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    NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

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    MANGA 645: A NEW RESOLVE AT 12

    [
    NARUTO :
    You're as bad as mom! I already know all of it! Everything that you guys ever wanted to tell me!!
    (
    Minato is relieved with his son's words )
    MINATO :
    (
    relieved ) She then already met you. ( sighs )
    NARUTO : Lets beat the hell out of that man.
    MINATO : Naruto...
    NARUTO : Huh?
    MINATO : As I said, I would have liked to talk to you a little longer... but I've nothing left to say anymore.
    NARUTO : What are you talking about Dad?
    MINATO : I've no more regrets.

    ( pulls his fist back )
    NARUTO :
    Huh?
    ( Minato starts fading away from Naruto's mind )
    NARUTO :
    What's happening?
    D-KURAMA : He can't do anything. The moment my chakra came in contact with my other half, we were destined to become one once again.
    ( FLASHBACK )
    [
    D-KURAMA :
    ...He's not a baby anymore. Tomorrow he will... Grrr..
    MINATO : Tomorrow?
    D-KURAMA : I'm not sure yet... But your kid resembles me the old man. The Sage of the six Paths.
    ( grins ) My other half must have fallen for that. It is just the matter of time for him to contact me.
    MINATO : ?!!
    ]
    MINATO :
    ( fading ) Happy Birthday... ( smile ) Naruto.
    KURAMA : So we'll at full power now.

    ( D-Kurama merges with Kurama as Minato fades away )
    NARUTO :
    Thank You.
    ]
    (
    Naruto undergoes a transformation )
    (
    The black region above the circle on his stomach starts shrinking )
    (
    The black part is gathered around the seal on his stomach )
    (
    The comma-like white signs around his neck turns black )
    (
    The thick lines along his thighs retracts back to 3/4th of the previous )
    (
    The number of circles on Naruto's stomach doubles and is connected with the comma-like figures with a black strip )
    (
    Minato turns back to normal )
    SASUKE/TOBIRAMA : ?!!
    NARUTO : I'm happy..
    MINATO : ?!!
    NARUTO : (
    a big smile on his face ) ...being the proud son of you guys.
    MINATO : (
    shocked ) ?!!
    SASUKE : ...
    (
    remembers )
    [
    (
    At the Valley of End )
    (
    Naruto holding Sasuke's collar )
    SASUKE : (
    shouts ) You had nothing in the first place!! What the hell do you understand about me!!! Huh?!!
    ]
    MINATO : (
    lowers head ) No Naruto.
    (
    remembers )
    [
    D-KURAMA :
    Look at how the world has become now... Your son is trying to change it...
    ]
    MINATO : Its quite the opposite. (
    a peaceful smile on his face ) Thank You for being our son. ( tears flows down from his right eye )
    TOBIRAMA : You're not supposed to cry like this, Fourth.
    SASUKE : ....
    (
    remembers )
    [
    (
    Sasuke standing at the dock of the river )
    (
    Steam is rising from the surface of the river )
    (
    His father walking away )
    SASUKE :
    (
    sad face ) ....
    FUGAKU : Now..
    SASUKE : Hmm?
    FUGAKU : ... That's my boy!
    SASUKE : ?!!

    ( Wind brushes through )
    ]
    (
    Wind brushes through the clouds of dust heavily )
    SFX : ZMMMMM!!!
    SHINOBIS : (
    cloaked ) ( turns to the sound ) What's happening?!
    (
    The sides of the barrier shakes )
    (
    The upper edges starts lowering with a flame effect )
    SFX : PHHT!!!
    (
    The barrier disperses )
    (
    Everyone watches in awe )
    (
    Obito is floating in the air )
    OBITO : (
    still surrounded by black fluid ) You managed to save everyone with the Kyuubi's chakra.
    NARUTO : (
    smirks ) Hmm.
    OBITO : Quite a nuisance you've become Naruto. You're wasting my time. (
    starts coming down on the land ) I will deal with you personally after ( crashes on the land with his staff ) ... everyone.
    (
    The rubble is spaced out as Obito lands )
    SHINOBIS : ?!!
    NARUTO : Shadow Clone Jutsu!!
    (
    One clone is created )
    (
    Obito dashes forward while leaving his staff standing )
    (
    SLOW MOTION )
    (
    Rocks are lifted and surrounded to Obito due to the crash )
    (
    The black fluid changes its shape )
    (
    The fluid enters Obito's hand from back and starts to emerge out to front )
    (
    Obito points his hands at front cross )
    (
    Sweat rolls down a shinobi's head )
    (
    NORMAL )
    SFX : DRIP!
    (
    The drop falls on the ground )
    SFX : SLASH!!!
    (
    Obito slashes the surrounding rocks with the black fluid )
    (
    Obito dashes forward )
    (
    The crowd is totally shaken with the approaching Obito )
    (
    Scene shows view of the battlefield from above as Obito reduces the gap )
    (
    Obito creates a havoc in the crowd )
    (
    Shinobis thrown like twigs )
    SFX : SHOUTING!!! SCREAMING!!
    (
    Shinobis are screaming and shouting as they are slaughtered by Obito )
    SFX : RETRACT!! RETRACT!! SHOOT!! SHOOT!!
    (
    Obito retracts the black fluid, shapes it into sphere and shoots in the crowd )
    SHINOBIS : Aaaaaaaa!!!! Wrahhhhhhhh!!!
    SFX : BOOOOM!!! BOOOOM!!
    (
    Two huge blasts in the crowd )
    NARUTO : ?!!
    (
    His eye pupil starts shaking )
    (
    Obito smirks at Naruto's expression )
    MINATO : We must stop him.
    TOBIRAMA : Wait for a while Fourth.
    MINATO : ....
    (
    Minato stares at Tobirama while Tobirama observing Naruto )
    (
    Naruto is looking down on the left )
    SASUKE : I'll deal with him.
    (
    Dashes forward )
    NARUTO : Sasuke!!
    SASUKE : (
    stops and turns ) ?!!
    NARUTO : Wait for a while. Sakura is there to heal the others.
    OBITO : What happened Naruto? Your world is falling apart. Such weak resolve.
    (
    about to pierce the black fluid spear in one of the shinobi in his way )
    SHINOBI : (
    looking at Obito face to face ) ?!!
    SFX : MOVE!!!
    (
    The shinobi moves at the last moment from getting pierced )
    SHINOBI : ?!!!
    OBITO : ?!!
    SHINOBIS : ?!! He dodged the attack?
    (
    Obito approaches further to other shinobis to stab them )
    SFX : MOVE!! MOVE!!! JUMP!! DODGE!!
    (
    Shinobis are shown moving out of Obito's way while some dodging the attack from close before getting pierced while some jumps out from his way )
    OBITO : [
    What is happening? ] ....
    (
    Manipulates the black fluid to stab everyone around him at once )
    SFX : MOVE!!
    (
    Shinobis dodge the attacks by kneeling, moving aside and moving back )
    OBITO : ?!!
    SHNOBIS : ?!!
    SASUKE : ?!!
    JUUGO : ....
    MINATO : ?!!
    TOBIRAMA : .... [
    This kid... ] ( smiles ) [ ...never stops surprising me. ]
    [
    (
    A huge figure in the background )
    KURAMA :
    You nicely combined the use of my chakra and your sage chakra
    NARUTO :
    ( scratches head ) Hehehe... I couldn't combined both together.
    ]
    (
    Tobirama notices Naruto's clone )
    (
    The clone is in Sage mode sitting next to BM Naruto standing on his right side )
    SASUKE : What are you doing Naruto?
    NARUTO : .....
    MINATO : Naruto?
    TOBIRAMA : Let him concentrate.
    SASUKE/MINATO : ....
    TOBIRAMA : He's using his sage chakra to sense the attacks and protect the Shinobis by controlling them with his own chakra. This is one hell of a kid to use his clone's chakra without dispersing his clone. He mastered the Shadow Clone Jutsu.
    (
    Obito is shown standing in the middle of crowd )
    SHIKAMARU : [
    Naruto is still protecting us...Damn it. ]
    OBITO : Naruto!!! (
    flies back away from the Alliance ) How long are you going to protect this hopeless world?
    NARUTO : ......
    OBITO : (
    lands ) I'm going to end this world.
    NARUTO : A nobody like you has no right to decide about the future of this world. No matter how many times you spout those words... We will stand again!!! Because...
    SHINOBIS : ?!!
    OBITO : .....
    NARUTO : This world belongs to us!!!!
    SHINOBIS : Yeah!!!!!!!!!
    ( LAST PANEL )
    (
    Shinobis are shouting back with Naruto at Obito )
    (
    Obito is shown with a shocked look )

    ( The new generation refuses to step back )
    ( What will be Obito's next step? )
     
         
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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    nice prediction bro
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Nice prediction....
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    This was really great!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Really good take of your spell check as it changed some of your words but really good looking forward to the next one
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    that was really nice
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Damn man..that was really awesome! Unique prediction too
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    awesome pred. as ever . .
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by jigar7007 View Post
    nice prediction bro
    Quote Originally Posted by Sachchidanand View Post
    Nice prediction....
    Quote Originally Posted by lifeofsara View Post
    This was really great!
    Quote Originally Posted by 2nd hokage View Post
    Really good take of your spell check as it changed some of your words but really good looking forward to the next one
    Quote Originally Posted by Kuuybi View Post
    that was really nice
    Quote Originally Posted by FuzzyPanda View Post
    Damn man..that was really awesome! Unique prediction too
    Quote Originally Posted by kunde View Post
    awesome pred. as ever . .
    Thank You guys
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Really Nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    "Very good"... I usually say that... however.... this is suburb! Please.... make a 646! It would be very cool if this really were to happen and to see/imagin what would happen next... please make the next one
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Excellent!!! 5/5...One of the best prediction you've ever made...Good Job!!!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    very nice man. i loved it
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    You know how difficult taste I have, right? Never in my life have I read such an excellent prediction, it was pure...perfection. The dialogues the flashbacks even made me emotional and Naruto's plan was brilliant. Seriously this was by far the best prediction, I have ever seen, I truly mean it.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    great predication
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    now that was a predection looked like original manga chapter .honestly a nice one out of many 645 predections .it deserves a +ve rep bro
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Trafalgar Law View Post
    Really Nice prediction
    Quote Originally Posted by soparaamigoseeu View Post
    "Very good"... I usually say that... however.... this is suburb! Please.... make a 646! It would be very cool if this really were to happen and to see/imagin what would happen next... please make the next one
    Quote Originally Posted by nickman013 View Post
    Excellent!!! 5/5...One of the best prediction you've ever made...Good Job!!!
    Quote Originally Posted by abhiken View Post
    very nice man. i loved it
    Quote Originally Posted by Byron123 View Post
    You know how difficult taste I have, right? Never in my life have I read such an excellent prediction, it was pure...perfection. The dialogues the flashbacks even made me emotional and Naruto's plan was brilliant. Seriously this was by far the best prediction, I have ever seen, I truly mean it.
    Quote Originally Posted by ahmher View Post
    great predication
    Quote Originally Posted by bdm View Post
    now that was a predection looked like original manga chapter .honestly a nice one out of many 645 predections .it deserves a +ve rep bro

    Thank You guys for enjoying the prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Awesome work mate,good prediction :D

    have to spread some rep to give you again :/
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Make a 646 based on this..... I want to read more.... hopefully this is the next chapter.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 645 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Impressive!!
     
         
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