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    Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    if you didn't read my 643 prediction here is the link

    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...1#post12976451

    [ ]- Flashback

    ( )- thoughts

    The opening scene shows Kirin is making its appearance in the sky with a powerful Roar .

    Sasuke : Die with the Roar of Thunder .

    Obito : Shit !!!


    In a blink of an eye , kirin attacks obito and causes a devastating explosion .


    The alliance are safe but some of them were caught in the shockwave

    Naruto : { cough } { cough } ( if it weren't for Sasukes Susanoo i would have been caught in that blast )

    Naruto : Dad !!!

    Sasuke : Relax Naruto , they are edo's . They will come back again .

    The hokages are seen reforming beside them

    Minato : What a powerful attack .

    Tobirama : Pheew , you should have warned us Brat !

    Hiruzen : ( what an attack )

    Sasuke : p

    scene changes to madara

    Madara : I see....the uchiha boy has tamed lightning . Interesting....

    the gobi monster puches the ps in it's face

    Hashirama : don't loose your focus Madara !

    Hashirama : ( Wow , as expected from you Sasuke) . ( smiles )


    Obito is seen laying down and unconscious .

    Yin Kyuubi : do it now Minato , nows your chance

    Minato : ( yosh )

    Minato : Naruto raise your hands above

    Naruto : Ok , but why .... gaaah

    minato places his hand on naruto's belly seal and transfers the yin kurama to him

    Naruto : Dad what are you doing ? your cloak !!

    Minato's cloak starts to disappear

    Minato : Naruto stay still , the seal is not done yet .

    Obito : too bad ! ( with a RAPE face )

    Hiruzen : i didnt even sense him

    Sasuke : So fast { turns his head back }

    Obito : shinra tensei

    Obito blasts all of them

    Naruto crashes to a rock , his seal is still incomplete

    obito teleport's to where Naruto is

    Naruto : my body ... arrgh { coughs out blood }

    Obito : Well , it seems that i've finally caught you Naruto , dont worry i will let you be a hokage in my world . Farewell Naruto ....

    Obito forms a spear with the biju bombs

    Sasuke : Shit!!! , i cant make in time ....

    everyone is shown with a shocked face

    Minato is pierced right on his chest

    Naruto : Dad !!!

    Despite being pierced , Minato reaches to Naruto's belly and continues the seal

    Naruto : Why did you ? { tear sheds from his eyes }

    The seal is reforming again with a different look.

    Minato : Naruto this is a different seal... { coughs up blood } The uzumaki's most precious seal ... Your mother taught me that ..eh { cough's blood } ..

    scene changes to Hiruzen

    Hiruzen : Just like before ... Minato ... { with a sorrowful voice }

    Minato : Obito you have weakened , seem like that Kirin took a toll out of you ..

    Obito : Sensei , you still protect him , Why ?..... Why did you sacrifice your self for him

    Minato : because ,..eh.. { cough's blood } He's my son !!! { sheds a tear }

    Obito : Your weak sensei , you don't deserve the title Hokage

    Minato : Naruto , it was nice fighting with you . Side by side...

    Minato : Seal !!!

    only the voice of kurama is heard

    Kurama : At last , i am whole again , Naruto release them all !!!

    Naruto : Time to end this war

    A huge shock wave occurs



    ^
    background music

    the scene is covered with smoke

    naruto's bm cloak changed

    Naruto : thank you Dad , for everything

    Obito : Ooh my God ...

    all of them are in shock

    everyone's expression is shown by panels

    Naruto is seen with the Sage of Six Path's Staff

    Madara : No ! it can't be

    the scene zooms into Naruto's face

    Hashirama : ...........

    Sakura : Hinata what happened to Naruto

    Hinata : { speechless }

    Sakura : Hinata !!

    Hinata : Naruto , ... ummm ...

    Sakura : hurry up Hinata , what is it

    Hinata : Naruto has the rinnegun



    I know some of it is not going to happen in the next chapter but i want to hear your thought's
     
         
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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    lil naruto ft. minato
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Quote Originally Posted by the big boss View Post
    lil naruto ft. minato
    What does that mean
     
         

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    budding. dat photosynthesis.
    dat Plant reproductive
    morphology. dat flora.
     

    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Quote Originally Posted by Clashthasa View Post
    What does that mean
    nothing.

    Like Father, Like Son

    Stuntin' Like his Daddy

     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Seems quite possible Minato would sacrifice himself the same way to give Naruto the other half.

    Rinnegan seems a bit far fetched but I certainly wouldn't mind seeing it happen :D

    Nice read.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Nice but the rinnegan part was awkward
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Good, very good! Please, keep going
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    I sensed a slight sasuke wank...but everythjng else was alright.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    You overpowered Naruto too much. Still a pretty nice prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Quote Originally Posted by crono0929 View Post
    I sensed a slight sasuke wank...but everythjng else was alright.
    Hahaha
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Quote Originally Posted by Child Of The Great Empire View Post
    You overpowered Naruto too much. Still a pretty nice prediction.
    It's not overpowered bro , Naruto unlocked the sage of six path mode
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Quote Originally Posted by griems View Post
    Seems quite possible Minato would sacrifice himself the same way to give Naruto the other half.

    Rinnegan seems a bit far fetched but I certainly wouldn't mind seeing it happen :D

    Nice read.

    Thanks bro
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Quote Originally Posted by Clashthasa View Post
    It's not overpowered bro , Naruto unlocked the sage of six path mode
    These contradict each other :P!!!!!!


    OT: Really good read. I am expecting Minato to push Naruto aside or something like that once he completes the transfer. The only correction would be that Minato will not spit blood because he's an Edo Tensei. He will also likely not feel pain, and as such wouldn't really stutter.

    Rinnegan is a bit much, but hey why not... the Alliance could use one :scorps:


    Final part with Hinata... her being speechless would make sense, but maybe instead of the Rinnegan, Hinata (who seemingly wouldn't know quite as much on it) would say this.

    Hinata: He has the eye's of that man! (a flashback image behind her of maybe Pain looking down on her before he stabs her).
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Nice read. Though I would want something else instead of the rinnegan for naruto.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Quote Originally Posted by KGB Kakuzu View Post
    These contradict each other :P!!!!!!


    OT: Really good read. I am expecting Minato to push Naruto aside or something like that once he completes the transfer. The only correction would be that Minato will not spit blood because he's an Edo Tensei. He will also likely not feel pain, and as such wouldn't really stutter.

    Rinnegan is a bit much, but hey why not... the Alliance could use one :scorps:


    Final part with Hinata... her being speechless would make sense, but maybe instead of the Rinnegan, Hinata (who seemingly wouldn't know quite as much on it) would say this.

    Hinata: He has the eye's of that man! (a flashback image behind her of maybe Pain looking down on her before he stabs her).
    Thanks for pointing those out

    Next time ill do my best
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    I'm expecting naruto with rinnegan + sage mode eyes combined together.. Hahaha.. But that's pretty good.. :d nice read ma bro..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    I liked it! Good work!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

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    I liked it! Good work!
    Thank You
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Your good - - i like the way u build up anticipation - - good work kid ! again !
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

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    Your good - - i like the way u build up anticipation - - good work kid ! again !
     
         
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    Re: Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

    Good, very good! Please, keep going (on a 645 one) :P :P :P :P :P
     
         

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