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    Cherry Blossom Ends The Winter Storm

    [Saskue Uchia is still knocked out from saving Naruto from a barrage of senbon. Naruto is holding Saskue wondering why he saved him]

    Sakura watching fro afar, with a tear in her eye.

    Sakura: Saskue-kun!!!!?

    [Sakura said running towards the mirrors, after she quickly set up a series of traps around the man to ensure his safety.]

    Naruto: No Sakura chan, stay back, he is too dangerous. I must...

    Haku: It's useless there is nothing you can do to break my ice, you are simply too weak, I will deal with you later now...Impossible?

    Kakashi Sakura stop, it's to dangerous!!!

    [Sakura channels her chakra to her first to enhance her strength and then pulverizes the ice mirror. She walks in a stand beside Naruto]

    Sakura: No!, Stop it! Just because I'm a girl does not mean I always have to play the damsel in distress. I will not let you , Kakashi-sensi and Saskue-kun have to be there to save me all of the time. Yeah, I may not be as great as the Uchia, or as be as resilient and have as much chakra as you do, but I am just as capable.

    [Naruto jaw drops, and a sense of seems to overcome him.]

    Naruto: Sakura Chan, your a monster, where'd did you get that strength from?!

    Saskues: [Cough] Sa...Sak...Sakura-chan?!

    Kakashi: But how? That power...Tsu...it can't be?!

    [Kakashi said whilst performing hand signs to counter Zabuza's attack.}

    Zabuza: Impossible, no one should be able to break Haku's mirror's?! That girl what is she!

    Haku: I must get eliminate her fast, if she, for hit's me it is all over.

    [Haku enters his mirrors and then starts to moves around at great speeds.]

    Naruto: Sakura Chan, watch out this jutsu, will hurt you. I dont want you to...

    Sakura: Naruto, be quiet! All I need for you to do is jump with Saskue, then land behind me. You got that!

    [Naruto knods, then pick Saskue up and jumps with him.]

    Sakura: This is what I like to call...Cherry Blossom Impact.....Chaaaaa!!!!

    [Sakura hits the ground and causes pieces of the earth to fly up from the impact, that causes the needles to become ineffective against her.]

    Sakura: I have yet to perfect this jutsu, but with I'm close to doing so. It was a great thing I found the dairy of the great Medical Ninja, Tsunade-sama. I too someday will be like her, maybe even surpass her. I will be on of the greatest Kunoichi's of all times, and show everyone that you don't have to be special to be power, you just have to work hard and play your cards right...then it is possible for you to hit the jack-pot. [Foreshadowing about Tsunade]

    Kakashi: [thoughts] I was right, she is using the legendary Tsunade's jutsu. I'm not surprised that she is able to use it through only reading about it, because her chakra control is possibly rivals my own, maybe even greater.

    Sakura: I wish that Saskue-kun was awake to how much I've grown, to see that I am good enough. But it's no time to be selfish I must eliminate them before Naruto and Saskue get seriously hurt. When a cherry blossom blooms we all know that winter is over...Haku your storm is done for!

    Haku: You...you monster! You call yourself and girl with such strength, then you know nothing about being a girl.

    [As the rocks falls Sakura began to punch them into the mirrors effective smashing at lease 75% of them. Haku fall's from his mirros and a serene yet terrified look covers his face. He began to breath heavily.]

    Haku: Zabuza in my current condition, I am not match for this girl...I...have failed you...But I wont stop trying.

    [Haku extends his hands, in the same manner Gaara did with controlling the ice in his remaining mirrors to form an big ice blade to impale Sakura. Haku closes his hands and causes the ice blade to rush down at Sakura, Naruto quickly jumps in the way and saves her.]

    Haku: Die...you fool. Why?

    Sakura: Naruto?

    [Naruto eyes began to turn red and and red chakra takes the forms of a fox as it seeps out of his body. The ice blade in Naruto back melts and his injuries seems to heal themselves.]

    [ The rest is the same ending as the original, but a bit different.]

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    Re: Cherry Blossom Ends The Winter Storm

    Learning it earlier that's what should have happened
     
         

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    Re: Cherry Blossom Ends The Winter Storm

    Quote Originally Posted by Kakashisquad View Post
    Learning it earlier that's what should have happened
    Yeah, it wouldn't made her more advance and her power ups wouldn't seem as randoms. But thanks for reading.
     
         

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    Re: Cherry Blossom Ends The Winter Storm

    You are welcome
     
         

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    Re: Cherry Blossom Ends The Winter Storm

    So its a remake?
    Not bad.
     
         

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    Re: Cherry Blossom Ends The Winter Storm

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    So its a remake?
    Not bad.
    Thank you
     
         

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