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    Swapping Storms

    So, I teach you Lightning Cage and Storm Ring and you teach me...?
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    ...All of mine of mine ^.^
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    Right So shall we start with mine?
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    That's correct :D
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    Okay then. Well you've seen them before but I'll just post them here again.

    (Ranton: Raitoninguringu) | Storm Release: Lightning ring
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will focus his ranton chakra around him, forming a small ring of lightning. After performing the bird handseal, the ring will rapidly increase in size and stun any living thing it hit for 2 seconds.
    Note: Can only be taught by –Severus Snape-


    (Ranton: Arashi purizun) | Storm Release: Strom Prison
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will shoot a single beam of lighting into the sky, that then will move in an arc shape down on the opponent. When the beam of lightning starts to drop down, it will split in 30 smaller lightning beams of 1 cm, that will surround the opponent in a dome like shape. Any contact with the "bars" of this cage will send the prisoner staggering back from a violent shock and results in a paralysed limb immediately upon contact. The cage has a diameter of 3 meters and a height of 2 meters, and can be made up to 10 meters away from the user.
    Note: the beam has to stay in contact with the user for the prison to hold
    Note: Can be used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-


    First one is rather simple, you focus your ranton chakra in the area around your body to create a lightning ring around you. After preforming a singe handseal, the ring will rapidly increase in size (up to end of short range) and stun anything it comes in contact with friends or foes. Only think is that it is't that big, the diameter would be around an inch, so there is plenty of space above/underneath to dodge.

    Second one is a bit more complicated, you will shoot a beam of lightning into the sky that will then arc down back to the opponent, where it splits into 30 smaller beams. These beam will form a sort of cage around the opponent, and will paralyze any limb that come in contact with the beams. The cage has a diameter of 3 meters, so roughly every 30 centimeters will be a beam (can't remember the exact calculations for circumference of a circle)
    Downside is that you have to stay in contact with the main beam, otherwise the prison will break, so you can't move very much I'd say.

    Any questions about them?
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    Hah it's crazy that I was just about to go to sleep and I chose to check NB and I seem this xD but no questions sir
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    I'd wish you a good night then, I just woke up

    Okay, then
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    I'm back up ^.^
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    That I see, and then you were gone again>.<
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    Well youre gonna learn Storm Release, well all my customs, but we're starting from the lower ranks and working our way up. Let's start off.

    (Ranton: Raikou "Drops")-Storm Release:Lightning Drops
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost:10 (-15 for every turn active)
    Damage Points:20 (+10 every turn active)
    Description:The user will gather raiton and suiton chakra, then release it into the clouds. Then they will manipulate the clouds, causing rain drops to fall. These rain drops are filled with small bolts of concentrated lightning. When hit, the lightning will give the opponent small bolts of electricity, that will stun them.
    Note:A powerful fire enough (B-Rank or above) can neutralize the rain drops
    Note: If there is no clouds, then this can not be performed
    Note: If not stopped in 5 turns, the opponent will be paralyzed
    Note: Can only be used 2 times a battle
    Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

    (Ranton: Sutatikku Tamas)-Storm Release: Static Bullets
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description:The user will gather raiton chakra and suiton chakra into their mouth. Then they will combine them, creating water bullets filled with lightning inside their mouth. Then the user will shoot these bullets at the opponent, on contact the will explode, leaving the opponent wet, and continuously shocked, due to the lightning.
    Note: Effects last for 2 turns
    Note: Usable 3 times a battle
    Note: Can not use any Storm Techniques up to B-Rank the following turn.
    Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

    (Ranton: Wangetsu Kata Ranton Kyodan) Storm Release: Crescent Shaped Storm Projectile
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Long
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will sling their hand forward releasing a crescent shaped projectile of storm at the opponent or object.
    Note: Usable 4x

    Tell me what you think each jutsu does based off it's description and ask questions you may have.
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    (Ranton: Raikou "Drops")-Storm Release:Lightning Drops The small drops of lightning will stun the opponent and eventually paralyze them
    *Does it work above the whole field, or can you focus it on a location, eg when allies are stanging in mid/long thay won't get hit?

    (Ranton: Sutatikku Tamas)-Storm Release: Static Bullets Like the dragon bullet water technique you shoot bullets of water at your opponent, only these are filled with electricity. When it hits it will wet and electrify the opponent continuously.
    *Can one see that there is lightning in the bullet?
    *In how much is the lightning working, does it paralyze or numb the opponent, or only be an annoying distraction?

    (Ranton: Wangetsu Kata Ranton Kyodan) Storm Release: Crescent Shaped Storm Projectile
    You will create a crescent shaped storm projectile that shoots at the opponent
    *Does it only do the physical damage or, like the others, too stuns the opponent?
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    Quote Originally Posted by -Severus Snape- View Post
    (Ranton: Raikou "Drops")-Storm Release:Lightning Drops The small drops of lightning will stun the opponent and eventually paralyze them
    *Does it work above the whole field, or can you focus it on a location, eg when allies are stanging in mid/long thay won't get hit?

    (Ranton: Sutatikku Tamas)-Storm Release: Static Bullets Like the dragon bullet water technique you shoot bullets of water at your opponent, only these are filled with electricity. When it hits it will wet and electrify the opponent continuously.
    *Can one see that there is lightning in the bullet?
    *In how much is the lightning working, does it paralyze or numb the opponent, or only be an annoying distraction?

    (Ranton: Wangetsu Kata Ranton Kyodan) Storm Release: Crescent Shaped Storm Projectile
    You will create a crescent shaped storm projectile that shoots at the opponent
    *Does it only do the physical damage or, like the others, too stuns the opponent?
    Only above the field, but the user is immune to it.

    Yes you can if you have a dojutsu as they are small as bullets and just as quick. It numbs to a certain extent. It mainly is used for temporary paralyzation.

    It stuns and does physical damage.
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    Okay, no more questions about them as of yet
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    A- Rank

    (Ranton: Funnu Kadou )-Storm Release: Raging Vortex
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:50
    Description: The user will perform a row of 3 handseals, then the user will gather raiton and suiton chakra, then release it into the air around themselves. Then the user will manipulate the chakra, causing the water to start spinning very rapidly, like a tornado. The user will also add the raiton chakra, while the vortex is spinning, causing the water to become electrically charged. The user then sends the vortex at the opponent, on contact the vortex will suck the opponent up into the middle of the vortex, then continuously strike them with lightning. Then eventually the vortex throws the opponent across the battle field.
    Note: Usable 3 times a battle
    Note: Must be standing still
    Note: the Opponent will be paralyzed and soaked in water, making them heavier
    Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

    (Ranton: Raikou Mizu Kadou)- Storm Release:Lightning Water Vortex
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user perform a row of 8 handseals, then charge Raiton chakra into one hand and Suiton chakra into the other. Then the user puts their hands together, then thrusts them forward, releasing a vortex of water, along with a streak of lightning, which combines with the vortex, becoming a lightning charged vortex of water.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times a battle
    Note: When the vortex leaves the user, it goes in a straight line, therefore allowing a skilled shinobi to easily dodge it.
    Note: Will numb and paralyze target on contact
    Note: Has to be taught by McAfeezy

    (Ranton: Arashi Butoukai)-Storm Release: Storm Ball
    Type:Attack/Defensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user will combine raiton and suiton chakra, causing a giant thunderous ball of water, filled with lightning to form. The user will then send the ball at the opponent, on contact the balls will subdue the opponent, then electrocute them, causing them to become paralyzed.
    Note:The opponent will become paralyzed and numb, hindering them not capable of attacking.
    Note: Usable 2 times a battle
    Note: The ball is very large, about 20 meters across
    Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy
    Note: No Storm Techniques next turn

    (Ranton: Minichua Nokogiris) Storm Release: Miniature Saws
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will slam both hands on the ground, sending their Storm chakra underneath the ground, to the opponent. The user will manipulate the chakra, changing it into miniature saw, that will travel under the ground, until they're right beneathe the opponent. They will then erupt from the ground under the opponent, cutting them severely.
    Note: The ground around them will crack, creating fissures on the surface between the user and his opponent as the saws move toward him.
    Note: Takes 3 seconds to travel under ground
    Note: Usable 3x

    Same thing you did before, and please ask questions.
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    When do you get your arse unbanned again?

    (Ranton: Funnu Kadou )-Storm Release: Raging Vortex
    By creating a vortex combined of water and lightning around you, you create a pretty good defense while at the same time you are able to attack you opponent with it.
    *When the vortex attecks the opponent, won't you can hit yourself as it moves, or does it expands outwards?

    (Ranton: Raikou Mizu Kadou)- Storm Release:Lightning Water Vortex
    I'd see it as that you will shoot vortex of water from your hand that will become infused with lightning

    (Ranton: Arashi Butoukai)-Storm Release: Storm Ball
    You will create a giant ball of water which is filled with lightning that can be used to drench and stun the opponent. difficult to dodge due to it large size
    *If used in short range won't you get hit yourself, seeing how big it is?

    (Ranton: Minichua Nokogiris) Storm Release: Miniature Saws
    After slamming your hands on the ground, you will focus your storm chakra into the ground creating saws that travel underground to the opponent where they will cut into his feet/legs
    *So, cracks appear on the grounds surface which can show where the saw are, right?
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    Good Good :D

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    (Ranton: Arashi no Jet | Storm Release: Jet of Storms)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will spew out an enormous amount of water from their mouth creating a jet of water, As it flows from their mouth the user will perform two handseal adding lightning chakra in conjunction thus creating a powerful jet of electrified water that is capable of pushing the enemy away with ease including summons and or paralyzing the opponent on contact.
    Note: If hit the opponent will be come paralyzed for 1 turn.
    Note: Must be taught by Drizzy, Must know/have storm release.
    Note: Usable 2x per battle and must wait one turn before use of storm release/or this technique

    (Ranton: Chujiao de shuimu |Storm Release: Tentacles of a Jelly fish)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will perform a set of handseals then stomp their foot on the ground, tentacle shaped ropes will burst up all around the opponent and try to wrap him/her up and shock them until they die.
    Note: The ropes paralyze on conctact.
    Note: Must be taught by Infamous, Must have storm release.
    Note: Usable 2x per battle, must wait 4 turns after each use.


    (Ranton: Bo sai dong rao | Storm Release: Poseidons Rejection)
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will spew out an enormous current of electrified water that sprouts outward making a wall to block/ cancel out incoming jutsu. The stream is very bright.
    Note: Usable 2x per battle.
    Note: Must be taught by Infamous, Must have storm release.


    (Ranton: Ling ren zhenjing de yu |Storm Release: Shocking Rain)
    Type: Defense/ Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Dama*ge: N/A
    Description: After performing the needed handseals the user will use storm release to create electric rain. By casting the users chakra essence into the sky, It will then create clouds, that will rain down extremely bright droplets of rain, which can be dangerous to a foes nervous system.
    Note: Gives storm release techniques a +10 damage increase.
    Note: Usable once per battle
    Note: Lasts 3 full turns, unless the clouds are blown away. Takes one turn for the clouds to form.
    Note: Must be taught by Infamous, Must have storm release.
    Note: The rain slows the opponent down, due to the raindrops electrocuting the nervous system enough to slow down processes but not enough to kill.


    (Ranton: Fengbao shouliudan | Storm Release: Storm Grenade)
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Rank: S
    Damage:80
    Chakra: 40
    Description: The user will perform three handseals then place his hands as if doing a rasengan, the user will then generate water and electricity in between his hands, once there is a ball shaped figure created he will then compress it, the ball will look very small in size but dangerous. On impact it will burst outward creating huge waves with lightning surging through out it.
    Note: Usable 2x per battle, must wait 3 turns before using again.
    Note: Must be taught by Infamous, Must know storm release.

    Give it a go.
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    (Ranton: Arashi no Jet | Storm Release: Jet of Storms)
    After spewing a large amount of water from your mouth, you will perfrom to handseal to add lightning chakra to the stream. Upon contact it will paralyze the opponent

    (Ranton: Chujiao de shuimu |Storm Release: Tentacles of a Jelly fish)
    After perfoming a few handseals you will stomp onto the ground, causing tentecles to raise from the ground around the opponent, stunning and paralysing him.
    *Are they more water or lighting made?

    (Ranton: Bo sai dong rao | Storm Release: Poseidons Rejection)
    I spew out a large amount with lightning infused water that create a bright wall in front of me to defend me from incoming attacks.

    (Ranton: Ling ren zhenjing de yu |Storm Release: Shocking Rain)
    After performing a few handseals I will focus my chakra into the sky, creating large rain clouds that then starts to rain. These raindrops have lightning inside of them, messing with the opponents nervous system upon contact, slowing him down.

    (Ranton: Fengbao shouliudan | Storm Release: Storm Grenade)

    After performing 3 handseal I will hold my hands in front of me, like I am creating a rasengan, but instead I focus my lightnign an water chakra into my hands, creating a small, ball liked shape in my hand, that will expand, and do substational damage, upon contact
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    (Ranton: Mugen Doragon Arashi)-Storm Release: Infinite Dragon Storm
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user sends their raiton and suiton chakras into the sky above. Then the user manipulates the sky, causing clouds to form. A water dragon is formed and is infused with lightning. The user sends this water dragon down upon the opponent. I The dragon can split into several heads, allowing for more succession of attack. Upon contact, the dragon engulfs the opponent, drowning them, while continuously shocking them, before spitting them out.
    Note: Usable 1 time a battle
    Note: No Storm Techniques for the following turn
    Note: Dragon is about as big a Kirin, but not nearly as fast
    Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

    This one also lol xD
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    You've got too many>.<

    (Ranton: Mugen Doragon Arashi)-Storm Release: Infinite Dragon Storm
    Sending my water and lightning chakra into the air, I creating a dragon like shaped clouds that then turns into more waterlike substance infused with lightning and crashes down onto my imaginary target, while it grows several (3) more heads.
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    Done :D hah
     
         

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    Re: Swapping Storms

    Domo Arigato!!:D
     
         

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