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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

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    ( ) : Actions
    [ ] : Thoughts
    SFX : SOUND EFFECTS
    ENJOY READING
    MANGA 654 : RENEWED HOPE

    [
    NARUTO :
    (
    observing Obito's reactions ) If Rin were still alive, She would probably say... " Stop putting up that front... and trying to hide behind it... Remember.... I'm always watching you. "
    OBITO :
    ( lowered head ) .....
    ( Naruto extends his left hand towards Obito )
    NARUTO : "
    Don't try to be anyone but yourself. You can stop running... ( Obito raises his left hand and looks at Naruto with widened eyes ) we're all waiting for you on this side... "
    OBITO :
    [ On the other side... ? ]
    (
    A transparent image gets created which is layered on top of Naruto )
    OBITO : (
    shocked expression ) Ri..n?
    ( Obito faces Rin's transparent image in place of Naruto's solid image with the same posture )
    (
    Obito's left hand trembles as he moves his left hand towards Rin's left hand )
    RIN : (
    worried ) Stop putting up that front and don't hide behind it... Remember... I'm always watching you. Don't try to be anyone but yourself. You can stop running... We're all waiting for you on this side.. ( smiles )
    (
    Rin is shown with a smiling face with her right hand at her back )
    RIN :
    Saving you is the same as me saving the world.
    SFX : GRAB
    ( Obito grabs Rin's hand )
    OBITO : ?!!
    ( Obito views a transparent image of his good side standing in his place layered over his current image and grabbing Rin's hand )
    (
    Transparent image of Obito is shown in Konoha's uniform with his left side of face covered with a cloth )
    (
    Rin moves her left foot towards left and then turns towards left holding Obito's hand )
    (
    Obito moves his right foot towards right and then turns right holding Rin's hand )
    (
    Both runs towards the Shinobi Alliance )
    OBITO : (
    looking at Rin and Obito running ) ....
    ( raises his head a little in eagerness to approach them )
    (
    Obito blinks his eye for a split second )
    OBITO :
    ?!!
    ( He could not see them around anymore )
    (
    turns suddenly looking at his front )
    (
    Naruto is still standing with his extended left hand )
    (
    Obito's face is covered with sweat )
    OBITO : (
    confused ) .....
    ( remembers Rin's serious face )
    [
    (
    An echo )
    RIN : I'm always watching you.
    RIN : I'm always watching you.
    RIN : Show me how you'll save the world.
    ]
    (
    Obito lowers his left hand )
    OBITO :
    No. No! No!! I can't.
    NARUTO : ?!!
    OBITO : I've promised Rin that I will save the world. I can't step back. I am going to create a world where I can see her again. She'll-
    NARUTO : Do you think she'll watch over you?
    OBITO : ?!!
    NARUTO : The promise you made with her, you think you're keeping it? Can you face Rin in the afterlife?
    OBITO :
    ( confused ) ....
    NARUTO : The dream you're approaching will only be an illusion which will try to comfort you according to your own needs. Will you be able to feel the warmth of her skin the moment she holds your hand? She'll be a mere puppet whose strings will be pulled by you. How can you expect a puppet to believe in you and correct your mistakes?
    OBITO : ......
    NARUTO : You still got a chance to change. Won't you agree to change if Rin would have asked you to come back? She's not anymore but what she hoped ... haven't faded yet. Her hope... can be renewed once again.

    ( Obito's confused face changes and he nods to Naruto's request )
    NARUTO :
    Your friends are still waiting for you.
    ( Obito extends his hand towards Naruto )
    (
    Naruto smiles )
    (
    The Shinobis smiles )
    (
    Obito smiles while extending his hand )
    (
    Both the hands are close enough )
    (
    An intense light flashes )
    (
    Naruto's and Obito's smiling face disappears into the flash )
    ]
    SFX : SLASH!!! SLAM!!!
    (
    Dust emerges from the hole to the surface )
    NARUTO : ?!! [
    What happened? ]
    OBITO : (
    surrounded by the dust ) ?!!
    (
    A huge Susano'o is standing on its knees holding a sword with a big cut in the ground )
    SUSANO'O : Groah!!!!
    (
    Susano'o is deactivated )
    (
    a dark image approaches Obito in the dust )
    OBITO : ?!!
    SFX : GRAB!!
    (
    The thing grabs Obito and slams him on the walls of the hole )
    (
    The chakra of the bijuus' coming out of Obito's body gets stretched as Obito gets slammed )
    (
    The thing is holding Obito still, blocking his legs and hands with a weird back )
    OBITO : (
    sees the clear picture of the thing holding him ) That mark.
    (
    A dot inscribed into a circle is shown )
    (
    Madara smirks standing on the ground with a cross look at Obito's location )
    ( Last Page )
    (
    right rectangular panel )
    MADARA : Let's continue...
    (
    Left huge panel )
    (
    Hashirama with no expression is shown blocking Obito with rods pierced in Obito's arms and legs )
    (
    Obito with a shocked look is shown)
    (
    Several rods are shown pierced in Hashirama's back )
    (
    The whole scene is covered in dust )

    ( Madara played his trump card? Or he still... )



    NOTE : Kishi finish this TnJ, I can't think anymore
    By the way, Don't forget to share your thoughts friends
    My thoughts... I liked everything until you bought a Hashirama impaled by black rods. That's not original anymore.

    4/5
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Hirudora View Post
    My thoughts... I liked everything until you bought a Hashirama impaled by black rods. That's not original anymore.

    4/5


    Thanks for reading
    About the bold, I can't make it better than that. I wanted to end it.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    nice one ....keep it up...
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    nice prediction as always dude.. nowadays im waiting for ur prediction just like waiting for manga episode
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Excellent prediction .
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by RasenBOOM View Post
    nice one ....keep it up...
    Quote Originally Posted by Siva Deepan View Post
    nice prediction as always dude.. nowadays im waiting for ur prediction just like waiting for manga episode
    Quote Originally Posted by kishiuzumaki View Post
    Excellent prediction .
    Thanks guys
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Awesome prediction!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    OMG!!!!! That was intense in the end
    I can't wait to see what happens this week, it better be as good as this
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    As always, great prediction.

    *****
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    U think just like Naruto.. his line about Rin's warmth and puppte.. too good! :')..
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    WOW.. JUST WOW!!!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great! loved it as always, keep it up.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Good bro.... Quite short though... Confused a bit in left fight thing but rin obito part was great
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great just great really liked it.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    not bad very nice
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by kmw1811 View Post
    OMG!!!!! That was intense in the end
    I can't wait to see what happens this week, it better be as good as this
    Quote Originally Posted by TheSageOfNinetails View Post
    As always, great prediction.

    *****
    Quote Originally Posted by Naruto Uchiiha View Post
    U think just like Naruto.. his line about Rin's warmth and puppte.. too good! :')..
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    WOW.. JUST WOW!!!
    Quote Originally Posted by nthreal View Post
    Great! loved it as always, keep it up.
    Quote Originally Posted by Jhariya View Post
    Good bro.... Quite short though... Confused a bit in left fight thing but rin obito part was great
    Quote Originally Posted by 2nd hokage View Post
    Great just great really liked it.
    Quote Originally Posted by PerplexedShinobi View Post
    not bad very nice
    Thanks friends
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    THis just made me think of a plot twist and Rin all this time was alive. But anyway really good prediction. Unlike others you described things which was really nice.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Silverforsakenhamster View Post
    THis just made me think of a plot twist and Rin all this time was alive. But anyway really good prediction. Unlike others you described things which was really nice.
    Thanks (
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Wow, a prediction that i actually LIKED!! Good job bro, could not have done better myself. Keep it up :D

    Having all the actions actually made the prediction more indepth, imagining the whole thing playing out actually made sence, unlike a lot of the other predictions out there
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 654 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Dub Fool of Uchiha View Post
    Wow, a prediction that i actually LIKED!! Good job bro, could not have done better myself. Keep it up :D

    Having all the actions actually made the prediction more indepth, imagining the whole thing playing out actually made sence, unlike a lot of the other predictions out there
    Hehehe Thanks bro )
     
         

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