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    A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Chapter 2 the Journey Begins

    Narrator: Morning is now here & Adam and Aurora have just woken up.

    Adam: Chimchar come on out, we will be setting off today buddy I am really excited about it what are you; hopefully we can catch some new friends, and meet some new trainers as well.

    Chimchar: Chimchar (the Chimp like Pokémon)

    Aurora: hey Oshawott come on out and join me, hopefully we can catch us a new friend today and meet other new trainers, what do you think Oshawott.

    Oshawott: Osha Oshawott (the sea otter Pokémon)

    Narrator: a few mins later they both headed down stairs to have breakfast

    Aurora: Morning Adam.

    Adam: Morning Aurora.

    Aurora: let’s eat, then we can start off on our journey.

    Nurse: Angela: hey kids how are you both today I hope you and your Pokémon are feeling well.

    Aurora: we are all doing fine thanks for asking.

    Adam: yeah we are so ready to start our journey today for sure.

    Narrator:Meanwhile back at the Hudson home

    Anthea: I wonder where the kids are now dear

    Aiden: possibly still at the Pokémon centre.

    Anthea: what makes you think that?

    Aiden: I was at the Pokémon centre making a few deliveries earlier with Natsume and Nurse Angela told us that they stayed there last night.

    Anthea: I see well I thought that may have been the case can you run me down there please dear I have to give them their lunch for today since it will be last time for a while.

    Aiden: Sure dear, I will call Natsume she will get there faster than we would she should be free.

    Narrator: Natsume was in her office at the gym then the phone rang

    Natsume: hello this is Natsume

    Aiden: Natsume its dad can you get to the Pokémon centre and hold up Adam and Aurora for me.

    Sure dad I will head there now while I am still free

    Narrator: Back at the Pokémon centre Adam and Aurora had just finished breakfast as well as their conversation with Nurse Angela, when there sister walked through the door.

    Natsume: it looks like I just caught you two

    Adam what wrong sis

    Natsume: nothing mum will be here soon she has something for you both she should be here any moment now.

    Narrator: a few mins then had passed and there mum then walk through the doors with dad & Ethan

    Aurora: what’s wrong?

    Anthea: nothing I just had to give you this last lunch and dinner pre made and Aurora this is for you.

    Aurora: what is it?

    Anthea: it’s the first ribbon I won in a contest

    Aurora: I remember I will do my best mum & I will take great care of the ribbon

    Adam: thank you for the pre packed meals mum we will call you from time to time don’t worry.

    Aiden: well we better get back dear we can’t leave the professor waiting there for too much longer.

    Anthea: okay dear take care you two

    Aurora & Adam we will bye bye Mum & Dad, say see you to Ethan for us as well

    Narrator: Both parents then left

    Natsume: hey Adam here this was dads first badge he gave to me when I first started I want you to take with you as well.

    Adam: cool sis thanks I will look after it

    Natsume: make sure you do now Adam & look after each other and take care.

    Adam & Aurora: we will

    Narrator: Our heroes then left the Pokémon centre started on their Pokémon journey.

    Aurora: let try and reach another Pokémon centre before nightfall.

    Adam: yeah good idea I hope we have at least caught another Pokémon by then.

    Narrator: They had been travelling for a quite some time when something flew had flew out of the bushes, Aurora notice it first.

    Aurora: what type of Pokémon is that?

    Narrator: She then got out her Pokedex.

    Pokedex: “Ducklett the water bird type Pokémon”

    Aurora: Adam I am taking this one.

    Adam: okay I am only letting you because it maybe better suited for your contests.

    Aurora: thanks Adam Oshawott come on out and use water gun on Ducklett now.

    Adam: go for it Aurora.

    Narrator:water gun was a direct hit but it was not very effective Ducklett then hit back with hidden power.

    Aurora: Oshawott doge it and use tackle.

    Ducklett then got up again it was tiring out but it then used wing attack.

    Aurora: dodge that as well Oshawott it is time to give that move we were practicing last night use hidden power.

    Narrator: It was a direct hit.

    Adam: it looks it is getting tired now try catching it now.

    Aurora: go poke ball.

    Narrator: Aurora waited a few seconds or so to see if she had, and succeed and she had.

    Adam: you did it Aurora.

    Aurora: great job Oshawott it looks like it still needs some work but you did great and we now have a new friend, come out Ducklett welcome to the team.

    Ducklett: Ducklett.

    Adam: well it’s my turn next & yes welcome to the team Ducklett

    Aurora: yep I wonder what we will see next, but this should be a good spot for lunch.

    Adam: I agree.

    Narrator: As they were eating lunch they had a trainer and their Pokémon run past them in a hurry.

    Adam: I wonder what that was all about.

    Aurora: good question

    Adam: don’t forget there is a contest coming soon you should start practicing after lunch.

    Aurora: you may also may want to do some training with Chimchar.

    Adam: well I am done here I am going to find a good spot to train we can meet back here after

    Aurora: if you get lost meet me at the Pokémon centre.

    Adam: Okay sis.

    Narrator: An hour had passed and Adam decided to head back to where aurora said to meet up when Adam heard some noise coming from a nearby bush, & he decided to check it out.

    I hope you Enjoy it

    Here is the link to Chapter 1

    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=392545

    I will try to get my next chapter out alot sooner than I did this one
     
         
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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Great read, love the chapter though i think its been over 2 months ~_~"...
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by -M3U- View Post
    Great read, love the chapter though i think its been over 2 months ~_~"...
    thank you glad you liked it & yeah I have been real busy
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    WHAT?!? ANOTHER POKEMON FANFICTION ON NB!!!! THIS IS AN OUTRAGE!!!! HAHAAHAHAHAHAH

    No but really, this is cool.
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by DoubleA49 View Post
    WHAT?!? ANOTHER POKEMON FANFICTION ON NB!!!! THIS IS AN OUTRAGE!!!! HAHAAHAHAHAHAH

    No but really, this is cool.
    LOL and thank you I am glad you liked it
     
         
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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Great job
    Gave up on Pokemon awhile back, but I try out yours and DoubleA49's :scorps:
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by seventhboa View Post
    Great job
    Gave up on Pokemon awhile back, but I try out yours and DoubleA49's :scorps:
    thank you I am happy you are enjoying My FF so far along with the other ones
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    I enjoyed Serena you improved a with the description. Good job
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    It was nice to see just how caring Adam/Aurora’s parents were b y bringing their last pre-cooked meal and even heirlooms handed down by mother and sister It was interesting to note that Mijumaru(Oshawott) and Koaruhie(Ducklett) are both water with the slight exception of the duck sharing flying typing and yet Aurora still decided to go for it. She had somewhat of a rough start having her water PKMN use a water move against the aquatic duck but she quickly bounced back and used a particularly good move ^^ I like the brother and sister bond they have going on and its very interesting to see a sibling journey together. I really liked the ending as it appeared as though Adam stumbled upon a potential PKMN for him to capture. Overall was a great chapter and I’m looking forward to the next one
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    It was nice to see just how caring Adam/Aurora’s parents were b y bringing their last pre-cooked meal and even heirlooms handed down by mother and sister It was interesting to note that Mijumaru(Oshawott) and Koaruhie(Ducklett) are both water with the slight exception of the duck sharing flying typing and yet Aurora still decided to go for it. She had somewhat of a rough start having her water PKMN use a water move against the aquatic duck but she quickly bounced back and used a particularly good move ^^ I like the brother and sister bond they have going on and its very interesting to see a sibling journey together. I really liked the ending as it appeared as though Adam stumbled upon a potential PKMN for him to capture. Overall was a great chapter and I’m looking forward to the next one
    Thank you for your comment and I am glad you liked it and yeah I thought the whole family thing would be good Idea and siblings travelling together is always fun who knows what is in store for them next .
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Nice story I'd keep up with this ff and see how it progresses.
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Okay, better late than never, right?

    Anyway, good job serena! The description was a bit lacking in both chapters, but that's okay, it's not everyone's thing. Just maybe a touch of scenery here and there and this could probably be good. Reminds me of my younger days with the pokemon. (Love chimchar, good choice.)

    Keep it up!
     
         

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    Re: A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by Germanicus View Post
    Okay, better late than never, right?

    Anyway, good job serena! The description was a bit lacking in both chapters, but that's okay, it's not everyone's thing. Just maybe a touch of scenery here and there and this could probably be good. Reminds me of my younger days with the pokemon. (Love chimchar, good choice.)

    Keep it up!
    Thank you for your comment and I am glad you liked it
     
         

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