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    NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

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    657 - Against all odds

    The worst danger is reborn...
    PAGE ONE

    [The first scene shows fully revived Madara and Hashirama in close distance from side.]
    [Zoom on Hashirama face is shown]
    Hashirama(suprised and enraged): Impossible... How could you do that ?!
    Madara(smirks): Everything was planned ahead by me.
    Hashirama: I will stop you, now ! (forms handseal)
    Madara: Not on my watch, Bansho Tenin ! (extends one of his opened palm towards Hashirama)
    [Hashirama is shown being drawn towards Madara ]
    Hashirama: ?!
    [Shot on black rod emerging outside of Madara's opened palm]
    [Fully black rod sticking out is shown]
    PAGE TWO

    [Hashirama is shown being pierced by Madara with black rod straight through the chest.]
    Madara: You understimated me (smiles) *I see... to use Rinnegan in artificial body made of ashes you need to first to use it's power as alive*
    Hashirama: You won't get me easily (try pull both his hands together in seal) ?!
    Madara: It is not use, Preta Path !
    [Hashirama's body kept by Madara turns into wood clone]
    Madara: ?!
    [Multiple Wood dragons are shown approaching Madara from all directions.]
    PAGE THREE

    [Hashirama is shown in Sennin mode few meters behind Madara's back]
    Madara(smirks): You got me (forms handseal)
    [Wood dragons envelope around Madara fully covering him.]
    Hashirama: You shouldn't someone get easily behind your back, Madara (smiles) *This will end finally*
    [Madara appear in front of Hashirama charging at him]
    [Root emerges outside of Hashirama opened palm which pierces Madara through chest]
    [Suddenly roots sprouts from ground and enevelopes around Hashirama's body]
    [Cracks on ground appear behind Hashirama]
    [Hashirama breaks easily from roots restraining his body with pure physcial strength]
    PAGE FOUR

    SM Hashirama: In Senin mode My body is much stronger and also I can ?! (Sense attack incomming)
    [Black rod emerges outside of ground almost connecting with Hashirama's body]
    SM Hashirama: *Shit !, I won't dodge it in time* ?!
    [Black rod hold by smirking Madara is shown piercing through Hashirama's back with end of it sticking out of Hashirama's chest]
    Madara: Same trick will not work against me. Looks like you should use your advice more to yourself
    SM Hashirama: Damn you... (try to resist and move)
    [SM Naruto along with Edo Tobirama and Edo Hiruzen are shown rushing towards Madara]
    Madara: Now I will take your Sennin powers, Preta Path ! (More black rods pierce all over Hashirama's body)
    Hashirama(loose Sage's markings): Tsk.. ?! *Now I feel my Sage chakra being absorbed * why didn't you use Rinnegan's powers before, bastard ?!
    PAGE FIVE

    Madara(gains Sage markings): There is no time to talk, but to make it short. I could not use them...
    Hashirama(Sage markings fade away): But I beat you down..., I could resrict your movements... how could you break of it when you got alive, answer me !
    Madara(get complete Sage's markings on his face): I was focusing great deal of my power to use Trump card... besides I didn't want to bring too much attention as everyone could interrupt us... I wanted you to think that everything was under control... guess what It worked (evil smile)
    [SM Naruto in front of Edo Tobirama and Edo Hiruzen are shown being very close to Madara]
    Madara: I have new guests, let's end this chit chat Hashirama. Shinra Tensei ! (extends his another opened palm in front of Hashirama body)
    Hashirama: ?! *I am loosing control over my body*
    PAGE SIX

    [Hashirama's body is shown sent pushed backwards straight at incomming Sage mode Naruto, Tobirama and Hashirama]
    Sage mode Naruto: Shit !
    [Hashirama's body is shown hitting Sage mode Naruto, sending both of them crushing few meters further into ground.]
    [Tobirama and Hiruzen approaching Madara are shown with serious faces]
    Tobirama: Damn you, Madara. Water release: Unending barrage of water projectiles ! (forms handseal)
    Hiruzen: Earth Release: Earth Flow River ! (forms handseal)
    [Madara is shown being approached by water projectiles]
    SM Madara: It is not use against me, Preta Path ! (creates barrier around his arms which absorbs chakra)
    [The ground under Madara turns into mud suddenly, make him loose balance]
    PAGE SEVEN

    SM Madara: Tsk (makes double backflips going away from incomming water projectiles)
    SM Madara: Sussano ! (Sussano shroud appear around Madara tanking water projectiles attack.)
    [Tobirama and Hiruzen are shown stopping their run towards Madara.]
    Tobirama: I know it won't be easy. Water release: Great water spiraling taiphun !
    Hiruzen: Shadow Immitation technique ! (clap both his arms)
    SM Madara: I don't waste my time on you, Animal path: Summoning Technique ! (put his hand on ground)
    [Big smokes appears around the battlefield ]
    PAGE EIGHT

    [Different Kinds of animals are shown with Rinnegan in their eyes appearing ]
    [Great masses of water is shown spiraling around Madara inside his Sussano]
    [Shadow is shown closing distance towards Sussano]
    SM Madara: Out of my way (ascends his Sussano to v3 armored form breaking out of water masses) Multi wood clone technique ! (cross his fingers of both hands) *This shadow... like Nara clan !*
    [Nine wood clones emerges out of real madara as they heads off in one direction, while real Madara leaps forward in his Sussano avoiding Shadow.]
    [Hiruzen and Tobirama are shown ]
    PAGE NINE

    Tobirama: He is trying to get away. Water release: Water God technique ! *Fine I will use my full power then*
    Hiruzen: *He is acting but not with random actions... so what his aim could be* Multi-Size Technique !
    [Meanwhile Obito is shown still being alive but panting and having problems with breathing]
    Obito: Curse you Madara... ?! (His Rinnegan fade away in his eye)
    Minato: ?! *The Rinnegan in Obito's eye disappeared ?!*
    Obito: It looks like Rinne Tensei ressurect you in your last current state along with all real parts of body which belong to you... *I guess another Rinnegan also fade away when Madara get ressurected.*
    Kakashi: I am going help and check when happened to Naruto, Sensei watch over Obito
    [Kakashi run towards Naruto and Hashirama]
    PAGE TEN

    [Sage mode Naruto brushes dust out of his body as he stands up to look at kneeling on his knees Hashirama in front of him]
    Sage mode Naruto: Lord First ?!
    Hashirama: Ghh, Gahh ! *I lost almost complete control over my body... damn you Madara*
    [Zoom in Hashirama's face with his eyes flashing to Rinnegan]
    Hashirama: ...
    Sage mode Naruto: Lord First, do you hear me ?! (spot black rods impaled all over Hashirama's body) *These blacks rods of Rinnegan... shit, they were used to control someone*
    (Naruto rushes to Hashirama's)
    [Suddenly Naruto get suprised with Kick from Hashirama who is standing with raised leg. Naruto barrerly avoids it as he jump back.]
    [Hashirama is shown with Rinnegan eyes glowing in his eyes.]
    PAGE ELEVEN

    [Orochimaru comes towards Sasuke with Juugo, Suigetsu and Karin]
    Orochimaru: The war is comming to end... ?! (feel loss of Hashirama as he can not feel him) What the ?!
    Orochimaru(worried and nervous): *he could not break of Edo Tensei techinique... even if he can ressist my control.. he could not* (forms handseal as he focuses)
    Sasuke: ... (looks at focused Orochimaru)
    Orochimaru: Damn, I can not get respond from him... how is this possible
    Sasuke: Are you going to use Edo Hokages to attack now ?! (nervous)
    Orochimaru: No... it is not right time and also (feel powerfull wind shockwave sent towards him and Sasuke)
    Sasuke: What the power... Is that Madara ?! (cover his head in defence with arms)
    PAGE TWELVE

    [Amored Sussano v3 is shown blocked by Water God and Giant Hiruzen holding Sussano's arms in place.]
    SM Madara: Damn you *I am alive now so I should preserve as much chakra I can...*
    Tobirama: Now !, Water release: Great Flood ! (Water God looking like chakra monster spit great amount of water at Sussano)
    SM Madara: ?! (Great masses of water hit Sussano then breaks on it in smaller waves falling down)
    SM Madara: Is that all you can do ?(smirks)
    [Smoke is evaporating from Sussano's shroud surface then surface get frozen...]
    Tobirama: Let's see Madara, Saru !
    Hiruzen: I know ! Great King Enma: Diamond staff extend !
    [Giant adamantine staff extends towards armored Sussano breaking through it reaching Madara as each layers of Sussano breaks upon contact.]
    Madara: Enough !
    PAGE THIRTEEN

    [Big explosion occur as smoke cover area]
    [Giant Final Sussano unstabilized form with Madara inside of it is shown unafected with Water God and Giant Hiruzen being thrown away on ground.]
    Tobirama: Shit ! *My water release is special as I can freely change temperature, form of water... so it can be hot or cold... also it can becomes almost ice and almost steam.*
    Hiruzen: So close. *If physical attacks doesn't work then I will try it* (Hiruzen body shrinks in size) Mind Body Disturbance Technique ! (aim with his hands with zoom in Madara)
    SM Madara: ?! *What the*
    Tobirama: Saru, did you get him (look in direction of Hiruzen)
    Hiruzen: Yes, but just for short moment. Let's give fatal blow to him before he ?!
    SM Madara: Mind trick does not work on me any more...
    PAGE FOURTEEN

    [Nine clones of Madara are shown approaching Shinobi army along with Tailed beasts]
    Shinobi: Stop them !
    Shinobi: Yeah !
    [Madara's wood clones activate legged Sussano's v3 shroud while forcing their way through shinobi]
    [Five Kages block Madara's wood clones way]
    [Tailed beasts are shown charging tailed beasts bombs aiming at Madara's clones]
    [Madara in front of Tobirama and Hiruzen is shown]
    SM Madara: Time to end this battle, Stabilize !
    [Perfect Sussano appear around Madara as it's swing it's blades at shocked Tobirama and Hiruzen]
    [Hiruzen appear next to Tobirama as Perfect Sussano slash cut Water God in half cuting them barerly]
    Tobirama: Flying Thunder God technique !
    PAGE FIFTEEN

    [Tobirama disappear along with Hiruzen as Perfect Sussano slash keep moving wiping out everything in it's way.]
    [Perfect Sussano leaps forward as the ground shakes terribly from impact and pressure.]
    [Perfect Sussano lands close to Obito as Madara descends to ground while being inside.]
    Obito: ?! (Spot being engulfed in Sussano's armor as Madara lands in front of him)
    SM Madara: Thank you for reviving me... also for showing my weakness of everyone. Now You will die
    [Madara comes closes to Obito as Giant Sussano's blade is shown swinged from above at Madara and Obito]
    [Madara's perfect Sussano block another Sussano's blade with it's own blade]
    PAGE SIXTEEN

    SM Madara(smirks): ... (notices Sasuke Uchiha in another giant Sussano with his EMS glowing ), you want to dance ?
    Sasuke: Tsk.. I don't know what are you going after but I will stop you , fight me !
    SM Madara: Very well (forms handseal with crossed fingers) ?! *My stamina... it dropped a bit... but nothing serious. I have to finish it as fast as I can... too bad he will die*
    [Another wood clone emerges outside of real Madara as it walks towards Obito]
    Sasuke: I said that I won't let you do that !(try to increase pressure on his Sussano blade but get repeled with even greater force of Madara's Sussano blade )
    SM Madara: Don't worry about my clone... (smirks), Show me full power of Uchiha, do not hold back
    Sasuke: As you wish ! (enraged)
    PAGE SEVENTEEN

    [Five Kages are shown lying on ground while trying to get to their feet]
    [All Madara's wood clones are shown in Final Sussano v4 unstabilized form while panting and heavy breathing]
    [In front of Madara's wood clones tailed beasts are shown ready to shoot their tailed beast bombs at them]
    [Hashirama clashes with Naruto in hand to hand combat]
    [Madara's last wood clone is shown with light orb glowing around his hand as his penetrate inside of Obito]
    [Zoom in real Madara's face]
    Madara: The Real Nightmare for you just began !
    END

    Madara is close to fullfill his dream !
    Naruto is forced to face Hashirama !
    Sasuke vs Madara full out battle is about to happen !



    658 - The most powerfull: Yong Generation vs Old Generation

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    No females.

    Okay prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    And then phil collins make his move
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Madara vs sasuke?...madara woud tear that ass up
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Good prediction .
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Good prediction .
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great prediction but where is Minato bro ? i'm not a fan of him but he must be near Obito.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by Ahmed1993 View Post
    Great prediction but where is Minato bro ? i'm not a fan of him but he must be near Obito.
    Damn you noticed lack of him... actually I wanted for him to go and help Naruto against Hashirama battle...

    with great and epic entrance of course but you uncovered my surprise... damn

    Nice notice
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by Royal Illuminati View Post
    No females.

    Okay prediction
    Agreed, we need more boobs.




    ... jk jk .

    I really liked how you linked each event, and the pace was very comfortable. 5/5
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great prediction!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Madara conveniently spots the nara shadows in sussano form, he's not god with 360 degrees eyesight atleast not before using his clones. also he somehow is able to block the mind jutstu, that's bulllshit
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great prediction, as always!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by KCMNaruto View Post
    Damn you noticed lack of him... actually I wanted for him to go and help Naruto against Hashirama battle...

    with great and epic entrance of course but you uncovered my surprise... damn

    Nice notice
    Well i'm an Uchiha after all
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by danneymanney View Post
    Madara conveniently spots the nara shadows in sussano form, he's not god with 360 degrees eyesight atleast not before using his clones. also he somehow is able to block the mind jutstu, that's bulllshit
    He is a pro with the Sharingan.

    Obito blocked that shit in a split second , so read the manga before talking nonsense kid.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    great predication
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    failed after saying that madara could not use absorbtion while in edo tensei. It seems that you've forgotten that he absorbed naruto's fuuton rasen shuuriken when he first arrived at the battlefield. Keep track on what's happening please.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great prediction.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Great prediction
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 657 "Against all odds" [by KCMNaruto]

    Quote Originally Posted by KCMNaruto View Post
    Format of predictions:

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    Enjoy reading !

    657 - Against all odds

    The worst danger is reborn...
    PAGE ONE

    [The first scene shows fully revived Madara and Hashirama in close distance from side.]
    [Zoom on Hashirama face is shown]
    Hashirama(suprised and enraged): Impossible... How could you do that ?!
    Madara(smirks): Everything was planned ahead by me.
    Hashirama: I will stop you, now ! (forms handseal)
    Madara: Not on my watch, Bansho Tenin ! (extends one of his opened palm towards Hashirama)
    [Hashirama is shown being drawn towards Madara ]
    Hashirama: ?!
    [Shot on black rod emerging outside of Madara's opened palm]
    [Fully black rod sticking out is shown]
    PAGE TWO

    [Hashirama is shown being pierced by Madara with black rod straight through the chest.]
    Madara: You understimated me (smiles) *I see... to use Rinnegan in artificial body made of ashes you need to first to use it's power as alive*
    Hashirama: You won't get me easily (try pull both his hands together in seal) ?!
    Madara: It is not use, Preta Path !
    [Hashirama's body kept by Madara turns into wood clone]
    Madara: ?!
    [Multiple Wood dragons are shown approaching Madara from all directions.]
    PAGE THREE

    [Hashirama is shown in Sennin mode few meters behind Madara's back]
    Madara(smirks): You got me (forms handseal)
    [Wood dragons envelope around Madara fully covering him.]
    Hashirama: You shouldn't someone get easily behind your back, Madara (smiles) *This will end finally*
    [Madara appear in front of Hashirama charging at him]
    [Root emerges outside of Hashirama opened palm which pierces Madara through chest]
    [Suddenly roots sprouts from ground and enevelopes around Hashirama's body]
    [Cracks on ground appear behind Hashirama]
    [Hashirama breaks easily from roots restraining his body with pure physcial strength]
    PAGE FOUR

    SM Hashirama: In Senin mode My body is much stronger and also I can ?! (Sense attack incomming)
    [Black rod emerges outside of ground almost connecting with Hashirama's body]
    SM Hashirama: *Shit !, I won't dodge it in time* ?!
    [Black rod hold by smirking Madara is shown piercing through Hashirama's back with end of it sticking out of Hashirama's chest]
    Madara: Same trick will not work against me. Looks like you should use your advice more to yourself
    SM Hashirama: Damn you... (try to resist and move)
    [SM Naruto along with Edo Tobirama and Edo Hiruzen are shown rushing towards Madara]
    Madara: Now I will take your Sennin powers, Preta Path ! (More black rods pierce all over Hashirama's body)
    Hashirama(loose Sage's markings): Tsk.. ?! *Now I feel my Sage chakra being absorbed * why didn't you use Rinnegan's powers before, bastard ?!
    PAGE FIVE

    Madara(gains Sage markings): There is no time to talk, but to make it short. I could not use them...
    Hashirama(Sage markings fade away): But I beat you down..., I could resrict your movements... how could you break of it when you got alive, answer me !
    Madara(get complete Sage's markings on his face): I was focusing great deal of my power to use Trump card... besides I didn't want to bring too much attention as everyone could interrupt us... I wanted you to think that everything was under control... guess what It worked (evil smile)
    [SM Naruto in front of Edo Tobirama and Edo Hiruzen are shown being very close to Madara]
    Madara: I have new guests, let's end this chit chat Hashirama. Shinra Tensei ! (extends his another opened palm in front of Hashirama body)
    Hashirama: ?! *I am loosing control over my body*
    PAGE SIX

    [Hashirama's body is shown sent pushed backwards straight at incomming Sage mode Naruto, Tobirama and Hashirama]
    Sage mode Naruto: Shit !
    [Hashirama's body is shown hitting Sage mode Naruto, sending both of them crushing few meters further into ground.]
    [Tobirama and Hiruzen approaching Madara are shown with serious faces]
    Tobirama: Damn you, Madara. Water release: Unending barrage of water projectiles ! (forms handseal)
    Hiruzen: Earth Release: Earth Flow River ! (forms handseal)
    [Madara is shown being approached by water projectiles]
    SM Madara: It is not use against me, Preta Path ! (creates barrier around his arms which absorbs chakra)
    [The ground under Madara turns into mud suddenly, make him loose balance]
    PAGE SEVEN

    SM Madara: Tsk (makes double backflips going away from incomming water projectiles)
    SM Madara: Sussano ! (Sussano shroud appear around Madara tanking water projectiles attack.)
    [Tobirama and Hiruzen are shown stopping their run towards Madara.]
    Tobirama: I know it won't be easy. Water release: Great water spiraling taiphun !
    Hiruzen: Shadow Immitation technique ! (clap both his arms)
    SM Madara: I don't waste my time on you, Animal path: Summoning Technique ! (put his hand on ground)
    [Big smokes appears around the battlefield ]
    PAGE EIGHT

    [Different Kinds of animals are shown with Rinnegan in their eyes appearing ]
    [Great masses of water is shown spiraling around Madara inside his Sussano]
    [Shadow is shown closing distance towards Sussano]
    SM Madara: Out of my way (ascends his Sussano to v3 armored form breaking out of water masses) Multi wood clone technique ! (cross his fingers of both hands) *This shadow... like Nara clan !*
    [Nine wood clones emerges out of real madara as they heads off in one direction, while real Madara leaps forward in his Sussano avoiding Shadow.]
    [Hiruzen and Tobirama are shown ]
    PAGE NINE

    Tobirama: He is trying to get away. Water release: Water God technique ! *Fine I will use my full power then*
    Hiruzen: *He is acting but not with random actions... so what his aim could be* Multi-Size Technique !
    [Meanwhile Obito is shown still being alive but panting and having problems with breathing]
    Obito: Curse you Madara... ?! (His Rinnegan fade away in his eye)
    Minato: ?! *The Rinnegan in Obito's eye disappeared ?!*
    Obito: It looks like Rinne Tensei ressurect you in your last current state along with all real parts of body which belong to you... *I guess another Rinnegan also fade away when Madara get ressurected.*
    Kakashi: I am going help and check when happened to Naruto, Sensei watch over Obito
    [Kakashi run towards Naruto and Hashirama]
    PAGE TEN

    [Sage mode Naruto brushes dust out of his body as he stands up to look at kneeling on his knees Hashirama in front of him]
    Sage mode Naruto: Lord First ?!
    Hashirama: Ghh, Gahh ! *I lost almost complete control over my body... damn you Madara*
    [Zoom in Hashirama's face with his eyes flashing to Rinnegan]
    Hashirama: ...
    Sage mode Naruto: Lord First, do you hear me ?! (spot black rods impaled all over Hashirama's body) *These blacks rods of Rinnegan... shit, they were used to control someone*
    (Naruto rushes to Hashirama's)
    [Suddenly Naruto get suprised with Kick from Hashirama who is standing with raised leg. Naruto barrerly avoids it as he jump back.]
    [Hashirama is shown with Rinnegan eyes glowing in his eyes.]
    PAGE ELEVEN

    [Orochimaru comes towards Sasuke with Juugo, Suigetsu and Karin]
    Orochimaru: The war is comming to end... ?! (feel loss of Hashirama as he can not feel him) What the ?!
    Orochimaru(worried and nervous): *he could not break of Edo Tensei techinique... even if he can ressist my control.. he could not* (forms handseal as he focuses)
    Sasuke: ... (looks at focused Orochimaru)
    Orochimaru: Damn, I can not get respond from him... how is this possible
    Sasuke: Are you going to use Edo Hokages to attack now ?! (nervous)
    Orochimaru: No... it is not right time and also (feel powerfull wind shockwave sent towards him and Sasuke)
    Sasuke: What the power... Is that Madara ?! (cover his head in defence with arms)
    PAGE TWELVE

    [Amored Sussano v3 is shown blocked by Water God and Giant Hiruzen holding Sussano's arms in place.]
    SM Madara: Damn you *I am alive now so I should preserve as much chakra I can...*
    Tobirama: Now !, Water release: Great Flood ! (Water God looking like chakra monster spit great amount of water at Sussano)
    SM Madara: ?! (Great masses of water hit Sussano then breaks on it in smaller waves falling down)
    SM Madara: Is that all you can do ?(smirks)
    [Smoke is evaporating from Sussano's shroud surface then surface get frozen...]
    Tobirama: Let's see Madara, Saru !
    Hiruzen: I know ! Great King Enma: Diamond staff extend !
    [Giant adamantine staff extends towards armored Sussano breaking through it reaching Madara as each layers of Sussano breaks upon contact.]
    Madara: Enough !
    PAGE THIRTEEN

    [Big explosion occur as smoke cover area]
    [Giant Final Sussano unstabilized form with Madara inside of it is shown unafected with Water God and Giant Hiruzen being thrown away on ground.]
    Tobirama: Shit ! *My water release is special as I can freely change temperature, form of water... so it can be hot or cold... also it can becomes almost ice and almost steam.*
    Hiruzen: So close. *If physical attacks doesn't work then I will try it* (Hiruzen body shrinks in size) Mind Body Disturbance Technique ! (aim with his hands with zoom in Madara)
    SM Madara: ?! *What the*
    Tobirama: Saru, did you get him (look in direction of Hiruzen)
    Hiruzen: Yes, but just for short moment. Let's give fatal blow to him before he ?!
    SM Madara: Mind trick does not work on me any more...
    PAGE FOURTEEN

    [Nine clones of Madara are shown approaching Shinobi army along with Tailed beasts]
    Shinobi: Stop them !
    Shinobi: Yeah !
    [Madara's wood clones activate legged Sussano's v3 shroud while forcing their way through shinobi]
    [Five Kages block Madara's wood clones way]
    [Tailed beasts are shown charging tailed beasts bombs aiming at Madara's clones]
    [Madara in front of Tobirama and Hiruzen is shown]
    SM Madara: Time to end this battle, Stabilize !
    [Perfect Sussano appear around Madara as it's swing it's blades at shocked Tobirama and Hiruzen]
    [Hiruzen appear next to Tobirama as Perfect Sussano slash cut Water God in half cuting them barerly]
    Tobirama: Flying Thunder God technique !
    PAGE FIFTEEN

    [Tobirama disappear along with Hiruzen as Perfect Sussano slash keep moving wiping out everything in it's way.]
    [Perfect Sussano leaps forward as the ground shakes terribly from impact and pressure.]
    [Perfect Sussano lands close to Obito as Madara descends to ground while being inside.]
    Obito: ?! (Spot being engulfed in Sussano's armor as Madara lands in front of him)
    SM Madara: Thank you for reviving me... also for showing my weakness of everyone. Now You will die
    [Madara comes closes to Obito as Giant Sussano's blade is shown swinged from above at Madara and Obito]
    [Madara's perfect Sussano block another Sussano's blade with it's own blade]
    PAGE SIXTEEN

    SM Madara(smirks): ... (notices Sasuke Uchiha in another giant Sussano with his EMS glowing ), you want to dance ?
    Sasuke: Tsk.. I don't know what are you going after but I will stop you , fight me !
    SM Madara: Very well (forms handseal with crossed fingers) ?! *My stamina... it dropped a bit... but nothing serious. I have to finish it as fast as I can... too bad he will die*
    [Another wood clone emerges outside of real Madara as it walks towards Obito]
    Sasuke: I said that I won't let you do that !(try to increase pressure on his Sussano blade but get repeled with even greater force of Madara's Sussano blade )
    SM Madara: Don't worry about my clone... (smirks), Show me full power of Uchiha, do not hold back
    Sasuke: As you wish ! (enraged)
    PAGE SEVENTEEN

    [Five Kages are shown lying on ground while trying to get to their feet]
    [All Madara's wood clones are shown in Final Sussano v4 unstabilized form while panting and heavy breathing]
    [In front of Madara's wood clones tailed beasts are shown ready to shoot their tailed beast bombs at them]
    [Hashirama clashes with Naruto in hand to hand combat]
    [Madara's last wood clone is shown with light orb glowing around his hand as his penetrate inside of Obito]
    [Zoom in real Madara's face]
    Madara: The Real Nightmare for you just began !
    END

    Madara is close to fullfill his dream !
    Naruto is forced to face Hashirama !
    Sasuke vs Madara full out battle is about to happen !


    658 - The most powerfull: Yong Generation vs Old Generation

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