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    Seiji Namikaze, the white flash: Chapter 1

    I know I don't usually do this stuff, but here, enjoy.

    "Minato wake up! It's the last day of the academy!"

    A young Minato Namikaze awoke from bed, groggy as ever.

    "You're such a lazy kid." Seiji Namikaze, his older brother, jeered at him. "How are you almost chuunin?" he added, as they left the house.

    "I don't know either..." Minato said softly. Seiji didn't take note of the small complaint, he just continued to walk in front of his brother. Many villagers passed by, they waved and talked to Seiji like he was some celebrity, this made Minato feel worse. Why did his brother get to be the star every day?

    Minato was jealous. Seiji was always one step ahead of him, in all aspects. No other ninja was as fast as him though, as Seiji could use a shunshin faster than light. Minato would have to achieve a faster speed just to compete with him.

    They arrived at the exam building to pick up Minato's form to sign. Thats when shit went down. The inspector, a tall man with a mask, rose and said loudly "Would the fastest shinobi alive please step forward?"

    "That's me!" A burly black twelve year old from the Cloud village yelled. "Ay! The Third Raikage's son, is faster than all you losers!"

    "Not you, idiot." Spat the tall man "Seiji Namikaze, the White Flash."

    Seiji stepped forward, "Stay back Minato, I can handle this."

    It all happened in a flash, Seiji disappeared like lightning, but still had a noticeable trail. He grabbed the man's throat and twisted his neck faster than sound. It was over, in a white flash.

    But it didn't end like that, Seiji stepped backwards slowly. He stumbled some more and dropped to the ground. A single kunai was stuck in his heart.

    "That was not just speed, but a space time illusion." Said the man.

    Murder. In cold blood. In public.

    Minato screamed. He opened his eyes and lay awake in bed.

    It wasn't a dream, he had attacked the man, but was saved by Ay, the lightning kid.

    One day, Minato would get back at him, revenge was the only answer. He looked up at the painting on his wall. He would become faster, the fastest that ever lived. Just like the Flying Thunder God.


     
         
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    Re: Seiji Namikaze: Chapter 1

    wow that was a great story man keep making these
     
         

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    Re: Seiji Namikaze, the white flash: Chapter 1

    Not bad bro
     
         

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    Re: Seiji Namikaze: Chapter 1

    Quote Originally Posted by OWanime View Post
    wow that was a great story man keep making these
    Wow, thanks! I'll make a second chapter soon.

    Quote Originally Posted by sanninuto View Post
    Not bad bro
    Thanks, its my first one. I deleted some stuff to make it shorter, so it might seem scrunched up.
     
         

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    Re: Seiji Namikaze: Chapter 1

    I think its awesome!!! Minato doesn't seem like the revenge type, but whatever. I don't know anything more about him than you do. And its a cool story.
     
         

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    Re: Seiji Namikaze: Chapter 1

    I like it!
     
         

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