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    Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    *A close up is shown of Juubito's hand on Naruto's Face. A flash of light is shown, and Naruto wakes up in a room filled with him, and the 9 Bijuus.*

    Naruto: What happ-

    Kurama: Quiet! There isn't much time! Nows your chance!

    Naruto: Chance to what?

    Kurama: Idiot! To-

    Son Goku: Silence, Kurama, let me explain...

    Naruto: Explain what? He's destroying us!

    Son Goku: I know, he is powerful...but now is when the Juubi's most vulnerable,as well.

    Naruto: Vulnerable...?

    Son Goku: Yes. When the Juubi was free, its immense power came from our united strength...but since it wasn't focused, it wasn't as dangerous as this man is now.

    Naruto: We know that already! But now we need a way to defeat him!

    Son Goku: That's what I'll explain, so listen closely...there's no time to repeat anything.

    *Naruto stares upwards with a concerned look on his face*

    Son Goku: Previously, the Juubi was using all the power that it took from us. Now, however, it isnt. When that man sealed it inside of him, it didn't react as he had planned.

    Naruto: How so?

    Son Goku: Because, at the time of the sealing, that man was so overcome with hatred, anger, and other negative emotions, he was only able to take control of our negative energies, rather than all of them.

    Naruto: Negative energies...?

    Son Goku: Exactly. Such as how chakra is divided into Yin and Yang, certain energies can be separated by whether they're positive or negative. In this case, he has managed to take complete control of the negative, while the positive remain dormant!

    Naruto: So what do I do?!

    Kurama: The same thing you did to me! You pull that positive energy out of him, and into yourself!

    Naruto: I can do that?!

    Kurama: It'll be just like before. Only this time, it'll be much more difficult.

    Son Goku: But we'll be right behind the whole time, Naruto!

    Kurama: Quickly now! Grab hold of him, and take the strength needed to defeat him!

    *Another flash of light*

    *Naruto grabs hold of Juubito's arm, and a shocked expression appears on Juubito's face*

    *Juubito quickly thrusts himself away from Naruto and Sasuke, throwing them to the ground, while Minato looks on with a confused face*

    *Juubito looks scornfully ahead towards them*

    *Naruto is seen on his knees, with one hand on the ground, and another raised, with a line of chakra running from it to Juubito*

    Sasuke (thinking):Naruto...what did you do...?

    *Naruto raises his head, with a smile on his face*

    Minato (thinking): That's...that's my son!



    A tug of war to decide destiny!!

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    This is a great prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    Felt rather nostalgic. and that would be a cool twist and a way for naruto and obito to have the juubi's power. nice job, tho i highly doubt it.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    Nice prediction, dawg
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    Nice writing and dialogue except I don't think son goku would talk to kurama like that and where are the other bijuu?
    It was short but a good job
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    This was really nice!
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    Quote Originally Posted by Jrods View Post
    This is a great prediction.
    Thanks!
    Quote Originally Posted by sasukexx13 View Post
    NIce prediction
    Thanks!
    Quote Originally Posted by ToadSageNaruto View Post
    Felt rather nostalgic. and that would be a cool twist and a way for naruto and obito to have the juubi's power. nice job, tho i highly doubt it.
    I just thought it'd be a cool idea for a chapter, thanks!
    Quote Originally Posted by ballerjordan View Post
    Nice prediction, dawg
    Thanks!
    Quote Originally Posted by hixa kuogame View Post
    Nice writing and dialogue except I don't think son goku would talk to kurama like that and where are the other bijuu?
    It was short but a good job
    Thanks! And I felt like there isn't a great deal about the others personalities, so I didn't want to go too far with the others.
    Quote Originally Posted by lifeofsara View Post
    This was really nice!
    Thanks!
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    Nice prediction btw,who is son goku? :/
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    Quote Originally Posted by kurdking View Post
    Nice prediction btw,who is son goku? :/
    Thanks, and he's the four-tails
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    Nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    great preadication
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    Very good. It progresses the plot nicely and would give Naruto his final power-up so then other characters after that could get development.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    I can see this happening. + rep.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    good job on the prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    if the bomb is this big then how big is the plane that dropped the bomb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    Another plot twist, kishi is that youuuuu..
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 640: The Bijuus' Strength

    very good...I liked it
     
         

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