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    a gods realization

    well I'm back into loving poetry again so here Goes

    I call this one "A god's realization"


    Never was there an eternal rendering
    that we deemed unconquerable
    Seeking soley her appreciation
    absorbed in a web of Intimacy
    I neglected my souRce

    She was The life bearing atmosphere
    to my arid and Rigged Void
    Her moans were the winds
    that resonated with fuzzy strokes from harps
    these were orchestras of Angels
    syncopated with the pulse of my heart

    I watched silhouettes begin to dissipate
    As Halos dissolved into A star
    a Fever sat upon my forehead
    as I saw what the climax had spawned A far

    The serpents chattered
    attacHing personal perspectives to the Miracle
    I retracted within my spiral
    and witnessed the blessed ratio
    of which for the first time
    I lay in stillness to observe

    To my eyes
    The foam's white reflection ran but remained stationary
    Soothing was the sound of this water
    rushing across soil and rinsed earth

    I sat under The shade of myself
    Observing my shadow
    I was the leaves, I was the chirps
    as well as the stridulations

    I was everything
    from the blades of grass to each grain of sand
    and particles which make a man
    I saw only reflections which Inlay What I am


    This Truth poured in from source
    Filling drains once lusting for recognition
    Blinded, I was Chasing my perfect lover
    Never seeing in this conception that I had created perfect love



    This pretty much inspired me to write
     
         
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    Re: a gods realization

    nice poetry btw i never saw u on nb sorry
     
         

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    Re: a gods realization

    Pretty impressive
     
         

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    Re: a gods realization

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha Brothers View Post
    nice poetry btw i never saw u on nb sorry
    Thank you
    and yeaH i'm not really as active these days.



    Quote Originally Posted by Mypower View Post
    Pretty impressive

    thanks my friend, the feed back is much appreciated!
     
         

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