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    Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 10

    Valton True power !?

    This is full chapter 10 no parts.
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    ~Previous Chapter~

    [Sally]
    Is a young Blond 16 year old girl ... she wears a red hair clip that was given to her by her mother. Her casual clothes are a white T-shirt and a red skirt.
    [Ageria]
    Is a young black haired 19 year old boy... His casual clothing is a White shirt and a black pants.
    [Valton]
    Wears a Black suit and a red coat hanged on his shoulders as a cloak and has Long black hair and usually wears Red Sunglasses.
    [Reed]
    Wears black jeans and a red long coat with a naked chest.Has white hair and blue eyes.
    [Kuroko]
    Wears a white cloak with a white uniform has black hair and brown eyes.
    [Junto also known as the "guy in the black cloak"]
    Wears a black cloak which is torn from every edge....is bald and has a tattoo near his eyes.
    [Muaro]
    Wears a scarf around his neck and a blue cloak and is neatly dressed, has white hair combed backwards and wields a katana
    [Kulasko]
    Has reddish/brownish hair and wears a white hood which is uzipped and blue jeans



    Valton : ....You're late....Kulasko..
    Kulasko : Ahhhh oh man, i had some problems to deal with myself... and its not like something bad happened .....right ?
    Valton : *Sigh* I know all you were doing was playing around...well whatever....we got ourselves in pretty bad mess over here...
    Kulasko : W-We....What do yah mean WE !? you're the one who's got into this mess.
    Valton : W-what ...!? Ugh you....first you arrive late than you start complaining.....
    Muaro : Charges at Valton......if your chatting has finished, i hope you wouldn't mind getting back to fighting ...
    Valton : *Counters Muaro's attack* Ofcourse not.... I'm getting tired of this.....
    Kuroko : Tired !? Just who do you think you are.....i bet you're the weakest one here....
    Valton : Yah think so.... well i hope this makes you a bit more amused....what you just saw a few seconds ago....wasn't even a glintch of my power....
    Kuroko : W-What !? stop bluffing there's no way that could be possi....!!!*Gets cut in half*
    Valton : I had no intention of using my full power since No one here was worth it...but you Muaro....you're just something else....
    Muaro : [This feeling....its the same feeling as the last time we fought].....
    Kuroko : What.......but thats impossible... this much..... *Gets burned to ashes*
    Muaro : I don't have time for your worthless talk...... *Stares at Valton*
    Valton : ....Now why'd you have to go ahead and do something like that ...
    Muaro : Stop messing with me ....... Release your true power....
    Valton : If thats the last thing you want..... then i will gladly reveal it to you... but i may warn you to not even blink for a second... or that maybe the last thing you ever do.....
    Muaro : ......
    Valton : liberación Hell ... *A shockwave releases and shakes the existence of everything on earth* ......... *Flames start burning everywhere.... Valtons body covered in flames*
    Muaro : U---u.....ug--ugh i ....can barely..breath....what...is this power...
    Valton : *Appears infront of Muaro's eyes in a instant* Didn't i warn you....not to even blink yet your surroundings are full of openings.....*Cuts Muaro with his burning sword*
    Muaro : *Falling down powerless......* [Brother.....you.....you still have a place for me in your heart...even after what i've done...*a tear drop falls from Muaro's face*]
    Kulasko : So...are you gonna finish him off...
    Valton : No.... let him be....let him suffer from fear....
    Kulasko : .... *sigh* Thats just like you.... so where are you...i mean we going ?
    Valton : *Flames start to vanish* We're going to Plato...
    Kulasko : eeeh !? Oh man ...okay..[Valton......you used the liberación Hell release.... after knowing that it decreases your life spam.... really...was the opponent really worth it ....]

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    ???? : What is it !?
    ???? : My lord its Reed ....he has come from earth, and wants to discuss something important with you..
    ???? : Well Reed.... what is it you want to say, hurry up i don't have all day.
    Reed : Uhhh okay okay.... i wanted to have your permission to open the gates of inferno....
    ???? : HuH !? You better have a good reason for this...
    Reed : You can see it yourself ..... Sally you can come in....
    ???? : Huh !? [This ...what am i seeing ....her body ...this human...this girls body is overflowing with Blitz.....] ....I see.....very well then...you may proceed...
    Reed : Great...lets go Sally..
    Valton : You may want to save that for later....
    Reed : Huh !? Valton......
    ???? : Valton.......you can't just come in like that at least knock before coming in.....
    Kulasko : You're asking way to much from him....
    Sally : Valton !? Valton you're alive....
    Valton : I have something to say .....
    ???? : What is it Valton !?
    Valton : The Corkz ....are planning to invade the plato.....
    ???? : WHAT !?
    Reed : Concerning that one of the three leaders died ... by the hands of Kuroko...its obvious that they won't stay quite..... So what do they want to get by invading the Plato...


    Sally : But i don't get it...why would the Corkz want to start war with This place Plato ?
    ???? : Thats because Kuroko was born in this place or to be more precise ...he was one of us, and not only him but Valton, Reed, and every other Killing machine were also a part of us......
    Sally : But didn't Corkz create the killing machines.... they are machines right ?
    ???? : The ones known as killing machines...were a part of Plato....they were warriors in plato which were abducted my the Corkz for experiments.....form which they gained unimaginable power but they lost their own will and were controlled by the Corkz...but still even with their will sealed away some of the warriors were able to break the seal and get their will back.....and when they returned to the Plato our king denied them to be a part of us again and said that it would be a disgrace.... then the warriors created their own team..known as Rasto la vida.....
    Sally : Oh....so that means all of the warriors that got their will back are in rasto la vida ...
    ???? : Not all some of the warriors split into different corners of the galaxy..... Rasto la vida .......stayed on the planet earth so they could get revenge on the plato..But it they failed everytime...then they decided to unleash the devil...Muaro....so that they could use him to invade Plato...but the king gave Reed, Kulasko and Valton a mission to go to earth and prevent this from happening....
    Sally : W-wait this is confusing......why did they stay on earth to get their revenge...and wasn't Reed a part of Rasto la vida.. and aren't Reed and valton killing machines/warriors too ?
    ???? : the entrance to plato is hidden in the planet Earth.... and Yes ......Reed, and Valton are warriors......which were secretly still in contact with Plato... No one in the Plato knows about Valtons presence in Plato.. Reed was sent out to...join Rasto La vida to know their intentions....he informed every information with Plato....he was undercover all this time...
    Sally : But why were they two allowed to be a part of the warriors even though they were also killing machines.......
    ???? : Well thats because they are ..!!!!
    Valton : THATS ENOUGH !? ....you know all that was needed for you to know....
    Reed : I think that is as far as this should go ..... well then i should be headed to Inferno...
    Valton : I figured.... i should be headed to the Kings palace....
    Sally : Uhh where am i going ._.
    Valton : You're going to a place where they will train you....to become strong...
    Sally : Train me !? ...
    Valton : Sally earth has become a war place....and their are many..many casualties....and you have the power inside of you to avenge them all...... Can you...and will you ....?
    Sally : ......If i can do anything ......to avenge them....than i'll try my best.
    Valton : Good..... And Reed will be with you.

    Moments after Reed and Sally entering the Inferno

    Sally : Woaahhhhh Its sure hot in here..... Hey Reed...how long will it take for me to complete my training
    Reed : Good question.....well to be exact....7 years but if you have the potential 6 years could be possible...
    Sally : ._.

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 10

    Wow amazing great read and that's what I call a superb chapter loved it hehe

    Damn Valton he is the best as expected from my favorite character hehe amazing he is boss

    great work bro plus rep for excellent chapters and thanks for unleashing Valton for a while
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 10

    Amazing chapter!
    Can't wait for the new one!
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 10

    Nicely put together chapter! It's long, but not too long that I fall asleep. Loved the action in the beginning. I am wondering if Muaro is really going to die, or will he come back stronger? The suspense about this is a good thing for me, I like suspense. Poor Kuroko didn't stand a chance did he? I'm glad that Sally is going to get some powers of her own after she trains. I can't wait for more character developement from her. OK, I'm done rambling. Can't wait for chapter 11! I'm soooo excited!
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 10

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Zonta~ View Post
    Wow amazing great read and that's what I call a superb chapter loved it hehe

    Damn Valton he is the best as expected from my favorite character hehe amazing he is boss

    great work bro plus rep for excellent chapters and thanks for unleashing Valton for a while
    Quote Originally Posted by YokoKurama View Post
    Nicely put together chapter! It's long, but not too long that I fall asleep. Loved the action in the beginning. I am wondering if Muaro is really going to die, or will he come back stronger? The suspense about this is a good thing for me, I like suspense. Poor Kuroko didn't stand a chance did he? I'm glad that Sally is going to get some powers of her own after she trains. I can't wait for more character developement from her. OK, I'm done rambling. Can't wait for chapter 11! I'm soooo excited!
    Quote Originally Posted by BlackAnbu View Post
    Amazing chapter!
    Can't wait for the new one!
    Yeah i made Kuroko a fodder in this chapter Okaaaaamaaa Waaaaayy
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 10

    wooah, amazing as always, nice job M3U and it's much longer now Nice. Good job, nice chapter.
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 10

    I suppose this Kulasko character is an old friend of Valton’s. Wow, Valton now seems to be Godly and was able to finish off Kuroko in an instant. I didn’t think he would meet his end that quickly and in the way it happened lol Unreal-Valton’s powers are beyond but I’m glad you applied a backdraw. I was wondering where this story was going next as seemingly the two major threats were already dealt with and I’m glad to see that there is more to come. Well, this chapter definitely explained a lot. It now makes sense why it seemed like Reed was on the good side. It will interesting to see how Sally will become strong. So 6-7 years for her to be an established fighter-I suppose there will be a time-skip coming soon. Another great chapter
     
         

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