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    Naruto 656: The Beacon

    The final part of the war is about to begin! Naruto prepares a massive Rasenshuriken in order to destroy the Shinju which is about to bloom and end reality as he knows it. Madara continues to battle Hashirama as Obito lies on the ground in a gloomy haze.

    Naruto: This should be big enough! Rasenshuriken!

    Madara: (Amidst the haze of battle) So it seems Obito's finished, ? Well, I guess it's time for me to execute the real Infinite Tsukiyomi...

    ???: Yes, Madara, and what is the real plan, ?

    Madara: Who is this? And how are you inside my head?

    Hashirama and Madara continue to battle as the mysterious voice blabbers on in his head.

    ???: Well, seeing as I've already literally been inside your head, it really makes no sense for me not be able to get back in...

    Madara: ... Are you Kabuto?!

    ???: No, I am God!

    Madara: (Shocked)

    ???: Now... this is what you're gonna do unless you want to be stripped of your will.

    Madara: (Listening) I see... so that's what your aiming at? Well, whatever. I'll follow that until I figure out what you've done to my body. So the plan is... ?

    ???: Stop that boy from using his attack on the Shinju... it's vital to my plans.

    Madara: Hmmm, for now. Listen, Hashirama. I'll have to put our little bout to an end, unfortunately.

    Hashirama: (Smirks) That's fine. You can battle the rest of the Allied Shinobi Force while I take a rest. (Sits down, grinning)

    Madara: (Turns around)

    The Allied Shinobi Force stands tall led by the Gokage who look primed to go. Madara internally curses and gazes with malice at the united army.

    Tsunade: Madara! It's over! Time for you to go back in the Earth!

    Oonoki: That's right, give it up! After we're done with you falls that tree over there so just give it up. We also have the Bijuu on our side!

    Panel of the Tailed Beast is shown huddles around the army, all looking down on Madara. The previous Hokage are also there. Minato and Kakashi stand over Obito who stares blankly at the sky.

    Madara: You belligerent fools, don't think that I'm the same as Obito. Cho Shinra Tensei!

    The Allied Shinobi Force is sent flying in all directions as well as the Bijuu who create massive craters as they impact. As they crash into the ground and into rocks, Naruto realizes and focuses on Madara.

    Naruto: Hey! What the hell do you think you're doing!

    Madara: He's my real target. That and Obito. I have to somehow get both of them without the other one finding out. If he's after the Shinju... I should try and jeopardize his goal, too. Uzumaki Naruto is your name right? Come! You'll be my opponent!

    Naruto: (Deactivates Rasenshuriken --- enters Sage Mode) Fine! Let's go!

    Kurama: Are you an idiot, Naruto! He's baiting you! Obviously he has something planned dipshit!

    Naruto: Oh yeah! Maybe he just realized I beat Obito and wants a piece of this Orange Rockstar! (Eyes narrowed)

    Kurama: (Troll face) Thaaaat's it. We're switching.

    Naruto: Wait, what do you think you're ----



    SFX: Footsteps

    ???: I'll be your opponent.

    Madara: !!!

    Naruto: !!!

    Orochimaru: Hmmm.... this should be interesting.

    A full panel is shown of Sasuke standing boldly in front of Madara, sword in hand with his EMS activated. Madara blinks hard and scoffs at the young Uchiha. Then his eyes widen as he notices something oddly peculiar about the young man.

    Madara: He looks exactly like Izuna!

    Sasuke: Naruto, destroy the Shinju! I'll handle this embarrassment to the Uchiha name. (Activates Full Susano'o) You who gave the Uchiha it's bad name will suffer 10x the pain our clan went through at the expense of your petty behavior.

    Madara: (Still shocked) Even that Susano'o... !

    Sasuke: Come... Madara!

    Who is this mysterious voice talking to Madara? And finally, the showdown between the two powerful Uchiha's take place! But why is Sasuke so reminiscence of Izuna?! Find out on the next Naruto!
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    I liked the sasuke part The dialogue pretty matched the situation
    That hashirama part though
    Overall 8/10
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Like the Sasuke part. Its pretty good.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Quote Originally Posted by Uzumaki Menma View Post
    Madara: Hmmm, for now. Listen, Hashirama. I'll have to put our little bout to an end, unfortunately.

    Hashirama: (Smirks) That's fine. You can battle the rest of the Allied Shinobi Force while I take a rest. (Sits down)
    Dafuq man ?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Quote Originally Posted by spandi View Post
    Dafuq man ?
    Hashirama was being smart, saying that Madara had to face the rest of the ASF even if he wanted to supposedly "end their bout". He was also mocking Madara's situation as he is obviously outmatched... or so it would appear.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Quote Originally Posted by spandi View Post
    Dafuq man ?
    That was the best part
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    It was great!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    I know that voice.

    He is... HE IS... * rape face *















    ...... Hashirama!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    I loved the Sasuke part!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Awesome ..........
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    This makes me lol
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Great Job .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Great job wish I could rep u
     
         

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    I'd post another rap lyric,
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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Madara then one shots him.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Great Prediction man .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Quote Originally Posted by Uzumaki Menma View Post
    Kurama: Are you an idiot, Naruto! He's baiting you! Obviously he has something planned dipshit!

    Naruto: Oh yeah! Maybe he just realized I beat Obito and wants a piece of this Orange Rockstar! (Eyes narrowed)

    Kurama: (Troll face) Thaaaat's it. We're switching.

    This part nearly killed me .

    But overall its an epic and hilarious prediction , +rep.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    epicness plus lol factor -Achieved
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    That really doesn't make any sense. Naruto could have used this powerful rasenshuriken instead of deactivating and why the hell would Hashirama need a rest? He's dead after all. By leaving Madara as he wants the result would be more deaths.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    Quote Originally Posted by Byron123 View Post
    That really doesn't make any sense. Naruto could have used this powerful rasenshuriken instead of deactivating and why the hell would Hashirama need a rest? He's dead after all. By leaving Madara as he wants the result would be more deaths.
    I thought I would have to state my thoughts myself, but this sums up what I have to say. ^^
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 656: The Beacon

    this is actually not bad thumbs up
     
         

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