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    Sasui of the Kumogakure REVAMPED

    Name: Sasui
    Nickname: Sasui-san or Sasui-kun
    Gender: Male
    Age: 17
    Clan: n/a
    Family: Adopted into Omoi and Karui's family (the two being cousins)

    Looks: He's 5'8 and a half and 130 lbs. He's got short spiky, platinum blonde hair (like Omoi), black eyes, he wears a high-collared, sleeveless uniform and the one-strap-over-one-shoulder Flak Jacket of a Kumogakure shinobi (mimicking Darui) with loose fitting pants, and the red and white Kumogakure shin-guards along with a pair of sandals (his pants are tucked into the shin-guards like Shee). He wears a black headband around his forehead. He's muscular, but not hulk sized. He's got one small circular earring in each ear and carries a black-bladed katana on his back in a black and red sheath. He's got his deceased mother's kanji of her first name going vertically down his right shoulder.

    Personality: He's quiet, doesn't speak unless directly spoken to. He may be quiet, but he's no slouch when it comes to combat. He's trained with Darui, Karui and Omoi in the art of Kenjutsu. He's got a medium deep voice, (can easily be mistaken for Darui if not paying attention) and has a strong interest in woman. As a matter of fact, he'd rather save the life of a woman than save another man. This attribute comes from the loss of his mother. He's promised to save every woman he possibly can.

    Village Info

    Village of Birth: Kumogakure
    Village of Alliance: Kumogakure

    Rank//Chakra Info

    Ninja Rank: Chuunin
    Specialty: .
    Elements: Raiton & Doton (wants to learn)
    Your ninjutsu (all spoilers): Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

    (Ki Nobori no Shugyō) - Tree Climbing Practice
    Rank: E
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This is a training method used to gain the basic skills of chakra control. This training involves focusing a fixed amount of chakra to the bottom of one's feet, and using that to climb a tree without using one's hands. If the stream of chakra is too weak, the user will lose their footing on the tree and fall off. If it is too strong, the user will be pushed away from the tree, causing the bark of the tree to break around the point of contact and the user to fall. This technique becomes second nature to shinobi with more practice.
    Note: Technique only for use of training methods.

    (Suimen Hokō no Gyō) - Water Surface Walking Practice
    Rank: E
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This training method is used to gain better chakra control. To do this, the user has to be emitting a constant stream of chakra from the bottom of the their feet and using the repellent force to walk across the water's surface. This technique is more difficult to master than the Tree Climbing Practice, because the amount of chakra that needs to be emitted changes constantly. This technique becomes second nature to shinobi with more practices.
    Note: Technique only for use of training methods.
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    Background Info

    History: At the age 10, his step father killed his mother in the middle of the night. A powerful thunder storm was above the village and enraged at the sight of his dead mother, he used natural lightning to strike his step father, killing him almost instantly. Jounin and ANBU rushed over and Omoi and Karui were two of the Jounin on the scene. The very next day, Raikage Ei allowed them to adopt the newly orphaned Sasui. Ever since then, Omoi, Karui, Darui, Shi and Samui (RIP) have been like family to him. He's got a slight crush Mabui, Ei's assistant.

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    This is Sasui after chatting with Mabui (his secret crush):


    Theme Song and Background Music: Return to Destiny by Maon Kurosaki and Danzai no Hana by Kosaka Riyu

    Battles

    Won: 0
    Lost: 0

    ~Declined~
    Not accepting illegitimate adoptions. You can't have a custom history that interferes with canon. You can't be this close in relation to those characters. Fix your history. Also, that template that people have been telling you about, copy and past it, that way it will be presented better next time you submit this bio.
     
         
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    Re: Sasui of the Kumogakure REVAMPED

    put a spoiler around dem jutsus

    and clan means clans on NB (e.g. uchiha, nara, nekura) not families lol so just put: N/A

    nice bio though
     
         

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    Re: Sasui of the Kumogakure REVAMPED

    Quote Originally Posted by HatakoUracha View Post
    put a spoiler around dem jutsus

    and clan means clans on NB (e.g. uchiha, nara, nekura) not families lol so just put: N/A

    nice bio though
    I know what a clan is. I was just not paying attention. lol
     
         

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    Re: Sasui of the Kumogakure REVAMPED

    Quote Originally Posted by HatakoUracha View Post
    put a spoiler around dem jutsus

    and clan means clans on NB (e.g. uchiha, nara, nekura) not families lol so just put: N/A

    nice bio though
    Thanks! :D
     
         

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    Re: Sasui of the Kumogakure REVAMPED

    This is exactly like your previous bio. I wonder why you did not simply edit the other one and add the changes? BTW, it takes about 1-2 months to get bios approved but sometimes it gets approved in 1-2 weeks for some people
     
         

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    Re: Sasui of the Kumogakure REVAMPED

    Quote Originally Posted by Hell Autarch View Post
    This is exactly like your previous bio. I wonder why you did not simply edit the other one and add the changes? BTW, it takes about 1-2 months to get bios approved but sometimes it gets approved in 1-2 weeks for some people
    If you read closely, I've changed a lot.
     
         

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    Re: Sasui of the Kumogakure REVAMPED

    Nice for a first
     
         

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