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    Naruto 638

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    Chapter 638: Ultimate Power


    (Minato, Sasuke, and Naruto look at Obito sucking up the Ten Tails' body into himself)

    Obito- This war is only beginning. (Smirks)

    Madara- Obito became the Jinchuuriki of the Ten Tails it seems... I will have to extract it from him...

    Obito- Lets me kill all of you before I use Infinite Tsukuyomi. (Obito's Sharingan suddenly looks like the Ten Tails eye)

    (About 100 Tailed Beast Balls are shot at the alliance from Obito)

    Minato- This many Tailed Beast Balls, I can't teleport them all! (Teleports a few)

    Tobirama- Senju Style- Space-Time Field! (A wall of space-time barrier blocks all of the Tailed Beast Balls and teleports them back to Obito)

    Obito- Shinra Tensei!! (Obito uses Shinra Tensei to push the Tailed Beast Balls back to the alliance)

    Sasuke- [Amaterasu!!] (Black flames consume Obito completely)

    (Obito is shown to have died)

    Naruto- ..!

    Sasuke- Two down, one to go. (Glares at Madara)

    Hashirama- (Uses A Few Thousand Hands to tank the Tailed Beast Balls) We should be fine now!

    Obito- Did you think you killed me Sasuke? (Obito appears behind Sasuke)

    Sasuke- Shit! [He must've used Izanagi!]

    Obito- (Grabs Naruto and Minato) You will no longer be in my way, Naruto. Hungry Ghost Path!

    (Obito sucks all of Minato's and Naruto's bijuu chakra!!!)

    Naruto- Ughh!

    Minato- Ahh!

    Kurama- Damn he took my chakra from both of you!

    Voice- It's okay Kurama.

    Naruto- Huh!?

    Kurama- It's him..

    The End
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Yes... Bring on the sage, now obito has had his poweup.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    That was a good way to bring in the sage....but a little too soon
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    100 tailed beast balls? ****ing insane! , awesome.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Bringing the Sage in would be deus ex machina.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    good. but yeah maybe to much bomb's.. )
     
         

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    (Obito is shown to have died)

    Naruto- ..!

    Sasuke- Two down, one to go.

    that made me laugh
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Good one but it is too early happen in one chapter.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Good job!
    Although it felt a little too short and too fast.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    2/5.

    Too rushed.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    People are crazy i'll rather a short prediction that gets to the main point of the next chapter then dragged out one when you know it would never happen.\
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    It kinda sounded like a game of tennis haha but still good ideas
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Haha I see what you did with the ending. I also think it would be cool for the SO6P to make an appearance.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    no. Obito needs to ravage more. And I doubt we'll be seeing any Rinnigan techs from Obito at this point,
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    3.7/5
    good ideas, short story tho. maybe more talking nxt time, kudos tho.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    I like it!! good job
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Not bad but a little short
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    kishi should make an extra long chapter this time
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    nice prediction though
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    lol 100 tail beast bombs, that's absurd
     
         

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