be his very last moments.

    Samui witnessing Kakuzu completely devour Karui's heart within his Rag-Doll body structure trembled in fear as Omoi. But witnessing her subordinate in a trance, she could not show signs of weakness. Samui grabbed Omoi by his shoulder, and stood him up giving him a glare, followed by a fake smile.

    Dialogue #4

    Kakuzu: It was about time that girl had a moment of silence.. Arrogance leads to death, which was her downfall.

    Samui: You damned monster! Listen everything will be alright Omoi. Keep fighting, we cannot let him get into Kumogakure, and capture Yugito Nii!

    Omoi: He is a demon, a monster from Hell! Do you not see what he did to Karui?! And you expect us to defeat him!?! He was right it's all just a futile act Samui! -Slapped By Samui-

    Samui: Get a hold of yourself Omoi! When you graduated The Ninja Academy in Kumogakure you pledged to protect Kumogakure with your LIFE! Is your life that meaningless that your promise means nothing?! As a Kumogakure shinobi I, will proudly sacrifice myself for the sake of My Village, OUR Village!

    Omoi: Samui..

    Samui: Keep your promise Omoi.. Fight this demon with every ounce of your strength, don't go back on your word! At least if we die here, we can surely say in the after life that we protected Kumogakure to our fullest extent! Let the Will Of Kumo never die out! Fight on Omoi!


    Samui after lecturing an entranced Omoi charges Kakuzu unsheathing her Tanto in which she tries to slam into his weak point; his heart. Samui then calls out to Omoi in which snaps out of his trance, and looks at Samui fighting the demon in which is Kakuzu.

    Omoi then rushes into battle with his leader Samui picking up his sword channeling his Raiton chakra within the blade aiming at his heart as well. Omoi while in close range once again relies on his proficient capabilities within Kenjutsu, and uses the technique: Kumo-Ryū Mikazukigiri trying to bisect Kakuzu once again, but due to his previous state of mind encased in fear, Omoi was inaccurate in his positioning of the blade, causing death itself to approach.

    Kakuzu being rushed by both Samui, and Omoi took to the offensive by positioning his Fuuton mask in his 12 o'clock direction then performing the Ram hand seal. This caused Kakuzu's Fuuton mask to emit a large-scale Fuuton: Atsugai in which blew back both Samui, and Omoi. Kakuzu in collaboration once again performed the hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger causing the Katon mask to emit Katon: Zukokku. An outburst of flame then took place behind the large-scale wind, in which caused a huge explosion of which neither Samui nor Omoi could escape.

    Epilogue
    ??: Raigen Raikōchū!

    ??: Suiton: Suijinheki + Raiton: Kangekiha!

    Kakuzu: -shields his eyes- .. How annoying.. The Kumogakure scum just keep coming..

    Omoi: Darui!?

    Samui: C?!


    Chapter 1: Kakuzu's Betrayal | A Jashinist Falls | Pt.1
     
         
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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | The Will Of Kumo | Pt.2

    HOLD UP, you killed. . .Karui?! In such a gruesome manner too. . I feel for her, that's. . A terrible death. And I was thinking too, "It's a bit easy for them to take out his heart. . How will Kakuzu manage to invade Kumo when lacking a heart." JUST for Karui to die. .

    Oh well, and now we get to see how Kakuzu handles against Darui, C, Samui, and Omoi. I'unno, Darui is an impressive shinobi and the whole team might overwhelm him even before he reaches Yugito. .

    It's a good story. I hope there is a third part.
     
         

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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | The Will Of Kumo | Pt.2

    Quote Originally Posted by AncientCenturion View Post
    HOLD UP, you killed. . .Karui?! In such a gruesome manner too. . I feel for her, that's. . A terrible death. And I was thinking too, "It's a bit easy for them to take out his heart. . How will Kakuzu manage to invade Kumo when lacking a heart." JUST for Karui to die. .

    Oh well, and now we get to see how Kakuzu handles against Darui, C, Samui, and Omoi. I'unno, Darui is an impressive shinobi and the whole team might overwhelm him even before he reaches Yugito. .

    It's a good story. I hope there is a third part.
    Kakuzu had to kill Karui to replace the heart lost. Though Karui didn't necessarily possess an element. I believe that when Kakuzu devoured her heart he got his Doton capabilities back. I will ponder about this. Darui, She, and Omoi all have elements in which Kakuzu could take, and use advantage of.

    Just wait, and see. This is a series (more than 3 parts) so Kakuzu will possibly get through this.
     
         

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    An unforeseen situation… An
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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | The Will Of Kumo | Pt.2

    now this is my kind of story my man bad ass indeed .. although one question .. how did they have intel on his five hearts? lol but again this was awsome i literally want to read the next one already
     
         

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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | The Will Of Kumo | Pt.2

    Quote Originally Posted by Zexion~ View Post
    now this is my kind of story my man bad ass indeed .. although one question .. how did they have intel on his five hearts? lol but again this was awsome i literally want to read the next one already
    Possible information transfering from the fire temple to Konoha in which Konoha distributed the information to Kumogakure. Kumogakure needed information to even cause any major damage to Kakuzu in my opinion.

    And thanks man, I'll try to correct my wrongs in the next chapter.
     
         

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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | The Will Of Kumo | Pt.2

    Quote Originally Posted by DrProof View Post
    Possible information transfering from the fire temple to Konoha in which Konoha distributed the information to Kumogakure. Kumogakure needed information to even cause any major damage to Kakuzu in my opinion.

    And thanks man, I'll try to correct my wrongs in the next chapter.

    The capture of Yugitto was before the fire temple thing but its all good the awesomeness surly makes up for it just dont pull a kishi and let Kakuzu get trolled
     
         

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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | The Will Of Kumo | Pt.2

    Quote Originally Posted by Zexion~ View Post
    The capture of Yugitto was before the fire temple thing but its all good the awesomeness surly makes up for it just dont pull a kishi and let Kakuzu get trolled
    It was? need to rethink that then! And no way, Kakuzu won't get trolled. I'm better than Kishi.
     
         

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