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    NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    ( ) : Actions
    [ ] : Thoughts
    SFX : Sound Effects
    ENJOY READING
    MANGA 640 : MINATO'S JUTSU

    SASUKE : The one that will cut away the past is me.
    (
    Obito widens his rinnegan )
    NARUTO : ( widens his eyes ) !!
    SASUKE : ( widens his eyes ) !!
    ( Obito pulls Naruto and Sasuke towards him and grabs their face )
    MINATO : Come on, Make it in time!! [ Flying Thunder God Technique!! ]
    NARUTO : ( grabbing Obito's arm ) Mmmmmm?
    (
    Holds Obito's arm with his chakra arms to free himself )
    SASUKE : [ Shit!! ]
    (
    grabs Obito with his Susano'o arm )
    SASUKE : ?!!
    SFX : SWOOOSSSHHH...
    (
    The black orbs behind Obito's palm starts moving onto the other side )
    OBITO : ......?
    (
    A huge flow of blue fluid explodes out of the two palms )
    MINATO : Shit!!
    HIRUZEN : ( regenerating ) [ That's? ]
    NARUTO/SASUKE : ?!!
    (
    The black fluid from Obito's palm changes its path to attack Naruto and Sasuke from the sides )
    (
    The blue colored fluid surrounds Naruto and Sasuke into a sphere )
    (
    The fluid is not able to pierce through )
    (
    Tobirama is shown holding a seal )
    TOBIRAMA : ....
    HIRUZEN : (
    looking at Tobirama ) That's Second's jutsu. It's Water Prison Jutsu. The outer layer of the jutsu is hard as steel to pierce through. He's meant to be the greatest Water Release Manipulator.
    TOBIRAMA : [ I can't hold it for long.]
    (
    Obito widens his Rinnegan )
    (
    The black chakra starts flowing back )
    (
    The water prison jutsu starts getting absorbed by Obito )
    TOBIRAMA : That's it!!
    NARUTO : ( bubbles coming out of his mouth ) [ That's ninjutsu absorbing technique.]
    (
    lands near Obito in between the hands holding Naruto and Sasuke )
    (
    punches on Obito's face left right )
    (
    The ninjutsu absorbing technique gets disrupted )
    TOBIRAMA : Kids!!
    (
    lands a powered kick on Obito's chest with a water pressure coming out of his kick )
    (
    a small gap is created between Obito's hand and the water prison jutsu )
    TOBIRAMA : Fall Back!!!!
    NARUTO/SASUKE : ?!!
    (
    Tobirama leaps back )
    (
    Naruto and Sasuke leaps back )
    (
    The trio lands on top of a rock )
    NARUTO : Thanks, old man!!
    MINATO : I owe you, Lord Second!! ( holding his kunai ) [ Times up ]
    TOBIRAMA : Hurry up with your jutsu!! Fourth!!
    (
    Hashirama and Madara are facing each other )
    (
    Wind flows around them )
    HASHIRAMA : Madara, this is not the time. I've more important things to deal with.
    MADARA : ( smirks ) Hmmm. The Juubi is sealed within Obito. I've no option but to fight you.
    HASHIRAMA : You butthead!! ( makes hand signs )
    (
    Madara dashes towards Hashirama )
    SFX : GROW!!!! GROW!!! GROW!!!! GROW!!!
    (
    Wood grows out of the ground from various places around Hashirama )
    MADARA : ( holding his fan ) Same old tricks!!!
    SFX : FUUUUUUUUH!!!!!
    (
    The huge loads of branches approaches Madara with high speed )
    (
    Madara's back is shown while running towards Hashirama and the space between them is getting filled with the approaching branches thus covering his vision )
    (
    The branches starts opening up as they pass surrounding Madara leaving him unharmed )
    (
    Madara emerges out of the branches in front of Hashirama by pushing away the branches with his approaching speed )
    HASHIRAMA : ?!!
    (
    Madara's rinnegan is glowing )
    MADARA : ( moves his hand to cut down Hashirama ) Liked my new technique?
    SFX : SLASH!!
    (
    cuts Hashirama in two aorund his waist )
    (
    stands behind Hashirama's falling body in a pose )
    (
    The falling body turns into wood and engulfs Madara around his arms and the other half clutches Madara's legs together )
    MADARA : ( shocks ) Hmm? ( then smirks )
    (
    Hashirama emerges out of the wood jutsu released before )
    (
    Converts his one hand into wood and extends toward Madara )
    (
    Connects his wood with his clone )
    (
    Lifts Madara )
    (
    Swings him in air and slams on the ground hard )
    (
    Madara is crushed on the ground )
    (
    Cracks appear on his face and body )
    (
    Pieces fall apart from the grabbing wood )
    HASHIRAMA : ( standing on the wooden branch ) ?!! ( looks at his feet )
    (
    Crack appears in the branch he's standing )
    (
    A bluish colored sword emerges out )
    (
    A four handed susano'o emerges out crushing the branch )
    MADARA : I won't fall for that cheap trick again, Hashirama!!
    (
    Hashirama is in air )
    (
    Madara Susano'o is emerging )
    (
    Hashirama makes a hand seal in mid air )
    (
    Madara's front left hand and rear right hand clenches together and then opens up in an arc )
    (
    Shinobis watching the legendary battle )
    SHINOBIS : ?!!
    (
    Four Yasaka Magatamas are formed on the arc created by the two hands )
    HASHIRAMA : ?!!
    (
    A tree grows below and is controlled by Hashirama )
    SFX : TAP!!
    (
    Hashirama lands on the tree and starts running towards the growing part of the tree )
    (
    The tree takes a curve around the suasno'o over a huge radius. )
    MADARA : Take this!!
    (
    Throws each one to Hashirama )
    (
    First one is shot )
    (
    Hashirama jumps while running to dodge )
    (
    The Magatama hits the tree thus crushing it )
    (
    The Magatama crashes on the land and blasts it )
    SFX : TAP!! CLAP!!
    (
    Hashirama lands on the falling tree and claps )
    (
    Wood emerges out from the broken part of the falling tree and connects to the main tree grown out of the ground )
    (
    Madara shoots another Yasaka Magatama at Hashirama )
    (
    Hashirama while running turns towards the outer side of the tree to dodge the Yasaska Magatama )
    (
    Reaches at the bottom surface of the tree and starts running )
    (
    And then while running on the bottom surface approaches towards the inner side of the curved tree )
    MADARA : ( inside Susano'o ) ?!!
    (
    Shoots another one by studying Hashirama's style of running on the tree and locating Hashirama's next location on the tree while running )
    (
    Hashirama is now about to turn himself from the inner side of the tree to the upper surface while continuously running )
    HASHIRAMA : ( looking at the Magatama ) ?!!
    SFX : TCH!!

    MADARA : ?!
    SHINOBIS : ?!!
    (
    Yasaka Magatama cuts through Hashirama's freely flowing hair and crushes the upper surface of the tree where Hashirama was about to reach from bottom to side to above surface )
    MADARA : Lucky Bastard. ( smirks )
    (
    Hashirama is shown still running from the inner sides of the tree )
    (
    Hashirama smirks at Madara's quotes )
    (
    Madara shoots the fourth one )
    (
    The growing tree suddenly grows vertically high )
    (
    Hashirama reaches at the highest point )
    (
    The tree then takes a very steep slope )
    (
    Hashirama slides on the slope at very fast rate thus dodging the fourth Yasaka Magatama crushing the peak of the tree )
    (
    The tree grows at a faster rate while Hashirama slides on it with same speed )
    (
    The steepness of the tree's growth goes on decreasing )
    (
    The tree takes a curve towards the back of Susano'o not giving Madara time to turn and react )
    (
    Hashirama starts making a hand seal while sliding )
    (
    The end of the tree gets a little elevated )
    (
    Hashirama jumps off from the end of the tree right on the back of Susano'o )
    (
    In the mid air he completes hand seal )
    SFX : STRETCH!!
    (
    Hashirama stretches his hand towards Susano'o )
    (
    Madara is half way turned )
    (
    The stretched hand is shown )
    (
    Susano'o back is shown )
    (
    The stretched hand is shown )
    (
    Susano'o's chest is shown )
    SFX : SLAM!!
    (
    The hand touches the back )
    SFX : SLAM!!
    (
    The hand touches the chest )
    HASHIRAMA : [ Wood Release : Nativity of World of Trees ]
    HASHIRAMA : [Wood Release : Binding Pillars ]
    MADARA : ?!!!
    SHINOBIS : ?!!
    (
    Several trees starts growing out of the hands crushing the Susano'o completely from above )
    (
    Hashirama's clone, connected with the previously grown tree, from the front releases wood pillars and binds the Susano'o in its place )
    (
    The multiple trees growing from the above rushes into the Susano'o finding its way )
    (
    The whole Susano'o is covered and bound with wood from inside as well as outside )
    (
    The Susano'o disperses )
    (
    Madara's completely destroyed body is shown in between the crooked grown trees )
    (
    Madara's one unharmed closed eye is shown )
    SFX : PLOP.... PLOP.... PLOP
    (
    Obito's body reforms again )
    (
    His upper body returns back on his waist )
    (
    He's surrounded with kunais on the ground over a wide range )
    (
    Two of Minato's clone are standing beside Minato )
    SFX : POOF!! POOF!!
    (
    The clones poofs away )
    OBITO : ..... ( giving a devilish look )
    MINATO : [ It's ready ] Lord Second, have you copied the formula? We'll start soon.
    (
    Dust clearing out the battlefield )
    (
    Minato and Tobirama are standing near Naruto and Sasuke )
    (
    Tobirama is holding his sword now )
    TOBIRAMA : [ He invented an upgrade of the Flying Thunder God Technique. And added a place for me too. He's really a genius. ] Lets go!! ( makes a hand seal with single hand )
    (
    Minato makes the same seal )
    NARUTO : Cool!!
    SASUKE : .....
    HIRUZEN : ( in a handseal position with one hand and holding a black staff with yellow colored edges ) [ Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu!! ] Enma, are you ready!!
    (
    Solid clones holding the staff are created surrounding the kunai spreaded area )
    (
    An eye opens on the staff )
    MINATO/HIRUZEN/TOBIRAMA : Ready!!
    (
    Last Panel )
    SFX : ZOOOP!! ZOOOP!!!
    (
    Obito is shown standing in the kunai area )
    (
    Hiruzen's clone with the staff is surrounded )
    (
    Tobirama appears at the right side of Obito with his sword about to cut )
    (
    Minato appears at the left of Obito, kneeling, with his knunai about to slash )

    (3 vs 1 battle begins...)
     
         
    Last edited by -ahhimane-; 07-19-2013 at 10:55 AM. Reason: Spelling Mistakes

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    **** the video YOUR sig is amazing
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great job!!!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    great predication
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great prediction my friend
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Since it's a dire situation they are in, I believe your prediction is too slow with the action, but nice to read though
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    I didn't get bored while reading this mostly action packed italics


    Good job!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Dracul3 Mihawk View Post
    **** the video YOUR sig is amazing
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    Great job!!!
    Quote Originally Posted by ahmher View Post
    great predication
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    Great prediction my friend
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    Great Prediction
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    Great work! I like it!

    Thanks
    Quote Originally Posted by saphanix View Post
    Since it's a dire situation they are in, I believe your prediction is too slow with the action, but nice to read though
    Kishi likes to move things sometimes slowly sometimes fast. Thanks
     
         
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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Super7 View Post
    I didn't get bored while reading this mostly action packed italics


    Good job!
    That's great for me. Thanks
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great work! I like it!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    I liked the prediction, Agreed that the Hokage's 2,3, and 4 need another crack at Obito/Juubi. Hashirama and Madara better have an epic battle. Anyways, nice read.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    awesome prediction i ever read..
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    gj i liked it
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Good job
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by theacknowledgedone View Post
    i liked the prediction, agreed that the hokage's 2,3, and 4 need another crack at obito/juubi. Hashirama and madara better have an epic battle. Anyways, nice read.
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    awesome prediction i ever read..
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    gj i liked it
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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    That my man..... was a very good prediction keep up the good work bro
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Heaps interesting read bro!! THanks for another fantastic prediction to read
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by uzumakaze kage View Post
    that my man..... Was a very good prediction keep up the good work bro
    Quote Originally Posted by uchiha usman View Post
    heaps interesting read bro!! Thanks for another fantastic prediction to read =d
    thank you!!!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 640 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    That was epic shit I just read, so much awesome content to comprehend/expierience, it is too much LOL !

    Ok, Now let go straight to your feedback :D

    First, Pros:
    • Your epic format style of prediction rocks ! (Yeah I began to mimic your format style and put in my prediction to make it much better). Everything is clear/visible, it is easy to differ Action, from Characters speech, same with description of scene.
    • As always each scene is very describable with a lot of details give us impression/feeling as we could read really stuff. Action is not complex thanks to use of simple words but easy to follow thanks to very good descriptions. I can literally picture each scene in my mind which you try to show us(readers) by using descriptions.
    • Great feeling of peace of plot. It changes as it should depends on plot's demands, exactly like Kishi instead of going just slow or going just fast, which is boring and lack tense. I feel non-stop intrigued and interested what will happen next
    • Use of simple but keep great meaning words, which are the most accurate to describe what you would like to say/show us. Yeah I can't stop being amazed how much epic your mastery over words is.
    • Almost lack of grammar mistakes/error. Of course it happens sometimes, me too unfortunetly, but your is almost always perfect... , you don't even make syntax error which to me happens quite often...
    • Great characterization/understanding how each character act, which make it even more close to real stuff Kishi writes.
    • Great understanding of surrondings, what action where happen and what happen here while something happen somewhere else(yeah it is really hard to explain... but I hope you get my point.), It simply makes flow of plot in prediction naturally flowing, keeping fluidity while preserving elasticity.


    Now Cons:
    • Well It feels too long sometimes(Same as my problem). As well as you focused too much on Hashirama vs Madara battle which was dynamic and tense but prolonging it too much cause it gets sloppy sometimes and boring
    • Too little focus on Juubi Jinchurki Obito, he seems to be more focus of attention then Madara or Hashirama.
    • Well I would like for you to make sequels because it was nice read and feel hungry for more lol :D MORE !!!
    • Your prediction is too epic in compare to mine..., I am jealous sometimes, why I am not as talented as you

    Seriously although:

    It is over 9000 in epicness

    keep it up BTW. I hope you like my feedback
     
         
    Last edited by KCMNaruto; 07-19-2013 at 02:17 PM.

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