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    Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    [EDIT] Sorry for adding Hiruzen.Kinda got carried away.


    THIS IS A SEQUEL TO MY PREVIOUS PREDICTION,IF YOU WANT TO SEE IT GO TO THE LINK BELOW:
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=421763

    *Naruto looks back at Sasuke,who walks towards him and Minato*

    Sasuke: Sorry for keeping you waiting.I'm finished!

    Naruto: Sasuke!Where were you? *Naruto looks at him surprised,causing his father to turn around too*

    Sasuke: I've concentrated my chakra,so that I can release Kirin again!

    *Tobirama lands next to Naruto and Minato*

    Tobirama: My consciousness has started to fade ever since that man stabbed me.I think I won't last very long on the battlefield.The third has devised a plan,just in case I die during battle.

    Hiruzen: Hear me out!When Obito starts rushing toward us,Minato and I will make sure we create an opening for you,Naruto.Once we create the opening,hit him with a Rasengan again and make sure you activate your Sage Mode before landing a strike!You have only one chance,or else it's all over for us.Meanwhile,Sasuke,activate Kirin when the opening is made!He won't be able to erase it,if he's distracted.Got it?

    Minato and Naruto: Okay!

    *Meanwhile,the conversation between Kurama and his other half continues*

    Original Kurama: It seems like they will start fighting soon.Help as much as you can!

    Kurama 2: Hmph!I'm telling myself what to do!Pathetic!

    *Back at the battlefield*

    Tobirama: I will help you out in case something fails,but there shouldn't be such an accident.It's important you hit him!

    Sasuke:I know what I'm doing. *thinking* "Naruto...once this ends...you will be the only one I will want to fight!"

    Hiruzen: Are you all ready? *looks at Naruto with a serious face*

    Naruto: *looks at Hiruzen the same way* Yes!

    Hiruzen: Then let's go.

    Two Kuramas: We are coming!

    Obito: *looks with an emotionless glare at Naruto* This change in him.I can feel it from a mile away.He has changed.However,I don't care what he really is.I will take him down with sensei.

    *Hiruzen looks at Minato who is looking at him and nods*

    *Both of them run towards Obito from his left and right*

    Obito: What are all these simpletons plotting? *creates two bijuu bombs and pierces through his hands to create blades.

    Minato: We're coming,Obito!

    Hiruzen: *looks shocked,but then calms himself* Obito?!?That's him?Whatever,it doesn't matter at this point.

    *Naruto activates Sage Mode,but he suddenly feels a decrease in his chakra,however he ignores it*

    *Sasuke prepares to raise his hand to activate Kirin*

    *Minato almost gets pierced by Obito,as Hiruzen manages to get behind Obito's back*

    Obito: Not this time.

    *As Obito gets distracted by Hiruzen,Minato hits him as hard as he can in the head and then both of them hit Obito at Naruto*

    Naruto: Get ready,Sasuke!

    Sasuke: Just don't get in my way!

    *Naruto makes a Rasengan,as Obito nears him*

    *Suddenly Naruto feels really weak*

    Naruto: I...my vision...is...fading... *falls on the ground*

    Sasuke: *raises his hand and releases Kirin* Shit!He's gonna die!

    *Obito gets hit by Kirin and falls down next to Naruto*

    Minato: *shocked,he throws a kunai next to Naruto* Naruto!!!

    Hiruzen: *rushes towards Naruto* Oh no!He almost died!

    Sasuke: *looks at Naruto with an emotionless face and squints his eyes* *thinking* "If he were to die right on the spot...I..."

    Hinata: *in shock* Naruto-kun!!!

    Sakura: What happened?

    Hinata: Naruto...suddenly collapsed at the ground.

    Sakura: *worried* Naruto...

    Two Kuramas: *shocked*

    Original Kurama: Naruto...c'mon wake up...you didn't give up just like that,did you?

    Kurama 2: *closes his eyes and calms himself*

    *Naruto and Obito both lay on the ground next to eachother*

    To be continued...
     
         
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    Re: Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    Hiruzen won't come back, he was completely erased by Obito / Juubito
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    Quote Originally Posted by Yukino View Post
    Hiruzen won't come back, he was completely erased by Obito / Juubito
    Thanks for the reminder,I forgot.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    Ooooh, this is great and interesting!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    Im sorry to say this...


    But you broke the line between prediction and fanfiction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    Quote Originally Posted by Guntherockproject View Post
    Im sorry to say this...


    But you broke the line between prediction and fanfiction.
    How exactly?Explain in detail.I do needd to know what mistake I made to fix it,right?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    Quote Originally Posted by ObiFan View Post
    How exactly?Explain in detail.I do needd to know what mistake I made to fix it,right?
    Well, a prediction is a one or a two chapters thing. You just went three and plan to go four, taking myself for an example:I orginally made a prediction for chapter 627 and went on and on and on and on... curently im in chapter 662, i didnt let go and turned it into a fanfiction. Its not a bad thing. It all depends wether you plan to proceed and go on with your predictions after the real 643 comes out.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    Quote Originally Posted by Guntherockproject View Post
    Well, a prediction is a one or a two chapters thing. You just went three and plan to go four, taking myself for an example:I orginally made a prediction for chapter 627 and went on and on and on and on... curently im in chapter 662, i didnt let go and turned it into a fanfiction. Its not a bad thing. It all depends wether you plan to proceed and go on with your predictions after the real 643 comes out.
    But not a lot of people go to the FanFic section.And I just want people to see that I can actually write some pretty decent stories.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    Quote Originally Posted by ObiFan View Post
    But not a lot of people go to the FanFic section.And I just want people to see that I can actually write some pretty decent stories.
    But people will start to question your story here once time comes, and if you write a decent story people WILL come to the Fanfiction section...my best chapter...the chapter that tells of the fight between Naruto and Sasuke has 3124 views. Still, its not in my place toforce yo to it, you can go on. Just dont let your story get out of hand and stop writing it when time comes.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Shippuden Chapter 645:"Reuniting Part 2"

    that was interesting
     
         

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