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    NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    ( ) : Actions
    [ ] : Thoughts
    SFX : SOUND EFFECTS
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    MANGA 656 : WOUNDED BEAST

    OBITO : ( lying on the ground ) Can something like that really exist in this pitch-black hell?
    KAKASHI : Even you should have been able to see it if you tried to look. You and I carry the same eyes after all.
    (
    A huge light shines at the top of the God Tree, in the flower )
    KAKASHI : If you had trusted friends by your side, your hopes would have taken shape, and perhaps you would have been able to see...
    (
    The light spreads over the footsteps of the Shinobi Alliance who approached at the battlefield )
    KAKASHI : That's what I believe, Obito.
    OBITO : ....
    KAKASHI : You have witnessed it yourself.
    SFX : ROTATION!!!!
    (
    Total three Narutos are shown )
    NARUTO CLONES : This is big enough!!
    SM NARUTO : (
    holding the Rasen Shuriken ) All right!!
    NARUTO : (
    standing aside ) Let's go!!
    (
    Naruto jumps from the top )
    (
    Two Narutos remained at the top )
    NARUTO CLONE : (
    makes hand seal ) Multi-Shadow Clone Jutsu!!!
    SFX : BOOOOM!!!
    (
    Several clones are created holding each other in a spring shape above the flower )
    SFX : JUMP!! JUMP!! JUMP!!
    SM NARUTO : (
    while jumping towards the top of the formation holding the RS ) All right!!
    SFX : JUMP!!
    (
    SM Naruto jumps in air )
    SFX : POOF!!! POOF!!! POOF!!! POOF!!
    (
    The formation disperses into smoke )
    SM NARUTO : (
    lifts the RS ) Go back to..
    (
    The clouds separates out, showing the Moon )
    (
    Moon's light falls over the battlefield with Naruto at the centre holding the RS )
    (
    The eye of the Juubi is shown inside the flower )
    SM NARUTO : (
    screams ) ...HELL!!
    (
    throws the RS straight towards the eye of the Juubi )
    (
    Shinobis stare at the sky )
    SFX : ZNNNNNNGGGGGGG!!!!!
    (
    The RS cuts through the tree in a zigzag manner )
    SM NARUTO : (
    rubs his nose with his thumb and with a smile on his face ) Hnn.
    SFX : POOF!!
    (
    SM Naruto poofs into smoke )
    (
    The blast shapes into a huge sphere throwing away pieces of wood )
    (
    Huge amount of wind blows through the battlefield )
    OBITO : ......
    (
    remembers )
    [
    (
    Kid Obito wrapped in bandages lying on the ground )
    MADARA :
    I still don't have a right eye... You need to have both eyes to awaken their full potential.
    OBITO :
    ( sticks his chin in the ground ) [ ..Then... ] ( Kakashi in the background ) [ It means that together with Kakashi I can become stronger! ] ( Rin in the background ) [ The two of us will be able to protect Rin, Finally! ] ( drags his body forward ) [ I can't waste time here... Wait for me... Kakashi.. Rin! I'm ALIVE!! ]
    ]
    OBITO : Uzumaki Naruto, you truly are amazing. You got trust worthy friends. (
    smile on his face )
    SFX : EXTEND!!! EXTEND!! EXTEND!! GRAB!!
    (
    Konoha 11 are shown outside the pit extending their chakra arms to grab the falling Naruto )
    OBITO : (
    turns to Kakashi ) We could have saved her. ( turns to Minato ) You would have been alive today, Sensei.
    (
    as he closes his eyes, tears flow out )
    MINATO/KAKASHI : (
    sad ) .....
    KAKASHI : You -
    SASUKE : So, it was you!!
    KAKASHI/MINATO : ?!!
    OBITO : ....
    SASUKE : (
    enraged ) It was all because of you?!! You released the Kyuubi in the village. Because of you! The elders doubted the Uchihas. Itachi... I lost my brother...
    SFX : CLANK
    (
    Pulls out sword and approaches him )
    (
    Kakashi gets up and turns )
    KAKASHI : Stop Sasuke! ....Don't make me repeat my words.
    SASUKE : Hmph (
    shakes off Kakashi hands )
    OBITO : Sasuke, I can't ask for forgiveness but....
    SASUKE : (
    gives an evil look and turns ) I give a damn.
    (
    Meanwhile... )
    (
    Shinobis are shown running towards Hashirama and Madara )
    (
    Madara in Susano'o )
    MADARA : Looks like my subordinate lost. (
    smirks )
    HASHIRAMA : The Tree has been demolished completely. The Bijuus are extracted. What are you still planning?
    MADARA : (
    stands straight and scratchs his forehead ) Nothing new... There's nothing I need to worry now. [ I can continue my plans. ] ( smirks )
    HASHIRAMA : ?!!
    MADARA : Hmm... I can loosen up myself now. (
    moves his hair back with his right hand )
    (
    Madara gives evil smile to Hashirama showing his Rinnegan )
    HASHIRAMA : Those eyes ?!!
    (
    Air around Madara gets thinner )
    (
    Madara turns )
    MADARA : I've some business.... [
    ...with that brat! ]
    (
    Madara dashes towards the falling tree with a high speed without touching his feet on the ground )
    HASHIRAMA : Shit!!! [
    He's using Rinnegan's ability to outrun me. ]
    (
    Sasuke jumps out from the pit )
    (
    Konoha 11 are shown in the background with Naruto and Sasuke in the front )
    SASUKE : ?!!
    (
    Madara's Rinnegan is shown )
    SFX : CRASH!!!!
    (
    Madara quickly infiltrates into the Shinobi area throwing everyone out of his way )
    SHINOBIS : Gyah!!! ....Gah!!! ...Argh!!!
    SHINOBIS : (
    around K11 group staring at the dust and Shinobis knocked in the air ) What happened?
    SHINOBI : Madara is coming here!!
    SHINOBI : (
    trembling ) [ What should I do? ]
    SHINOBI : (
    raises kunai ) [ We must attack him ]
    MADARA : Hmm. (
    Rinnegan turns to EMS )
    (
    Susano'o covers Madara )
    SUSANO'O : Groah!!!!
    (
    Madara activates Perfect Susano'o )
    SHINOBIS : ?!!
    MADARA : I'll deal with you, Uzumaki Naruto!!
    (
    Extends the PS sword towards Naruto )
    NARUTO : (
    a close-up of his face ) ?!!
    SASUKE : [
    Uchiha Madara... ]
    SFX : CLASH!!
    (
    Sasuke's PS sword clashes with the PS Madara's sword and pushes further )
    (
    Sasuke's PS sword's blade rubs on the clashing blade and manages to divert PS Madara's sword )
    (
    PS Madara lands on the knees )
    (
    Sasuke, in Perfect Susano'o activated from head to waist, is shown exchanging the evil look with PS Madara's )
    SASUKE : [
    Finally... we meet.. ] ( smiles )
    MADARA : Nicely done. (
    smirks )

    ( The eyes meets... finally!! )

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    This was a breathtaking read, truly amazing
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    I actually liked it . Nice prediction .
    And will you continue this prediction ?
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    amazing prediction bro,,,,,

    love it
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great as always
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by ThatOfLegend View Post
    This was a breathtaking read, truly amazing
    Thanks
    Quote Originally Posted by spandi View Post
    I actually liked it . Nice prediction .
    And will you continue this prediction ?
    Thanks but I won't be continuing the prediction.
    Quote Originally Posted by jigar7007 View Post
    amazing prediction bro,,,,,

    love it
    Quote Originally Posted by Ahmed1993 View Post
    Great as always
    Thanks
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    I like this prediction and I hope sasuke pits ups agood fight so madara at least starts to give a F***
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    very nice.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    as always awesome
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    From the moment I saw your nick in the title I knew this was going to be a hell of a prediction.

    5/5
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Amazing prediction, although, Hashirama already knows about the Rinnegan given that he knew about the most secretive tech of all; Rinne Tensei.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    This was really nice!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Nice read bro.it would be great .
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    great predication
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great prediction bro as always
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Its great man....
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    That prediction was awesome! Great as always.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Awesome read .
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    i dont really understand whats happening naruto was looking for madara not really paying attention to the tree is there a rinnegan ability to make you run faster? i dont think madara will ever downgrade to ems knowing hashirama is arounds also when you said rennigan turns to ems and then he actives perfect susanoo he needs the rennigan active to open a new level of susanoo after complete form but i like that you added sfx sounds somthing different from others and i dont get it how did sasuke get perfect susanoo he would never fall into that category im confused but if others like it mabe im just an idiot well i like it but i cant poop myself over it hey i got to tell the truth 7/10
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 656 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    It needs something, too.


    (Raikage and others landed near Minato and company)

    Raikage: (points at Obito) So, You were that masked who behind all of this!!!! That Uchiha brat is one thing, BUT...YOU, YOU'RE NO BETTER THAN HE WAS!!!! (powering up his lightning cloak)

    Minato: Raikage, wait!! I know what you're thinking, but this have to wait...

    Raikage: We don't have time!! That student of yours was the cause of this!! HE'S THE ONE WHO CREATED THIS CHAOS!!! HE SHOULD GET KILLED, NOW!!!! (powering up more)

    Kakashi: Raikage!! Stop!! I told Sasuke not to do this! And I'm telling everyone the same!! Look, he may be his fault, but, he didn't realized what he's doing!

    Gaara: Kakashi, are you sure? Do you think that we can let him live after what he done...to all of us?

    Minato/Kakashi:....

    Tsuchikage: Kakashi, we can not let him live. He's the one who created this, ever since the Nine Tails attack. But he did worse than that, before that. He was the one who attacked all the villages, collecting all bijuu!! And he's the ring leader of the Akatsuki. He done everything to steal jinchuuriki for the bijuu.

    Mizukage: He did the same to my mentor, Yagura, the the fourth Mizukage. I agree with both Raikage and Tsuchikage. He can't...

    Minato: Listen... I was the one to blame...and I know exactly how you feel...but right now, we got Madara to deal with.

    Raikage: (powering down) Very well, we'll deal with your student later, right now... we got to finish off Madara first.

    Gaara: You're right. (allkages look at Sasuke, Orochimaru and Taka)

    Tsuchikage: Okay, I guess the Uchiha brat will come with us. But we'll keep an eye on him as well as Orochimaru.

    Sasuke: humph.

    Gaara: Naruto was the one who never give up on Sasuke.

    Tsunade: He doesn't give up on anything .

    Raikage: Humph. Since he doesn't give up on this Uchiha brat, I guess I will trust him. For now.

    Orochimaru: You can all settle with Obito...after we deal with Madara.

    Raikage: (glares at Sasuke for a second) Let's go.

    (all head out)

    Kakashi: *sighs in disbelief* Obito, Rin was the light of your life, but this...war you made put more pain in your life, and others, as well. And not only that, why used someone like Sasuke and manipulating him? Is it because Rin is more important than your clan? The same clan that you stained their blood in your hands? Or is it for something else? Naruto must have meet Itachi and Nagato.

    Obito: (thinking) So...Itachi was the one who stop Kabuto. I didn't think that he will...

    Kakashi: Naruto never gives up on saving his friend...the one you poison his mind with lies. Perhaps, it's best you tell the truth.

    Minato: The truth?

    Kakashi: Yes, the real truth. The truth of who is responsible of...the coup d'etat.

    Obito:.....

    Chap ends. Naruto will be on Hitaus. Jan 1 with Issue #1 will come out.
     
         
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