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    Naruto 645 predictions

    Chapter 645: The transformation is complete


    Page 1

    Minato:Thank you, Naruto!
    Minato gets finally serious

    The two kurama get absorbed in a spiral and fuse.
    SFX: POWERING UP
    Chakra glows around naruto and minato and starts to form kurama's fox shape.Bones are created in the chakra alongside with flesh. The true and final form of the kyuubi towers the whole battlefield.

    Scene changes to Obito

    Obito: A complete bijuu transformation. Quite unexpected but oh well....It makes no difference against the jinchuriki of the Juubi, the progenitor of the tailed beasts. It's pointless to continue on using this barrier.
    SFX:TAP
    Obito casts a hand seal
    Obito:Disperse!

    Page 2
    The whole barrier vanishes in thin air.
    Scene changes to the alliance


    Shikamaru: It looks like he will not be needing it anymore. Whatever, we have to prepare for our next step. Fire and wind shinobis, send a combined fire-wind attack. Earth and water shinobis, don't attack yet. Stay on the defensive!
    Alliance proceeds to attack
    Alliance fire users :Fire style-flame stream
    SFX:Burning and melting rock
    Alliance wind users: Wind style-Wind Gust
    SFX:Giant storm bursting forth

    Page 3:

    Obito is caught amidst the series of attacks.
    Obito: Hmmph.
    Complete kurama compresses bijuu dama and fires in the form of a laser which explodes on impact
    SFX: BOOOOOOOOOOM
    Naruto in Kurama: That should be enough.

    Page 4
    Obito is protected by his black chakra coating.
    Obito:This is getting boring.
    Obito remembers rin and casts hand seal
    SFX:TAP
    Obito: Katon-chou bakufu ranbu
    SFX: Fire bursting forward
    The fire increases in range with distance

    Page 5
    Alliance water and earth users: Earth and Water Combination: Great Barrier
    A giant earth barrier lifts from the ground and is protected at the front with a wall of water. The fire comes in contact with water.
    SFX: Water evaporating followed by the desintegration of the earth barrier

    Page 6:
    Obito:(This is the end for them)
    The fire keeps on blowing and the alliance is caught in the wild flames. Everything in the surroundings is incinerated.
    SFX: Burning
    After the smoke has faded, the shinobi alliance is shown safe and alive.
    Obito: This dense chakra protected them?

    Page 7:
    Shinobi alliance: We are still alive only because of this chakra and its power.
    Sasuke makes a flashback of the the academy days.
    Naruto: I will become hokage one day.
    Everyone laughs at him
    He makes another flashback of the old days of Team 7
    Scene returns to the present

    Sasuke smiling: Who would have thought ?

    Page 8
    Scene changes to madara and hashirama
    Madara: This looks definitely interesting. It's a shame that the shinobi alliance keeps on fighting absolute despair.
    Madara's perfect susanoo slices at hashirama.
    Hashirama performs a wood golem and holds the sword. Madara's perfect susanoo pulls out a second pair of hands and a new sword. It slices at hashirama's golem and wood dragon.

    Page 9
    Hashirama is getting serious
    Hashirama: Madara, I'm afraid I will have to end it here.
    Hashirama clasps his hands and concentrate.
    Madara:That's the spirit, Hashirama!
    Madara turns at Obito's location and smiles
    Madara:(Soooon......)

    Page 10
    Obito: Let's try something new for once.

    Four branches emerge form the holes of the trees and dig into the ground like roots.

    Page 11

    Panel is wasted showing the amazement of the alliance of shinobi

    Page 12
    Tree glows bright and emanates a strange noise.
    SFX:Throbbing and Pulsating
    Sasuke: What's that?
    Sasuke enters susanoo mode and prepares yasaka magatama.
    Meanwhile Kurama charges bijuu dama to destroy the tree once and for all.

    END OF CHAPTER

    Don't forget to reward. It takes time for this work.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    good job bro!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Quote Originally Posted by Hasisas View Post
    good job bro!
    Thanks. What are your thoughts? Is it average?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Nice one !..

    Edit: You should have added Obito becoming angry and surprised about escape of alliance from barrier.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    you posted this twice...

    I admit its awesome...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Great job.
    Panel is wasted showing the amazement of the alliance of shinobi
    'd at this
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Quote Originally Posted by seventhboa View Post
    Great job.
    Panel is wasted showing the amazement of the alliance of shinobi
    'd at this
    Thanks. You know, I don't write for prediction. It's more like a fanfiction- like the pulsating tree
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    My opinion: it wouldn't suit naruto to go full Bijuu mode. Naruto is fine the way he is. He should just look a little more bad ass when he receives the other half of kurama
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Nice, I liked it, keep going!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    I like how you un/intentially added the stupidity of the alliance to attack Obito with ninjutsu. Wasting the chakra of Kurama
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Nice prediction .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Great job kiddo
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    nicely done. really enjoyed reading
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    This is a very good prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Nice job man
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Quote Originally Posted by uchihamad View Post
    Nice one !..

    Edit: You should have added Obito becoming angry and surprised about escape of alliance from barrier.
    Quote Originally Posted by Gdamon View Post
    you posted this twice...

    I admit its awesome...
    Quote Originally Posted by lifeofsara View Post
    Nice, I liked it, keep going!
    Quote Originally Posted by awitness View Post
    I like how you un/intentially added the stupidity of the alliance to attack Obito with ninjutsu. Wasting the chakra of Kurama
    Quote Originally Posted by kishiuzumaki View Post
    Nice prediction .
    Quote Originally Posted by manufran02 View Post
    Great job kiddo
    Quote Originally Posted by Kuuybi View Post
    nicely done. really enjoyed reading
    Quote Originally Posted by Naruto Uzumaki Sage View Post
    This is a very good prediction.
    Quote Originally Posted by Supermanr View Post
    Nice job man
    I appreciate your support. I will keep making predictions in the future
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    A complete transformation seems unlikely. Good prediction tho
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Quote Originally Posted by ballerjordan View Post
    A complete transformation seems unlikely. Good prediction tho
    It would have been better if I mentioned a new cloak, right?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    The whole alliance should be put on the defensive to block bijuu damas, While Naruto and Sasuke, and the Hokages battle Madara and Obito. Minato should give Naruto a huge sum of his Kurama Chakra, and join in on the defensive side.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Quote Originally Posted by Pure Logic View Post
    The whole alliance should be put on the defensive to block bijuu damas, While Naruto and Sasuke, and the Hokages battle Madara and Obito. Minato should give Naruto a huge sum of his Kurama Chakra, and join in on the defensive side.
    That will happen soon IMO. Naruto is going to get the other half
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    good job
    try harder next time
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Good one! I like the wasted panel!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Quote Originally Posted by phantomlord22 View Post
    good job
    try harder next time
    Quote Originally Posted by Ari Matako View Post
    Good one! I like the wasted panel!!
    I will try harder next time. Thanks for reading!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    Quote Originally Posted by phantomlord22 View Post
    good job
    try harder next time
    Quote Originally Posted by Ari Matako View Post
    Good one! I like the wasted panel!!
    I will try harder next time. Thanks for reading!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 645 predictions

    It was good not great but as good as what we get from jump so keep it up
     
         

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