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    [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Greetings, Ancalagon.

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed.
    Terrain: Large Room within the Kage Summit where Sasuke and the Fourth Raikage fought.
    You may use Onoki's abilities up to your current rank as well as Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know.
    We start mid range from each other.
    If you have any questions please ask them through VM.


    I will be using a Sasuke Uchiha bio with access to the Mangekyou Sharingan for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that you're testing for and I will make the first move.

    No one other than myself and the participant may post here. If required, administrators/moderators and official senseis can input their opinion as well.

    Best of luck!
     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Madāra Uchiha View Post
    Greetings, Ancalagon.

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed.
    Terrain: Large Room within the Kage Summit where Sasuke and the Fourth Raikage fought.
    You may use Onoki's abilities up to your current rank as well as Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know.
    We start mid range from each other.
    If you have any questions please ask them through VM.


    I will be using a Sasuke Uchiha bio with access to the Mangekyou Sharingan for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that you're testing for and I will make the first move.

    No one other than myself and the participant may post here. If required, administrators/moderators and official senseis can input their opinion as well.

    Best of luck!
    Onoki, the Dust Devil.

    Let's do it.
     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Seeing the short old man enter the field, Sasuke's eyes swirl around the create the 3T image within his eyes.

    You will fall to the hands of the Uchiha, old man. You and the rest of the Kages as well...

    As he speaks, he points his hand at Onoki, trapping him in a Sharingan genjutsu that causes him to see several crows appear that quickly turn into kunais that pierce the body as Onoki sees his fellow Kages tormenting and taunting him for his failure to defeat Sasuke despite his great power.



    Rank: B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: An illusion were the user simple points at the target and if the target glances at the pointing hand they fall into a genjutsu where they first see birds and then they turn to kunai that attack them.They are future damaged by being tortured by images of there friend insulting them.
    Note:This is an advanced sharingan genjutsu.



    After Sasuke points, he quickly channels Katon chakra within his hand and releases it in bursts of explosive fire, aimed to do great damage to Onoki should they land and "blow up", so to speak.



    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.



    His hands still extended, Sasuke then brings his other hand up and closes them, gathering Raiton chakra in his hands that he then slams to the earth and releases lightning chakra towards his target, traveling as a current that travels towards Onoki, that splits into several tendrils very quickly.




    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Madāra Uchiha View Post
    Seeing the short old man enter the field, Sasuke's eyes swirl around the create the 3T image within his eyes.

    You will fall to the hands of the Uchiha, old man. You and the rest of the Kages as well...

    As he speaks, he points his hand at Onoki, trapping him in a Sharingan genjutsu that causes him to see several crows appear that quickly turn into kunais that pierce the body as Onoki sees his fellow Kages tormenting and taunting him for his failure to defeat Sasuke despite his great power.



    Rank: B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: An illusion were the user simple points at the target and if the target glances at the pointing hand they fall into a genjutsu where they first see birds and then they turn to kunai that attack them.They are future damaged by being tortured by images of there friend insulting them.
    Note:This is an advanced sharingan genjutsu.



    After Sasuke points, he quickly channels Katon chakra within his hand and releases it in bursts of explosive fire, aimed to do great damage to Onoki should they land and "blow up", so to speak.



    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.



    His hands still extended, Sasuke then brings his other hand up and closes them, gathering Raiton chakra in his hands that he then slams to the earth and releases lightning chakra towards his target, traveling as a current that travels towards Onoki, that splits into several tendrils very quickly.




    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

    Onoki: The young generation has no idea what it is like to fight against evil like yourself! Even more so, to fight with a reason! A young shinobi from Konoha taught me this only recently.

    Onoki witnesses Sasuke point in his direction, when crows suddenly erupt from Sasuke's clothing as they rush towards him. With no warning, the crows suddenly morph into kunai. Onoki is skeptical of this, as no hand seals were made by his opponent to initiate this change. Combined with the odd gesture of Sasuke pointing at him, and his possession of the Sharingan, Onoki suspects he has been placed into a genjutsu. In response, he encases his entire body with a layer of rock, which releases him from the genjutsu. Onoki maintains the armor as the fire shots approach, crossing his arms in front of him to have the shots dissipate against his defense.

    (Doton: Koka no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hardening Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.


    Onoki releases the armor as Sasuke slams his hands onto the ground. The lightning racing along the ground is easily visible to Onoki. He quickly releases a wide-scaled wave of wind, aimed to neutralize the numerous lightning tendrils. After releasing the wind, Onoki continues by stomping on the ground. At the same time, Onoki releases a set of four shuriken forwards. This manifests a set of three pillars in a pyramid formation around Sasuke, one to his direct front to block his sight, and two behind him to the left and right. As the fire would be colored with Onoki's chakra, Sasuke's vision of the incoming shuriken would be hindered. The fire assails him just before the shuriken thunk into his chest and neck.

    (Fūton: Kaze Shingai) - Wind Release: Wind Terror
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user unleashes a wave of wind that slashes at the opponent.


    (Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.

     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Ancalagon View Post
    Onoki: The young generation has no idea what it is like to fight against evil like yourself! Even more so, to fight with a reason! A young shinobi from Konoha taught me this only recently.

    Onoki witnesses Sasuke point in his direction, when crows suddenly erupt from Sasuke's clothing as they rush towards him. With no warning, the crows suddenly morph into kunai. Onoki is skeptical of this, as no hand seals were made by his opponent to initiate this change. Combined with the odd gesture of Sasuke pointing at him, and his possession of the Sharingan, Onoki suspects he has been placed into a genjutsu. In response, he encases his entire body with a layer of rock, which releases him from the genjutsu. Onoki maintains the armor as the fire shots approach, crossing his arms in front of him to have the shots dissipate against his defense.

    (Doton: Koka no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hardening Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.


    Onoki releases the armor as Sasuke slams his hands onto the ground. The lightning racing along the ground is easily visible to Onoki. He quickly releases a wide-scaled wave of wind, aimed to neutralize the numerous lightning tendrils. After releasing the wind, Onoki continues by stomping on the ground. At the same time, Onoki releases a set of four shuriken forwards. This manifests a set of three pillars in a pyramid formation around Sasuke, one to his direct front to block his sight, and two behind him to the left and right. As the fire would be colored with Onoki's chakra, Sasuke's vision of the incoming shuriken would be hindered. The fire assails him just before the shuriken thunk into his chest and neck.

    (Fūton: Kaze Shingai) - Wind Release: Wind Terror
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user unleashes a wave of wind that slashes at the opponent.


    (Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.

    As Sasuke sees the Futon jutsu released, aimed at his lightning, intent of negating it. Lowering his eyes at his enemy, Sasuke, still low to the earth, begins to rush at him just as he the wind makes contact with the lightning, channeling another Raiton attack. Channeling chakra and rushing forward, he begins to note Onoki's chakra path becoming more erratic and wavy like, following the typical patterns of moving flames, suggesting a possible Katon jutsu. As the wind clashed with the lightning and Onoki raised his leg, ready to stomp, Sasuke releases a bolt of lightning from his lungs, creating a spear that splits as it reaches fort range of Onoki, creating three spears of lightning, one aimed at his chest, another at his legs and one aimed 5 feet above him that then quickly branches off, back towards Onoki's skull, coming down to pierce through the top as the other bolts incapacitate him first. Should Onoki attempt to use the Katon jutsu Sasuke saw him channeling chakra for, he'd be pierced by to great effect.


    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.



    As the bolts are released, Sasuke continues to run forward, flipping to his right as he moves, moving away from behind the bolts to see his target face on. As the bolts close in on him, Madara, coming in from Onoki's 10 o'clock, gather Katon chakra and makes a single hand seal, releasing several dangerous bursts of fire at his enemy with the intent to explode upon contact. Aiming several towards Onoki's left and right, he bombards the center with bursts of dragon head shaped fire as well (3 on each side).



    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.



    Unbeknownst to his target, as Sasuke unleashes the bombardment of flaming dragon heads, he releases a kunai, high in the sky, arced to come down as his dragon heads make contact with Onoki. Due to the speed and size of the dragon heads, an object as small as a kunai being thrown in the air, almost completely vertically upwards. With the trajectory it's thrown at, it'll be hard for Onoki to see it until it's shadow is near him, descending downwards on him.


    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user places a seal on a chosen location which when an enemy target draws closer to the seal it will release itself in activation to the enemy’s chakra and cause an explosion.



    Ha! My reason is to see you begging for life as I crush it with my powers. You haven't begun to see what the name of the Uchiha clan means!
     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Madāra Uchiha View Post
    As Sasuke sees the Futon jutsu released, aimed at his lightning, intent of negating it. Lowering his eyes at his enemy, Sasuke, still low to the earth, begins to rush at him just as he the wind makes contact with the lightning, channeling another Raiton attack. Channeling chakra and rushing forward, he begins to note Onoki's chakra path becoming more erratic and wavy like, following the typical patterns of moving flames, suggesting a possible Katon jutsu. As the wind clashed with the lightning and Onoki raised his leg, ready to stomp, Sasuke releases a bolt of lightning from his lungs, creating a spear that splits as it reaches fort range of Onoki, creating three spears of lightning, one aimed at his chest, another at his legs and one aimed 5 feet above him that then quickly branches off, back towards Onoki's skull, coming down to pierce through the top as the other bolts incapacitate him first. Should Onoki attempt to use the Katon jutsu Sasuke saw him channeling chakra for, he'd be pierced by to great effect.


    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.



    As the bolts are released, Sasuke continues to run forward, flipping to his right as he moves, moving away from behind the bolts to see his target face on. As the bolts close in on him, Madara, coming in from Onoki's 10 o'clock, gather Katon chakra and makes a single hand seal, releasing several dangerous bursts of fire at his enemy with the intent to explode upon contact. Aiming several towards Onoki's left and right, he bombards the center with bursts of dragon head shaped fire as well (3 on each side).



    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.



    Unbeknownst to his target, as Sasuke unleashes the bombardment of flaming dragon heads, he releases a kunai, high in the sky, arced to come down as his dragon heads make contact with Onoki. Due to the speed and size of the dragon heads, an object as small as a kunai being thrown in the air, almost completely vertically upwards. With the trajectory it's thrown at, it'll be hard for Onoki to see it until it's shadow is near him, descending downwards on him.


    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user places a seal on a chosen location which when an enemy target draws closer to the seal it will release itself in activation to the enemy’s chakra and cause an explosion.



    Ha! My reason is to see you begging for life as I crush it with my powers. You haven't begun to see what the name of the Uchiha clan means!
    Onoki: That is nothing! Fighting to save, to protect.. those are real reasons! You do what you do only for your selfish desires.

    Just moments before Onoki is going to complete the stomp for his technique, he witnesses Sasuke releasing several bolts of lightning from his mouth. A moments hesitation allows him to change his actions. His step is completed, but nothing happens. Instead, Onoki raises a stone golem to his left side. As the golem rises, its right arm picks Onoki up, pulling him to his left just moments before the lightning strikes him. The golem proceeds to place Onoki onto its head. Remembering the genjutsu placed on him earlier, Onoki avoids looking into his opponent's eyes. He concentrates on his chin level and below.

    (Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique.


    Once on the golem's head, Onoki's high elevation allows him a clearer sight of the battlefield. When you release the fireballs, he knows his golem will be sufficient to stop it, and so directs his attention elsewhere. Where he normally wouldn't see the kunai being thrown, his elevation allows him to do so coupled with the fact that he is scrutinizing his situation carefully. And so, once the fireballs are released, the golem's right arm extends upwards and forwards, embedding the kunai into its palm. The arm continues to crush you from above. Its left arm extends to the side, and performs a slapping motion, aimed to crush you from the right. Onoki, continues to perform a single hand seal, creating a mass of spikes to emerge from your left side, aimed at your waist. So you have the golem's arms from above and to your right, and the spikes to your left.

    (Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.
     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Ancalagon View Post
    Onoki: That is nothing! Fighting to save, to protect.. those are real reasons! You do what you do only for your selfish desires.

    Just moments before Onoki is going to complete the stomp for his technique, he witnesses Sasuke releasing several bolts of lightning from his mouth. A moments hesitation allows him to change his actions. His step is completed, but nothing happens. Instead, Onoki raises a stone golem to his left side. As the golem rises, its right arm picks Onoki up, pulling him to his left just moments before the lightning strikes him. The golem proceeds to place Onoki onto its head. Remembering the genjutsu placed on him earlier, Onoki avoids looking into his opponent's eyes. He concentrates on his chin level and below.

    (Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique.


    Once on the golem's head, Onoki's high elevation allows him a clearer sight of the battlefield. When you release the fireballs, he knows his golem will be sufficient to stop it, and so directs his attention elsewhere. Where he normally wouldn't see the kunai being thrown, his elevation allows him to do so coupled with the fact that he is scrutinizing his situation carefully. And so, once the fireballs are released, the golem's right arm extends upwards and forwards, embedding the kunai into its palm. The arm continues to crush you from above. Its left arm extends to the side, and performs a slapping motion, aimed to crush you from the right. Onoki, continues to perform a single hand seal, creating a mass of spikes to emerge from your left side, aimed at your waist. So you have the golem's arms from above and to your right, and the spikes to your left.

    (Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.
    As Sasuke sees the golem advancing on him, he grimaces. This creature would be the death of him, and he couldn't allow that; he was the exterminator here and Onoki, on top the golem, was the pest that needed to die. Gathering Raiton chakra, Sasuke creates an omnidirectional burst of lightning from his hand, destroying the golem's as he advances and strikes Onoki as well, due to him being on it's skull and the golem's body having to naturally lean forward and downward to strike him. As the lightning is released, it also strikes the spikes formed on Sasuke's side, unbeknownst to him.


    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.



    "Don't speak about my desires or selfishness....you don't know what the hell I've had to go through"

    As the golem falls, Sasuke's anger begins to peak and his eyes swirl, revealing an unique pattern within them: his mangekyo Sharingan had awaken.


    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50 (-25 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Description:
    The Mangekyo Sharingan, literally meaning "Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye", is the highest known form of Sharingan, said to be feared as the strongest form of Sharingan. Awakening MS requires the user to have possession of 3 Tomoe Sharingan and to witness or simply go through some extremely dramatic emotional event. Upon this event, the user awakens MS. The most noticeable MS users gained it by witnessing the death of someone important to them, sometimes by their own hand. Once activated the appearance of the pupil drastically changes, differing from the tomoe seals, and gains a shape unique to each user. When active the user can track speeds even further beyond that of the third stage sharingan. The timing of the users counters, the chaining speed of multiple techniques and the ability to see through the enemy's moves greatly increases. Not only that but the user gains the ability to see through visual illusions A-rank and below. The link to Genjutsu is further increased and, if the user has gained full mastery over Genjutsu, he gains the ability to cast any and every genjutsu without the need for Handseals as long as he has a line of sight to the target. Also, the Mangekyo Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques, unique to each user. Extended use of the Mangekyo Sharingan after some time, deteriorates the user's eyesight to the point of blindness. The chakra cost is so high that it drains the users stamina and chakra at increasingly high speeds. Once the side effects of it's use take place, the user is left blind and unable to activate his sharingan. While keeping it active is already quite hard, the user will drain the time he can keep it active at each MS technique he uses. While some can decrease one turn, others can decrease even more.
    Note: The user needs to have activated his 3T Sharingan beforehand
    Note: Can only be activated twice, requiring a 2 turn coldown to activate again
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 8 turns for the first activation and 4 turns for the second
    Note: After the first activation wears down, his eyes revert to their normal appearance and the user can't activate his sharingan for 1 turn
    Note: The first activation drains the users stamina and leaves him tired, while the second activation leaves the user blinded and almost unable to move if he doesn't deactivate it before the time ends
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.



    "You've never experienced true pain, but you will today...."

    Immediately after the eyes are activated, Sasuke forms one handseal and release a massive stream of pressurized fire at Onoki, aimed to burn his body and the golem with great haste, turning it into a magma like substance, melting Onoki's body as the golem melts.


    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user does one handseal and inhales while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth. The user has control over the concentration of the technique, being able to produce a narrow jet of flames, highly concentrated or one that will widen along its range. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time.

     
         
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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Madāra Uchiha View Post
    As Sasuke sees the golem advancing on him, he grimaces. This creature would be the death of him, and he couldn't allow that; he was the exterminator here and Onoki, on top the golem, was the pest that needed to die. Gathering Raiton chakra, Sasuke creates an omnidirectional burst of lightning from his hand, destroying the golem's as he advances and strikes Onoki as well, due to him being on it's skull and the golem's body having to naturally lean forward and downward to strike him. As the lightning is released, it also strikes the spikes formed on Sasuke's side, unbeknownst to him.


    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.



    "Don't speak about my desires or selfishness....you don't know what the hell I've had to go through"

    As the golem falls, Sasuke's anger begins to peak and his eyes swirl, revealing an unique pattern within them: his mangekyo Sharingan had awaken.


    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50 (-25 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Description:
    The Mangekyo Sharingan, literally meaning "Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye", is the highest known form of Sharingan, said to be feared as the strongest form of Sharingan. Awakening MS requires the user to have possession of 3 Tomoe Sharingan and to witness or simply go through some extremely dramatic emotional event. Upon this event, the user awakens MS. The most noticeable MS users gained it by witnessing the death of someone important to them, sometimes by their own hand. Once activated the appearance of the pupil drastically changes, differing from the tomoe seals, and gains a shape unique to each user. When active the user can track speeds even further beyond that of the third stage sharingan. The timing of the users counters, the chaining speed of multiple techniques and the ability to see through the enemy's moves greatly increases. Not only that but the user gains the ability to see through visual illusions A-rank and below. The link to Genjutsu is further increased and, if the user has gained full mastery over Genjutsu, he gains the ability to cast any and every genjutsu without the need for Handseals as long as he has a line of sight to the target. Also, the Mangekyo Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques, unique to each user. Extended use of the Mangekyo Sharingan after some time, deteriorates the user's eyesight to the point of blindness. The chakra cost is so high that it drains the users stamina and chakra at increasingly high speeds. Once the side effects of it's use take place, the user is left blind and unable to activate his sharingan. While keeping it active is already quite hard, the user will drain the time he can keep it active at each MS technique he uses. While some can decrease one turn, others can decrease even more.
    Note: The user needs to have activated his 3T Sharingan beforehand
    Note: Can only be activated twice, requiring a 2 turn coldown to activate again
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 8 turns for the first activation and 4 turns for the second
    Note: After the first activation wears down, his eyes revert to their normal appearance and the user can't activate his sharingan for 1 turn
    Note: The first activation drains the users stamina and leaves him tired, while the second activation leaves the user blinded and almost unable to move if he doesn't deactivate it before the time ends
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.



    "You've never experienced true pain, but you will today...."

    Immediately after the eyes are activated, Sasuke forms one handseal and release a massive stream of pressurized fire at Onoki, aimed to burn his body and the golem with great haste, turning it into a magma like substance, melting Onoki's body as the golem melts.


    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user does one handseal and inhales while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth. The user has control over the concentration of the technique, being able to produce a narrow jet of flames, highly concentrated or one that will widen along its range. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time.

    Onoki: The world does not exist to serve your needs, young shinobi!

    Gaara hears the powerful sound of lightning erupt from you, that rip apart the spears and the golem's limbs. He leaps powerfully backwards off of the golem as the lightning approaches. As he leaps, Onoki waves his left hand forwards, releasing several blades of wind that combine into a powerful blade that negates the incoming lightning.

    (Futon: Shinkūzan no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Vacuum Slash technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user waves his hand and creates multiple blades of wind, emerging to a single scythe of sharp air. The scythe was powerful enough to stop Susanno's movements, but wasn't able to break trough its defence.


    Onoki soars backwards through the air, noticing a movement in your eyes within his peripheral vision. His past experiences with another man, Madara Uchiha, brought a sense of urgency to the battle. A beam of fire is released just after. Onoki then performs a few hand seals, placing his hands in front of him, generating a cylinder of chakra. Suddenly, the chakra bursts forward, consuming the fire stream and then trapping you within its confines. Immediately after, the cylinder detonates, returning your particles to the universe from which they came.

    Onoki: Jinton, Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu!!

    (Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu: Entō Gata) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive World Technique: Cylindrical Form
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will first perform the Rat → Boar → Snake hand seals and then using their dust release to create a structure, with a sphere located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. The sphere then seems to explode with a tremendous amount of force, while the exterior walls of the structure effectively restrict the size of the blast radius, resulting in the destruction of everything and anyone caught within as they are pulverised into minute particles of dust. The resulting damage that this technique can produce varies considerably, depending on the initial shape of the created structure.
    This form starts with a small compressed shape, but then expands to a radius equaling to 10 meters in diameter and can extend up to long range distances.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu


    Onoki then lands on the side of one of the pillars that dot the battlefield. After he completes his Dust technique, he continues by loosening the rocks over your would-be/current location. The ceiling short range around yourself in all directions begins to collapse downwards, burying you in a mountain of rock and rubble.

    (Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.

     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Ancalagon View Post
    Onoki: The world does not exist to serve your needs, young shinobi!

    Gaara hears the powerful sound of lightning erupt from you, that rip apart the spears and the golem's limbs. He leaps powerfully backwards off of the golem as the lightning approaches. As he leaps, Onoki waves his left hand forwards, releasing several blades of wind that combine into a powerful blade that negates the incoming lightning.

    (Futon: Shinkūzan no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Vacuum Slash technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user waves his hand and creates multiple blades of wind, emerging to a single scythe of sharp air. The scythe was powerful enough to stop Susanno's movements, but wasn't able to break trough its defence.


    Onoki soars backwards through the air, noticing a movement in your eyes within his peripheral vision. His past experiences with another man, Madara Uchiha, brought a sense of urgency to the battle. A beam of fire is released just after. Onoki then performs a few hand seals, placing his hands in front of him, generating a cylinder of chakra. Suddenly, the chakra bursts forward, consuming the fire stream and then trapping you within its confines. Immediately after, the cylinder detonates, returning your particles to the universe from which they came.

    Onoki: Jinton, Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu!!

    (Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu: Entō Gata) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive World Technique: Cylindrical Form
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will first perform the Rat → Boar → Snake hand seals and then using their dust release to create a structure, with a sphere located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. The sphere then seems to explode with a tremendous amount of force, while the exterior walls of the structure effectively restrict the size of the blast radius, resulting in the destruction of everything and anyone caught within as they are pulverised into minute particles of dust. The resulting damage that this technique can produce varies considerably, depending on the initial shape of the created structure.
    This form starts with a small compressed shape, but then expands to a radius equaling to 10 meters in diameter and can extend up to long range distances.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu


    Onoki then lands on the side of one of the pillars that dot the battlefield. After he completes his Dust technique, he continues by loosening the rocks over your would-be/current location. The ceiling short range around yourself in all directions begins to collapse downwards, burying you in a mountain of rock and rubble.

    (Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.

    As Onoki jumped backwards, Sasuke released his Katon jutsu, aimed to do damage on contact with Onoki. As the stream is released, Sasuke sees Onoki weaving handseals and bringing them together, creating a small orb within his hand, surrounded by a transparent cylinder. Never seeing an elemental affinity like this, Sasuke swiftly uses his Mangekyo Sharingan to make manifest a limb of the godly protection he had, Susanoo. As the small construct is created within Onoki's hands, Sasuke uses his ocular prowess to manifest a smaller but quicker form of the Godly protection that masters of his clan utilized, Susano'o.


    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 120 (-30 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (-20 to user per turn)
    Description:
    Susanoo, also known as the Tempestuous God of Valor, or literally "He with the ability to help by all means", is the third ability granted by the Mangekyō Sharingan to those who awaken the abilities: Tsukuyomi — which symbolises the "darkness of the spiritual world" and Amaterasu — which denotes the "light of the material world". It creates a gigantic, humanoid, ethereal warrior that surrounds the user. Even though it envelopes the user, they can move around within Susanoo freely, use techniques from inside of it, as well as manifest only parts of Susanoo — as the situation calls for it. Despite Susanoo's impressive defensive capabilities, the protection it grants its user is not absolute. The user can be thrown out of the upper half of Susanoo by an enemy manipulating the substance underneath Susanoo (the ground basically). Also, a sufficiently powerful attack will still result in damage, especially during the technique's initial stages. The only known ways to attack the user while Susanoo is active is either to draw the wielder out of the technique and then attack, bind and restrict its movements, or to break the defence with overwhelming force. Susanoo users are also vulnerable to attacks which don't actually deal physical damage to it, such as strong lights and sounds, that can also impair their ability to sustain Susanoo. Normal and Sound-based genjutsu can also bypass Susanoo's impressive defense. Sasuke's Susanoo possesses a sword and a bow that doubles as a weapon and shield. It is able to produce chakra arrows to use with the bow via an orb held by a third hand, which can be fired at such a speed that evading them is nearly impossible. It can also use the arrows as a makeshift melee weapon. Sasuke is able to switch between his Susanoo's various weapons regardless of which stage it is in. In both its incomplete and complete forms, it has a more demonic appearance in contrast to Itachi's, which have a more "normal" human-like appearance, possessing horns and a malevolent grin. In its final form, it also possesses jagged teeth around its hood and magatama earrings. In addition to its secondary right hand, Sasuke's Susanoo has been depicted with a secondary left hand as well, a trait similar to all Susano known so far that have been shown to have 4 arms. After Sasuke gains the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, the second layer of armour changes its appearance. The orb is now made entirely of the flames of Amaterasu and the arrows are passively coated in the black flames. Sasuke can also throw the flames in a tomoe shape, using a wide spread attack from his own palm setting his foes on fire, similar to a Magatama attack but with the characterisitics of Amaterasu.
    Note: Can only be used by Sasuke Uchiha and must have MS/EMS
    Note: While active user can't use Eye Techniques except for Amaterasu and those pertaining to Susanoo.
    Note: Takes 1 full turn to stabilize into the full final form, during which his body bestows only a B-Rank defense.
    Note: The body of Susanoo grants an A-Rank defense against most elemental attacks, specially tangible ones.
    Note: The warrior can shoot up to 2 arrows per turn, counting as a move (regardless of shooting one or 2) and having a strength of an S-Rank long range attack each.
    Note: When the user has gained EMS, the warrior bestows an S-Rank defense when in complete form to most attacks and its arrows carry the characteristics of Amaterasu flames. The wide spread Amaterasu projectile attack used from his palm counts as a move and can only be done twice, being Long-Range and equal to S-Rank.
    Note: With Susano active the user is only able to use two other techniques per turn due to the extreme chakra consumption and can't make clones of any kind.
    Note: User can manifest it partially (an Arm, or a leg, only the ribcage, etc) 4 times per battle, with each partial manifestation lasting only a moment and having an A-Rank defensive/offensive power.
    Note: Can only be used once and last for a maximum of 6 turns after which the user will be left blind in both eyes and extremely exhausted if he hasn't attained EMS. If he has not only can he use Susano twice but he'll feel no ill effect from it while, upon deactivation, he'll only need to wait 2 turns to activate his EMS again and 3 turns to use Susano again.



    "You're not the only one with tricks up their sleeves, Tschukage...you think that's the limit of my power?"

    As the limb appears under Sasuke, he uses his a means of a catapult, using it to launch himself in the air towards Onoki's left, twisting as he moves, allowing the Dust technique to pass under and to the right of his Susano'o's leg as he moves in an arc. As he moves, Sasuke, keeping his eyes towards Onoki, closes his left eye and then reopens it with haste, creating a large gathering of inextinguishable dark flames to appear upon Onoki's chest and quickly spread over his body, burning him greatly.


    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage Points: 120 (-30 to the user)
    Descripton:
    One of the basic techniques awoken with MS, Amaterasu is the ability to ignite the undying black flames. The jet-black flames of the Amaterasu, said to be the fires from hell that are as hot as the sun, ignite at the focus of the user's vision. This dispiction is somewhat linked to the fact that, because of the damage produced in ones eyes, as the user closes his eyes and prepares to use Amaterasu, tears of blood flow through his face. The black flames lack momentum and impact (being unable to break through strong solid inert defenses) but have a very high parasitic ability, spreading through anything that comes in contact with them and consuming with enormous ease, any type of fire. Though the flames have been stated to be unavoidable (since they are not a projectile but "happen" on focal point), this has been proven as false. While quite hard to avoid, its been proven that ninjas with enhanced speed and reactions (such as Third and Fourth Raikage in Lightning Armor) when facing the user can move out of the focal point before the flames actually ignite. This is related to the somewhat slow ignition and burn of the flames. While they burn for 7 days, can't be doused and are hard to avoid, they spread and burn through the target slowly. Also, its been noticed that Dojutsu users (3 Tomoe Sharingan, Rinnegan, Byakugan) and skilled chakra sensors can see/feel the overflow and increasing chakra pressure in the eye, right before Amaterasu is used, but that in itself is not enough to dodge or block it, as target would need to move faster than the user can focus his eye on it. Another thing that has been shown capable of blocking Amaterasu are "sentient" automated defenses, like Gaara's sand shield. By coming between the user and his target, a fast enough defense can block the intended focal point (the enemy) and defend him from the black flames, as long as its tangible and completely blocks the users line of sight.
    Note: Requires the user to have his MS active
    Note: Can only be used 4 times and reduces MS duration by 2 turns each use
    Note: Cannot be dodged unless the user has an ability that fits the ones described
    Note: If hit, enemy has 1 turn before losing conscious and eventually being completely consumed, during which he experiences excruciating pain and damage.



    As the flames rage, Sasuke then lands, fatigue beginning to kick in, and pushes himself backwards, looking at Onoki as he lands mid range from the burning corpse. Raising his head towards the sky, Sasuke looks back at Onoki, his face determined: he was going to eradicate this man from the world. Making a single handseal, Sasuke begins releasing several ( 4 )dragon heads at Onoki before releasing 4 towards the roof above Onoki's head, with the intent of bursting through the roof and heating up the atmosphere as they burst through and continue upwards.


    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.



    "Today...you die..."
     
         
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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Madāra Uchiha View Post
    As Onoki jumped backwards, Sasuke released his Katon jutsu, aimed to do damage on contact with Onoki. As the stream is released, Sasuke sees Onoki weaving handseals and bringing them together, creating a small orb within his hand, surrounded by a transparent cylinder. Never seeing an elemental affinity like this, Sasuke swiftly uses his Mangekyo Sharingan to make manifest a limb of the godly protection he had, Susanoo. As the small construct is created within Onoki's hands, Sasuke uses his ocular prowess to manifest a smaller but quicker form of the Godly protection that masters of his clan utilized, Susano'o.


    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 120 (-30 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (-20 to user per turn)
    Description:
    Susanoo, also known as the Tempestuous God of Valor, or literally "He with the ability to help by all means", is the third ability granted by the Mangekyō Sharingan to those who awaken the abilities: Tsukuyomi — which symbolises the "darkness of the spiritual world" and Amaterasu — which denotes the "light of the material world". It creates a gigantic, humanoid, ethereal warrior that surrounds the user. Even though it envelopes the user, they can move around within Susanoo freely, use techniques from inside of it, as well as manifest only parts of Susanoo — as the situation calls for it. Despite Susanoo's impressive defensive capabilities, the protection it grants its user is not absolute. The user can be thrown out of the upper half of Susanoo by an enemy manipulating the substance underneath Susanoo (the ground basically). Also, a sufficiently powerful attack will still result in damage, especially during the technique's initial stages. The only known ways to attack the user while Susanoo is active is either to draw the wielder out of the technique and then attack, bind and restrict its movements, or to break the defence with overwhelming force. Susanoo users are also vulnerable to attacks which don't actually deal physical damage to it, such as strong lights and sounds, that can also impair their ability to sustain Susanoo. Normal and Sound-based genjutsu can also bypass Susanoo's impressive defense. Sasuke's Susanoo possesses a sword and a bow that doubles as a weapon and shield. It is able to produce chakra arrows to use with the bow via an orb held by a third hand, which can be fired at such a speed that evading them is nearly impossible. It can also use the arrows as a makeshift melee weapon. Sasuke is able to switch between his Susanoo's various weapons regardless of which stage it is in. In both its incomplete and complete forms, it has a more demonic appearance in contrast to Itachi's, which have a more "normal" human-like appearance, possessing horns and a malevolent grin. In its final form, it also possesses jagged teeth around its hood and magatama earrings. In addition to its secondary right hand, Sasuke's Susanoo has been depicted with a secondary left hand as well, a trait similar to all Susano known so far that have been shown to have 4 arms. After Sasuke gains the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, the second layer of armour changes its appearance. The orb is now made entirely of the flames of Amaterasu and the arrows are passively coated in the black flames. Sasuke can also throw the flames in a tomoe shape, using a wide spread attack from his own palm setting his foes on fire, similar to a Magatama attack but with the characterisitics of Amaterasu.
    Note: Can only be used by Sasuke Uchiha and must have MS/EMS
    Note: While active user can't use Eye Techniques except for Amaterasu and those pertaining to Susanoo.
    Note: Takes 1 full turn to stabilize into the full final form, during which his body bestows only a B-Rank defense.
    Note: The body of Susanoo grants an A-Rank defense against most elemental attacks, specially tangible ones.
    Note: The warrior can shoot up to 2 arrows per turn, counting as a move (regardless of shooting one or 2) and having a strength of an S-Rank long range attack each.
    Note: When the user has gained EMS, the warrior bestows an S-Rank defense when in complete form to most attacks and its arrows carry the characteristics of Amaterasu flames. The wide spread Amaterasu projectile attack used from his palm counts as a move and can only be done twice, being Long-Range and equal to S-Rank.
    Note: With Susano active the user is only able to use two other techniques per turn due to the extreme chakra consumption and can't make clones of any kind.
    Note: User can manifest it partially (an Arm, or a leg, only the ribcage, etc) 4 times per battle, with each partial manifestation lasting only a moment and having an A-Rank defensive/offensive power.
    Note: Can only be used once and last for a maximum of 6 turns after which the user will be left blind in both eyes and extremely exhausted if he hasn't attained EMS. If he has not only can he use Susano twice but he'll feel no ill effect from it while, upon deactivation, he'll only need to wait 2 turns to activate his EMS again and 3 turns to use Susano again.



    "You're not the only one with tricks up their sleeves, Tschukage...you think that's the limit of my power?"

    As the limb appears under Sasuke, he uses his a means of a catapult, using it to launch himself in the air towards Onoki's left, twisting as he moves, allowing the Dust technique to pass under and to the right of his Susano'o's leg as he moves in an arc. As he moves, Sasuke, keeping his eyes towards Onoki, closes his left eye and then reopens it with haste, creating a large gathering of inextinguishable dark flames to appear upon Onoki's chest and quickly spread over his body, burning him greatly.


    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage Points: 120 (-30 to the user)
    Descripton:
    One of the basic techniques awoken with MS, Amaterasu is the ability to ignite the undying black flames. The jet-black flames of the Amaterasu, said to be the fires from hell that are as hot as the sun, ignite at the focus of the user's vision. This dispiction is somewhat linked to the fact that, because of the damage produced in ones eyes, as the user closes his eyes and prepares to use Amaterasu, tears of blood flow through his face. The black flames lack momentum and impact (being unable to break through strong solid inert defenses) but have a very high parasitic ability, spreading through anything that comes in contact with them and consuming with enormous ease, any type of fire. Though the flames have been stated to be unavoidable (since they are not a projectile but "happen" on focal point), this has been proven as false. While quite hard to avoid, its been proven that ninjas with enhanced speed and reactions (such as Third and Fourth Raikage in Lightning Armor) when facing the user can move out of the focal point before the flames actually ignite. This is related to the somewhat slow ignition and burn of the flames. While they burn for 7 days, can't be doused and are hard to avoid, they spread and burn through the target slowly. Also, its been noticed that Dojutsu users (3 Tomoe Sharingan, Rinnegan, Byakugan) and skilled chakra sensors can see/feel the overflow and increasing chakra pressure in the eye, right before Amaterasu is used, but that in itself is not enough to dodge or block it, as target would need to move faster than the user can focus his eye on it. Another thing that has been shown capable of blocking Amaterasu are "sentient" automated defenses, like Gaara's sand shield. By coming between the user and his target, a fast enough defense can block the intended focal point (the enemy) and defend him from the black flames, as long as its tangible and completely blocks the users line of sight.
    Note: Requires the user to have his MS active
    Note: Can only be used 4 times and reduces MS duration by 2 turns each use
    Note: Cannot be dodged unless the user has an ability that fits the ones described
    Note: If hit, enemy has 1 turn before losing conscious and eventually being completely consumed, during which he experiences excruciating pain and damage.



    As the flames rage, Sasuke then lands, fatigue beginning to kick in, and pushes himself backwards, looking at Onoki as he lands mid range from the burning corpse. Raising his head towards the sky, Sasuke looks back at Onoki, his face determined: he was going to eradicate this man from the world. Making a single handseal, Sasuke begins releasing several ( 4 )dragon heads at Onoki before releasing 4 towards the roof above Onoki's head, with the intent of bursting through the roof and heating up the atmosphere as they burst through and continue upwards.


    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.



    "Today...you die..."
    Onoki watches as a sudden, strange being surrounds his opponent and allows him to escape the confines of his dust technique. Thinking to gain the numbers advantage against his opponent's raw power, Onoki decides to make a set of clones once Sasuke begins his evasion. Onoki brings his hands together for a hand seal as Sasuke begins to close his eye. Granite is made in front of him, Stone to his left, and Marble to his right. Almost simultaneous to when Granite is created, he suddenly catches fire from black flames. He drops to the ground writhing in pain before crumbling apart into a small mud pool as the remaining clones land on the ground.

    (Doton: KageBunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique creates a shadow clone made of mud of the user. Since its made of mud, it can continue to reform and mould itself back to its original shape. After reverting to mud, it can hold the opponent in place. The user can create upto three clones. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.


    Onoki: Your doujutsu.. a hassle to deal with for sure.

    Once you leap backwards and then release the fireballs, Onoki and his clones go into action. Onoki slaps his hands onto the pillar he rests on, causing a large section of the roof to extend downwards at a forty-five degree angle in the shape of a square pillar. He uses as a battering ram to deflect all the fireballs harmlessly away, while continuing its extension in order to smash into you at incredible speeds. At the same time, Stone, focuses his chakra into the ground, creating a localized tremor underneath yourself. This sudden shake throws you off balance and onto your back, allowing the high speed pillar to crush you from above. Additionally, Granite rushes towards you at this time, in line with Stone behind him, throwing several explosively tagged kunai set to detonate on contact with yourself.

    (Doton: Daichidōkaku) - Earth Release: Great Moving Earth Core
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to freely lower or raise the terrain within a specific area surrounding them, in a similar manner to its parent technique, albeit on a much larger scale. The user can lower or raise the ground up to 100 meters in a large section. The rise will be fast enough to pin enemies to the ground, restricting their movements as they struggle to get up and the drop will be fast enough to leave almost all enemies without a footing (albeit not airborne). Because of the large chakra needed to alter such a large area of the terrain, the user will be able to use it only a limited number of times.
    Note: Can only be used twice.


    (Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Ancalagon View Post
    Onoki watches as a sudden, strange being surrounds his opponent and allows him to escape the confines of his dust technique. Thinking to gain the numbers advantage against his opponent's raw power, Onoki decides to make a set of clones once Sasuke begins his evasion. Onoki brings his hands together for a hand seal as Sasuke begins to close his eye. Granite is made in front of him, Stone to his left, and Marble to his right. Almost simultaneous to when Granite is created, he suddenly catches fire from black flames. He drops to the ground writhing in pain before crumbling apart into a small mud pool as the remaining clones land on the ground.

    (Doton: KageBunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique creates a shadow clone made of mud of the user. Since its made of mud, it can continue to reform and mould itself back to its original shape. After reverting to mud, it can hold the opponent in place. The user can create upto three clones. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.


    Onoki: Your doujutsu.. a hassle to deal with for sure.

    Once you leap backwards and then release the fireballs, Onoki and his clones go into action. Onoki slaps his hands onto the pillar he rests on, causing a large section of the roof to extend downwards at a forty-five degree angle in the shape of a square pillar. He uses as a battering ram to deflect all the fireballs harmlessly away, while continuing its extension in order to smash into you at incredible speeds. At the same time, Stone, focuses his chakra into the ground, creating a localized tremor underneath yourself. This sudden shake throws you off balance and onto your back, allowing the high speed pillar to crush you from above. Additionally, Granite rushes towards you at this time, in line with Stone behind him, throwing several explosively tagged kunai set to detonate on contact with yourself.

    (Doton: Daichidōkaku) - Earth Release: Great Moving Earth Core
    Rank: S
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to freely lower or raise the terrain within a specific area surrounding them, in a similar manner to its parent technique, albeit on a much larger scale. The user can lower or raise the ground up to 100 meters in a large section. The rise will be fast enough to pin enemies to the ground, restricting their movements as they struggle to get up and the drop will be fast enough to leave almost all enemies without a footing (albeit not airborne). Because of the large chakra needed to alter such a large area of the terrain, the user will be able to use it only a limited number of times.
    Note: Can only be used twice.



    (Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

    As Sasuke falls backwards due to the earth shaking, he hits the ground, landing on his back and notes the ceiling coming down towards him at an accelerated rate. Lowering his eyes and glaring, he raises his left hand to his blood streaked eye as he lifts his head slightly to see Onoki and his clones. Gathering Raiton chakra as he does so, Sasuke releases a powerful omnidirectional from his right hand, which he raises towards the fast incoming earth, destroying the earth coming towards him as well as sending a powerful current through the explosive tags, causing them to detonate prematurely.


    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.



    "...don't understimate the power of my Sharingan. It's the true determinant of whether you die soon or brutally!"

    As Sasuke utters the last word, he performs a kipup, allowing his susanoo to begin to manifest itself once, this time the full incomplete version appears. As the sinister chakra around him forms into the Susanoo, Sasuke lands and pushes off towards his enemy, closing his right eye, a fresh stream of blood appearing as he reopens it and manipulates the already present Amaterasu flames on the earth by Onoki and his clones and wills it towards them, stretching and enlarging it tremendously, causing it to take on the shape of a Tomoe that covers the entire short range of his enemies, striking them all with great speed and burning them viciously as Sasuke rushes forward.



    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 120 (-30 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (-20 to user per turn)
    Description:
    Susanoo, also known as the Tempestuous God of Valor, or literally "He with the ability to help by all means", is the third ability granted by the Mangekyō Sharingan to those who awaken the abilities: Tsukuyomi — which symbolises the "darkness of the spiritual world" and Amaterasu — which denotes the "light of the material world". It creates a gigantic, humanoid, ethereal warrior that surrounds the user. Even though it envelopes the user, they can move around within Susanoo freely, use techniques from inside of it, as well as manifest only parts of Susanoo — as the situation calls for it. Despite Susanoo's impressive defensive capabilities, the protection it grants its user is not absolute. The user can be thrown out of the upper half of Susanoo by an enemy manipulating the substance underneath Susanoo (the ground basically). Also, a sufficiently powerful attack will still result in damage, especially during the technique's initial stages. The only known ways to attack the user while Susanoo is active is either to draw the wielder out of the technique and then attack, bind and restrict its movements, or to break the defence with overwhelming force. Susanoo users are also vulnerable to attacks which don't actually deal physical damage to it, such as strong lights and sounds, that can also impair their ability to sustain Susanoo. Normal and Sound-based genjutsu can also bypass Susanoo's impressive defense. Sasuke's Susanoo possesses a sword and a bow that doubles as a weapon and shield. It is able to produce chakra arrows to use with the bow via an orb held by a third hand, which can be fired at such a speed that evading them is nearly impossible. It can also use the arrows as a makeshift melee weapon. Sasuke is able to switch between his Susanoo's various weapons regardless of which stage it is in. In both its incomplete and complete forms, it has a more demonic appearance in contrast to Itachi's, which have a more "normal" human-like appearance, possessing horns and a malevolent grin. In its final form, it also possesses jagged teeth around its hood and magatama earrings. In addition to its secondary right hand, Sasuke's Susanoo has been depicted with a secondary left hand as well, a trait similar to all Susano known so far that have been shown to have 4 arms. After Sasuke gains the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, the second layer of armour changes its appearance. The orb is now made entirely of the flames of Amaterasu and the arrows are passively coated in the black flames. Sasuke can also throw the flames in a tomoe shape, using a wide spread attack from his own palm setting his foes on fire, similar to a Magatama attack but with the characterisitics of Amaterasu.
    Note: Can only be used by Sasuke Uchiha and must have MS/EMS
    Note: While active user can't use Eye Techniques except for Amaterasu and those pertaining to Susanoo.
    Note: Takes 1 full turn to stabilize into the full final form, during which his body bestows only a B-Rank defense.
    Note: The body of Susanoo grants an A-Rank defense against most elemental attacks, specially tangible ones.
    Note: The warrior can shoot up to 2 arrows per turn, counting as a move (regardless of shooting one or 2) and having a strength of an S-Rank long range attack each.
    Note: When the user has gained EMS, the warrior bestows an S-Rank defense when in complete form to most attacks and its arrows carry the characteristics of Amaterasu flames. The wide spread Amaterasu projectile attack used from his palm counts as a move and can only be done twice, being Long-Range and equal to S-Rank.
    Note: With Susano active the user is only able to use two other techniques per turn due to the extreme chakra consumption and can't make clones of any kind.
    Note: User can manifest it partially (an Arm, or a leg, only the ribcage, etc) 4 times per battle, with each partial manifestation lasting only a moment and having an A-Rank defensive/offensive power.
    Note: Can only be used once and last for a maximum of 6 turns after which the user will be left blind in both eyes and extremely exhausted if he hasn't attained EMS. If he has not only can he use Susano twice but he'll feel no ill effect from it while, upon deactivation, he'll only need to wait 2 turns to activate his EMS again and 3 turns to use Susano again.




    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage: N/A (-20 to the user)
    Description:
    Sasuke Uchiha uses this technique to apply Shape Transformation to the inextinguishable black flames of Amaterasu manipulating them at will. With it he can create a barrier that not only shields him, but also burns and pierces any opponent that touches the flames. The technique can also be used in conjunction with his Susanoo, and its weaponry. While Amaterasu is cast from Sasuke's left eye, he uses his right eye to manipulate the flames and, as such, wield this technique. However, the manipulation can only be done to flames in short range of him and can't create them. This said, the flames manipulated by this technique can be stretched, enhanced, spread or even enlarged to any desired effect. The flames will not gain any additional property, lacking the physical tangibility to stop physical attacks but will serve as a very effective deterrence for most enemies. The user can also use this technique to extinguish Amaterasu flames.
    Note: Can only be used by Sasuke Uchiha bios and requires the user to have his MS/EMS active.
    Note: Reduces the MS duration by 1 turn per use.
    Note: If the user has gained EMS he will take no damage from using this technique and no duration penalty.

     
         
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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Madāra Uchiha View Post
    As Sasuke falls backwards due to the earth shaking, he hits the ground, landing on his back and notes the ceiling coming down towards him at an accelerated rate. Lowering his eyes and glaring, he raises his left hand to his blood streaked eye as he lifts his head slightly to see Onoki and his clones. Gathering Raiton chakra as he does so, Sasuke releases a powerful omnidirectional from his right hand, which he raises towards the fast incoming earth, destroying the earth coming towards him as well as sending a powerful current through the explosive tags, causing them to detonate prematurely.


    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.



    "...don't understimate the power of my Sharingan. It's the true determinant of whether you die soon or brutally!"

    As Sasuke utters the last word, he performs a kipup, allowing his susanoo to begin to manifest itself once, this time the full incomplete version appears. As the sinister chakra around him forms into the Susanoo, Sasuke lands and pushes off towards his enemy, closing his right eye, a fresh stream of blood appearing as he reopens it and manipulates the already present Amaterasu flames on the earth by Onoki and his clones and wills it towards them, stretching and enlarging it tremendously, causing it to take on the shape of a Tomoe that covers the entire short range of his enemies, striking them all with great speed and burning them viciously as Sasuke rushes forward.



    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 120 (-30 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (-20 to user per turn)
    Description:
    Susanoo, also known as the Tempestuous God of Valor, or literally "He with the ability to help by all means", is the third ability granted by the Mangekyō Sharingan to those who awaken the abilities: Tsukuyomi — which symbolises the "darkness of the spiritual world" and Amaterasu — which denotes the "light of the material world". It creates a gigantic, humanoid, ethereal warrior that surrounds the user. Even though it envelopes the user, they can move around within Susanoo freely, use techniques from inside of it, as well as manifest only parts of Susanoo — as the situation calls for it. Despite Susanoo's impressive defensive capabilities, the protection it grants its user is not absolute. The user can be thrown out of the upper half of Susanoo by an enemy manipulating the substance underneath Susanoo (the ground basically). Also, a sufficiently powerful attack will still result in damage, especially during the technique's initial stages. The only known ways to attack the user while Susanoo is active is either to draw the wielder out of the technique and then attack, bind and restrict its movements, or to break the defence with overwhelming force. Susanoo users are also vulnerable to attacks which don't actually deal physical damage to it, such as strong lights and sounds, that can also impair their ability to sustain Susanoo. Normal and Sound-based genjutsu can also bypass Susanoo's impressive defense. Sasuke's Susanoo possesses a sword and a bow that doubles as a weapon and shield. It is able to produce chakra arrows to use with the bow via an orb held by a third hand, which can be fired at such a speed that evading them is nearly impossible. It can also use the arrows as a makeshift melee weapon. Sasuke is able to switch between his Susanoo's various weapons regardless of which stage it is in. In both its incomplete and complete forms, it has a more demonic appearance in contrast to Itachi's, which have a more "normal" human-like appearance, possessing horns and a malevolent grin. In its final form, it also possesses jagged teeth around its hood and magatama earrings. In addition to its secondary right hand, Sasuke's Susanoo has been depicted with a secondary left hand as well, a trait similar to all Susano known so far that have been shown to have 4 arms. After Sasuke gains the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, the second layer of armour changes its appearance. The orb is now made entirely of the flames of Amaterasu and the arrows are passively coated in the black flames. Sasuke can also throw the flames in a tomoe shape, using a wide spread attack from his own palm setting his foes on fire, similar to a Magatama attack but with the characterisitics of Amaterasu.
    Note: Can only be used by Sasuke Uchiha and must have MS/EMS
    Note: While active user can't use Eye Techniques except for Amaterasu and those pertaining to Susanoo.
    Note: Takes 1 full turn to stabilize into the full final form, during which his body bestows only a B-Rank defense.
    Note: The body of Susanoo grants an A-Rank defense against most elemental attacks, specially tangible ones.
    Note: The warrior can shoot up to 2 arrows per turn, counting as a move (regardless of shooting one or 2) and having a strength of an S-Rank long range attack each.
    Note: When the user has gained EMS, the warrior bestows an S-Rank defense when in complete form to most attacks and its arrows carry the characteristics of Amaterasu flames. The wide spread Amaterasu projectile attack used from his palm counts as a move and can only be done twice, being Long-Range and equal to S-Rank.
    Note: With Susano active the user is only able to use two other techniques per turn due to the extreme chakra consumption and can't make clones of any kind.
    Note: User can manifest it partially (an Arm, or a leg, only the ribcage, etc) 4 times per battle, with each partial manifestation lasting only a moment and having an A-Rank defensive/offensive power.
    Note: Can only be used once and last for a maximum of 6 turns after which the user will be left blind in both eyes and extremely exhausted if he hasn't attained EMS. If he has not only can he use Susano twice but he'll feel no ill effect from it while, upon deactivation, he'll only need to wait 2 turns to activate his EMS again and 3 turns to use Susano again.




    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage: N/A (-20 to the user)
    Description:
    Sasuke Uchiha uses this technique to apply Shape Transformation to the inextinguishable black flames of Amaterasu manipulating them at will. With it he can create a barrier that not only shields him, but also burns and pierces any opponent that touches the flames. The technique can also be used in conjunction with his Susanoo, and its weaponry. While Amaterasu is cast from Sasuke's left eye, he uses his right eye to manipulate the flames and, as such, wield this technique. However, the manipulation can only be done to flames in short range of him and can't create them. This said, the flames manipulated by this technique can be stretched, enhanced, spread or even enlarged to any desired effect. The flames will not gain any additional property, lacking the physical tangibility to stop physical attacks but will serve as a very effective deterrence for most enemies. The user can also use this technique to extinguish Amaterasu flames.
    Note: Can only be used by Sasuke Uchiha bios and requires the user to have his MS/EMS active.
    Note: Reduces the MS duration by 1 turn per use.
    Note: If the user has gained EMS he will take no damage from using this technique and no duration penalty.

    Once the lightning is released is makes its way towards him on the pillar, Onoki chooses his moment carefully. As soon as he sees a space within the lightning tendrils, he blasts off of his pillar, flying towards you. He spins as he flies, bob and weaving between the lightning tendrils. Sadly, his clones perish in the onslaught. However, they had served their purpose.

    (Furaito no Jutsu) - Flight Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+15 per turn to maintain)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to fly. Onoki is able to transfer this technique to others through physical contact with them for an unspecified amount of time. The Transfer of flight can only last one turn.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki and Mu


    As Onoki is descending towards you from above, he watches Susano'o manifest itself around your body. In response, he performs a single seal, manifesting a thick layer of rock over his right arm. (You of course could continue the manipulation of the Amaterasu, to serve no real purpose) Onoki flies in a corkscrew pattern, reaching Sasuke in no time. He cocks his arm back, striking the Susano'o from slightly above where both the clavicles meet in the center, at the very base of its throat. A split-second before the punch makes contact, Onoki increases the weight of the earthen arm x100. This makes the overall attack at about an S-ranks worth of power, completely obliterating your Susano's defense, and continuing through to Sasuke's skull.

    Onoki: I dont have too many options now.. I'm gunna have to come right at him and smash him to pieces!!

    (Doton: Kengan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: After performing the snake → Seal of Confrontation and then by encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power through the Earth Release: Added Weight Technique or the Earth Release: Super Added Weight Technique.


    (Doton: Chō Kajūgan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Super Added Weight Rock Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (up to +40 if used to add damage)
    Description: A more advanced version of the Earth Release: Added Weight Rock Technique, in which the user drastically increases the weight of any object in direct physical contact, but to a much greater extent than that of the original ability. This technique can increase the weight of a target up to 100 times. Under certain circumstances, the technique can be used to increase the force behind attacks.
    Note: The weight change lasts 2 turns or until countered.
     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Ancalagon View Post
    Once the lightning is released is makes its way towards him on the pillar, Onoki chooses his moment carefully. As soon as he sees a space within the lightning tendrils, he blasts off of his pillar, flying towards you. He spins as he flies, bob and weaving between the lightning tendrils. Sadly, his clones perish in the onslaught. However, they had served their purpose.

    (Furaito no Jutsu) - Flight Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (+15 per turn to maintain)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique grants the user the ability to fly. Onoki is able to transfer this technique to others through physical contact with them for an unspecified amount of time. The Transfer of flight can only last one turn.
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki and Mu


    As Onoki is descending towards you from above, he watches Susano'o manifest itself around your body. In response, he performs a single seal, manifesting a thick layer of rock over his right arm. (You of course could continue the manipulation of the Amaterasu, to serve no real purpose) Onoki flies in a corkscrew pattern, reaching Sasuke in no time. He cocks his arm back, striking the Susano'o from slightly above where both the clavicles meet in the center, at the very base of its throat. A split-second before the punch makes contact, Onoki increases the weight of the earthen arm x100. This makes the overall attack at about an S-ranks worth of power, completely obliterating your Susano's defense, and continuing through to Sasuke's skull.

    Onoki: I dont have too many options now.. I'm gunna have to come right at him and smash him to pieces!!

    (Doton: Kengan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: After performing the snake → Seal of Confrontation and then by encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power through the Earth Release: Added Weight Technique or the Earth Release: Super Added Weight Technique.


    (Doton: Chō Kajūgan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Super Added Weight Rock Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (up to +40 if used to add damage)
    Description: A more advanced version of the Earth Release: Added Weight Rock Technique, in which the user drastically increases the weight of any object in direct physical contact, but to a much greater extent than that of the original ability. This technique can increase the weight of a target up to 100 times. Under certain circumstances, the technique can be used to increase the force behind attacks.
    Note: The weight change lasts 2 turns or until countered.
    The susanoo fully formed, Sasuke rushed towards Onoki, who had started rushing towards him as well. His MS observing him, he opted out of using the Amaterasu as he Susanoo drew an arm across the chest, the right upper arm, while holding the bow it possessed. As Sasuke rushed, his Mangekyou in his eye noted Onoki's chakra becoming denser and thicker, suggesting an earthen type of chakra. The arm swiftly swings outwards, striking Onoki with great force, and sending him flying to Sasuke's right (Onoki's left). As he flies backwards and the Susanoo's hand is still outstretched, the lower left hand moves towards the bow and draws back, creating two arrows that are released with blinding speed, piercing Onoki's body with such precision that it causes him to fly backwards as it happens.

    Meanwhile, as the arm begins to draw backwards, Sasuke raises his hands and forms a single seal, and releases a narrow compressed torrent of fire, causing it to expand as it reaches the short range perimeter of Onoki, widening out to engulf his entire body and short range with deadly flames. The flames are released just after the bow strikes Onoki and sends him flying to the side and just prior to the arrows being shot off.


    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user does one handseal and inhales while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth. The user has control over the concentration of the technique, being able to produce a narrow jet of flames, highly concentrated or one that will widen along its range. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time.



    ""I don't look to the future any more. Only the past. And my ancestor's already shown you how far beneath of you were..If you think I'm just a foolish kid ruled by his emotions, that's fine. Following Itachi's path would be childish, the whispering of fools who don't know hatred. If anyone else tries to ridicule the way I live, I'll slaughter everyone they ever cared about. And then maybe they'll understand what it's like to taste… a little of my hatred."
     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Quote Originally Posted by Madāra Uchiha View Post
    The susanoo fully formed, Sasuke rushed towards Onoki, who had started rushing towards him as well. His MS observing him, he opted out of using the Amaterasu as he Susanoo drew an arm across the chest, the right upper arm, while holding the bow it possessed. As Sasuke rushed, his Mangekyou in his eye noted Onoki's chakra becoming denser and thicker, suggesting an earthen type of chakra. The arm swiftly swings outwards, striking Onoki with great force, and sending him flying to Sasuke's right (Onoki's left). As he flies backwards and the Susanoo's hand is still outstretched, the lower left hand moves towards the bow and draws back, creating two arrows that are released with blinding speed, piercing Onoki's body with such precision that it causes him to fly backwards as it happens.

    Meanwhile, as the arm begins to draw backwards, Sasuke raises his hands and forms a single seal, and releases a narrow compressed torrent of fire, causing it to expand as it reaches the short range perimeter of Onoki, widening out to engulf his entire body and short range with deadly flames. The flames are released just after the bow strikes Onoki and sends him flying to the side and just prior to the arrows being shot off.


    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user does one handseal and inhales while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth. The user has control over the concentration of the technique, being able to produce a narrow jet of flames, highly concentrated or one that will widen along its range. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time.



    ""I don't look to the future any more. Only the past. And my ancestor's already shown you how far beneath of you were..If you think I'm just a foolish kid ruled by his emotions, that's fine. Following Itachi's path would be childish, the whispering of fools who don't know hatred. If anyone else tries to ridicule the way I live, I'll slaughter everyone they ever cared about. And then maybe they'll understand what it's like to taste… a little of my hatred."
    As Onoki hurtles toward Susano'o utilizing his corkscrew motion, he views its arm raising into the air and coming towards his body. When this happens, he releases the rock fist from his arm, while touching his chest to lighten his body considerably. His lightened weight allows him to pick up even more flight speed, which mutates his corkscrew motion, which creates a wider and less controlled motion. The sudden alteration of his path allows him to just evade Susanoo's incoming strike by widening his path of travel at the bottom of his corkscrew motion, placing him near Susano'o.

    (Doton: Keijūgan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Light Weight Rock Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A (up to -20 if used to boost speed of a physical attack)
    Description: Contrary to its counterpart (the Earth Release: Added-Weight Rock Technique), instead of making the target heavier, this technique makes it much lighter, though still using the same principle and mechanics. The user will make direct contact with the given target (through his hands), infusing them with earth chakra and lowering their weight drastically. The technique can lower a targets weight up to 10 times less than it originally had. This allows freer manipulation of the affected objects, which would normally carry considerably more weight and as such, require a greater amount of exertion to move. The technique can be used on the user or other shinobi to increase their speed, but as a consequence of using it this way, it results in the decrease of the physical force of their blows. The same principle applies if used on a physical attack wich will be faster but will carry less momentum and as such, less physical damage. It doesn't change the "strength" of binding techniques (like Sand Release), where the user is manipulating a dynamic element but will decrease the impact damage of techniques that rely on it.
    Note: The initial effects last for 2 turns or until countered.


    Onoki straightens his path afterwords (non-corkscrew), flying downwards and underneath the extended arm of Susano'o as he releases quick bursts of earth chakra from his mouth. He spins/tilts his head as he releases the large quantities of mud bullets. This is order to have the mud strike against Susanoo's eyes and the eye-level region of Sasuke. The mud splatters against its body, blinding both. Onoki finishes releasing the mud, taking a hard path upwards after flying past Susano'o, making an almost "V" flight pattern. Onoki accelerates upwards while performing hand seals, reaching the position at Susanoo's neckline. When he reaches that position he forms a cube of dust within his hand, and drops it down onto the pair, trapping them within the confines of the cube. Onoki continues rocketing upwards and back in order to escape its area of effect, and proceeds to implode the cube.

    Onoki: The past.. full of mistakes, death, and disappoint!! You must only glance at the past, but focus on the future on learn! That is where the dreams and hopes of shinobi lie. That is what is most important!!

    (Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage point: 40
    Description: This jutsu is basically a widespread version of the Mudshot Technique; allowing the user to fire at multiple targets.


    ( Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu: Chokuhōtai Gata ) - Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive World Technique: Cuboid Form
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will first perform the Rat → Boar → Snake hand seals and then using their dust release to create a structure, with a sphere located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. The sphere then seems to explode with a tremendous amount of force, while the exterior walls of the structure effectively restrict the size of the blast radius, resulting in the destruction of everything and anyone caught within as they are pulverised into minute particles of dust. The resulting damage that this technique can produce varies considerably, depending on the initial shape of the created structure. In this form the user creates the cuboid shape thats equal to 15 meters squared covering the area mid range in front of him. (The release of the technique is short range but the blast radius is mid range)
    Note: Can only be used by Onoki or Muu.

     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Test Closed

     
         

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    Re: [Onoki Test] - Ancalagon

    Test Failed

    Ok, the reason you are failing is the misuse of two techniques, one of which is a technique crucial to the character you are testing for:

    On post #4 your counter to the gen is okaish and all but your counter to the lightning is really lacking. He sends lightning cursing through the ground and you respond by releasing a wave of wind into the air towards your enemy. Now, for me that doesn't work. The lightning is coursing through the ground and won't clash with the wind. The wind will pass by it in the atmosphere and the lightning will still course trhough the ground towards you. A good counter would have been the flight technique. Simple, efficient and within the characters abilities.

    On post #6 however is my biggest problem. You do 2 techniques at the same time. You make your golem and move it while making earth spikes on your opponents position. You cannot do 2 techniques at once like that. To make the spikes you need to stop focusing chakra into the golem which will stop its movement. Saying that both things happen at once is wrong and cannot be let pass because its one of the characters trademark techniques and elements. Its a common mistake many members do even when we talk about elemental stream-like attacks. What you're saying you did was the same as saying that while you are shooting Fire Majestic Anihilation, you can at the same time lower the opponents ground or raise it or wtv. You cannot do 2 things at once. To manipulate one you cannot progress to the other.

    Sorry but with these two mistakes I cannot pass you in such a high grade test. You managed to sketch from interesting moves but even if you hadn't made the mistakes, you defended a bit too much with a bio that has an element capable of obliterating an enemy easily. I don't mean to spam Dust Release but I was expecting more. Further during the test there were also some mistakes here and there but for the most part, these 2 were the ones that made me fail you. Sorry, you can retake the test in one Month if you so wish to.
     
         

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