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    Naruto 671

    Chapter - Brothers from Opposite Worlds

    [Naruto looks shocked after hearing this]

    Hagoromo- Well my sons did have a good life after all, but..

    Naruto- But, what?

    Hagoromo- ...Indra's hatred for his brother did not start when I chose Ashura as my successor, but when he unlocked his Sharingan.

    [Flashback shows Ashura and Indra sitting outside, watching the mountains]

    Ashura- You know big brother, I really hope this war ends!

    Indra- You'll have to become as strong as father if you wanna end it.

    Ashura- Big brother maybe you can teach me how to awaken your Sharingan!

    Indra- My Sharingan? Hmph you lack the talent.

    Ashura- [Sulks comically] Yeah... you're right.

    Indra- Hey don't cry! Grandmother Kaguya said we need to be brave like Father and Uncle!

    [Flashback ends]

    Hagoromo- Years later Ashura's eyes naturally evolved into an Mangekyo Sharingan.

    Naruto- Mangekyo Sharingan? That's the same eye Itachi and Sasuke have!

    Hagoromo- Not necessarily...

    Naruto- !?

    Hagoromo- Indra's dojutsu was called the True Mangekyo Sharingan. A kaleidoscope which mirrored the hatred not of his heart, but the hatred of the Shinju's soul which he inherit.

    Hagoromo- And I can say... your friend, no.. your brother Sasuke, is Indra's reincarnation.

    Naruto- .......

    Hagoromo- Anyway, that man named Madara will be defeated by Indra and Ashura, Sasuke and Naruto. I hope you both can stop the cycle of hatred.

    [Naruto and Sasuke both wake up.]

    The End
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Ehhh its ok
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    not bad.....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Great Prediction, 5/5
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    It needs a little more but great predtiction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Valid Like Salad

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Nice but don't see it coming
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    It was alright. Can be improved.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Very possible not bad
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Short but cool.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    It was good, I really liked the part at the end, with Sasuke.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Not bad, good job
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    It was good I think you need to polish it up and lengthen it a bit.
    over all good prediction I think your on to something not the eyes but something.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Nice one but will there be any inheritance of rinnegan to naruto?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    lil short but possible, why sasuke is in it I don't know lol
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Why is it that all of these predictions have like only 3 chapter pages of information? This whole prediction could fit within 3-5 pages
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Total bullshit.. you expect me to buy that ashura awakening sharingan? Not gonna happen.
    better try next time.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Quote Originally Posted by Electric Boogaloo View Post
    Chapter - Brothers from Opposite Worlds

    [Naruto looks shocked after hearing this]

    Hagoromo- Well my sons did have a good life after all, but..

    Naruto- But, what?

    Hagoromo- ...Indra's hatred for his brother did not start when I chose Ashura as my successor, but when he unlocked his Sharingan.

    [Flashback shows Ashura and Indra sitting outside, watching the mountains]

    Ashura- You know big brother, I really hope this war ends!

    Indra- You'll have to become as strong as father if you wanna end it.

    Ashura- Big brother maybe you can teach me how to awaken your Sharingan!

    Indra- My Sharingan? Hmph you lack the talent.

    Ashura- [Sulks comically] Yeah... you're right.

    Indra- Hey don't cry! Grandmother Kaguya said we need to be brave like Father and Uncle!

    [Flashback ends]

    Hagoromo- Years later Ashura's eyes naturally evolved into an Mangekyo Sharingan.

    Naruto- Mangekyo Sharingan? That's the same eye Itachi and Sasuke have!

    Hagoromo- Not necessarily...

    Naruto- !?

    Hagoromo- Indra's dojutsu was called the True Mangekyo Sharingan. A kaleidoscope which mirrored the hatred not of his heart, but the hatred of the Shinju's soul which he inherit.

    Hagoromo- And I can say... your friend, no.. your brother Sasuke, is Indra's reincarnation.

    Naruto- .......

    Hagoromo- Anyway, that man named Madara will be defeated by Indra and Ashura, Sasuke and Naruto. I hope you both can stop the cycle of hatred.

    [Naruto and Sasuke both wake up.]

    The End

    If you are going to make a prediction try to make it longer and personally I don't think that Kishi will be this straightforward. I don't expect something like the last sentence of Hagoromo cause that is like a spoiler. It might be that Kishi tells us that even if we see this coming though still didn't like the fact he said that.. Overall not bad 3/5
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Bad prediction and too short. What is with the sharingan - Ashura !!! Realy.
    Only the Uchiha clan can awake the sharingan. Ashura is Senju clan. Like Madara and Hashirama.
     
         
    Last edited by Neitshu; 04-01-2014 at 05:02 PM.

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Nice. I think it needed a little more detail but nice
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Needs more details on how they started hating each other. True MS was a good theory
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Had potential, but ended way too quickly.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    short but sweet i dig this. i would love to see upgrades for naruto and sasuke then Naruto and Sasuke v Madara seeing them duke it out would be dope!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    too short and doujutsu aint the somethin everyone can have
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 671

    Gai can solo every one!
     
         

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