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    Road to ninja Hinata!



    I wanted to draw Hinata. And tried to make her look feminine, since according to 80 per cent of the base my females look too masculine.
    I MAY color this later, if this lineart even is good enough for that.
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    She's not the Hinata that Naruto deserves... But the Hinata that Naruto needs right now.
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    She looks to kind in this drawing to be RTN Hinata.
    Skillz though.
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    Looks nicer!!!!

    btw how long did it take you to draw it?
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!


    Her face is drawn terribly; far too masculine.
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    her face's different from Hinata ...............
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    Wow this is great!

    the only CC I'd give would be to soften her face (feels a little masculine for some reason), and only thing after that is make her thighs a little smaller.


    Still... I'm not in a position to critique...GREAT WORK!
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    I think it looks great! :3
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    Great job. You should color it. You've got a nice style.
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    Quote Originally Posted by kushina95 View Post
    her face's different from Hinata ...............
    That's because this is drawn with MY style. Not Kishimoto's.

    Quote Originally Posted by Sabaki View Post

    Her face is drawn terribly; far too masculine.
    Give me some tips how to make faces more feminine. D:

    Quote Originally Posted by Blondephile View Post
    Looks nicer!!!!

    btw how long did it take you to draw it?
    I'm glad. About an hour since I wanted to draw the stupid trees. D:
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    You should go ahead and color it
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    Quote Originally Posted by TheBlueBlur View Post
    She's not the Hinata that Naruto deserves... But the Hinata that Naruto needs right now.
    U Batman?
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    Quote Originally Posted by Bantos View Post


    Give me some tips how to make faces more feminine. D:

    I'm no expert, but her face feels Wide. The on the right side of her face (Hinata's right) where the cheek curves to form the chin... it's too curved. It is more masculine as it makes more defined Cheek Bones.

    Maybe make that curve a little softer (closer to how the other side was made).

    I think because of that, it also makes her lips appear more like they are just big lips as opposed to the lip stick styled ones.

    I'd say that's it for me. The byakugan being active is never the most attractive thing, but then again that's angry RTN Hinata.
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    Quote Originally Posted by Bantos View Post
    That's because this is drawn with MY style. Not Kishimoto's.



    Give me some tips how to make faces more feminine. D:



    I'm glad. About an hour since I wanted to draw the stupid trees. D:
    I'll try: it is probably because the nose looks kind of rough. That and you soften the chin lines...perhaps. I tried
    Anyway, her right arm looks awkward. Are you sure about the forearm's length?
    ... Oh..Nice work btw It's good you used your own style!
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    Thanks for the tips!
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    maybe make the face more curvy. Women's heads are more round. I say curve her jaw line going up more. I think it's the shape of the face that's making it seem "manly"
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    This looks awesome
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    Quote Originally Posted by TheBlueBlur View Post
    She's not the Hinata that Naruto deserves... But the Hinata that Naruto needs right now.
    She better fits the role of main female love interest in their culture though. I stayed in Japan for a while and it isn't unusual to read manga or watch stuff where the woman acts like a Hinata in RTN where we as westerners would view it as abusive. Over there it's more for a comedy reason.

    Since I stayed over there for a while I actually prefer this Hinata to the pushover that she usually is in the manga.
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

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    This looks awesome
    Thanks a lot!
     
         

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    Re: Road to ninja Hinata!

    The body looks awesome
    I think the face could use some adjustments
     
         

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