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    NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    ( ) : Actions
    [ ] : Thoughts
    SFX : SOUND EFFECTS
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    MANGA 648 : THE LAST STAND

    NARUTO : ( a serious and refreshed look ) [ I don't wanna look back and think, "What might have been"!!! ]
    HINATA : (
    worried ) Naruto...
    (
    a screen time for Obito )
    MINATO : (
    remembers Kushina ) .....
    NARUTO : (
    jumps off ) [ And everything we've done and endured up until now... All of it.. ]
    SHINOBIS : (
    with a regained spirit ) ......
    (
    Naruto stands beside Sasuke's Susano'o in Bijuu Sage Mode )
    NARUTO : I won't let it all go to Waste!!!!
    SASUKE : (
    give a glance at Naruto ) ....
    INO : What do you mean, Sakura?!!
    CHOUJI : ?!!
    SAKURA : I'm sorry Ino, It's too late. Shikamaru...Shikamaru cannot be saved.
    (
    Konoha 11 are standing near Ino-Shika-Cho with a depressed look )
    SASUKE : Karin.
    KARIN : (
    shocked with her ears alert ) Ye...Yes Sas..Sasuke.
    SASUKE : Heal that man.
    NARUTO : Hmm?
    KARIN : Whaaaaaat?!!! (
    adjusts her glasses )
    SUIGETSU : Fuuuuuuuus!! (
    spits out water with a laugh ) Oooh... I can feel the heat here Hehehehh.
    KARIN : Shut up!! What are you saying Sasuke?
    SASUKE : He's an important guy here. Do it.
    KARIN : Ok Sasuke. Hmm (
    turns with an attitude and runs )
    SAKURA : Lady Tsunade can save him.
    KATSUYU : Lady Tsunade's almost close.
    KARIN : (
    pushes Shinobis in her way ) Hey move out of my way. ?!! ( senses the Kyuubi chakra and Naruto's chakra on the Shinobis ) [ This chakra is so...pure and strong. ]
    SFX : SLIDE!!
    (
    Karin stands near Sakura )
    KARIN : Let me see him.
    SAKURA : ?!! You're...
    KARIN : Greetings later. Heal me.
    SAKURA : (
    moves at one side ) What are you doing?
    KARIN : I'm doing this because Sasuke said. (
    checks Shikamaru's nerves ) He can still be saved. Help me while I heal him.
    SAKURA : [
    Sasuke? ] OK!! ( stands behind Karin, puts her hands on Karin's shoulder and starts her healing process )
    (
    Karin pulls the shirt, on part of her hand, back )
    INO : (
    looking at the circles on Karin's hand ) [ Ewww. gross!! ]
    KARIN : (
    moves her hand close to Shikamaru's face ) Here, bite my hand. ( moves her hand close to his mouth ) Hurry.
    (
    Shikamaru opens his mouth slowly )
    (
    The skin around his mouth is stretched to the limits )
    (
    Shikamaru's face shivers )
    (
    Karin moves her hand into his mouth )
    (
    Shikamaru closes his mouth and bites Karin's hand slowly )
    SFX : BITE
    KARIN : ....
    (
    Shikamaru slowly and steadily gains chakra from Karin and turns to healthy )
    SAKURA : ?!! [
    What is this chakra? ] ( senses Karin's chakra flowing in Shikamaru ) [ This is just like... Granny Chiyo's... ]
    (
    remembers Granny Chiyo's jutsu when she tries to transfer her life force in Sakura )
    SAKURA : [
    She can mold her life force with her chakra like that... That is why Sasuke made her his subordinate... ]
    (
    Everyone around Shikamaru are relieved )
    (
    Temari lands near Sakura )
    SFX : DIG!
    KARIN : Uh...Uhhh!!!
    SFX : THATCH!!!
    KONOHA 11 : <(O.O)> (
    shocked )
    SHIKAMARU : Ahh!! (
    shocked )
    (
    Panel shows a print of palm on Shikamaru's cheek and a shocked Shikamaru )
    KARIN : Enough already. You're healthy enough now.
    TEMARI/INO : How dare you slap him?!!!
    KARIN : Shut up!!! (
    walks away )
    SHIKAMARU : Woman, I tell you (
    sighs )
    SFX : THAK!!!
    TEMARI/INO : (
    hits on Shikamaru's head ) Shut up!!
    NARUTO : (
    enjoying the scene ) Hehe... ( turns to Sasuke ) Thanks Sasuke.
    SASUKE : ....
    NARUTO : Shikamaru!!
    SHIKAMARU : .....
    (
    A chakra hand emerges out of Ino's cloak and touches Shikamaru )
    SFX : ZMMMM!!
    SHIKAMARU : ?!!
    (
    Shikamaru is covered with the Kyuubi's cloak )
    NARUTO : Sasuke and I handle this Obito guy. You and the Alliance handle this big ass Tree. Don't die right now (
    smiles )
    SHIKAMARU : You bet!! (
    smiles ) [ Sorry Asuma Sensei... Thank You Naruto... Sasuke. ]
    NARUTO : You must be willing to say something to that guy, eh? ...Kakashi Sensei?
    SASUKE : (
    turns a little ) ....
    SAKURA : Sensei?
    SFX : TIP... TAP... TIP... TAP...
    (
    Kakashi walks in front )
    KAKASHI : You got me.
    (
    remembers )
    [
    (
    Obito warps back )
    KAKASHI :
    (
    panting ) Huff...huff..
    ( coughs out blood )
    (
    falls on knees )
    (
    lays on the ground )
    KAKASHI :
    (
    panting ) Hufff...
    ( His MS turns to three tomoe Sharingan )
    KAKASHI : (
    gets up ) I need to go back.
    ( focus on his Sharingan )
    (
    activates MS )
    KAKASHI : (
    places his hand on his eye ) Kamui!!
    ( The spiral starts to form )
    (
    The spirals stops )
    KAKASHI :
    ?!! Kamui didn't work? I must try it again. ?!! What is happening? Dammit. ( panting ) I don't have... enough chakra now.... I can't die here. ( fells unconscious )
    (
    Obito was turned to Juubi's Jinchuuriki )
    SFX : BLUP BLUP!!
    KAKASHI :
    (
    opens his eye ) ?!! This is... ( looks at his hand ) Kyuubi's chakra?
    (
    Naruto raises the Kyuubi chakra level of everyone who have a small portion of it and Minato teleports outside the barrier taking everyone present in the real world )
    (
    Obito releases the Juubi out and the Juubi turns into its final form )
    KAKASHI :
    I'll try it once more.
    SFX : ZMMMM...LAND!!

    (
    Kakashi warps back to the real world )
    KAKASHI : (
    knelt down ) ..... ( then looks up )
    (
    A huge branch of tree is about to slam the shinobis [b])
    OBITO : That's right... Just stand there... Let's all go to that carefree world..
    SFX : SLASH!!!
    (
    Sasuke cuts down the branch with Susano'o sword )
    KAKASHI :
    Sasuke?!!
    ]
    KAKASHI : It's unusual to see some old faces.
    SASUKE : .....
    NARUTO : It's a long story, Sensei.
    OBITO : So you still want to play, huh?
    (
    Panel shown Obito's looking at Naruto, Kakashi and Sasuke ferociously )
    SFX : ZUUUUFFF!!! GROW!!!
    (
    A complete Kyuubi chakra forms around BSM Naruto )
    (
    Huge branches grow out free to attack the Alliance )
    (
    Kakashi steps inside )
    NARUTO : Lets go!!
    (
    Kyuubi dashes forward holding Naruto and Kakashi inside it )
    (
    Sasuke's Susano'o dashes forward holding Juugo )
    SHIKAMARU : (
    synced with Ino's jutsu ) Let's do this. We can't let Naruto down. We have a job to complete.
    SHINOBIS : (
    raised hands ) Yeahhhhhhhh!!!!!
    HIRUZEN : We need to help them too.
    MINATO : Yes, Lord third.
    TOBIRAMA : Lets go!!
    TOBIRAMA/MINATO/HIRUZEN : ?!! (
    stopped where they were )
    OROCHIMARU : Kukukuku... Why not wait for a while? (
    hand seal position ) Let them show their worth. After all they want to live. You're the dead.
    SUIGETSU/KARIN : ....
    TOBIRAMA : Bastard.
    SFX : SLASH!!!!
    (
    Susano'o cuts another branch with its sword )
    SFX : GROW!!!! GROW!!!
    (
    The branches grows again from the cut part )
    SFX : ZMMM!!!
    (
    A black ball approaches )
    SFX : THATCH!!
    (
    The ball slams on the cut part and blasts it into pieces )
    SASUKE : ?!! (
    turns back within the susano'o )
    (
    Three black balls appraoches Susano'o from back )
    SASUKE : .... (
    again looks at front )
    (
    The balls passes from sides ahead and slams on the huge branch at the front )
    NARUTO : Mini Sage Bijuudamas!!!
    (
    The huge branch infront of Susano'o blasts into logs of wood )
    SFX : GRAB!!
    (
    Susano'o grabs one of the log and dashes forward jumping from one onto another )
    [
    KURAMA :
    Naruto!! Use Sage chakra at your feet!!
    ]
    (
    Kyuubi runs over the branches towards Obito )
    OBITO : .....
    NARUTO : Let's hit him with it once more!!!
    (
    prepares to make sage chakra mixed Bijuudama )
    OBITO : I won't let you.
    (
    Kyuubi is surrounded by branches )
    (
    Susano'o is running at the front )
    SASUKE : ....
    (
    Susano'o stops and retreat backwards )
    OBITO : ....
    (
    Susano'o opens up )
    JUUGO : ....
    NARUTO/KAKASHI : ?!!
    (
    The pieces of Susano'o sticks around Kyuubi's chakra cloak and shields from the side attacks )
    (
    Sasuke and Juugo lands on forehead of Kyuubi, outside the cloak )
    (
    Sasuke widens his EMS )
    (
    Branches attacks Susano'o cloaked Kyuubi )
    SFX : ZUUMM!!!
    (
    The whole Susano'o is covered with Amaterasu )
    SHINOBIS : (
    stunned at their positions ) After what we felt inside Naruto's heart..
    SHINOBIS : Wh... What a team spirit?
    (
    Hokages are having a smile on their faces )
    (
    Kyuubi whips its nine tails around on the branches )
    (
    The Sage chakra mixed Bijuudama is prepared )
    SFX : APPEAR!! APPEAR!! APPEAR!!
    (
    The panel zooms out )
    (
    Edo Hashirama is shown covered with black rods all over his body )
    EDO HASHIRAMA : ?!!
    EDO MADARA : (
    handseal position ) Hmm ( smirks ) Your Edo Tensei is resurrected in one of my minions. ( A badass face ) Unfortunately, I'm running low on time here...

    ( Madara activated his trump card... )
     
         
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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Beyond Amazing.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by FaHaD 5212 View Post
    Great Prediction
    Quote Originally Posted by ZeroYinDawn View Post
    Beyond Amazing.
    Thanks guys
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great prediction, though we'd be lucky if any chapter had that much content.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    amazing prediction. .
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    This was really good!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Haha the way you make Ino up here is something she would do but awesome prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    too much content......but great prediction as usual.......why no prediction last week??
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great prediction but Kakashi coming back and madara controlling Hashirama all in one chapter is all way to much. But still great read.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by skg1991 View Post
    too much content......but great prediction as usual.......why no prediction last week??
    Yes too much content (Kakashi's part was added after i read a thread about a possibility of Kakashi's arrival on the battlefield)
    Thanks for reading
    Last week I wasn't in a mood. I made my prediction on Monday night but the formatting wasn't done so I decided to upload it on Tuesday morning, but I was out for few hours and when I came back, I got a surprise chapter. So it ruined my mood but also gave me new ideas for next chapter.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Lilvic92 View Post
    Great prediction, though we'd be lucky if any chapter had that much content.
    Quote Originally Posted by kunde View Post
    amazing prediction. .
    Quote Originally Posted by lifeofsara View Post
    This was really good!
    Quote Originally Posted by inoyamanaka98 View Post
    Haha the way you make Ino up here is something she would do but awesome prediction
    Quote Originally Posted by IzAnAgI4200 View Post
    Great prediction but Kakashi coming back and madara controlling Hashirama all in one chapter is all way to much. But still great read.
    Thanks guys
    Sorry for a long chapter though (
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Very enjoyable prediction! Quite good, bro!

    I already acknowledged you as the best at making predictions but you actually manage to surprise me with this one! Loved how you put to use that Naruto/Sasuke combo, the one where Susano'o covers Kurama!

    Keep them coming! But, before I finish my comment, I must report a mistake you made in a line, no big deal, don't worry

    "Naruto: Let's hit with it once more!"

    Here you forgot the "him" right after "hit". As I said, no big deal as it doesn't even affect the reading proccess

    Overall, 5/5! xp
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Danielgf04 View Post
    Very enjoyable prediction! Quite good, bro!

    I already acknowledged you as the best at making predictions but you actually manage to surprise me with this one! Loved how you put to use that Naruto/Sasuke combo, the one where Susano'o covers Kurama!

    Keep them coming! But, before I finish my comment, I must report a mistake you made in a line, no big deal, don't worry

    "Naruto: Let's hit with it once more!"

    Here you forgot the "him" right after "hit". As I said, no big deal as it doesn't even affect the reading proccess

    Overall, 5/5! xp
    Thanks for reading as well as the correction part
    I'll edit it soon.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    your predictions never come true, why do you do this to yourself over and over again..??

     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by reizon View Post
    your predictions never come true, why do you do this to yourself over and over again..??

    Why you read then?
    Well, I like to make them. How can I stop my eagerness
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by ahhimane View Post
    Why you read then?
    Well, I like to make them. How can I stop my eagerness
    i dint read.!!

     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    great predication
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    D best as always
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 648 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    That was wickedly awesome.
     
         

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