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    Naruto 641 (by nickman013)


    A new ally!

    Scene starts with Minato while regenerating from the explosion far away in the forest
    Naruto:Dad, are you fine?
    Minato: I'm Ok, son!(thinking)His technique can take what shape the user wants, it even can stuck on the enemy...
    Obito:Sensei, are you afraid?(smirks)I'm a god now, nobody and nothing can touch me now!!!(devil look)
    Naruto: Don't make me laugh!You're not a god, you're nobody, like you said!
    Obito: Naruto, you said you'll never let you friends die, right?Watch this!!!
    Obito targets Hinata and Sakura.Both of them look scared at Obito.Then he teleports near them and hits them with his technique. A cloud dust appears.
    Naruto:Sakura-chan! Hinata!
    When the dust disappear a dust wall protects Sakura And Hinata!
    Gaara:Right on time!
    Naruto:Gaara!
    Behind Gaara are the other kages
    Obito:So you arrived, finally! I've waited you!
    Orochimaru, Karin and Suigetsu arrive near Sasuke.
    Karin:Sasuke-kun, are you fine!
    Sasuke: I'm fine, Karin! Orochimaru, did you do what I ask you?
    Orohimaru: Of course, Sasuke-kun! They're here!
    Naruto:?!
    Orochimaru:Naruto, I've got a surprise for you! But now, Sasuke-kun, you need my Cursed Seal!
    Sasuke: Fine!
    Orochimaru: Because you had it before you don't need to "die: to gan level 2!
    Naruto: What?Sasuke, don't let him do that!
    Sasuke:It's Ok, I need to become stronger!
    Orochimaru bite Sasuke's neck and a seal with 3 tomoe appears.
    Orochimaru:Karin, let Sasuke bite you!
    Karin:Sasuke-kun, bite my hand!Sasuke bites Karin's hand
    Orochimaru: Now, my surprise for you Naruto! Summoning: Impure World Reincarnation!!!
    A coffin appear in front of Naruto soounded by dust. When The coffin opeens, A teardrop fall from Naruto' eyes
    Naruto: !!!!
    What happend? And who summoned Orochimaru?

    So what are you're thoughts? Sorry for grammar




     
         
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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    And what happened with the incomming explosion from 640?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    ooooh, this is interesting! Good work!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    Oh yes! The return of the pervy sage
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    Nice read .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    less suspense for another trump card
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    Not bad but highly impossible to happen
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    Ugh terrible. The predictions on the Internet suck.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    LOL, I laughed at the start. They are chatting when they are about to be blasted.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    she summoned his mom since she can restrain bijuu so she can prob get into obito's mind and stop him idk
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    Quote Originally Posted by nickman013 View Post

    A new ally!

    Scene starts with Minato while regenerating his arm
    Naruto:Dad, are you fine?
    Minato: I'm Ok, son!(thinking)His technique can take what shape the user wants, it even can stuck on the enemy...
    Obito:Sensei, are you afraid?(smirks)I'm a god now, nobody and nothing can touch me now!!!(devil look)
    Naruto: Don't make me laugh!You're not a god, you're nobody, like you said!
    Obito: Naruto, you said you'll never let you friends die, right?Watch this!!!
    Obito targets Hinata and Sakura.Both of them look scared at Obito.Then he teleports near them and hits them with his technique. A cloud dust appears.
    Naruto:Sakura-chan! Hinata!
    When the dust disappear a dust wall protects Sakura And Hinata!
    Gaara:Right on time!
    Naruto:Gaara!
    Behind Gaara are the other kages
    Obito:So you arrived, finally! I've waited you!
    Orochimaru, Karin and Suigetsu arrive near Sasuke.
    Karin:Sasuke-kun, are you fine!
    Sasuke: I'm fine, Karin! Orochimaru, did you do what I ask you?
    Orohimaru: Of course, Sasuke-kun! They're here!
    Naruto:?!
    Orochimaru:Naruto, I've got a surprise for you! But now, Sasuke-kun, you need my Cursed Seal!
    Sasuke: Fine!
    Orochimaru: Because you had it before you don't need to "die: to gan level 2!
    Naruto: What?Sasuke, don't let him do that!
    Sasuke:It's Ok, I need to become stronger!
    Orochimaru bite Sasuke's neck and a seal with 3 tomoe appears.
    Orochimaru:Karin, let Sasuke bite you!
    Karin:Sasuke-kun, bite my hand!Sasuke bites Karin's hand
    Orochimaru: Now, my surprise for you Naruto! Summoning: Impure World Reincarnation!!!
    A coffin appear in front of Naruto soounded by dust. When The coffin opeens, A teardrop fall from Naruto' eyes
    Naruto: !!!!
    What happend? And who summoned Orochimaru?

    So what are you're thoughts? Sorry for grammar




    Possibbly jiraiya or kushina
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    i think its a bit off topic from the start but nice Prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    Please, keep going.... i'm excited to know who it is... ( in my opinion, it can only be 2 people: Jiraya or Kushina)
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    Quote Originally Posted by soparaamigoseeu View Post
    Please, keep going.... i'm excited to know who it is... ( in my opinion, it can only be 2 people: Jiraya or Kushina)
    His Avatar explains it. Its Jiraiya.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    Quote Originally Posted by nickman013 View Post

    A new ally!

    Scene starts with Minato while regenerating his arm
    Naruto:Dad, are you fine?
    Minato: I'm Ok, son!(thinking)His technique can take what shape the user wants, it even can stuck on the enemy...
    Obito:Sensei, are you afraid?(smirks)I'm a god now, nobody and nothing can touch me now!!!(devil look)
    Naruto: Don't make me laugh!You're not a god, you're nobody, like you said!
    Obito: Naruto, you said you'll never let you friends die, right?Watch this!!!
    Obito targets Hinata and Sakura.Both of them look scared at Obito.Then he teleports near them and hits them with his technique. A cloud dust appears.
    Naruto:Sakura-chan! Hinata!
    When the dust disappear a dust wall protects Sakura And Hinata!
    Gaara:Right on time!
    Naruto:Gaara!
    Behind Gaara are the other kages
    Obito:So you arrived, finally! I've waited you!
    Orochimaru, Karin and Suigetsu arrive near Sasuke.
    Karin:Sasuke-kun, are you fine!
    Sasuke: I'm fine, Karin! Orochimaru, did you do what I ask you?
    Orohimaru: Of course, Sasuke-kun! They're here!
    Naruto:?!
    Orochimaru:Naruto, I've got a surprise for you! But now, Sasuke-kun, you need my Cursed Seal!
    Sasuke: Fine!
    Orochimaru: Because you had it before you don't need to "die: to gan level 2!
    Naruto: What?Sasuke, don't let him do that!
    Sasuke:It's Ok, I need to become stronger!
    Orochimaru bite Sasuke's neck and a seal with 3 tomoe appears.
    Orochimaru:Karin, let Sasuke bite you!
    Karin:Sasuke-kun, bite my hand!Sasuke bites Karin's hand
    Orochimaru: Now, my surprise for you Naruto! Summoning: Impure World Reincarnation!!!
    A coffin appear in front of Naruto soounded by dust. When The coffin opeens, A teardrop fall from Naruto' eyes
    Naruto: !!!!
    What happend? And who summoned Orochimaru?

    So what are you're thoughts? Sorry for grammar




    Orochimaru revived Kushina if you want to know. At her I was thinking when I wrote this prediction. Jiraya had an epic death so I don't want him back and Orochimaru can't get his dna. About Kushina, Orochimaru can get her dna...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    ...former Kurama's Jinchuuriki... Kushina, awakened without Kurama because she didn't have it in the moment of her death. LMFAO
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    Please write the next one, you left us hanging like the sopranos.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 641 (by nickman013)

    What happened to the explosion?
     
         

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