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    Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    PAGE 1:

    Naruto: "Hey, gramps First... You sit down and relax..."
    Sasuke: "...until we're taking care of these guys!"

    BSM Naruto and Sasuke in his legged Curse Mark Complete Susanoo are shown hitting Obito who's trying to protect himself with his black orb shield.

    Editor's text: "THE CHILDREN GO FORWARD WITH A SERIOUS SPEECH!"


    PAGE 2:

    Obito: (Thinking) "What the hell... is this power?! How did they suddenly get that strong?!"
    Hashirama: "Thank you, Uzumaki Naruto, Uchiha Sasuke! You really are the main stars!"
    Tsunade: "Grandfather, granduncle, Sarutobi-sensei, Minato, you're all here!"
    Gaara: "Sasuke... In the end, you were able to see the light."

    PAGE 3:

    Naruto: "Sasuke!"
    Sasuke: "I know!"

    Two chakra arms come out, one from Naruto and one from Sasuke, as Naruto charges Cho Oodama Rasengan. Sasuke's EMS is shown, as he uses Enton: Kagutsuchi and engulfs the black flames to Naruto's Rasengan.

    PAGE 4:

    Obito: "That thing again... It's getting pretty old, don't you think?!"
    Naruto: "Just you wait... to taste it's power..."
    Sasuke: "The last time we forgot to add Senjutsu power in it... and now..."
    Naruto/Sasuke: "Senpo: Enton: Cho Oodama Kagutsuchi Rasengan!"

    PAGE 5:

    Obito: "What's going on?! How come they're so strong, damn it!!"

    Obito's black orb shield is destroyed, as the Rasengan hits Obito and sends him fly backwards, as large explosion is shown.

    PAGE 6:

    Naruto: "How do you like that, you bastard?!"
    Minato: (Thinking) "Naruto, you truly surpassed me... You and Sasuke-kun are on a completely different level... I'm proud of you!" (Smirks, with a serious look on his face)
    Hiruzen: "Good job you two!" (Smirks)
    Tobirama: "You did well, but we still have a work to do!" (Smirks)

    PAGE 7:

    Obito is shown crashed near the God Tree, as blood comes out of his mouth.

    Obito: "Urgh... I had enough of you, why this stupid tree doesn't bloom yet... Damn it!"
    Madara: "Hashirama, I'm afraid that your speech won't change the fact that you're doomed... Perhaps I should go and take the leadership again... since these brats did enough job to weaken Obito."

    PAGE 8:

    Hashirama: "Madara... You're wrong for one thing. Even if I won't be able to stop you... Until these so called "brats" are here... you won't be able to complete your plan... and achieve your dream!"

    Large panel of Naruto and Sasuke with serious faces in BSM and CMS respectively, standing side-by-side is shown.

    PAGE 9:

    Madara: "Please, Hashirama... You know me better than anyone else, do you really think that these two have the power to defeat me?"
    Hashirama: "You know nothing about them... One of them wields perfectly the Toad Sage Mode, as well as the strongest Bijuu's chakra. And the other... he has even greater potential than yours in the past!"
    Madara: "That guy? Perhaps I should give him a test..."

    PAGE 10:

    Madara creates one Wood Clone, and he sends him at the direction of Obito.

    Hashirama: "I won't let you do this, you wanted to fight me, and you will!"

    Suddenly, a Wood Dragon is shown going at the Madara clone direction, as it's cutted to pieces by four Susanoo swords.

    PAGE 11:

    Madara: "Hashirama, you were the one to cause me to test the brats... Why are you trying to stop me?"
    Hashirama: "I'm your opponent, you have to deal with me first!"
    Madara: "Don't worry, I'll just see if they really deserve your opinion on them. My clone is just a mere part of my real power, which I have in store especially for you!" (Makes an evil smirk)

    PAGE 12:

    Suigetsu: "Orochimaru-sama, should we join the party?"
    Orochimaru: "Of course, but first... there are some things we should do."

    Orochimaru claps his hands, as Minato's body starts to glow.

    Minato: "Huh, this is...?"

    PAGE 13:

    Orochimaru: "It looks like Tobi's techniques prevent the Edo Tensei from auto-regenerating, huh..."
    Minato: "Thanks for this, Orochimaru-san..." (As he's shown with regenerated right arm)
    Orochimaru: "That's not all... Karin, check out what's the situation!"
    Karin: "I'm already doing it... There are many shinobis with very low chakra level, one of them is there!" (Points at Shikamaru, Sakura and the others)

    PAGE 14:

    Orochimaru: "Go and heal him, save as many people as possible!"

    Karin is shown arriving next to Shikamaru.

    Sakura: "You're Sasuke's..."
    Karin: "Stand back pink head, let me see what I can do!"

    PAGE 15:

    Ino: "Can you save him?"
    Karin: "Yeah, I hope so... Here, bite me, we don't have much time!"

    Karin puts her hand near Shikamaru's mouth, as he slowly opens it and bites Karin. His body starts to glow, as Karin transfers him her chakra like she did with Tsunade.

    PAGE 16:

    Madara's clone arrives near Obito, as he looks down at his injured body.

    Madara's clone: "Pitiful... I should've become the Juubi's Jinchuriki!"
    Obito: "Shut up... I'm not done yet!"
    Naruto: "Madara, so you're going to help him?"
    Madara's clone: "Uzumaki Naruto... And you too, young Uchiha. It's true that Obito's and obstacle for both of us, but I'm just a clone... Enough to test your power!"

    PAGE 17:

    Sasuke: "Uchiha... Madara!"
    Madara's clone: "I heard very good things for you from Hashirama, Uchiha boy, though I already know that your partner isn't that weak. So I decided to test your strenght for myself. Now, show it to me!"

    Madara's clone enters Complete Susanoo and charges at Naruto and Sasuke's direction. Suddenly, five people jump in front of Madara, as they cross his path to the boys.

    Tsunade: "This is as far as you go!"

    PAGE 18:

    Naruto: "Granny Tsunade, Gaara, and the others, too!"
    Madara's clone: "You just don't give up, do you... I should've finished you, to make sure that you wouldn't cause such a troubles..."
    Tsunade: "Naruto... My grandfather's dream was the Five Great Nations to work together... We, the Five Kage, will protect his dream... I appoint you a new mission... to protect the world from that tree!"

    Editor's text: "THE FIVE KAGE STAND TOGETHER ONCE AGAIN, READY FOR REMATCH!"

    Chapter 649/END
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Cool prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    The dialogue is almost insultingly bad.

    "You two truly are the main stars" ? Seriously?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Haha the five kage want to get whooped again?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Quote Originally Posted by CurseSealofEarth View Post
    The dialogue is almost insultingly bad.

    "You two truly are the main stars" ? Seriously?
    http://narutobase.net/manga/mangas/N...rs!!/16-17.jpg
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Doesn't make it any less horrible.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Quote Originally Posted by CurseSealofEarth View Post
    Doesn't make it any less horrible.
    Well okay, Masashi Kishimoto used this dialogue earlier in the manga, perhaps his doing is horrible? Maybe.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Quote Originally Posted by Abdaling View Post
    Well okay, Masashi Kishimoto used this dialogue earlier in the manga, perhaps his doing is horrible? Maybe.
    Kishi is as good as M. Night Shamylan when it comes to dialogue. And when I say good, I mean shitty.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    3/5

    not grate nor bad

    i fine it kida unrealistic
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Nice try for your first time
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    awesome enjoyed it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    This was really nice!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Quote Originally Posted by manufran02 View Post
    Nice try for your first time
    , it's not my first time. I have a lot more predictions.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    I liked the ending, it was great!!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Quote Originally Posted by CurseSealofEarth View Post
    Kishi is as good as M. Night Shamylan when it comes to dialogue. And when I say good, I mean shitty.
    Well, that's your view. And yet, if I write something far, far different than Kishi's writings, it will be too far from the truth, don't you think? Shitty or not, this is Kishi's way of drawing/writing and you're a fan of his manga, whether or not. When I write predictions, I try to be as close as possible to the work of Kishimoto.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Quote Originally Posted by CurseSealofEarth View Post
    The dialogue is almost insultingly bad.

    "You two truly are the main stars" ? Seriously?
    Couldn't have said it better. And that "Senpo: Enton: Cho Oodama Kagutsuchi Rasengan!" - seriously? I can understand a stupid name, but a jutsu with both Senpo & Enton? What f*ckery is this? There's also too much talking. No need for all that "let me test your power" crap, since Madara isn't really that interested. He merely started a fight with Hashirama, I doubt he'd give a f*ck about Naruto's & Sasuke's power.

    And worst part was with Obito getting beaten up. I mean, really? He's the damn f*cking Juubi Jinchuuriki, some fools on this base also call him "Next Rikudou Sennin" and get's beaten like that? A little unrealistic. Better luck next time dude.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    Quote Originally Posted by miromiro View Post
    Couldn't have said it better. And that "Senpo: Enton: Cho Oodama Kagutsuchi Rasengan!" - seriously? I can understand a stupid name, but a jutsu with both Senpo & Enton? What f*ckery is this? There's also too much talking. No need for all that "let me test your power" crap, since Madara isn't really that interested. He merely started a fight with Hashirama, I doubt he'd give a f*ck about Naruto's & Sasuke's power.

    And worst part was with Obito getting beaten up. I mean, really? He's the damn f*cking Juubi Jinchuuriki, some fools on this base also call him "Next Rikudou Sennin" and get's beaten like that? A little unrealistic. Better luck next time dude.
    Well, thanks for the remarks, Perhaps this isn't one of my best predictions, but I still liked the idea. I mean, even if Obito is the Juubi's Jinchuriki, he has to be defeated somehow. The other option is tragedic ending, which is unlikely. And after so much power-ups for Naruto and Sasuke, and especially for Naruto, we just have to see them deal some damage on Obito. If we don't, then all this BSM and Senjutsu Susanoo things would be meaningless.

    And for the dialogue thing, I'm not going to comment anymore about it, the technique is Enton, powered by Senjutsu. Does Sage Art: Blaze Release looks better than the shorter Senpo: Enton? Anyway, everyone has a point of view...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    No worries, I appreciate the work you've put into this. Just some things that need to be fixed. Remember, in your future predictions, that Kishimoto thinks things his way. He'd never give it away like that, like all that Obito injured, Madara vs Naruto & Sasuke and also Naruto & Sasuke in the same chapter. He's always pulling shit out of his ass.

    But good work nonetheless, forgot to say!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    I found this much better than some other predictions where people are constantly saying great job. I actually didn't see any faults in this prediction. The "Main Stars" thing was actually pretty logical to me. I also believe that the final battle will be Madara and Hashi Vs Naruto and Sasuke. Good prediction nonetheless. I just wish people would be more respectful.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 649: "To Protect the Dream"

    dialogue made me want to puke, the only star i kno of is blackstar and hes the biggest star around HAHAHAHAAHAHA. thats about it tho, and ur dialogue is a little worse then kishimotos, which is alot worse than it used to be.when u are trying to emulate his writing its obviously going to be a bad prediction cus hes been garbage for the last like 6-12 months
     
         

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