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    Naruto chapter 646 : Infinite Tsokoyomi

    ( i rushed through my earlier prediction so decided to make another one . hope you guys like it .
    sorry . if there are spelling mistakes )

    Infinite tsokoyomi

    ( obito releases ten tails to ready the genjutsu cast on the moon )

    Obito : It will so fast you want even notice it . you all can live happily in the dream world .

    ( Minato and Naruto charging a sage art : bijuudama )

    Naruto : dad . let's bring him down before it's too late .

    Minato : yes . obito . i won't let you do this as your sensei ! i will stop you .

    Obito : You don't need to worry you trash . your failures will be no more .

    Naruto : bastard !!! i told you before . now have this .

    ( Naruto and Minato sends sage art : bijuudama right at ten tails )

    Obito : ha . ha . ha . you gonna stop me with that .( points ) see that .

    ( The tree created a one huge combined Bijuudama of the four flowers
    and release in high speed toward the sage art : bijuudma )

    Naruto : that's even larger than the ours . dad .

    ( three tomoe sharingan appear on the moon )

    ( outside the barrier )

    Juugo : Sasuke . that's sharingan on the moon .

    sasuke : Juugo . we got hurry . use your sage chakra to open a hole in the barrier .

    Juugo : will that work ?

    Sasuke : if sage chakra can hurt him . it can even break this barrier .

    ( they starts running toward the barrier )

    ( scene changes to madara and hashirama both looked shocked )

    Madara : damn . ( thinks ) that obito always been to haste . if you use it when tentails
    incomplete . Ones who have strong chakra will break through the genjutsu eventually .
    Hashirama : madara ! don't tell me . he gonna use it already . The infinite tsokoyomi .

    Madara : we don't have to worry about it . let's continue our battle .

    Hashirama : ( angrily ) you got to be ....... kidding me . ( he used the f word there )i gonna go
    help them .

    Madara laughs maniacally ) ha . ha . hashirama . you have to pass me before that .

    ( hashirama tries to bind him with wood technique but madara break through it using his war fan
    and binds hashirama with his own technique )

    Hashirama : ( shocked ) from when do you ?

    Madara : have my technique ? from the fight we have in the valley of the end

    ( Next panel shows shocked face of hashirama )

    ( scene changes to sasuke and juugo )

    Sasuke : use it on full scale .

    Juugo : I'm on it .

    ( Juugo transforms in to his monstrous form and uses his technique )

    Juugo : Chakra - canon

    ( a explosion occurs . as the smoke clears . a hole can be seen in the barrier .
    sasuke and juugo enter inside the barrier )

    ( bee comes from the side and enter inside the barrier behind sasuke and juugo )

    Bee : you didn't forgot me . ya fool . ya fools .

    Juugo : ( in his changed voice ) eight tails host .

    Bee : i told ya fools before call me and my hatte - san as sama . ya fools . yei .

    Sasuke : hmph . forget him ( activates his susano'o ) let's go .

    ( inside the barrier )

    Tobirama : six tomoe has appeared in the moon and i sense some ninja have been already
    - caught by the genjutsu .

    Naruto : damn . are we too late .

    ( sasuke comes in front of him with susano'o stabilizing )

    Sasuke : after showing off . that's the only thing you can say idiot .

    ( the bijuudama's collides and many bijuudama's hit with two bijuudama changing the coarse of the attack , hit on the closing hole of the barrier and go outside the barrier breaking it )

    ( A mountain get destroyed and little earthquake occurs )

    ( scene changes to alliance )

    Sakura : Hinata . what's that earthquake and that explosion .

    Hinata : bijuudama's have been deflected by bee-san and hit on the mountain range near .

    Sakura : Hinata ! did you notice it as well . look like genjutsu have started .

    Hinata : yes . some are already caught in it .

    ( Next panel shows red moon with six tomoe )

    ( kages and orichimaru ,karin, suigetsu running through forest
    shown in next panel )

    Kages : we have to hurry look like he is going through his plan .

    Orichimaru : Madara have started it .

    Karin : i can feel a huge chakra concentrating on the moon .

    Suigetsu : ( disturbing ) what do you mean karin ?

    Karin : ( ignores ) that can't be measured .

    ( scene changes to the obito and naruto co fight )

    Obito : what you gonna do now . it's few steps to be complete .

    Sasuke : Naruto ! i will caught him in a genjutsu . use it to attack him .

    (Still inside susano'o . Sasuke focus his EMS on obito )

    ( seventh tomoe appear on the moon )

    Naruto : what happening ? everything is white .

    ( scene changes )

    ( knock is heard )

    Kakashi : naruto ! wake up .

    Naruto : ( sleepy ) huh .

    Kakashi : Come outside . sakura and sasuke waiting .

    ( naruto running toward the door )

    Minato : son . where you running in hurry .

    Naruto : ( confused ) i.. i have to go to train with others .

    ( open the door and run outside . everyone begin walking down the road )
    ( distance voice )

    Kushina : ( angry ) he ran again not taking breakfast . i gonna punch him .

    Minato : ( Scared tone ) calm down . kushina .

    Naruto : kakashi-sensei . where are we going ?

    Sakura : ( Lovingly ) naruto . we gonna meet sensei's teammates today .

    Naruto : sakura-chan !!! run closer to her . ( tries to put his arm around her )

    Sasuke : Hey . naruto . not here .

    ( sasuke grabs naruto from neck and they walk while fighting )

    ( again a distance voice )

    Kurama : wake up . naruto . we have to stop him .


    Few steps away to complete infinite tsokoyomi . can kurama free naruto from the Eternal genjutsu .

    The End .

    ( will there be a next time )
     
         
    Last edited by kishiuzumaki; 09-09-2013 at 05:23 PM.

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    Re: Naruto chapter 646 : Infinite Tsokoyomi

    Average...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 646 : Infinite Tsokoyomi

    i dont think obito will be able to activate infinite tsokoyomi in next chapter......!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 646 : Infinite Tsokoyomi

    Not bad....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 646 : Infinite Tsokoyomi

    Well it had some good points but:

    The barrier can't be destroyed by Juugo. It doesn't work with omnyoudon, it's a complete different technique. Bee was a bit random considering that he didn't get to do anything. I did like though how Kurama acted in the end. If you want my honest opinion I would mark it 3-3.5/5.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 646 : Infinite Tsokoyomi

    great predication
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 646 : Infinite Tsokoyomi

    It wasn't that bad.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 646 : Infinite Tsokoyomi

    This was magnif bro good luck with the future predict's
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 646 : Infinite Tsokoyomi

    Quite good but i expected more from your standards
     
         

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