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    Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

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    Scene shows Obito falls down with a serious wound around his waist .


    Obito : It can't be .... * coughs * ..what happened ...


    Panel opens with Obito falling down to the ground .


    and the nunoboko sword lands right beside him .


    Obito : ( I'm ineffective to genjutsu ..then what caused it ) Sees Naruto .


    Obito : * grunts in pain * ..aaaah..my waist ..i'm injured badly


    WHISPER : Obito..you shouldn't hold your true emotions ..


    Obito : Who was that ? ..( obito looks around )


    WHISPER : Only despair awaits you ...


    Obito sees the sword with a shocked expression.


    Panel zooms to the sword .......


    WHISPER : I know what truly happened that day..


    Obito : What is happening !!!! ..why am i hallucinating things ...* faints *


    Obito suddenly loose conciousness .



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    Scene shows the Kyusanoo ( Susanoo + Kyuubi fusion ) lands on the ground causing an serious impact.



    Scene is covered with dust and debris

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    Tenten : * cough * ...* cough *



    Kiba : I can't believe it ...it's over ..we did it .


    Shino : Kiba ! ...it's not time for celebrating that is because..


    Kiba : Sheesh , why do you always have to ruin the moment....


    Shikamaru : Shino's right , we still need to figure out a plant to stop the giant tree and Madara ...how troublesome .


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    SCENE CHANGES TO NARUTO & SASUKE


    Sasuke looks at Naruto .



    Sasuke : Naruto ..what did you sense back there ?


    Naruto : What do you mean ? ...


    Sasuke : Don't act stupid ! ..i know you felt something in him !


    Naruto : Nothing ....it's just ...forget it .


    Sasuke is shown with a serous expression


    Sasuke : ( What are you hiding Naruto.. )



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    SCENE CHANGES TO THE SHINOBI ALLIANCE



    Random shinobi : Hey , did they just killed him ?


    Random shinobi : I think they just did !


    Shinobi allaince : Yeah ! They did it .....we're saved .


    Tobirama : Silence !!!..it's far from over ...( I have to admit ..that was pretty impressive )


    Sarutobi : Hokages , we must immediately cast a barrier upon him ...


    Tobirama : It's too risky and that won't work obliviously..only sage mode can hold him down .


    Minato : We need Naruto !



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    SCENE CHANGES TO HASHIRAMA AND MADARA


    Hashirama
    : Would you look at that ..they managed to defeat him ..* turns to Madara * It's over Madara ..there is nothing you can ..



    SFX : Piercing sound .


    Madara pierced Hashirama with his black rod .


    Madara : On the contrary ..it has just begun ..


    Scene shows that Madara's rinnegun pupil widens ..


    Hashirama : What are you ..( He's caught me with his rinnegun..shit this is bad.. )


    Madara places his thumb on Hashirama's forehead and closes his eyes ...


    Madara : This is gonna be fun ..* laughing maniacally*



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    SCENE CHANGES TO OBITO'S MIND

    Obito
    : Truly ..the title and songs fall after this short ...of your enormity...all mighty God Tree the stupendous ...please lend me your chakra ..



    Juubi : Well , thief ....where are you ?


    Obito is shocked by the voice of the juubi .


    Juubi : come now ..don't be shy ..step into the light .

    Sweat pours from obito's cheeks as he nears the Juubi .

    Juubi : wooooaaaaaaaaaaaa ..* captures obtio with it's hand * ....

    Juubi : Do you think your worthy of holding my chakra ...pitiful mortal ..muahahahaha..

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    WE
    FINALLY GET TO SEE THE JUUBI'S TRUE FORM .
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    Comment , rate and hope you'll like it . ^^


     
         
    Last edited by D R E X; 10-22-2013 at 04:23 AM.

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    another juubi true form anyway interesting predication
     
         

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    Great prediction man
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    I liked it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    Very nice, another form would be very necessary for this war.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    How nice the laugh of juubi. Great predition man
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    Quote Originally Posted by DRAFT PUNK View Post
    OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------


    Scene shows Obito falls down with a serious wound around his waist .


    Obito : It can't be .... * coughs * ..what happened ...


    Panel opens with Obito falling down to the ground .


    and the nunoboko sword lands right beside him .


    Obito : ( I'm ineffective to genjutsu ..then what caused it ) Sees Naruto .


    Obito : * grunts in pain * ..aaaah..my waist ..i'm injured badly


    WHISPER : Obito..you shouldn't hold your true emotions ..


    Obito : Who was that ? ..( obito looks around )


    WHISPER : Only despair awaits you ...


    Obito sees the sword with a shocked expression.


    Panel zooms to the sword .......


    WHISPER : I know what truly happened that day..


    Obito : What is happening !!!! ..why am i hallucinating things ...* faints *


    Obito suddenly loose conciousness .



    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------


    Scene shows the Kyusanoo ( Susanoo + Kyuubi fusion ) lands on the ground causing an serious impact.



    Scene is covered with dust and debris

    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------


    Tenten : * cough * ...* cough *



    Kiba : I can't believe it ...it's over ..we did it .


    Shino : Kiba ! ...it's not time for celebrating that is because..


    Kiba : Sheesh , why do you always have to ruin the moment....


    Shikamaru : Shino's right , we still need to figure out a plant to stop the giant tree and Madara ...how troublesome .


    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    SCENE CHANGES TO NARUTO & SASUKE


    Sasuke looks at Naruto .



    Sasuke : Naruto ..what did you sense back there ?


    Naruto : What do you mean ? ...


    Sasuke : Don't act stupid ! ..i know you felt something in him !


    Naruto : Nothing ....it's just ...forget it .


    Sasuke is shown with a serous expression


    Sasuke : ( What are you hiding Naruto.. )



    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------


    SCENE CHANGES TO THE SHINOBI ALLIANCE



    Random shinobi : Hey , did they just killed him ?


    Random shinobi : I think they just did !


    Shinobi allaince : Yeah ! They did it .....we're saved .


    Tobirama : Silence !!!..it's far from over ...( I have to admit ..that was pretty impressive )


    Sarutobi : Hokages , we must immediately cast a barrier upon him ...


    Tobirama : It's too risky and that won't work obliviously..only sage mode can hold him down .


    Minato : We need Naruto !



    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    SCENE CHANGES TO HASHIRAMA AND MADARA


    Hashirama
    : Would you look at that ..they managed to defeat him ..* turns to Madara * It's over Madara ..there is nothing you can ..



    SFX : Piercing sound .


    Madara pierced Hashirama with his black rod .


    Madara : On the contrary ..it has just begun ..


    Scene shows that Madara's rinnegun pupil widens ..


    Hashirama : What are you ..( He's caught me with his rinnegun..shit this is bad.. )


    Madara places his thumb on Hashirama's forehead and closes his eyes ...


    Madara : This is gonna be fun ..* laughing maniacally*



    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    SCENE CHANGES TO OBITO'S MIND

    Obito
    : Truly ..the title and songs fall after this short ...of your enormity...all mighty God Tree the stupendous ...please lend me your chakra ..



    Juubi : Well , thief ....where are you ?


    Obito is shocked by the voice of the juubi .


    Juubi : come now ..don't be shy ..step into the light .

    Sweat pours from obito's cheeks as he nears the Juubi .

    Juubi : wooooaaaaaaaaaaaa ..* captures obtio with it's hand * ....

    Juubi : Do you think your worthy of holding my chakra ...pitiful mortal ..muahahahaha..

    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    WE
    FINALLY GET TO SEE THE JUUBI'S TRUE FORM .
    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Comment , rate and hope you'll like it . ^^


    Quote Originally Posted by ahmher View Post
    another juubi true form anyway interesting predication
    Quote Originally Posted by Legendary Sage of 6 Paths View Post
    Great prediction man
    Quote Originally Posted by siege View Post
    I liked it
    Quote Originally Posted by Sir Blades of Chaos View Post
    Very nice, another form would be very necessary for this war.
    Quote Originally Posted by Kuuybi View Post
    How nice the laugh of juubi. Great predition man
    Thanks a million guys . ^^
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    nice one man
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by ahmher View Post
    another juubi true form anyway interesting predication
    We have only seen the god trees form ..not the juubis final from . ^^
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by UncagedkillaG View Post
    nice one man
    Thanks bro ^^
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    I like how the txt actually looks like a script from a movie. Makes everything more realistic
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by FitzChivalry Farseer View Post
    I like how the txt actually looks like a script from a movie. Makes everything more realistic
    Haha..hope you liked the prediction and thanks .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    This was great!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    Too bad, 652 won't come CLOSE to this! (I liked this BTW)
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    Quote Originally Posted by ZeroYinDawn View Post
    Too bad, 652 won't come CLOSE to this! (I liked this BTW)
    lol .Don't compare me to Kishi .

    Thanks bra .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    Good prediction man, i guess will just have to wait and see mauahahahah.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    I highly doubt the Juubi holding evil feelings, since it is composed by the tailed beasts that Naruto tamed with hope.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    Like the little hobbit reference at the end there very good
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    Interesting...tho Hashi won't be defeated so easily
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    Quote Originally Posted by Hyuugafan View Post
    Like the little hobbit reference at the end there very good
    Quote Originally Posted by Naijakid View Post
    Interesting...tho Hashi won't be defeated so easily
    Thanks ^_^
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    A tad different from other predictions that i've read....liked it though...***** for u
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    For the betterment of the Manga, the Jūbi should take its rightful role as FV
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by skg1991 View Post
    A tad different from other predictions that i've read....liked it though...***** for u
    Thanks very much bro ..it makes me happy that you all liked it . ^^
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sir Derp Obito View Post
    For the betterment of the Manga, the Jūbi should take its rightful role as FV
    As you say lord Derp ..i will make it better next time .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 652 : OVERWHELMING DARKNESS

    Quote Originally Posted by DRAFT PUNK View Post
    As you say lord Derp ..i will make it better next time .
    I'm so tired of Uchiha Villains

    The God of NV should take over the role
     
         

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