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    DSM Kabuto


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    I need tips on what I can improve on by the way, so don't feel bad if you leave a harsh comment. If you want it, you can take it. First come first serve i guess.
     
         

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    Re: DSM Kabuto

    I'll say first come first leave.
     
         

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    Re: DSM Kabuto

    6/10 ...........
     
         

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    Re: DSM Kabuto

    lol 10char.
     
         
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    Re: DSM Kabuto

    Ì think it's actually done pretty good. I like the border and the smudging part. It really goes well together.
    But maybe you hsould work a bit on the text. The bottom right text looks okay, maybe a bit more work in it, but it's not bad, but maybe you could've done something to the white text, top left, it doesn't look vey beautiful.
    And the smudging top right looks a bit weird, and maybe you could add some cool effects to the render itself, and maybe some small effects for the bacgkround. I don't think you really spent a lot of time in it, but its good though. Nice job ^x^
    keep going on like this, watch some tutorials, practice and mess around lot. Keep GFXing and have fun!
     
         

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    Re: DSM Kabuto

    Quote Originally Posted by -Khallil- View Post
    Ì think it's actually done pretty good. I like the border and the smudging part. It really goes well together.
    But maybe you hsould work a bit on the text. The bottom right text looks okay, maybe a bit more work in it, but it's not bad, but maybe you could've done something to the white text, top left, it doesn't look vey beautiful.
    And the smudging top right looks a bit weird, and maybe you could add some cool effects to the render itself, and maybe some small effects for the bacgkround. I don't think you really spent a lot of time in it, but its good though. Nice job ^x^
    keep going on like this, watch some tutorials, practice and mess around lot. Keep GFXing and have fun!
    Thanks man. Appreciate it.
     
         

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