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    Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Scene starts with Minato sharing some tears.
    Minato(thinking):I am proud of you, my son...And your mother too...
    Naruto:I told you, I already know that! But now, let's finish him off!!!
    Sasuke(thinking):He saved every single shinobi from the alliance...and he gave them his chakra...(smirk)Naruto...
    Naruto:Sasuke...
    Tobirama(thinking):Hmp Naruto...You're an idiot, but...your foolish mind saved all this shinobi...you fight just like my brother...
    Naruto:Dad, Second, Sasuke and you(pointing to Juugo)!!!We're going back to the barrier!!!!There we can fight without hurting the Shinobi Alliance!
    ???:Naruto!!!You're not going to go just with them!!!Because the Kages are here!!!
    Naruto:Old Lady Tsunade, Gaara, Old Man, Raikage!!!And(with a nasty look)Orochimaru?
    Orochimaru:Naruto-kun!I'm on your side now!And they are too!
    Suigetsu:We are???(thinking)What's you plan, Orochimaru-san?
    Karin(thinking)His chakra, it feels warmer than before...
    Karin:Sasuke-kun!!!Are you ok?
    Sasuke:Yeah!
    Tobirama:Tsunade???
    Tsunade:Yes, old man! Grandpa' is here too?
    Tobirama:Yes, his fighting Madara!
    Ay:Minato!
    Minato:Ay!We met in another circumstances this time!Glad to see you again!
    Gaara:Naruto...You still save the shinobi...
    Scene changes too the barrier
    Obito:Backup, ha?!Still peace of shit!
    Scene changes to Madara and Hashirama
    Madara:Those bastards Kages...They're still alive!Not for long time though...
    Hashirama:Is she Tsunade!Haaa!Yes, she is!Though she's still young...
    Madara:Pay attention, HashiramaWE're still fighting!
    Scene changes back to Naruto and co.
    Naruto:Ok, then!Everybody, take this!(he gaves Chakra to the Kages, orochimaru, Karin and Suigetsu)
    Naruto:Now, let's finish this war!BY FIGHTING TOGETHER!
    Last panel shoes Naruto in the midle sorrounded by his comrades
    The end
    Sorry for misspelng and grammar.So, what are you're thoughts about my prediction?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    That was pretty good. You got Naruto's personality down good too.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Quote Originally Posted by Kyaun97 View Post
    That was pretty good. You got Naruto's personality down good too.
    Thanks!!!And I like your sig! it's awesome!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Thanks I made it today
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    It was alright, but no sakura
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Thats pretty good
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuuybi View Post
    Thats pretty good
    Quote Originally Posted by FemmeFatale View Post
    It was alright, but no sakura
    Thank you, guys!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    That's pretty good
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Not a fan of giving a big FU to the alliance... they will need to participate.

    To be honest... I wouldn't be surprised if Obito just cancels the Jutsu.


    Anyways, you nicely got the characters and Gokage arrival nicely written.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Quote Originally Posted by KGB Kakuzu View Post
    Not a fan of giving a big FU to the alliance... they will need to participate.

    To be honest... I wouldn't be surprised if Obito just cancels the Jutsu.


    Anyways, you nicely got the characters and Gokage arrival nicely written.
    thank you, man!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Quote Originally Posted by seventhboa View Post
    That's pretty good
    thanks!!!! I'm glad that you like it! and thx for the rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    great predication
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Quote Originally Posted by ahmher View Post
    great predication
    Thanks man!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    really good..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    This was pretty good!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Good Job bro.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 645- "Fighting together" by nickman013

    Quote Originally Posted by ahhimane View Post
    Good Job bro.
    Thanks bro...
     
         

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