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    The Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki: Naruto Chapter 2- The Traveling Man

    - Chapter 1- The End is Just The Beginning-

    Here is Chapter 2, I Hope you enjoy it!

    Chapter 2- The Traveling Man

    Five years pass, Five years of Peace, but that is about to END….

    Scene starts with a 4 split panel of the 4 of the hidden village’s Sand, Mist, Cloud and Rocks main entrance. It zooms to old man walking into each of the village’s.
    The man has red hair and is dressed in a silver-ish cloak with a wooden staff he walks up to each of the main entrance guards and says.


    Old man- I Must speak with your Kage or Else….

    Scene cuts To Konoha’s main entrance where the same man appears. The man stumbles to the ground and the Konoha guards help the man up

    Old man- with a weathered voice, thank you.. youngins how nice to help a old man to his feet.

    Guard 1- it is no problem sir, but what are you coming into our village for Business or pleasure

    Old man- oh hoho I’m here on strict business sonny but it will be my pure pleasure doing it here in this glorious village, I have heard so many wonderful things from this young man who saved my life about a year ago that I had to see if this place was as good as he described.

    Guard 1- Oh,who is this man’s name

    Old man- Naruto…

    Just then a young teenager with a long Black scarf comes running into the village.

    Old Man-…Uzumaki

    Konohamaru- NARUTO!!?

    Guard 2- Old man are you sure his Name was Naruto Uzumaki?

    Old Man- yep, it’s hard to forget the kid pretty much screamed it at the top of his lungs “MY NAME IS NARUTO UZUMAKI and don’t you forget it!” and I never did.

    Konohamaru- Shikamaru did you hear this guy seen Naruto

    Shikamaru comes up behind Konohamaru and puts his arm around his shoulder.

    Shikamaru- huh!?

    Old man- Shikamaru’s your name?

    Shikamaru- yeah what of it old man.

    Old man- Nothing that man just told me stories of this place, and like I was telling guards 1and2 over here I had to come see if the characters in his story were real and so far he they are, how delightful.

    Konohamaru- how so old man?

    Old man- well Naruto described a character with the name Shikamaru in his stories as the smartest man he ever knew had a plan for every situation.

    Shikamaru- that could be describing any number of people

    Old man- he also described him as being extremely LAZY

    Konohamaru- Nope … Only you Sensei.

    Old Man- oh hohoho now you reminded me he has mentioned you quite a bit in stories as well

    Konohamaru- REALLY!?

    Old Man- he spoke of you as a brother but always ended the conversation with, “he will challenge me for the title Hokage one day.”

    The old man tosses his hand on Konohamaru’s head and messes his hair up and with that Konohamaru and Shikamaru both smile at each other.

    Shikamaru- Gaurds I will take it from here he must go see the Hokage.

    Old man- Perfect… that is why I’m here

    Shikamaru- what…? Why?

    Old man- Naruto would not let me pay him for his services of saving me but he made a request that I could not refuse.. he asked me to give an urgent message to the Hokage.

    Shikamaru- Then we must go now… Konohamaru go and tell Temari that I will be Late tell her code Orange has remerged

    Konohamaru- huh?

    Shikamaru- she will know what that means now GO!

    Konohamaru dashes off. While Shikamaru walks swiftly to the Hokage’s Office
    which the old man can’t keep up with his pace…


    ???- Yo Shikamaru where’s the fire

    Kiba and Shino are walking towards the direction of the gate when they stop Shikamaru

    Shikamaru- can’t talk now guys I have to escort this old man to the Hokage

    Kiba- what old Man?

    Shikamaru- what a drag…. Wait there he is… where are you going old man.

    Old man- you walk way to fast to be Lazy

    Kiba- Snap this old man just called you lazy

    Shikamaru- no Naruto called me that.

    Kiba- he’s back!? Where is he!?

    Shikamaru- no he’s not back, this guy met him about a year ago, and has a message for the Hokage

    Old man- Kiba , I wonder…{sniff.. sniff}

    Kiba- old man why did you just sniff me

    Old man- oh hoho he’s right again he smells like Wet Dog oh hoho.

    Kiba- grrr

    Shino- calm down Kiba it’s not his fault Naruto gave bad descriptions of the two of you. What did he say about me?

    Old man- Shino.. Shino….. Shino? … Sorry not ringing any bells. Who are you?

    Shino goes into shadowing super doom mode

    Kiba says to himself

    Kiba- Not this again.

    Shikamaru- we got to go, so see you guys later.

    Old man- can you slow down the pace this time

    scene cuts to Ichiraku’s

    ???- give me his special again sir

    Sakura- not that again, if you keep eating that… you will…..Hell give me one two sir.

    Mr. Ichiraku- 2 orders of the Great Naruto Specialty coming right up

    Sasuke- haha … see you like it two

    Sakura- maybe it’s the name…

    Sasuke- I know what you mean every time I come here I see his name and I must order it.

    Sakura puts her hand on his shoulder rubbing his back. While Sasuke turns and smiles at her…..at this time a weathered old yell can be heard by all outside Ichiraku’s

    Old Man- I..ITS HERE!! its actually here! we must have a bowl I’ll treat

    Shikamaru- maybe later you need to see the Hokage Now!

    Old Man- Naruto Talked about this place all the time he has made me have cravings for it.
    Sasuke stands up abruptly and walks out Ichiraku’s, sakura puzzled but follows.

    Sasuke- Old man did You say Naruto as in Naruto Uzumaki??

    Sakura- What?… leave this man alone Sasuke he did not say Naruto.

    Shikamaru- Actually he did Sakura, I’m taking him to the Hokage as we speak. And NO Ichraku’s for you yet old man.

    Old man- alright lets go then… wait your Sakura and Sasuke

    Sasuke and Sakura- yes

    Old man- by god bless my lucky stars, you are all right, When Naruto talked about the two of you he was always worried happened to you both. But I can see now you are in a happy place.

    The Old man smiles

    Sasuke- wait when did you see him

    Old man- about a year ago

    Sakura- is he alright?

    Old man- he is perfectly fine, if I say so myself he is at peace.

    Shikamaru- we must be going

    Shikamaru guides the old man with hand on his back nudging him forward, the old man yells back to Sasuke and Sakura

    Old Man- I’m glad I got to meet his Friends especially the two of you!

    The panel shows the face of the old man smiling and in the back ground you see Sasuke hugging Sakura and swirling her around.

    Scene cuts to the Hokage’s Office, it zooms in on the Hokages chair which is facing the window. Shikamaru walks with old man right behind him.

    Shikamaru- Hokage we have urgent news on Naruto.

    The chair swivels around revealing…. Kakashi who is still wearing his signature blue mask but is now wearing the white cloak and a white headband over his left eye with the shadow insignia on it.

    Kakashi- So he has returned

    Shikamaru- Not quite sir.

    Kakashi- then what?

    Shikamaru- this old man.

    Shikamaru step aside revealing the old man

    Shikamaru- he has a message from Naruto for you

    The old man smiles and then squints his eyes

    Old man- Naruto Told me to give the Message to an old Granny in disguise. And you look like a man so Bravo for the disguise because you fooled me.

    Shikamaru and Kakashi smile

    Kakashi- Haha that Naruto. I was appointed as Hokage 3 years ago. Though everyone in the village knows it will be Naruto’s position when he returns.

    The old man smiles

    Old man- whatever happened to the previous Hokage

    Kakashi- she is fine, she is teaching all the medics in the village to become masters of healing…. I’m sorry to be blunt and end this pleasant conversation here but what is the message from Naruto sir?

    Old man- ah yes… the business part of my trip… Naruto wanted me to say

    Suddenly someone barges into the room yelling

    ???- Is it True, is it True?!!

    Shikamaru- Hinata… this is not the right time!!!

    Hinata- I must know if this man has seen Naruto I must know if he’s alright…I must…

    Kakashi halts her with his hand signaling her to Stop!!

    Kakashi- sorry about that please continue old man

    The scene cuts to a split panel of all 5 Kage offices
    in one room is Gaara with Kankuro.
    the Second room is Ei with Killer Bee.
    The third room is Mei with Ao and Chojuro.
    the fourth room is Akatsuchi who is in Tsuchikage cloak now and with Onoki by his side.
    And finally Kakashi with Shikamaru and Hinata
    Every room is waiting on the words of this one old man


    The panel zooms in on the Old man’s Face

    Old man- Naruto told me to say that he has returned so be ready….. so I best be leaving now

    Split screen all 5 rooms

    All 5 rooms- wait!!!! that’s all??!!! nothing else?!!

    Old man- he said you would all know what that means

    All 5 rooms- we do… but… how do we know this is not a trick? How do we know we can trust you?

    Old man – Naruto said you would trust his words even if I were to speak them but maybe he was wrong.

    Hinata- No!!...

    Mei- We…

    Onoki- Trust…

    Ei- His…

    Gaara- Words…

    Kakashi- he has guided us down this peaceful path for 5 years I will trust Him NOW!

    Old man smiles nods his head and goes and shakes the hands of the 5 Kages

    The scene cuts to gaara’s room where the old man shakes his hand


    Old man- Naruto always spoke of you as a true friend

    Gaara smiles

    Scene cuts to Mei’s room where the old man is shaking her hand

    Old man- you’re not as scary as Naruto described

    Mei gets a death glare but directs it towards Ao

    Scene cuts to Akatsuchi shaking the hand of the old man. The old man looks over at Onoki and says


    Old man- Hey your getting pretty old yourself are you sure you ready for this?

    Onoki scoffs at this comment

    Onoki- I can still take you on Old Man

    Scene cuts to Ei and Killer bee, where the old man is done shaking Ei’s hand and walks over to Bee and sticks out his fist.

    Old man- this is how it’s done,right?

    Killer Bee smile and bumps fists with the old man.

    Killer bee- you got it old dude with such great attitude

    Old man- “Ya know Ya know” it

    The old man smiles at Bee

    Scene cuts to Kakashi who is shaking hands with the old man. When they are done the man walks towards the door and stops… and turns towards Hinata..

    Old man- Hinata was it?

    Hinata who is taken aback say’s

    Hinata- yes

    Old man- Naruto had a special message for you

    Hinata- what is it?

    The Old man motions his hands to come closer. Hinata leans and bends down to hear more clearly what he has to say. But when Hinata got close the Old Man kisses her cheek and say’s

    Old man- I love You Hinata

    Hinata looks up shocked at the old man’s face until “Poof” the old man transforms into Naruto

    Shikamaru- what the?!!!

    Kakashi-?!!! Naruto???

    Hinata- Naruto-kun?

    Naruto looks in Hinata’s eyes

    Naruto- yep it’s me…

    Naruto looks over at Kakashi

    Naruto- thanks for still having faith in me Kakashi….I will see you at the Kage Summit Soon….

    The a split panel shows that all 5 rooms are filled with white smoke and when the smoke is gone so is Naruto and his Old Man

    scene goes back to Kakashi Hinata and Shikamaru


    Kakashi- that Knucklehead fooled us all… but you got to love him right Hinata?

    Hinata is blushing and looks like she going to faint.

    Hinata- yea

    Kakashi- Shikamaru and Hinata tell everyone it Begins again…GO NOW!!!!!

    The scene cuts to the Sky over Konoha and a group of birds flying over head.
    the panel is zoomed in on the birds which we now see the birds eye view that we are now traveling over land, woods and mountains. Now it seems they have come to a canopy wooded area where they come to a waterfall. We see the Arial view of the waterfall and what it seems to be dozens of whirlpools surrounding the area. We zoom closer and closer until we see a man sitting still among all the whirlpools. The man is Naruto Uzumaki


    Naruto- It begins again, and this time I’m ready for anything.

    He smiles lays back with arms behind his neck in the water and spins around and around and around until the scene cuts back to the sky with the birds flying towards the Horizon.

    To Be Continued…..
     
         
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    Re: The Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki: Naruto Chapter 2- The Traveling Man

    Yeah, yeah cool. But when will you start posting the NEW chapters?
     
         

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    Re: The Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki: Naruto Chapter 2- The Traveling Man

    well i'm trying to post them in order and i'm not sure what chapter you got to so i'm not sure what you would consider new.
     
         

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    Re: The Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki: Naruto Chapter 2- The Traveling Man

    Quote Originally Posted by Narut0360 View Post
    well i'm trying to post them in order and i'm not sure what chapter you got to so i'm not sure what you would consider new.
    I mean i read what you wrote from the old forum...so...how long till you start posting the REAL new stuff?
     
         

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    Re: The Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki: Naruto Chapter 2- The Traveling Man

    Quote Originally Posted by Guntherockproject View Post
    I mean i read what you wrote from the old forum...so...how long till you start posting the REAL new stuff?
    I hope soon, I'm nearly done with a new chapter, but its annoying i have to edit the chapters and repost them so thats taking more time than i like.
     
         

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    oh man! that's awesome. waiting for the next!
     
         

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