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    Kakuzu's Betrayal | False Hope | Pt.3

    Kakuzu's Betrayal | Trust | Pt.3
    Prologue

    Karui from Team Samui has just been killed by Kakuzu, leaving both Samui, and Omoi in utter shock, and fear. Samui pushes herself to the edge fighting on due to the "Will Of Kumo", in which triggers Omoi to follow his leader's brave actions as well; ultimately overwhelmed by Kakuzu. Surprise allies Darui, and C rush to their aid, and anticipate Kakuzu's attack, saving the remaining members of Team Samui.

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    Knowledge:
    Darui/C: Full
    Kakuzu: None

    Scenario:
    Northern Gates Of Kumogakure

    Distance:
    20 Meters

    Dialogue #1

    Kakuzu: Again with the Kumo rats.

    Darui: Omoi.. I'm sorry I couldn't get here sooner.

    Omoi: Darui.. I wasn't strong enough..

    C: Samui are you alright? Where's Karui!?

    Samui: .. K-Karui has been killed. I couldn't protect her, as a squad leader! I'm.. I'm trash..

    C: That isn't true Samui! You, and Omoi did your best, I won't let you guys shoulder anymore of this burden!

    Darui: Karui is dead.. My condolences are given, but this isn't the time to weep. She died carrying the Will Of Kumo, so let's not make her death be in vain! -Darui nods in C's direction-

    C: Samui, Omoi.. You've endured enough, head back to the Village, go inform Sandaime Raikage of the position at hand. It'll be the best decision in order to limit casualties, and act as insurance.. If we don't make it out alive.. NOW GO! Raigen Raikochu! -blinding light appears-

    Samui: Beat him C! -disperses to the Northern Gate Of Kumogakure-

    Omoi: Darui show him the Will Of Kumo! -disperses to the Northern Gate Of Kumogakure-

    Darui/C: We're the second best combination team in Kumogakure; Team CD!


    Once Samui, and Omoi retreat back into Kumogakure, Darui takes to the offensive manipulating Kuroi Kaminari, then causing a black panther to take shape within the black lightning while yelling Raiton: Kuropansa! Once Darui does this, he aims Raiton: Kuropansa at Kakuzu's displayed hearts.

    C reading Darui's attack patterns once again performs Raigen Raikochu, but to a higher extent not only blinding Kakuzu yet again, but causes Kakuzu to see an illusion of which multiple shinobi have arrived, and are attacking him from all different directions.

    Kakuzu noticing Darui's technique in which was similar to an old Sandaime Raikage realizes that it was aimed within his positioning. Once Kakuzu notices this, he is then caught within C's illusion, causing him to see multiple opponents appear from every direction, attacking him. Realizing that this was utter nonsense, and rather impossible, Kakuzu reverts back to the problem at hand in which was aimed at him previously before the Genjutsu; Raiton: Kuropansa. Commanding his Wind Mask to unleash a large-scale Atsugai, disabling the Genjutsu, Raiton: Kuropansa, and causing the frontal terrain to be destroyed.

    Dialogue #2


    Darui: This guys good.. No wonder Team Samui had a hard time.

    C: He completely countered our combination.. And with a simple Wind Jutsu.. What power.

    Kakuzu: Instead of trying to be the hero you brats should have kept your advantage in numbers.. You can only fight quality with quantity. The new generation seems to have birthed idiots.. Nothing like the former Raikage..

    Darui: Tch! You've got some nerve, we may not be as good as the old generation, but we're in no way lacking. You Akatsuki dogs..

    C: Calm down Darui! Letting your head go.. It's what he wants, you'll lose focus providing an advantage in his favor. He's an Akatsuki be weary of his tricks, he's killed many, and from the information we've gathered he's been around longer than the Shodai era! So stay weary..

    Kakuzu: Looks like you've gather viable information. But that won't help you here, as you'll be dead soon enough. Also you (pointing at Darui) the Akatsuki, and myself have no connections. Their ideals, and mine are quite different.. If anything I'd like to rid them of existence.. I know far to much, I've seen countless wars.. It's all pointless, but.. What keeps me sane is the root of all evil.. Money!

    Darui: Wait.. What? I'm confused. You said you had no interest in the Akatsuki anymore, and wanted to erase their existence.. So why were you fighting against Team Samui.. How dull..

    C: I don't believe this guy, it's all some lie! Darui don't fall for his tricks!

    Kakuzu: .. If this all was false, why exactly would I go on about it instead of killing you both as we speak?

    -Both Darui, and C ready themselves-

    Kakuzu: As I said you would have been dead if this was all a lie.. Should I resume to option A: killing you brats?

    Darui: C.. I believe him..

    Dialogue #3

    Samui: Master Raikage! C, and Darui told us to report to you about the situation at hand! The Akatsuki member Kakuzu has caused a huge problem at the Northern Gates, along with..

    Raikage: Along with what?! This isn't the time to withhold information Samui!!

    Omoi: Karui.. Is dead..

    Raikage: Dammit! A fine shinobi.. And she's dead!?! This Kakuzu no matter the cost. On my order has to die! Announce this to every ninja on standby within the East, West, and South Gates.

    Omoi: Yes boss!

    Samui: As you wish Raikage.

    -Omoi, and Samui depart from the Raikage's office-

    Raikage: These Akatsuki members must be dealt with.. It seems we must use "her".. What a shame.. And I vowed to protect her with my life, damn. What would my father do..

    Epilogue


    C: You trust him.. Alright, but if this plan turns to shit.. It's on you Darui.

    Darui: Understood.

    Kakuzu: Don't misinterpret my cooperation, I'm not doing this for your sake as I despise shinobi in general, but I cannot rid the Akatsuki myself.. Not alone anyway.

    Darui: As expected.. So in other words we can't trust you for a minute.

    C: I knew this guy was bad news.. No way in hell can we take him up to the Raikage's office!

    Kakuzu: It's actually the quite opposite.. The key component in accomplishing both Kumogakure's, and my goal.. Is Trust..


    Chapter 1: Kakuzu's Betrayal | A Jashinist Falls | Pt.1
    Chapter 2: Kakuzu's Betrayal | The Will Of Kumo | Pt.2
     
         

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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | False Hope | Pt.3

    Kakuzu is betraying Akatsuki, ehh? I assumed he would silently obey the Akatsuki and look for the precise moment to sabotage them, such as killing or hiding Yugito or some Jin.

    I'm not quite sure how well Kumo will react to both this news and the fact that Kakuzu is willing to help them, 'specially after killing Karui like that... He'll have to do something pretty clever to come up with a way for Ay, the hot-headed Kage (at times), to not attack him at full force.

    And, now with his open betrayal. . I'm curious on when "Tobi" will be alerted to this and who will be sent to deal with him. It's obviously going to happen.. Perhaps the loyal soldier Kisame

    Or, what would be over kill but cool none the less. . Pein. Another thing that I'm curious about. Will Kakuzu think of forming some make-shift alliance with the other Akatsuki-hater/leaver? Orochimaru could be a powerful ally for the man, both knowledge wise and with his jutsu; limited as they may be.

    It's getting heated in here. . I just wish these were a bit longer now >.>.
     
         

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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | False Hope | Pt.3

    Quote Originally Posted by TheAncientCenturion View Post
    Kakuzu is betraying Akatsuki, ehh? I assumed he would silently obey the Akatsuki and look for the precise moment to sabotage them, such as killing or hiding Yugito or some Jin.

    I'm not quite sure how well Kumo will react to both this news and the fact that Kakuzu is willing to help them, 'specially after killing Karui like that... He'll have to do something pretty clever to come up with a way for Ay, the hot-headed Kage (at times), to not attack him at full force.

    And, now with his open betrayal. . I'm curious on when "Tobi" will be alerted to this and who will be sent to deal with him. It's obviously going to happen.. Perhaps the loyal soldier Kisame

    Or, what would be over kill but cool none the less. . Pein. Another thing that I'm curious about. Will Kakuzu think of forming some make-shift alliance with the other Akatsuki-hater/leaver? Orochimaru could be a powerful ally for the man, both knowledge wise and with his jutsu; limited as they may be.

    It's getting heated in here. . I just wish these were a bit longer now >.>.
    I'm glad you actually read my fanfic man. You give me so much inspiration.

    Orochimaru is a viable choice is this "alliance". That's all I'll say.
     
         

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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | False Hope | Pt.3

    Very well done plus rep
     
         

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    Re: Kakuzu's Betrayal | False Hope | Pt.3

    great story bro
     
         

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