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    [Sensei Test] - Better

    Greetings, Better.

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    ♠ Rules and regulation according to Rei.
    ♠ All basic elements up to your current rank are to be used.
    ♠ You are allowed to use your KG.
    ♠ Custom jutsu(s) and custom element(s) are not allowed.
    ♠ You do not need to win the fight to pass, but doing so will gain you bonus points.
    ♠ Terrain: A grassy, open plain in sunny weather.
    ♠ We start mid range from each other.

    I will be using my Madara biography for this battle test against you, Please respond with a link to the bio you will be using in the test and I will begin.

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Better

    Gin Ichimaru in Sig. Lawd help. Lets do this

    Gin using his mastery of Taijutsu, notices Madara Uchiha as the famous member of the Uchiha clan. He focuses from his chin down for the rest of the match to avoid eye contact.

    My oh my, you are my opponent. This ain't going to turn out as well as I thought.
     
         
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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Better

    Quote Originally Posted by Better View Post
    Gin Ichimaru in Sig. Lawd help. Lets do this

    Gin using his mastery of Taijutsu, notices Madara Uchiha as the famous member of the Uchiha clan. He focuses from his chin down for the rest of the match to avoid eye contact.

    My oh my, you are my opponent. This ain't going to turn out as well as I thought.

    Madara: Youre dealing with a pure Uchiha. Of course it won't...ph.



    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.

    Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
    Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
    Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.




    Madara activates his sharingan and then reaches into his back pouch reaching for several ninja tools. With both his hands he grabs several small shuriken and a kunai with a small flash bang attached to the end. He quickly throws the flash bang first, directly upwards in an angle towards Gin, allowing it to first catch his attention, leaving his eyes off Madara and go off blinding his opponent. After the flash bang goes off he channels his earth chakra underneath Gin to cause him to lose balance and fall, not knowing whats happening but feeling immense vibrations.



    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.



    At the same time hes causing the ground to tremble beneath him, he throws the shuriken in his hands that have wire attached to them towards Gin as hes losing his balance and is blinded. The shuriken are not aimed to hit him but are to surround him from the sides and behind containing him in several wires bounded in place..


    Rank: C
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points:30
    Description: Using careful manipulation and well-timed reflexes, the user hurls a number of Shuriken with wire attached at the opponent. While in the air, the shinobi can manipulate the wire to make the blades circle the target and bind them.
    Note:Must Have Sharinganto use this jutsu



    After hes bound, Madara keeps watch and performs a few handseals exhaling fire along the wire rushing towards Gin setting him ablaze.


    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Better

    Quote Originally Posted by Obíto View Post

    Madara: Youre dealing with a pure Uchiha. Of course it won't...ph.



    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.

    Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
    Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
    Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.




    Madara activates his sharingan and then reaches into his back pouch reaching for several ninja tools. With both his hands he grabs several small shuriken and a kunai with a small flash bang attached to the end. He quickly throws the flash bang first, directly upwards in an angle towards Gin, allowing it to first catch his attention, leaving his eyes off Madara and go off blinding his opponent. After the flash bang goes off he channels his earth chakra underneath Gin to cause him to lose balance and fall, not knowing whats happening but feeling immense vibrations.



    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.



    At the same time hes causing the ground to tremble beneath him, he throws the shuriken in his hands that have wire attached to them towards Gin as hes losing his balance and is blinded. The shuriken are not aimed to hit him but are to surround him from the sides and behind containing him in several wires bounded in place..


    Rank: C
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points:30
    Description: Using careful manipulation and well-timed reflexes, the user hurls a number of Shuriken with wire attached at the opponent. While in the air, the shinobi can manipulate the wire to make the blades circle the target and bind them.
    Note:Must Have Sharinganto use this jutsu



    After hes bound, Madara keeps watch and performs a few handseals exhaling fire along the wire rushing towards Gin setting him ablaze.


    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

    Gin stands keeping his eyes away from Madara's eyes, sees him suddenly reach behind his back with both hands. Instinctively, as a swordsman himself, Gin puts his left hand on the handle of his sword with his left side facing Madara (like my sig). Watching for any hint of whats about to come, Madara throws the kunai into the air, and a flash bomb goes off. As it does, Gin turns away, trying to minimize the effect of the flash bomb. Gin being a bit blinded, the ground under him starts to shake. He is caught off guard by it, but he keeps his mental composure. Trying his best to stay on balance. As he begins to counter, all of a sudden he gets bound by wires. As he's getting bound, Gin sight is coming back and sees Madara holding the strings. He then releases a large unfocused amount of lightning that travel through the wires right back at Madara.

    (Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

    The legendary Madara using such low tactics, ain't that something

    Madara will most likely let go of the wires in order to stop the lightning, loosening it for Gin to get free. Even if he didn't, Gin continued by stomping his foot, shooting up three fire pillars. One right under Madara, and two a meter in front of him right behind each other, evenly spaced out. The two pillars would stop anything Madara was going to launch at him or him advancing forward. Also the pillars would cut the wires easily.

    ( Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.

    Gin with his sword in hand makes his way to the right in an arch towards Madara. Keeping his eyes on his chin and below. Making sure not to make eye contact.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Better

    Quote Originally Posted by Better View Post
    Gin stands keeping his eyes away from Madara's eyes, sees him suddenly reach behind his back with both hands. Instinctively, as a swordsman himself, Gin puts his left hand on the handle of his sword with his left side facing Madara (like my sig). Watching for any hint of whats about to come, Madara throws the kunai into the air, and a flash bomb goes off. As it does, Gin turns away, trying to minimize the effect of the flash bomb. Gin being a bit blinded, the ground under him starts to shake. He is caught off guard by it, but he keeps his mental composure. Trying his best to stay on balance. As he begins to counter, all of a sudden he gets bound by wires. As he's getting bound, Gin sight is coming back and sees Madara holding the strings. He then releases a large unfocused amount of lightning that travel through the wires right back at Madara.

    (Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

    The legendary Madara using such low tactics, ain't that something

    Madara will most likely let go of the wires in order to stop the lightning, loosening it for Gin to get free. Even if he didn't, Gin continued by stomping his foot, shooting up three fire pillars. One right under Madara, and two a meter in front of him right behind each other, evenly spaced out. The two pillars would stop anything Madara was going to launch at him or him advancing forward. Also the pillars would cut the wires easily.

    ( Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.

    Gin with his sword in hand makes his way to the right in an arch towards Madara. Keeping his eyes on his chin and below. Making sure not to make eye contact.


    Madara watching with his sharingan can see chakra being focused into the wires hes holding, and anticipates that something will be channeled along the cables. So when he sees the lightning forming into the wires, he thrusts his hand forwards that releases a blade of wind from his hand that destroys the wire and continues past the lightning coming his way.


    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A blade of wind that is unblock able due to wind intangibility.




    After releasing it towards you, I create a handseal spitting out a large amount of water to lift me into the air riding towards you on a large wave of water that has crushing waves coming towards you. Then while ontop of the wave coming towards you, I create two clones, one on my left and another on my right.



    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user performs the snake hand seal and creates a large volume of water from their mouth spilling it toward the ground and lifting them up into the air. The user can also ride the wave, allowing him to travel at high speeds and attacking the enemy. The user can create a small ocean worth of water even in barren conditions and can use the water for additional techniques.





    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Better

    as agreed, the flame pillars that were made to break the wires just in case Madara didn't let go, stop the wind blade and cancel out.
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    Gin watches as the wind blades and pillars cancel out, and Madara begins rising up with the water creating a giant wave of water that starts moving towards Gin. Gin smirk, the water technique was indeed impressive, but he had a plan. He quickly slams his hand on the ground and the ground underneath the wave and in front of it until 4 meters from Gin sinks down 75m with extreme speed. The hole is as big as Madara's original location up to 4 meters from Gin, so 6 meters long and 10m wide 75 meters deep. The water drops straight into the bit filling it up with Madara and his clones (if he made them) inside.

    Here he comes....

    (Doton: Daichidōkaku) - Earth Release: Great Moving Earth Core
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to freely lower or raise the terrain within a specific area surrounding them, in a similar manner to its parent technique, albeit on a much larger scale. The user can lower or raise the ground up to 100 meters in a large section. The rise will be fast enough to pin enemies to the ground, restricting their movements as they struggle to get up and the drop will be fast enough to leave almost all enemies without a footing (albeit not airborne). Because of the large chakra needed to alter such a large area of the terrain, the user will be able to use it only a limited number of times.
    Note: Can only be used twice.

    There he goes...

    After the ground sinks and the water and madara fall into the pit, Gin jumps back a bit while forming 1 hand seal (specialty) and slams his hands on the ground. This releases an enormous bolt of electricity through the ground, destroying it and eventually making it's way into the pit. The water in the pit conducts the lightning and we have ourselves a pit of death lol. Gin grabs his sword and waits and sees what happens, If Madara has escaped, Gin does not look into his eyes, rather his chin on down.

    (Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by Better View Post
    as agreed, the flame pillars that were made to break the wires just in case Madara didn't let go, stop the wind blade and cancel out.
    -----------------------------------------

    Gin watches as the wind blades and pillars cancel out, and Madara begins rising up with the water creating a giant wave of water that starts moving towards Gin. Gin smirk, the water technique was indeed impressive, but he had a plan. He quickly slams his hand on the ground and the ground underneath the wave and in front of it until 4 meters from Gin sinks down 75m with extreme speed. The hole is as big as Madara's original location up to 4 meters from Gin, so 6 meters long and 10m wide 75 meters deep. The water drops straight into the bit filling it up with Madara and his clones (if he made them) inside.

    Here he comes....

    (Doton: Daichidōkaku) - Earth Release: Great Moving Earth Core
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to freely lower or raise the terrain within a specific area surrounding them, in a similar manner to its parent technique, albeit on a much larger scale. The user can lower or raise the ground up to 100 meters in a large section. The rise will be fast enough to pin enemies to the ground, restricting their movements as they struggle to get up and the drop will be fast enough to leave almost all enemies without a footing (albeit not airborne). Because of the large chakra needed to alter such a large area of the terrain, the user will be able to use it only a limited number of times.
    Note: Can only be used twice.

    There he goes...

    After the ground sinks and the water and madara fall into the pit, Gin jumps back a bit while forming 1 hand seal (specialty) and slams his hands on the ground. This releases an enormous bolt of electricity through the ground, destroying it and eventually making it's way into the pit. The water in the pit conducts the lightning and we have ourselves a pit of death lol. Gin grabs his sword and waits and sees what happens, If Madara has escaped, Gin does not look into his eyes, rather his chin on down.

    (Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

    Yes I am still going to make the clones..

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    As myself and the clones feel to begin were being lowered into the pit I place a seal onto one of their backs to which upon activation to your chakra will cause it to explode. All of this occurs unbeknownst to you.



    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user places a seal on a chosen location which when an enemy target draws closer to the seal it will release itself in activation to the enemy’s chakra and cause an explosion.



    Then simultaneously to putting on the seal one of my clones manipulates a wave of water underneath us to send us towards your location, with the two clones coming towards your middle and right. Im on your left.



    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Damage Points:20
    Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
    Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.



    Once in flight, I make a handseal and exhale a large flame of fire towards your location. So you would see all three of us coming towards your location with a fire heading towards you from slightly your left.



    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. The technique has an enormous range and can cover a huge area. When it was used by Madara Uchiha, the massive scale of the technique was such that, in comparison, his incomplete Susanoo seemed small.

     
         
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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Better

    Quote Originally Posted by Obíto View Post
    Yes I am still going to make the clones..

    ____________________________


    As myself and the clones feel to begin were being lowered into the pit I place a seal onto one of their backs to which upon activation to your chakra will cause it to explode. All of this occurs unbeknownst to you.



    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user places a seal on a chosen location which when an enemy target draws closer to the seal it will release itself in activation to the enemy’s chakra and cause an explosion.



    Then simultaneously to putting on the seal one of my clones manipulates a wave of water underneath us to send us towards your location, with the two clones coming towards your middle and right. Im on your left.



    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Damage Points:20
    Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
    Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.



    Once in flight, I make a handseal and exhale a large flame of fire towards your location. So you would see all three of us coming towards your location with a fire heading towards you from slightly your left.



    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. The technique has an enormous range and can cover a huge area. When it was used by Madara Uchiha, the massive scale of the technique was such that, in comparison, his incomplete Susanoo seemed small.


    Gin makes note of the clones when he's lowering the earth. He sees the waves carrying Madara and his clones, the one on the left shoots out a giant fire attack. Gin taking note of it's size and the two clones with Madara, he spits out a giant water bullet that hits the fire and easily over powers it, while releasing the stream Gin moves his head left to right and back to the left. Making sure to include the clones with the fire.

    (Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Bullet Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user inhales and molds a great amount of chakra into their chest, exhaling a very large quantity of water in the form of a powerful torrent towards their intended target. The stream of water is so powerful and concentrated it can rip through most obstacles in its path. The stream itself contains so much concentrated water that it can flood medium to large sized depressions of the battle field in relatively short amounts of time.

    Also while Gin is moving his head from left to right, he forms 1 hand seal (specialty) and runs a lightning through the stream and electrifying the bullet, so now Madara and his clones have to deal with Water/Lightning combo. Just in case, Gin also forms a single hand sign and forms the same number of clones as Madara. 2 clones, one to each side. Aizen to the left, Tosen to the right.

    (Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
    Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.

    C'mon! Ya can't be serious Uchiha Madara? This is too easy

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
     
         

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    Gin makes note of the clones when he's lowering the earth. He sees the waves carrying Madara and his clones, the one on the left shoots out a giant fire attack. Gin taking note of it's size and the two clones with Madara, he spits out a giant water bullet that hits the fire and easily over powers it, while releasing the stream Gin moves his head left to right and back to the left. Making sure to include the clones with the fire.

    (Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Bullet Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user inhales and molds a great amount of chakra into their chest, exhaling a very large quantity of water in the form of a powerful torrent towards their intended target. The stream of water is so powerful and concentrated it can rip through most obstacles in its path. The stream itself contains so much concentrated water that it can flood medium to large sized depressions of the battle field in relatively short amounts of time.

    Also while Gin is moving his head from left to right, he forms 1 hand seal (specialty) and runs a lightning through the stream and electrifying the bullet, so now Madara and his clones have to deal with Water/Lightning combo. Just in case, Gin also forms a single hand sign and forms the same number of clones as Madara. 2 clones, one to each side. Aizen to the left, Tosen to the right.

    (Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
    Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.

    C'mon! Ya can't be serious Uchiha Madara? This is too easy

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
    As Madara released the low powered Sution jutsu to propel him out of the pit, it raises him enough in the air to travel a short distance before tapering off and starting to descend and using the Katon jutsu, aimed at Gin. As the fire is released, Madara witnesses his enemy release a burst of water at the fire putting it out and continuing at him at a weaker pace. As the water travels, Madara makes two handseals, and gathers wind chakra into a sphere that is released with great force towards the weakened water, bursting through the middle of it. As Madara makes the two handseals, his clone on the far right gathers Suiton chakra while the one in the middle gathers Doton chakra. At the same time Madara releases his wind burst, the clone in the middle releases a slab of earth shot out at great speeds while the clone to the far right releases a powerful stream of water, very much the same that Gin had just used against Madara himself. Due to the different elemental affinities and their properties, the wind moves faster than both the water and earth, with the earth jutsu being the last of the three to reach Gin, each coming in rapid succession of one another.

    The wind jutsu bursts through the weakened water, just as Gin flows the lightning through it. As the wind bursts through, it continues and hits Gin dead-on should he continue with his clone creation. As the wind makes contact, the water follows through and crushes him with powerful waves of water followed by the crippling blow from the earth jutsu making contact.


    (Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing two hand seals Tiger → Dog the user launches a stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.

    (Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Bullet Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user inhales and molds a great amount of chakra into their chest, exhaling a very large quantity of water in the form of a powerful torrent towards their intended target. The stream of water is so powerful and concentrated it can rip through most obstacles in its path. The stream itself contains so much concentrated water that it can flood medium to large sized depressions of the battle field in relatively short amounts of time.

    ( Doton: Iwarin Heiban ) - Earth Release: Rock Scale Slab
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their earth chakra into their stomach and then release from their mouth earthly material that then forms into a large slab of rock, that can travel with incredible force. On impact with the ground the slab forces the earth to splinter and jab anyone caught in the vicinity.


    The three jutsus are all started and released at the same time, creating a near three elemental jutsu combination, not taking the speeds of each jutsu into account.

    Timeframe:
    -water bullet
    -vacuum sphere/water bullet/earth slab/wave of inspiration
    -clones (if you make them)
     
         

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    As Madara released the low powered Sution jutsu to propel him out of the pit, it raises him enough in the air to travel a short distance before tapering off and starting to descend and using the Katon jutsu, aimed at Gin. As the fire is released, Madara witnesses his enemy release a burst of water at the fire putting it out and continuing at him at a weaker pace. As the water travels, Madara makes two handseals, and gathers wind chakra into a sphere that is released with great force towards the weakened water, bursting through the middle of it. As Madara makes the two handseals, his clone on the far right gathers Suiton chakra while the one in the middle gathers Doton chakra. At the same time Madara releases his wind burst, the clone in the middle releases a slab of earth shot out at great speeds while the clone to the far right releases a powerful stream of water, very much the same that Gin had just used against Madara himself. Due to the different elemental affinities and their properties, the wind moves faster than both the water and earth, with the earth jutsu being the last of the three to reach Gin, each coming in rapid succession of one another.

    The wind jutsu bursts through the weakened water, just as Gin flows the lightning through it. As the wind bursts through, it continues and hits Gin dead-on should he continue with his clone creation. As the wind makes contact, the water follows through and crushes him with powerful waves of water followed by the crippling blow from the earth jutsu making contact.


    (Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing two hand seals Tiger → Dog the user launches a stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.

    (Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Bullet Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user inhales and molds a great amount of chakra into their chest, exhaling a very large quantity of water in the form of a powerful torrent towards their intended target. The stream of water is so powerful and concentrated it can rip through most obstacles in its path. The stream itself contains so much concentrated water that it can flood medium to large sized depressions of the battle field in relatively short amounts of time.

    ( Doton: Iwarin Heiban ) - Earth Release: Rock Scale Slab
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their earth chakra into their stomach and then release from their mouth earthly material that then forms into a large slab of rock, that can travel with incredible force. On impact with the ground the slab forces the earth to splinter and jab anyone caught in the vicinity.


    The three jutsus are all started and released at the same time, creating a near three elemental jutsu combination, not taking the speeds of each jutsu into account.

    Timeframe:
    -water bullet
    -vacuum sphere/water bullet/earth slab/wave of inspiration
    -clones (if you make them)
    As Gin notices the wind ripping through his combination with relative ease and the other 2 techniques on their way. A slab of earth and giant water bullet. Gin focuses his doton chakra in front of him and quickly rises up a gigantic stone golem in front of him. The Golem is as big as the Kyuubi and his arms can reach long range. As the Golem rises he extends his left arm and grabs the slab of Earth that was coming down and changes it's direction, throwing it towards the direction of the wind bullet intercepting it before it hits the Golem. Due to the Golem being able to catch the slab while the rest of the attacks were going and throwing it harder and the slab being heavier, it'll travel quicker and connect to the wind bullet and cancel it out.The Golem being much stronger than the water, simply lets the water bullet hit the it and it'll look as if it had no effect. (dropping the rank down to A) If for some reason the wind bullet isn't hit by the slab, it hits the golem and breaks it, cancelling out the two techniques. (Water Bullet makes it go from S > A and A rank wind and A rank earth cancel out most of times imo). If he isn't hit with his free right hand, the Golem swings slapping the group from right to left poofing the clones and sending whichever one is the real Madara to the ground. Since there was no "impact" when grabbing the slab of earth nothing happens to the Golem when he does.

    (Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique.

    My, I think I've wasted enough enough chakra as it on ya. Ya ain't Madara are ya? yer not strong enough to be him.

    Gin makes 2 clones. Aizen and Tosen and they both pull out their swords. Gin and Tosen begin to approaching Madara from all sides. Gin from the middle and Tosen and Aizen from the left and right respectively. Once they all reach him (w/ or w/o your clones) Tosen and Aizen make simple slashes going from left to right across the left and right side of your body. Then Gin goes down the middle with a frontward slash beheading. Successfully raping Madara jk killing him tho xD. If your clones are still out Tosen and Aizen slash on each the same way, just across the body.

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

    (Kumo-Ryū Omotegiri) - Cloud-Style Front Beheading
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage: 25
    Description: The user slashes forwards in front of them with their sword to strike the enemy target.
    Note: Can only be used by a Cloud Member bio or be trained by one.

    I hope ya didn't mind me killing ya with an old village tradition.
     
         

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    As Gin notices the wind ripping through his combination with relative ease and the other 2 techniques on their way. A slab of earth and giant water bullet. Gin focuses his doton chakra in front of him and quickly rises up a gigantic stone golem in front of him. The Golem is as big as the Kyuubi and his arms can reach long range. As the Golem rises he extends his left arm and grabs the slab of Earth that was coming down and changes it's direction, throwing it towards the direction of the wind bullet intercepting it before it hits the Golem. Due to the Golem being able to catch the slab while the rest of the attacks were going and throwing it harder and the slab being heavier, it'll travel quicker and connect to the wind bullet and cancel it out.The Golem being much stronger than the water, simply lets the water bullet hit the it and it'll look as if it had no effect. (dropping the rank down to A) If for some reason the wind bullet isn't hit by the slab, it hits the golem and breaks it, cancelling out the two techniques. (Water Bullet makes it go from S > A and A rank wind and A rank earth cancel out most of times imo). If he isn't hit with his free right hand, the Golem swings slapping the group from right to left poofing the clones and sending whichever one is the real Madara to the ground. Since there was no "impact" when grabbing the slab of earth nothing happens to the Golem when he does.

    (Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique.

    My, I think I've wasted enough enough chakra as it on ya. Ya ain't Madara are ya? yer not strong enough to be him.

    Gin makes 2 clones. Aizen and Tosen and they both pull out their swords. Gin and Tosen begin to approaching Madara from all sides. Gin from the middle and Tosen and Aizen from the left and right respectively. Once they all reach him (w/ or w/o your clones) Tosen and Aizen make simple slashes going from left to right across the left and right side of your body. Then Gin goes down the middle with a frontward slash beheading. Successfully raping Madara jk killing him tho xD. If your clones are still out Tosen and Aizen slash on each the same way, just across the body.

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

    (Kumo-Ryū Omotegiri) - Cloud-Style Front Beheading
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage: 25
    Description: The user slashes forwards in front of them with their sword to strike the enemy target.
    Note: Can only be used by a Cloud Member bio or be trained by one.

    I hope ya didn't mind me killing ya with an old village tradition.
    As the golem begins to move it's arms towards Madara's clones, the clone closest to the golem's arms, makes a single handseal and releases a bolt of lightning from it's mouth, piercing the arm of the golem with great force, breaking through it and causing it to break off, falling in the path of the clones and Gin (we can just assume you'll jump over it ofc). As the lightning breaks the arm and it falls, Madara notes the clones Gin made rushing towards him and his own clones. Stepping forward and drawing his gunbai, Madara laughs wildly, mocking the lowly ninja as he attempts to engage in close combat.

    Don't give me that look. I taught you once before how far beneath me you are!

    As he steps forward and Gin and his clones begin to close the distance, one of Madara's clones throws a smoke bomb down in front of Gin as they (Gin and his clones) rush forward toward's Madara, entering it. Madara's other clone begins to rush forward, just before Gin can enter the short range perimeter of Madara. As the clone rushes forward, the hidden seal on his back activates and explodes upon reaching Gin and his clones, causing them to burst from concussive force generated from the seal's explosion, forcing Gin backwards. As he moves backwards, Madara begins to taunt him again, still standing forward and laughing now.

    Hahaha! Is this the extend of your power? You're facing a God, bow down now and live!


    As the clone detonates, Madara, still leaning forward on his leg, pushes off that leg as he and his clone rushes towards Gin's last location and his clone jumps into the sky as Madara himself creates several earthen pillars a few feet behind Gin's last seen location, angled to hit his back as the explosion forces him backwards, causing him to fly upwards in an arc. Just as the pillars send him upwards, Madara's clone channels wind chakra around his body, creating a small wind natured armor around him, and he meets Gin's upwards traveling body with a strong spinning kick, just as Madara reaches short range of them, throwing several kunai at Gin's rising body.


    (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

    (Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

    (Futon: Kazekama no Yori) - Wind Release: Wind Sickle Armor
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per turn activated)
    Damage points: (40 if opponent comes into direct contact)
    Description: Temari will manipulate her wind chakra and create a armor of cutting wind to spin around her body. The armor itself has the capability to deflect incoming projectiles and weapons aswell as being capable of fending off taijutsu based attacks and causing damage to enemies who come into direct contact with the wind.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
     
         

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    As the golem begins to move it's arms towards Madara's clones, the clone closest to the golem's arms, makes a single handseal and releases a bolt of lightning from it's mouth, piercing the arm of the golem with great force, breaking through it and causing it to break off, falling in the path of the clones and Gin (we can just assume you'll jump over it ofc). As the lightning breaks the arm and it falls, Madara notes the clones Gin made rushing towards him and his own clones. Stepping forward and drawing his gunbai, Madara laughs wildly, mocking the lowly ninja as he attempts to engage in close combat.

    Don't give me that look. I taught you once before how far beneath me you are!

    As he steps forward and Gin and his clones begin to close the distance, one of Madara's clones throws a smoke bomb down in front of Gin as they (Gin and his clones) rush forward toward's Madara, entering it. Madara's other clone begins to rush forward, just before Gin can enter the short range perimeter of Madara. As the clone rushes forward, the hidden seal on his back activates and explodes upon reaching Gin and his clones, causing them to burst from concussive force generated from the seal's explosion, forcing Gin backwards. As he moves backwards, Madara begins to taunt him again, still standing forward and laughing now.

    Hahaha! Is this the extend of your power? You're facing a God, bow down now and live!


    As the clone detonates, Madara, still leaning forward on his leg, pushes off that leg as he and his clone rushes towards Gin's last location and his clone jumps into the sky as Madara himself creates several earthen pillars a few feet behind Gin's last seen location, angled to hit his back as the explosion forces him backwards, causing him to fly upwards in an arc. Just as the pillars send him upwards, Madara's clone channels wind chakra around his body, creating a small wind natured armor around him, and he meets Gin's upwards traveling body with a strong spinning kick, just as Madara reaches short range of them, throwing several kunai at Gin's rising body.


    (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

    (Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

    (Futon: Kazekama no Yori) - Wind Release: Wind Sickle Armor
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per turn activated)
    Damage points: (40 if opponent comes into direct contact)
    Description: Temari will manipulate her wind chakra and create a armor of cutting wind to spin around her body. The armor itself has the capability to deflect incoming projectiles and weapons aswell as being capable of fending off taijutsu based attacks and causing damage to enemies who come into direct contact with the wind.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Gin continues to approach Madara has the rumble flies he jumps around to avoid. As he lands and continues approaching in the same formation as before, smoke begins to surround the three clones. Gin and Aizen move to the right and form up together with Gin takes his weapon and focuses his wind chakra and creates and whirlwind around all three of us that disburses the smoke all around. The vortex of wind pushes outwards all the way to short range in all directions to stop any kunais or advancing clones in the this. The Vortex hits the clone and it explodes on impact as it enters the short range area. The vortex eating up most of the blow and the distance from them and the explosion wouldn't reach the clones or Gin, maybe some wind or remaining blows but nothing to halt his movements. Gin had changed his location from the last one after the smoke bomb went off but either way the wind would push it back. As he holds the wind until the smoke is finally cleared.

    (Fūton: Kujaku Senpūjin) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind Formation
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique utilizes wind chakra into the users sword and then they release a vortex of wind that surrounds the users body and can push away materials covering the users body.

    After everything is cleared. Gin notices two of your clones running towards him. One cloaked in Wind chakra (which i think only temari can use but who cares <_< Madara is woman anyway) comes toward their location as the other one stands at a distance. Gin takes the guess that the one headed towards him is clone and the one back there playing hard to get is the original. So as the clone approaches, Gin and Aizen make an arc and leave behind Tosen there to deal with the clone approaching. Tosen stands there with a sword in hand, sees the clone begin to spin and being a skilled Kenjutsu users takes his sword and spins it around his body releasing a flame around his body that incinerates everything directly around him, making the completely unaware clone kick a wall of flames after spinning disperse cuz of the flames power. Another one of his village valued jutsus.

    (Kumo-Ryū Kaengiri) - Cloud Style: Flame Slash
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user imbues their blade with fire, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing.before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. A skilled user of this technique, is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a circular wall of these flames, incinerating multiple targets even if they approach from numerous angles simultaneously.
    Note: Can only be used by a Clound ninja or trained by one.

    Gin and Aizen after leaving the approaching clone to Tosen to deal with are approaching Madara.

    Why ya talkin' like that fer? Yer a Scary one, Uchiha Madara

    Gin smirked as they closed in an Madara began throwing Kunai's as they approached. Gin nodded at Aizen and Aizen began making a bigger arc and Gin started defending the Kunai's with his sword. Moving around and about and back and forth to block off the kunais that were thrown. To any ninja this would look like Gin was just blocking kunais but what Gin's real intentions was to place Madara in a genjutsu really quickly. Madara then begins to see Gin having multiple arms waving back in forth resembling a willow tree. This is done to distract Madara as he knows his sharingan will help him out of it. What he doesn't know is that Aizen is right behind him after he falls in it and using chakra in his feet speeding him up, Aizen takes his sword and stabs it in Madara's back through his heart. Killing the Uchiha legend.

    ( Konoha-Ryū: Yanagi ) - Leaf Ninja Art: Willow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 35
    Description: The user waves their sword back and forth, which when seen by the target locks them in a genjutsu which causes them to hallucinate multiple waving arms. The movement resembles that of a willow tree blowing in the wind. With the enemy off guard, the user is free to cut them down.

    If yer a God, than what does that make me, Uchiha Madara?
     
         
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    Gin continues to approach Madara has the rumble flies he jumps around to avoid. As he lands and continues approaching in the same formation as before, smoke begins to surround the three clones. Gin and Aizen move to the right and form up together with Gin takes his weapon and focuses his wind chakra and creates and whirlwind around all three of us that disburses the smoke all around. The vortex of wind pushes outwards all the way to short range in all directions to stop any kunais or advancing clones in the this. The Vortex hits the clone and it explodes on impact as it enters the short range area. The vortex eating up most of the blow and the distance from them and the explosion wouldn't reach the clones or Gin, maybe some wind or remaining blows but nothing to halt his movements. Gin had changed his location from the last one after the smoke bomb went off but either way the wind would push it back. As he holds the wind until the smoke is finally cleared.

    (Fūton: Kujaku Senpūjin) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind Formation
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique utilizes wind chakra into the users sword and then they release a vortex of wind that surrounds the users body and can push away materials covering the users body.

    After everything is cleared. Gin notices two of your clones running towards him. One cloaked in Wind chakra (which i think only temari can use but who cares <_< Madara is woman anyway) comes toward their location as the other one stands at a distance. Gin takes the guess that the one headed towards him is clone and the one back there playing hard to get is the original. So as the clone approaches, Gin and Aizen make an arc and leave behind Tosen there to deal with the clone approaching. Tosen stands there with a sword in hand, sees the clone begin to spin and being a skilled Kenjutsu users takes his sword and spins it around his body releasing a flame around his body that incinerates everything directly around him, making the completely unaware clone kick a wall of flames after spinning disperse cuz of the flames power. Another one of his village valued jutsus.

    (Kumo-Ryū Kaengiri) - Cloud Style: Flame Slash
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user imbues their blade with fire, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing.before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. A skilled user of this technique, is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a circular wall of these flames, incinerating multiple targets even if they approach from numerous angles simultaneously.
    Note: Can only be used by a Clound ninja or trained by one.

    Gin and Aizen after leaving the approaching clone to Tosen to deal with are approaching Madara.

    Why ya talkin' like that fer? Yer a Scary one, Uchiha Madara

    Gin smirked as they closed in an Madara began throwing Kunai's as they approached. Gin nodded at Aizen and Aizen began making a bigger arc and Gin started defending the Kunai's with his sword. Moving around and about and back and forth to block off the kunais that were thrown. To any ninja this would look like Gin was just blocking kunais but what Gin's real intentions was to place Madara in a genjutsu really quickly. Madara then begins to see Gin having multiple arms waving back in forth resembling a willow tree. This is done to distract Madara as he knows his sharingan will help him out of it. What he doesn't know is that Aizen is right behind him after he falls in it and using chakra in his feet speeding him up, Aizen takes his sword and stabs it in Madara's back through his heart. Killing the Uchiha legend.

    ( Konoha-Ryū: Yanagi ) - Leaf Ninja Art: Willow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 35
    Description: The user waves their sword back and forth, which when seen by the target locks them in a genjutsu which causes them to hallucinate multiple waving arms. The movement resembles that of a willow tree blowing in the wind. With the enemy off guard, the user is free to cut them down.

    If yer a God, than what does that make me, Uchiha Madara?
    As Madara's two clones were dispersed, he smirked; a handicapped fight was much more preferable for him anyway. It allowed him to demonstrate his power in a better display that was more justified. After all, 3 Madara's would be too much for any foe... As he neared Gin and the clone's location, the two nearest him began to split up, one taking a wider arc outwards, moving around Madara's perimeter. Being a war seasoned veteran, Madara knew these tactics quite well. So he plans to ambush from behind like a coward... As the clone moves around him, unbeknownst to Madara that it is the clone of course, the real Gin begins deflecting the kunais thrown by moving his sword rapidly back and forth. As he began to deflect the kunais, Madara's vision began to waver and he saw a willow tree blowing in the wind. His Sharingan still active, Madara's eyes saw the chakra present within the illusion, and combined with the fact that the willow appearing didn't add up with the fact that his enemy's actions and Gin not being of the Senju clan, Madara immediately knew what what was going on.

    ..Genjutsu..

    As his surrondings begin to waver and multiple arms began to appear, Madara quickly ran through his options in his mind: he had an enemy attempting to flank him, from the last time he seen him, and one in front of him. He could expel the genjutsu with a surge and catch the incoming enemy off guard and then deal with the one ahead of him alone. No...this fool mocked the name of Uchiha Madara..he was going to show him the power in a name. He would learn why his Sharingan gave him such power. Coming to this conclusion near instantly, Madara realized that the illusion didn't bind him into place, but merely created an illusion in front of him, evident in the showing of chakra through the surroundings. Noting this, Madara stared at Gin's place as he suddenly side-dashed to his left (your never stated which side the clone was coming in from so whichever side I would see him before the illusion starts, I'd move to the opposite side. I'm just going with him moving to the right for both our sakes). While watching Gin, he uses his Sharingan prowess to reflect the genjutsu upon him, catching him within his own illusion. As Madara jumps to the side, he performs a 360 degree spin, having already drawn his gunbai previously and releases a burst of wind, aimed at his enemy, finding him behind his previous location. As the wall of wind ravages the unsuspecting clone, which disperses upon contact, confirming Madara's belief that it is indeed a clone.

    As he spins and performs the full 360, he lands and pushes off from his right foot, moving towards his right this time (essentially, think of it as zig-zagging), making a single handseal and expelling a large stream of fire at his target. Given the swiftness of the stringing together of the Sharingan jutsu and the Futon technique, Madara was fairly certain that his target wouldn't have had enough time to release the genjutsu before the fire jutsu was prepped. If anything, his release of the genjutsu would likely coincide with the release of the massive burst of fire and due to them being within the perimeters of short range, it'd leave him little time to counter.

    "A peasant."



    (Magen: Kyouten Chiten) - Demonic Illusion: Heaven And Earth Change
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:15(+2 for b rank genjutsus)
    Damage Points:N/A(amount jutsu reversed delivers)
    Description:This is a illusion counter were the illusion is reversed back unto the user and they get the damage of the jutsu(only works from b rank down).

    (Futon: Kibishii Shippuu Kabe) - Wind Release: Severe Hurricane Wall
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will swing their Giant Folding fan or Giant War fan at their target to create a small but powerful hurricane that drags the target with it several meters. Normal users can perform this technique by use of 3 hand seals before creating the Hurricane.

    (Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. The technique has an enourmous range and can cover a huge area. When it was used by Madara Uchiha, the massive scale of the technique was such that, in comparisson, his incomplete Susanoo seemed small.
     
         

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Better

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    As Madara's two clones were dispersed, he smirked; a handicapped fight was much more preferable for him anyway. It allowed him to demonstrate his power in a better display that was more justified. After all, 3 Madara's would be too much for any foe... As he neared Gin and the clone's location, the two nearest him began to split up, one taking a wider arc outwards, moving around Madara's perimeter. Being a war seasoned veteran, Madara knew these tactics quite well. So he plans to ambush from behind like a coward... As the clone moves around him, unbeknownst to Madara that it is the clone of course, the real Gin begins deflecting the kunais thrown by moving his sword rapidly back and forth. As he began to deflect the kunais, Madara's vision began to waver and he saw a willow tree blowing in the wind. His Sharingan still active, Madara's eyes saw the chakra present within the illusion, and combined with the fact that the willow appearing didn't add up with the fact that his enemy's actions and Gin not being of the Senju clan, Madara immediately knew what what was going on.

    ..Genjutsu..

    As his surrondings begin to waver and multiple arms began to appear, Madara quickly ran through his options in his mind: he had an enemy attempting to flank him, from the last time he seen him, and one in front of him. He could expel the genjutsu with a surge and catch the incoming enemy off guard and then deal with the one ahead of him alone. No...this fool mocked the name of Uchiha Madara..he was going to show him the power in a name. He would learn why his Sharingan gave him such power. Coming to this conclusion near instantly, Madara realized that the illusion didn't bind him into place, but merely created an illusion in front of him, evident in the showing of chakra through the surroundings. Noting this, Madara stared at Gin's place as he suddenly side-dashed to his left (your never stated which side the clone was coming in from so whichever side I would see him before the illusion starts, I'd move to the opposite side. I'm just going with him moving to the right for both our sakes). While watching Gin, he uses his Sharingan prowess to reflect the genjutsu upon him, catching him within his own illusion. As Madara jumps to the side, he performs a 360 degree spin, having already drawn his gunbai previously and releases a burst of wind, aimed at his enemy, finding him behind his previous location. As the wall of wind ravages the unsuspecting clone, which disperses upon contact, confirming Madara's belief that it is indeed a clone.

    As he spins and performs the full 360, he lands and pushes off from his right foot, moving towards his right this time (essentially, think of it as zig-zagging), making a single handseal and expelling a large stream of fire at his target. Given the swiftness of the stringing together of the Sharingan jutsu and the Futon technique, Madara was fairly certain that his target wouldn't have had enough time to release the genjutsu before the fire jutsu was prepped. If anything, his release of the genjutsu would likely coincide with the release of the massive burst of fire and due to them being within the perimeters of short range, it'd leave him little time to counter.

    "A peasant."



    (Magen: Kyouten Chiten) - Demonic Illusion: Heaven And Earth Change
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:15(+2 for b rank genjutsus)
    Damage Points:N/A(amount jutsu reversed delivers)
    Description:This is a illusion counter were the illusion is reversed back unto the user and they get the damage of the jutsu(only works from b rank down).

    (Futon: Kibishii Shippuu Kabe) - Wind Release: Severe Hurricane Wall
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will swing their Giant Folding fan or Giant War fan at their target to create a small but powerful hurricane that drags the target with it several meters. Normal users can perform this technique by use of 3 hand seals before creating the Hurricane.

    (Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. The technique has an enourmous range and can cover a huge area. When it was used by Madara Uchiha, the massive scale of the technique was such that, in comparisson, his incomplete Susanoo seemed small.
    Gin after putting the Uchiha in a genjutsu knew it was only seconds before the clone stabbed him. Then as he's watching it Madara grew several arms like Gin had intended him to see in his own genjutsu. He could smile and laugh a bit. The sharingan was a crazy thing, to be caught in his own technique, Gin was made a fool of, but at least Madara was creative.

    I guess I underestimated ya. Returning my own jutsu at me so effortlessly.

    Gin being trapped in the Genjutsu, Tosen who had defeated the other clone, watched as Madara ignored Gin and went after the clone behind him trying to stab. Tosen was wondering why Gin was just standing there. Remember the opponent was an Uchiha, the use of his sharingan might have been something to do with it. He wondered maybe he couldn't react, because looking at the situation madara's back was to him and he didn't do anything. He had to stop him, he forms two hand seals and after Madara kills the clone and lands his right foot steps on a swamp as he tries to move in his intended direction he falls flat on his face. The swamp extends from just infront of Madara all the way back behind him. Giving no room to run backwards. At the same time, Gin breaks his own genjutsu by forming a handseal for Kai. He knew it was a genjutsu, because it was the same one he tried to use on Madara, but was flipped back at him instead. After releasing the Gen, Gin looks at Madara's situation and adds on to it. Forming Chidori in his hand and extending it to pierce Madara right through the head. The chidori is quite fast and hits him as he struggles with the swamp.

    Well, Uchiha Madara I must say. Yer one scary shinobi. This is the end tho.

    (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.

    ( Genjutsu: Kai ) - Illusion Technique: Release
    Rank: C-S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15-40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does one hand seal to focus and then proceeds to disturb his chakra flow by forcefully stopping it momentarily and then "spiking" his spiritual energy, unbalancing his chakra. This dispels any genjutsu set upon the user except MS Eye Techniques, Paralysis-like Genjutsu and Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Chant. The effectiveness of this technique is dependent upon the skill of the user. A Jounin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to C-rank. An S-class ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to B-rank. A Sannin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to A-rank. A Sage rank user can dispel Genjutsu up to S-Rank. The user may use this technique through physical contact on others to dispel them from Genjutsu. The technique can only be used once per turn and the user still needs to fully follow the logic as to why he figured out it was an illusion.

    (Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

    Goodnight

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    Re: [Sensei Test] - Better

    Test Closed

    As much as I want to reply to that final move and continue, I feel that you'd demonstrated enough for this test to be graded. You showed sufficient skill with defending elemental combinations and showed innovative and creative ways to do so. I particularly liked the Golem defense you created and how you used it that turn as well as the move in the turn after that, focusing near solely on kenjutsu and taijutsu related techniques. I can't speak on the earlier half of the test as I didn't conduct it but i must say, i've had fun in the short few posts I had here. Either way, good luck on the grading!
     
         

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    ‡ Test Passed ‡
    Overall the moves used in this test are par for this test, you showed skill in elemental techniques and presented a decent level of tactics. Congrats!
     
         

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