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    NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

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    MANGA 649 : SHINOBI'S WILL

    HASHIRAMA : Please!! Our dear Children!! Now, bring together your pain...sufferings...discouragement...Bring them together!!
    (
    focus on Tobirama who's observing the people )
    (
    focus on the Gokages standing among the Alliance )
    HASHIRAMA : To show me... our Real Dream!!
    SHINOBI : The Kages have arrived!!
    SAKURA : Lady Tsunade!!
    DARUI : Boss!!
    KUROTSUCHI : Old Man!!
    TEMARI/KANKURO : Gaara!!
    MIST SHINOBI : Lady Mizukage!!
    SFX : SKKK!!
    (
    Madara evades the kick and retreats a little back )
    MADARA : Those brats got their ass saved. (
    smirks and apporaches Hashirama once again )
    TSUNADE : Everyone...!!
    SHINOBIS : ?!!
    TSUNADE : The Dream that First Hokage dreamed for the future of the Shinobis... IS STILL ALIVE!!!
    GAARA/A/OHNOKI/MEI : .....
    TSUNADE : It still lives on!!!
    OHNOKI : The dream of the Future hasn't yet recognized....What we did in the past...In the name of Alliance... was compete with each other to gain more power!! (
    sad face )
    (
    remembers )
    [
    OHNOKI :
    Sensei!! He has arrived!! ( searching for Muu ) Huh?!!
    ( Ohnoki listening the conversation between Muu and Tsuchikage )
    SHODAIME TSUCHIKAGE :
    Even if we have accepted the deal, we still don't know what Hashirama is planning. He's powerful enough to crush the Stone.
    MUU : But Lord Tsuchikage, can't we trust him? Lord Hokage gave away two Bijuus to each of the Village, the Four-Tails and the Five-Tails are under over custody now. Even the Lord Kazekage agreed to the deal.
    SHODAIME TSUCHIKAGE : ......
    ( smiles ) I'm happy to see that you have straight and clear ideals for the future of this Shinobi World. Someday you might become the nex-
    SHODAIME TSUCHIKAGE : Huh?!
    OHNOKI : ?!!
    MUU : Ohnoki what are you doing here?
    ]
    [
    SHODAIME RAIKAGE :
    So how ya gonna divide the Bijuus among us?
    HASHIRAMA : Kazekage doesn't want the Bijuus since One-tail is under their possession. The remaining Eight Bijuus will be divided among four of us.
    SHODAIME MIZUKAGE : So each one of us will be getting two Bijuus. That means we will have to pay the price of two Bijuus.
    HASHIRAMA :
    ( scratches head ) You can take one Bijuu for free, Hehe
    SFX : THAK!!

    (
    Tobirama hits Hashirama on head )
    TOBIRAMA :
    Idiot, Let me deal with this work. Each of the village will pay a complete amount of one Bijuu and 3/4th of the price for the other Bijuu. The Leaf will take custody of the Eight-Tails and the Nine-Tails... ( focus on Leaf's symbol with a transparent image of the two Bijuus with Hashirama's image in the center )
    TOBIRAMA :
    The Cloud will take custody of the Two-Tails and the Seven-Tails... ( focus on Cloud's symbol with a transparent image of the two Bijuus with Raikage's image in the center )
    TOBIRAMA :
    The Mist will take custody of the Three-Tails and the Six-Tails... ( focus on Water's symbol with a transparent image of the two Bijuus with Mizukage's image in the center )
    TOBIRAMA :
    The Stone will take custody of the Four-Tails and the Five-Tails... ( focus on Stone's symbol with a transparent image of the two Bijuus with Tsuchikage's image in the center )
    TOBIRAMA :
    You'll pay the complete price for the bigger one and 3/4th of the price for the other one.
    TOBIRAMA : And for the compensation, each country will give 30% of the price to the Wind Country. The Leaf will give 20% of its land at the outskirts to the Wind Country
    SHODAIME RAIKAGE : Everyone gets the total of Nine tails except you, You know.
    TOBIRAMA : The price of the Bijuus will vary as per the number of tails. But in the end everyone will pay the same amount.
    SHODAIME MIZUKAGE : Then why did you kept the strongest Bijuus for your self? That says that you're trying to dominate over the other countries.
    TOBIRAMA : That's not how the situation is. This Alliance is proposed by us. And hence we'll be reponsible for any future conflicts regarding the Alliance. We will stop the conflicts using the Eight-Tails and the Nine-tails.
    SHODAIME RAIKAGE : Let the Cloud take the custody of the Nine-Tails. We can pay the extra price for it, You know
    TOBIRAMA : That's impossible. Money isn't the matter here. The Nine-tails is the sacred Bijuu of the Uchihas. And Uchihas are the part of Leaf. Big Brother and Uchiha Madara are the only capable shinobis to control the Nine-Tails. And since Uchiha Madara isn't the part of Leaf anymore, he can anytime destroy the Cloud to take back the Nine-Tails.
    MIZUKAGE/TSUCHIKAGE/KAZEKAGE : ......
    SHODAIME RAIKAGE :
    ( A confused face ) ....
    TOBIRAMA : Do you agree?
    SHODAIME RAIKAGE : Umm...then give Eight-Tails n take Seven-Tails into ya custody, You know
    TOBIRAMA : That will be fine if you agree to pay the extra amount.
    SHODAIME RAIKAGE : I accept ya deal
    ( puts his Kage hat )
    SHODAIME MIZUKAGE :
    (
    grabs the Kage hat ) I still can't bring myself to trust you, Shodaime Hokage.
    HASHIRAMA : .....
    SHODAIME MIZUKAGE : But in return of the Bijuus, I accept the Alliance.
    ( puts his Kage hat )
    SHODAIME TSUCHIKAGE :
    As long as the power is maintained between the countries, I'll act along.
    SHODAIME KAZEKAGE : I'm ready to sign the deal ( put his Kage hat ) But don't underestimate the Wind.
    ( gives a serious look )
    TOBIRAMA :
    .....
    HASHIRAMA :
    ( stands and bows ) I'm greatful to you all. Thank You very much!! ( stands straight ) I hope... one day... we all come together for peace. ( puts his Kage hat )
    ]
    HASHIRAMA : We dreamed for the people to come together. You must listen to your heart!!
    OHNOKI : We all suffered because of our greedy nature. Trying to dominate the world in our own hands.
    SHINOBIS : ......
    MEI : But not anymore. We, the Kages of the Five Great Nations, are willing to put our life on the line. We need you all to believe in us.
    SHINOBIS : ......
    TSUNADE : The dream of a Shinobi. We need your support to make this dream come true.
    SHINOBIS : ......
    HIRUZEN/MINATO/TOBIRAMA : ......
    OROCHIMARU/KARIN/SUIGETSU : .......
    A : How strong is your WILL to believe in us?
    (
    focus on Naruto and Sasuke fighting against Obito )
    (
    focus on Hashirama fighting Madara )
    GOKAGES : HOW STRONG IS THE WILL OF THE SHINOBI LIVING INSIDE YOU?!!
    SHINOBIS : ?!!
    SFX : TAP!
    (
    Obito lands on the extended susano'o sword )
    (
    Obito is shielded from sides by the black fluid )
    SFX : BLUB!! BLUB!!
    (
    The black fluid enters Obito's palm )
    SFX : ZMMM!!
    (
    Extends the black fluid quickly, like releasing a contracted spring, over Susano'o face )
    SASUKE : Tch
    (
    Susano'o dodges the attack by moving aside )
    (
    The fluid miss the target )
    OBITO : Hmm?
    (
    Sasuke has already focused his EMS on Obito )
    SASUKE : Amaterasu!!
    SFX : ZUUUUMM!!
    SFX : CRACK!!
    (
    The black fluid moves cross way )
    OBITO : Not fast enough!!
    (
    The Amaterasu flames hits Obito's shield )
    (
    Obito drags the extended black fluid sword over from Susano'o's right shoulder towards the left under-arm )
    (
    The ribs are torn apart )
    NARUTO : Sasuke!!
    SASUKE : This level isn't enough...
    SFX : ZMM!!
    (
    The sword in Susano'o's hand is set on Amaterasu )
    OBITO : ?!! (
    jumps off from the sword )
    NARUTO : Sasuke!!
    (
    Susano'o jumps back )
    (
    BSM Naruto appears over Obito with a Sage chakra infused Rasengan )
    NARUTO : Take this!!
    (
    Obito dodges and pierce through the Kyuubi cloak with the Black Fluid )
    (
    A big hole is created in the cloak )
    SHINOBIS : (
    looking at the defeated Naruto and Sasuke ) ?!!
    SASUKE : This isn't enough!!!!
    NARUTO : ... To defeat us!!!!!
    OBITO : ?!!
    SHINOBIS : They're still going on? Then why can't we?
    SHINOBI 1 : I will fight till the end as a Shinobi!!!
    SHINOBI 2 : I'm going too!!!
    SHINOBI 3 : Let's fight back!!!!
    SHINOBIS : Let's Fight Back!!! Together.... as the SHINOBI!!!! (
    shouts ) Yeah!!!!!
    OBITO : [
    Damn it. ]
    GOKAGES : Let's do this!!!
    HASHIRAMA CLONE : (
    tear comes out of his eye looking at the shinobis ) Thank You.
    TOBIRAMA : [
    You did it again, Brother. And this time, the deal is signed without any second thoughts ]
    SFX : BREAK!!!
    (
    Hashirama breaks the black rod stucked in the palm of Madara's hand with his hand )
    MADARA : ?!!
    (
    Hashirama grabs Madara's arm and hurls him on the opposite side )
    SFX : LAND!
    (
    Madara lands and Hashirama turns facing Madara )
    SFX : GROW!!! APPEAR!!
    (
    On the other side, Madara emerges out from the tree's branch pointing his hand at Hashirama )
    MADARA : (
    in front of Hashirama ) Give up, Hashirama!!
    HASHIRAMA : ....
    (
    Madara clone places his hand on Hahsirama's back gently )
    HASHIRAMA : ?!! (
    as he is about to turn )
    SFX : PIERCE!!!
    (
    A black rod emerges straight out of Hashirama's left part of chest where heart is )
    MADARA CLONE : (
    moves close to Hashirama's ear from back ) GOT YOU!! ( smirks )

    ( Madara captures Hashirama....while the Alliance advances!! )

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    It was good
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Good idea about the first Kage Summit.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Just as expected, what a gud point of view. Worth the reading,keep it up man....
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by kladarakun View Post
    It was good
    Quote Originally Posted by Abdaling View Post
    Good idea about the first Kage Summit.
    Quote Originally Posted by usag View Post
    Just as expected, what a gud point of view. Worth the reading,keep it up man....
    Thanks for enjoying the Prediction guys
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Not Bad !
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    This was great!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    great but too much talk no jutsu

    how is my sig it a new one i made today
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    I liked it. .. Buuuuut you make it seem like it is easy for madara to catch and control Hashirama. In your last prediction you pitched the same idea with the control him with the black rod your probably right that is how he will do it. So until it happens I guess just keep predicting that same scenario, eventually you will be right.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    That was actually pretty awesome man.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by SIXPATHSSENNIN View Post
    Not Bad !
    Quote Originally Posted by lifeofsara View Post
    This was great!
    Thanks guys
    Quote Originally Posted by Kuuybi View Post
    great but too much talk no jutsu

    how is my sig it a new one i made today

    Thanks for enjoying the prediction
    Yeah there's too much TnJ in my prediction this time. Since the meeting wasn't finished. Also we knew that the Bijuus were distributed among the villages and the only question remains is " How the Kages of other Nations agreed to Hashirama's proposal? "
    So there will be TnJ in the next chapter. Also the Gokages has to raise the spirits of their shinobis to stand again and fight.

    Your sig is good
    Quote Originally Posted by IzAnAgI4200 View Post
    I liked it. .. Buuuuut you make it seem like it is easy for madara to catch and control Hashirama. In your last prediction you pitched the same idea with the control him with the black rod your probably right that is how he will do it. So until it happens I guess just keep predicting that same scenario, eventually you will be right.
    Thanks for enjoying the prediction
    Yeah it seemed like it was easy for Madara to catch Hashirama. I wanted to add the fight sequences but it would only increase the length and I wanted to end with that.
    In last prediction, I took a different turn for Madara controlling Hashirama with black rods. That prediction is still valid for me since it's a prediction for future scenes. But in last chapter Madara was still attacking Hashirama with the black rod in his hand, so I went with the flow. And now I have two ways for Madara to control Hashirama Also I don't like to repeat the predictions more than once. I go with the flow of the story. So if some of the things from previous prediction comes true, then that would only make me happy
    Quote Originally Posted by Touken View Post
    That was actually pretty awesome man.
    Thanks for enjoying the prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    I can see this happening....
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by skg1991 View Post
    I can see this happening....
    Thanks bro
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 649 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Loved it as usual man, I didn't expect that Madara clone at the end haha
     
         

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