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    Senior Member Cyanide Addiction's Avatar
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    Follow You To Forever

    Some would say love is a crutch
    Others say it's a risk taken by fools
    But I know otherwise when I feel your soft touch
    And you know because I'm not like those other tools

    Forever is a long time
    At least that's what they keep saying
    But you just get better with age like fine wine
    Only we know that this isn't just a game we're playing

    We're both thinking the same
    The risks are there and we are both aware
    Hell I knew from the moment you came
    That if we take that leap it'll be more than love we share

    I know it's overwhelming but it'll be a hell of ride
    Just take my hand and board the train to tomorrow
    If I said I wasn't scared then I lied
    But I trust you not to ever let me go

    Forever isn't an easy idea to comprehend
    But I promise tomorrow will bring heaven not hell
    Just don't let our dream die and I'll follow you to the end
    This is real.. not just some ponzi scheme I'm trying to sell

    So let people say whatever
    They're only bitter due to misery's temptation
    I promise to follow you to forever
    Because you're better than my best expectation
     
         
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    Re: Follow You To Forever

    THATS DEEP MAN.. +rp good job...
     
         

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    Re: Follow You To Forever

    Great job dude
     
         

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    Re: Follow You To Forever

    Thanks guys. Positive replies tell me one thing; that I haven't lost it. My ability to write poetry/songs that is. Problem is that I fear I'm getting a tad repetitious. I need new material to write about. Not just angry stuff, or stuff about romance. I am really good with sad material as well. I just need new incentive to write something different.
     
         

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    Re: Follow You To Forever

    This is really good!
     
         

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