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    Many people don't believe in
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    Chapter 639

    On the battlefield

    Naruto in disbelief: Impossible..!
    Minato shocked as well: I have never seen such power!
    Sasuke shocked but angry as well: (That's the Juubi's power)
    Hiruzen can't believe what he saw with his own eyes: It can't be! He just took both of them down like it was nothing!

    Tobirama and Hashirama start to regenarate.
    Tobirama scared and still in shock: What speed! I couldn't even follow his movements.
    Hashirama: Things are much worse than I expected, we have to change strategy.

    Juubito looks towards Naruto and sees the other tailed beasts inside of him. He makes an angry expression.
    Hiruzen having realized Juubito's plan: Minato, quickly take the boys away from here, this man -
    Before he ends his sentence Juubito appears in front of Naruto with a punch ready when at the last second the frog disappears along with Minato, Naruto and Sasuke. The punch hits on the ground which causes a huge fissure on the ground reaching up to a mountain few kilometres away.

    Minato having teleported them at the last second at the rearmost place of Shinobi's Alliance. Damn, that was fast! I barely managed to teleport us away.
    Naruto: Dad we have to do something! His strength is increasing with every moment passing!
    Minato: I know it, listen Naruto I was planning to give it to you later but it can't be helped. (He starts preparing some handseals)
    Sasuke: That's!

    Juubito sensing Kurama's chakra starts running towards Naruto.
    Hashirama along with Tobirama and Hiruzen: As hokages we won't let you go any further wood style- What?!
    Juubito just passes over them and continues running.
    Hiruzen: First! He aims for Naruto!
    Hashirama: You're right! Everyone! Attack with your most powerful attacks!
    Sakura: You heard him!

    Everoyne starts to send their longest attacks towards him but Juubito just makes a huge leap in the air, avoiding all the attacks.
    Juubito prepares now its chakra arms!
    Sasuke: That's the end for you! He shoots an amaterasu sword but Juubito reflects it with one of its tails while he continues his assault.
    Sasuke: Damn it!

    Just before the attacks lands a hit, we see that each of the ckakra arms are stopped by other gold ones respectively!
    Juubito with a mad exression looks at Naruto who now has similar marks at the back of his cape.
    Minato sweated: Phew, just in time!

    Madara having seen the whole thing: Heh, who would have guessed that there would be another one. Well, it doesn't matter, this actually might keep Obito at bay for while. (He starts making handseals as he concentrates chakra). With this ( He looks at Obito's furious expression), The juubi will become mine!

    Hope you liked it
     
         
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    Re: Chapter 639

    Great prediction but bit short .
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 639

    Although good I don't see this happening
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by kishiuzumaki View Post
    Great prediction but bit short .
    Thanks, yeah I know I jsut didn't want to put too any things in it. If you like reading more, then check my fan fic
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=386839

    Quote Originally Posted by minator93 View Post
    Although good I don't see this happening
    Indeed, neither do I think that we'll get 2 sages in 2 chapters.
     
         
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    Re: Chapter 639

    pretty good bro!
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 639

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    pretty good bro!
    Thanks
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 639

    nice, but I doubt it would happen
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 639

    Quote Originally Posted by riley freeman View Post
    nice, but I doubt it would happen
    So do I
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 639

    I like it but maybe a little bit short.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 639

    I like it wish it was a bit longer......but really like it
     
         

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    Many people don't believe in
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    Re: Chapter 639

    Quote Originally Posted by lifeofsara View Post
    I like it but maybe a little bit short.
    Quote Originally Posted by Narutoarchive101 View Post
    I like it wish it was a bit longer......but really like it
    Yeah I know, I may have had to write a bit more.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 639

    Exelent pridiction
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 639

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    Exelent pridiction
    Thank you
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 639

    Really good
     
         

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