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    Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

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    This is my first prediction. I accept praises, criticism, and even tomatoes (fresh tomatoes please). Enjoy.


    In the face of Obito's new power, overhelming might, is there anything Naruto and gang can do!?

    [ The battlefield was starting to be filled with a strong light that was being emitted from the energy sphere sticked to Minato's destroyed arm. Minato, Naruto and Sasuke were about to be pointblanked by Obito's Jutsu ]

    Minato: ( This is bad. I don't have time for seals! )

    - Naruto reverses its summoning sending it back to Myoboku while using a chakra arm to envelope the sphere and reduce its destructive effect. Minato manages to see Naruto's intention and do the same -

    Minato: Sasuke, get out of this place... Me and my son will take care of this.

    Sasuke: ...I'm going to attack him.

    - Sasuke's Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan glows, while he summons Susano'o with great speed. The uses two arms to charge the bow with an Enton Arrow... -

    Obito: A futile try... you can't avoid this.

    [ Obito's sphere starts expanding, and a evil smirk starts drawing in his mouth ]

    Naruto: ( It seems like this is the end for me... but I won't stop trying. There are promises I made, I can't let anyone down! ) Sorry... Sasuke.

    [ Orochimaru, Karin and Suigetsu arrives behind Sasuke, while the Gokages arrive taking position between the alliance and Obito. The Gokage realizes the situation in which Minato and Naruto are involved ]

    - Naruto hits Sasuke's Susano'o with another chakra arm with full force, sending him flying to the alliance -

    - Gaara uses his sand making a wall to protect all the alliance -

    Tsunade: Naruto! ( You... what are you doing!? )

    [ The light becomes blinding, nobody can see anything. An earthquake moves and makes fissures over the floor in all the battlefield.

    Long seconds passes, and the light starts to disappear. A lot of dust is floating, making the whole alliance unable to see what's happening.

    Clouds are getting reunited, and it started to rain, making pool and mud almost everywhere. The dust starts to disappear quickly...

    Minato's body disappeared.

    Naruto's chakra arm was still in the place, but it looked different. It looked stronger than before, and the Kyuubi Jinchuuriki seem to be transformed in his Bijuu Mode. He was holding a Sage Staff that looked exactly as Obito's staff, but made with Light Chakra

    Finally, Obito's sphere gets absorbed by Naruto's chakra arm after the shockwave. A strong wind starts to blow from Naruto's direction ]

    Naruto: ( W...what just happened...? )

    < Inside Naruto's consciousness >

    Minato: It seems... I made it in time... my son.

    Naruto: ...what? Dad, what happened!?

    [ Naruto realizes he is looking into his consciousness. In front of Naruto, Kurama was smirking while Minato was resting over one of Kurama's tails. Kurama seems to be at least four times bigger than before ]

    Kurama: Naruto... maybe we have a chance to win.

    [ The beasts that gave chakra to Naruto are behind him, everyone is smiling. ]

    Minato: You made a lot of friends, Naruto.

    < Back to the battlefield >

    Naruto: A nameless monster will never be able to defeat me. We are different... I have friends.

    - Naruto smirks -

    [ The shinobi alliance looks in awe... Naruto's Bijuu Mode is larger and brighter than before. Tsunade's heart was beating very fast, her face seems relieved ]

    Tsunade: ( Even everything he has passed through, his determination is still there... There is no doubt now... )

    - Tsunade takes a long breath -

    Tsunade [ yelling ]: DON'T UNDERESTIMATE THE NEXT HOKAGE OF THE LEAF, UZUMAKI NARUTO!!

    Obito: !!??

    His dreams became truth, will he be able to live up to his new title!?

     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    Amazing work, I enjoyed reading it. You have talent, why won't you go and write manga yourself?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    Great job :I
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    Great PrediCtion, really hopes this happens
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    excellent and i want minato to be on the battlefield anyway good prediction nice

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    i don't know why .. the end made me laugh but i ****ing loved it.. ))

    awesome prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    Wow a great prediction I really enjoyed reading this + rep for that work my friend you deserve it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    file:///C:/Users/dagger/Downloads/Naruto-Minato-Kushina-one-Family.gif
    good
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    DON'T UNDERESTIMATE THE NEXT HOKAGE OF THE LEAF, UZUMAKI NARUTO!!

     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    This prediction seems possible
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    I don't like it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    I don't wanna be rude , but It's very unlikely to happen in next chapter because Kishi is a slow pace writer and its Sasuke's time to shine ,Naruto has already got his , and there is no way he can beat Obito with the other half of Kurama's chakra alone.

    Now to my personal opinion , sorry but i hate the fact that you put Sasuke as a fodder , and so this prediction is awful to me.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    Oh my god cliché, not gonna happen in next chapter for sure.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    Tsunade [ yelling ]: DON'T UNDERESTIMATE THE NEXT HOKAGE OF THE LEAF, UZUMAKI NARUTO!!

    sasuke will really be pissed after hearing those words.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    loved that bro... pure talent.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    God that was excellent and that's not something I usually say. Mine pales in comparison to yours

    In any case good job. What didn't really make sense was the fact thta Minato disappeared from the battlefield. The fact tat he gave Naruto Kurama's half chakra shouldn't be a reason for his edo to disappear.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    Tsunade [ yelling ]: DON'T UNDERESTIMATE THE NEXT HOKAGE OF THE LEAF, UZUMAKI NARUTO!!

    sasuke will really be pissed after hearing those words.
    Keep dreaming
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

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    Keep dreaming
    angry sasuke fanboy detected... )) you keep dreaming at sasuke
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    angry sasuke fanboy detected... )) you keep dreaming at sasuke
    I'm not angry bro , and i'm not dreaming because its Sasuke's time to shine
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    This is really great!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    I LOVED IT!!! IT'S AWESOME AND I CAN SEE IT HAPPEN!!!! :scorps: :scorps: :scorps:
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaNagashi View Post
    Amazing work, I enjoyed reading it. You have talent, why won't you go and write manga yourself?
    Hahaha, I would love to. Thanks a lot!

    Quote Originally Posted by AllomnisymbolsparttwoT View Post
    Great job :I
    Thanks for the support :D

    Quote Originally Posted by newvin View Post
    excellent and i want minato to be on the battlefield anyway good prediction nice

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    He will be :P

    Quote Originally Posted by SeBa View Post
    i don't know why .. the end made me laugh but i ****ing loved it.. ))

    awesome prediction.
    It made me laugh too, it was just for fun xD

    Quote Originally Posted by SIXPATHSSENNIN View Post
    Wow a great prediction I really enjoyed reading this + rep for that work my friend you deserve it
    Thanks for the support, I really appreciate it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuuybi View Post
    DON'T UNDERESTIMATE THE NEXT HOKAGE OF THE LEAF, UZUMAKI NARUTO!!

    Quite the inspiration for Naruto, altough I know Tsunade can take this decision... it must be taken by the Konoha council. At least I wanted to express how she was still betting for Naruto. If you can note how Obito reacts in the end, it was because it was the Former Obito's dream too.

    Quote Originally Posted by CeeRock Damigro View Post
    This prediction seems possible
    Yes, it's possible, it has some probabilities.

    Quote Originally Posted by tingun View Post
    I don't like it.
    I'm sorry you didn't like it, but at least say the reason so I can improve :D

    Quote Originally Posted by Ahmed1993 View Post
    I don't wanna be rude , but It's very unlikely to happen in next chapter because Kishi is a slow pace writer and its Sasuke's time to shine ,Naruto has already got his , and there is no way he can beat Obito with the other half of Kurama's chakra alone.

    Now to my personal opinion , sorry but i hate the fact that you put Sasuke as a fodder , and so this prediction is awful to me.
    About first paragraph: You're very objective. Kishimoto indeed is a slow-pacer mangaka, so you're damn right. I'll try to slow my pace next time.

    About the second paragraph: If Sasuke were a fodder he wouldn't survive Naruto's direct hit, so Naruto wouldn't have a way to save Sasuke from Obito's Rikudou-dama, and both of them would be dead in the end of the prediction. I'll make a second part to this prediction, since as it was my first, I started to enjoy the process of making them.

    Quote Originally Posted by Henrik View Post
    Oh my god cliché, not gonna happen in next chapter for sure.
    It may, or maybe it won't.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuuybi View Post
    Tsunade [ yelling ]: DON'T UNDERESTIMATE THE NEXT HOKAGE OF THE LEAF, UZUMAKI NARUTO!!

    sasuke will really be pissed after hearing those words.
    If Tsunade says that, Sasuke will surely will get pissed.

    Quote Originally Posted by Byron123 View Post
    God that was excellent and that's not something I usually say. Mine pales in comparison to yours

    In any case good job. What didn't really make sense was the fact thta Minato disappeared from the battlefield. The fact tat he gave Naruto Kurama's half chakra shouldn't be a reason for his edo to disappear.
    This is my first prediction, and you are one of the guys who inspired me to start making them, so you can feel like you're one of the sources of this one.

    Oh yeah... Minato just got pulverized, I said they were in a pointblank position. Edo Tensei take time to regenerate.

    Quote Originally Posted by Ahmed1993 View Post
    Keep dreaming
    Hahaha

    Quote Originally Posted by SeBa View Post
    angry sasuke fanboy detected... )) you keep dreaming at sasuke
    OMG this thread is starting a fire

    Quote Originally Posted by Ahmed1993 View Post
    I'm not angry bro , and i'm not dreaming because its Sasuke's time to shine
    This is true too

    Quote Originally Posted by lifeofsara View Post
    This is really great!
    Thanks a lot! :D
    Quote Originally Posted by migui87294 View Post
    I LOVED IT!!! IT'S AWESOME AND I CAN SEE IT HAPPEN!!!! :scorps: :scorps: :scorps:
    Thanks, I can see it too
     
         
    Last edited by Mr Hiru; 07-27-2013 at 07:38 PM.

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    I like it wanted to read more
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    Impressive most impressive, you have a gift my friend.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Chapter 641: Birth

    It was awesome. I would be great if this happens. Great Work!
     
         

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