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    Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    ' I will remove your mask off ' naruto says will he be able to change obito's heart ?

    ( chapter starts with surprised face of Obito )

    Obito : .........

    ( In connected subconscious )

    Obito : you are a foolish kid . naruto ! you can't change me like you changed nagato .

    Naruto : you regret not been in the village aren't you ?

    Obito : !?

    Naruto : i also had regrets like you but not anymore .

    Obito : you really think i care about a dream that's stupid .

    Naruto : I'm giving you a chance . do you want to regret it later that you could have
    taken the chance .

    Obito : your beautiful words not gonna change me ( shouts ) nothing will change me .

    ( Next panel shows outside the subconscious obito and all alliance in tug of war )

    ( scene changes to hashirama and madara )

    Hashirama : what's going on ?

    Madara : ( surprised look ) damn . that obito losing to brats .

    Hashirama : ( sees madara is distracted )

    Madara : ( distracted by looking at the tug of war ) now is the time for me to use my trump card .

    ( Hashirama tries to punch him but madara cover himself with his war fan and slides behind )

    Hashirama : don't get distracted my old friend .

    Madara : hmph . time to get serious .

    ( Madara attacks hashirama with war fan then tries to stab him with chakra rod )

    Hashirama : ( thinking ) He was holding his power back . He has become stronger than me .

    ( madara is overwhelming Hashirama )

    Madara : ( feels something coming behind ) ......

    ( suddenly madara sees a water stream coming at him and avoids it )

    Madara : tobirama !

    Tobirama : older brother !

    Hashirama : ( smiles ) tobirama .

    Madara : ( stare at him hatefully ) you shouldn't have come here .

    Tobirama : ( serious ) Do you think I'm afraid of you . madara !

    Madara : no but you are the one killed izuna .

    ( madara shoots a chakra rod at hashirama . he avoids it )

    Hashirama : huh .

    ( madara then attacks tobirama )

    Tobirama : too easy to predict .

    ( use hirashin to appear behind hashirama )

    Madara : ....... ?

    Tobirama : let's go brother . we have to stop madara till naruto takes tails beasts out .

    Hashirama : yes .

    ( scene changes to naruto and obito's tug of war )

    Naruto : ( shouts ) pull everyone give all you got .

    Alliance : Yeah .

    ( they are gaining upper hand )

    Obito : fools . you don't get it . I'll show you the power of sage .

    ( obito gives his full strength to it and all get dragged along the ground )

    Naruto : Shit . this doesn't work .

    Kurama : don't give up . naruto .

    Sasuke : ( thinks ) damn .

    ( stabs susano'o sword to the ground but still gets dragged . juugo fully transformed comes and holds the sword . suigetsu and karin joins as well )

    Sakura : I have to help them .

    ( Both tsunade and sakura activates strength of the hundred seals again )

    Tsunade : ( Jumps ) sakura . let's go .

    Sakura : ( follows ) yeah . tsunade - sama .

    Minato : ( getting dragged ) if kushina was alive ?

    ( tsunade comes and grabs chakra that came from minato )

    Minato : Tsunade - sama

    Tsunade : pull it 4th .

    Naruto : Damn can't give up .

    ( Sakura lands near naruto )

    Sakura : let me help you naruto .

    Naruto : sakura - chan !

    ( they both begins to pull bijuu chakra )

    Obito : that girl ? ( image of rin appears in his mind )

    ( suddenly Juubi's chakra arm grabs sakura by neck but she grabs it with her left arm )

    Obito : ( shouts ) Naruto !!! i will make you realize this world is not worth fighting for it .

    ( Juubi's chakra arm tighten the hold on sakura's neck )

    Naruto : No .

    Sakura : I'm fine . pull naruto !

    ( all though she said it naruto can see she is lying )

    Obito : which one you gonna save naruto ? girl you love or everybody else .

    ( we see the flower has stopped blooming )

    Naruto : ( looks at the flower and then at sakura )

    ( chakra arm gets cut off by raikiri )

    Obito : ( surprised ) kakashi !

    Naruto : ( smiles happily ) Kakashi - sensei !

    Kakashi : I failed my promise to you obito . I failed to protect rin but this time it's
    not gonna happen .
    ( flashback )

    Kakashi : don't worry i won't let my comrades die . i'll protect you with my life .

    ( in present )

    Kakashi : i gonna keep my promise and i will protect my comrade .

    ( Son of the white fang sharingan kakashi join the battle with a grand entrance )

    The End .
     
         
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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    Nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    some sentences don't flow but overall the prediction is good and realistic
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    I liked It Best Prediction of 653 I have read till now
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    I liked it a lot
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    Without a doubt the best prediction for chapter 653 amongst those i've read...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    There's like 5 chapters in there
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    Nice prediction...keep working rep for you
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    Great prediction as always
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    Quote Originally Posted by kishiuzumaki View Post
    ' I will remove your mask off ' naruto says will he be able to change obito's heart ?

    ( chapter starts with surprised face of Obito )

    Obito : .........

    ( In connected subconscious )

    Obito : you are a foolish kid . naruto ! you can't change me like you changed nagato .

    Naruto : you regret not been in the village aren't you ?

    Obito : !?

    Naruto : i also had regrets like you but not anymore .

    Obito : you really think i care about a dream that's stupid .

    Naruto : I'm giving you a chance . do you want to regret it later that you could have
    taken the chance .

    Obito : your beautiful words not gonna change me ( shouts ) nothing will change me .

    ( Next panel shows outside the subconscious obito and all alliance in tug of war )

    ( scene changes to hashirama and madara )

    Hashirama : what's going on ?

    Madara : ( surprised look ) damn . that obito losing to brats .

    Hashirama : ( sees madara is distracted )

    Madara : ( distracted by looking at the tug of war ) now is the time for me to use my trump card .

    ( Hashirama tries to punch him but madara cover himself with his war fan and slides behind )

    Hashirama : don't get distracted my old friend .

    Madara : hmph . time to get serious .

    ( Madara attacks hashirama with war fan then tries to stab him with chakra rod )

    Hashirama : ( thinking ) He was holding his power back . He has become stronger than me .

    ( madara is overwhelming Hashirama )

    Madara : ( feels something coming behind ) ......

    ( suddenly madara sees a water stream coming at him and avoids it )

    Madara : tobirama !

    Tobirama : older brother !

    Hashirama : ( smiles ) tobirama .

    Madara : ( stare at him hatefully ) you shouldn't have come here .

    Tobirama : ( serious ) Do you think I'm afraid of you . madara !

    Madara : no but you are the one killed izuna .

    ( madara shoots a chakra rod at hashirama . he avoids it )

    Hashirama : huh .

    ( madara then attacks tobirama )

    Tobirama : too easy to predict .

    ( use hirashin to appear behind hashirama )

    Madara : ....... ?

    Tobirama : let's go brother . we have to stop madara till naruto takes tails beasts out .

    Hashirama : yes .

    ( scene changes to naruto and obito's tug of war )

    Naruto : ( shouts ) pull everyone give all you got .

    Alliance : Yeah .

    ( they are gaining upper hand )

    Obito : fools . you don't get it . I'll show you the power of sage .

    ( obito gives his full strength to it and all get dragged along the ground )

    Naruto : Shit . this doesn't work .

    Kurama : don't give up . naruto .

    Sasuke : ( thinks ) damn .

    ( stabs susano'o sword to the ground but still gets dragged . juugo fully transformed comes and holds the sword . suigetsu and karin joins as well )

    Sakura : I have to help them .

    ( Both tsunade and sakura activates strength of the hundred seals again )

    Tsunade : ( Jumps ) sakura . let's go .

    Sakura : ( follows ) yeah . tsunade - sama .

    Minato : ( getting dragged ) if kushina was alive ?

    ( tsunade comes and grabs chakra that came from minato )

    Minato : Tsunade - sama

    Tsunade : pull it 4th .

    Naruto : Damn can't give up .

    ( Sakura lands near naruto )

    Sakura : let me help you naruto .

    Naruto : sakura - chan !

    ( they both begins to pull bijuu chakra )

    Obito : that girl ? ( image of rin appears in his mind )

    ( suddenly Juubi's chakra arm grabs sakura by neck but she grabs it with her left arm )

    Obito : ( shouts ) Naruto !!! i will make you realize this world is not worth fighting for it .

    ( Juubi's chakra arm tighten the hold on sakura's neck )

    Naruto : No .

    Sakura : I'm fine . pull naruto !

    ( all though she said it naruto can see she is lying )

    Obito : which one you gonna save naruto ? girl you love or everybody else .

    ( we see the flower has stopped blooming )

    Naruto : ( looks at the flower and then at sakura )

    ( chakra arm gets cut off by raikiri )

    Obito : ( surprised ) kakashi !

    Naruto : ( smiles happily ) Kakashi - sensei !

    Kakashi : I failed my promise to you obito . I failed to protect rin but this time it's
    not gonna happen .
    ( flashback )

    Kakashi : don't worry i won't let my comrades die . i'll protect you with my life .

    ( in present )

    Kakashi : i gonna keep my promise and i will protect my comrade .

    ( Son of the white fang sharingan kakashi join the battle with a grand entrance )

    The End .
    Dude.... I loved this one. You improved a lot.

    5/5
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    Oh this was nice.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    nice predicton dude
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    It should be hinata instead of sakura
    Otherwise nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto prediction 653 : Tug Of War

    Thanks everyone for your replies .
     
         

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