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    Naruto 638

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    Chapter 638: Ultimate Power


    (Minato, Sasuke, and Naruto look at Obito sucking up the Ten Tails' body into himself)

    Obito- This war is only beginning. (Smirks)

    Madara- Obito became the Jinchuuriki of the Ten Tails it seems... I will have to extract it from him...

    Obito- Lets me kill all of you before I use Infinite Tsukuyomi. (Obito's Sharingan suddenly looks like the Ten Tails eye)

    (About 100 Tailed Beast Balls are shot at the alliance from Obito)

    Minato- This many Tailed Beast Balls, I can't teleport them all! (Teleports a few)

    Tobirama- Senju Style- Space-Time Field! (A wall of space-time barrier blocks all of the Tailed Beast Balls and teleports them back to Obito)

    Obito- Shinra Tensei!! (Obito uses Shinra Tensei to push the Tailed Beast Balls back to the alliance)

    Sasuke- [Amaterasu!!] (Black flames consume Obito completely)

    (Obito is shown to have died)

    Naruto- ..!

    Sasuke- Two down, one to go. (Glares at Madara)

    Hashirama- (Uses A Few Thousand Hands to tank the Tailed Beast Balls) We should be fine now!

    Obito- Did you think you killed me Sasuke? (Obito appears behind Sasuke)

    Sasuke- Shit! [He must've used Izanagi!]

    Obito- (Grabs Naruto and Minato) You will no longer be in my way, Naruto. Hungry Ghost Path!

    (Obito sucks all of Minato's and Naruto's bijuu chakra!!!)

    Naruto- Ughh!

    Minato- Ahh!

    Kurama- Damn he took my chakra from both of you!

    Voice- It's okay Kurama.

    Naruto- Huh!?

    Kurama- It's him..

    The End
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Yes... Bring on the sage, now obito has had his poweup.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    That was a good way to bring in the sage....but a little too soon
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    100 tailed beast balls? ****ing insane! , awesome.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Bringing the Sage in would be deus ex machina.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    good. but yeah maybe to much bomb's.. )
     
         

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    (Obito is shown to have died)

    Naruto- ..!

    Sasuke- Two down, one to go.

    that made me laugh
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Good one but it is too early happen in one chapter.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Good job!
    Although it felt a little too short and too fast.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    2/5.

    Too rushed.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    People are crazy i'll rather a short prediction that gets to the main point of the next chapter then dragged out one when you know it would never happen.\
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    It kinda sounded like a game of tennis haha but still good ideas
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Haha I see what you did with the ending. I also think it would be cool for the SO6P to make an appearance.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    no. Obito needs to ravage more. And I doubt we'll be seeing any Rinnigan techs from Obito at this point,
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    3.7/5
    good ideas, short story tho. maybe more talking nxt time, kudos tho.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    I like it!! good job
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Not bad but a little short
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    kishi should make an extra long chapter this time
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    nice prediction though
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    lol 100 tail beast bombs, that's absurd
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Good pred but the only part I see possibly happening is the end part I.e so6p maybe not the same way u predicted it but I think the so6p will be brought into the story some how either through naruto or his exact self
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Quote Originally Posted by thunderthehybrid View Post
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    Obito- Lets me kill all of you before I use Infinite Tsukuyomi. (Obito's Sharingan suddenly looks like the Ten
    Tails eye)


    The End
    only this lol. OBITO CAN'T USE TSUKYOMI , HE CAN'T USE INFINITE TSUKYOMI.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    That voice, if its the SO6P, isn't gonna come just so, Its gonna take like long for him to come Just like 559 is madara and 599 is obito, plus there must be an interview
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    Am I the only person who doesn't think the Sage of Six Paths needs to be the hero?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 638

    ahhhh! damn good prediction ..i mean perfect entry for the sage! #lovedit
    keep going
     
         

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