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    Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    PAGE 1:

    Madara:
    "Finally, Hashirama! My goal is finally accomplished! Now, that I'm alive, there's nothing you can do to stop me!"

    Madara laughs, as Naruto and Hashirama watch in fear.

    Editor's text: "THE DEVIL IS REBORN"

    PAGE 2:

    Obito: "Damn it... *cough*... In the end, I wasn't able to repay for my actions... I'm sorry, Sensei... Kakashi..."
    Kakashi: "Obito, don't talk!"
    Obito: "It's fine, Kakashi... I can feel... that my body loses it's strenght... Now I'm really gonna die... Kakashi..."
    Minato: "No..."

    PAGE 3:

    Obito and Kakashi looks at Minato, who makes several handsigns.

    Minato: "I don't know if I can truly save you from that Rebirth jutsu's side effects... But I can do something to avoid them, with my Chakra Transfer Technique..."
    Kakashi: "I see... You're going to transfer part of you infinite chakra into Obito..."
    Obito: "But... Why would you do that, I was the reason that you died, and I'm also the reason for that chaos..."

    PAGE 4:

    Minato: "...and you're the disciple of the Fourth Hokage." (Smiles)
    Obito: "Huh?!"

    Flashback appears, as Obito is shown with Rin, resting during a mission with Team Minato.

    Rin: "Just how lucky are you, Obito... To share dreams with your teacher... I don't know if Minato-sensei will actually become Hokage, but you must become one for sure, many times stronger than him... I believe you can!" (Smiles)

    PAGE 5:

    Obito: "You don't have to do this, Sensei... I can't live and just ask everyone for their forgiveness... No, I know a better way to make up for everything I did..."

    The scene changes to Madara, Hashirama and Naruto.

    Naruto: "How is this possible, just when I thought we were close to win this war..."

    PAGE 6:

    Madara: "I already told you, Naruto. You don't know how grateful I am, for weakening Obito, that is. You saved me from great trouble, thanks." (Evil smirk)
    Hashirama: "Why don't you just stop this madness, the Bijuus are released, the Juubi's Jinchuriki is about to die, the tree's useless. You can't achieve your goal, Madara!"
    Madara: "Heh, I wonder..."

    PAGE 7:

    Madara: "You know nothing, Hashirama... But it's going to be a long story, so I prefer to make you understand it with actions." (Activates his Susanoo)
    Hashirama: "Don't do anything useless, Madara! Remember, you don't have infinite chakra anymore..."
    Madara: "Do you think I'm a fool?!"

    PAGE 8:

    Madara charges at Hashirama with his Susanoo, but is stopped by Sasuke, who encounters his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan with Madara's Rinnegan.

    Sasuke: "This is as far as you go, Madara Uchiha!"

    Madara jumps backwards, as he looks Sasuke with interest.


    Madara: "Such a resemblance... Izuna, this kid really reminds me of you!"

    PAGE 9:

    Sasuke: "Your brother was different than you, and yeah... You can say that we're alike... Because we both loved and wanted to protect our clan, while you just tossed it away!"

    Sasuke fires Amaterasu arrow at Madara, but he uses Rinnegan's Gakido to absorb it.

    Madara: "Nice speech... But I'll tell you how you differ from him... You're dumber than him!" (Smirks)

    PAGE 10:

    Naruto: "Sasuke, we can't beat him with Ninjutsu, it's useless against Rinegan user!"

    Naruto lands near Sasuke and Hashirama, as Madara prepares his chakra.

    Sasuke: "Then, what should we do?"

    PAGE 11:

    Hashirama: "Boys, leave him to me... Don't sacrifice your lives and the future here, this is my battle, I have to put an end to it once and for all!"
    Naruto: "But you're..."
    Hashirama: "Exhausted, yeah... Even an Edo Tensei needs time to recover, okay, just be my supports, let's go!"

    PAGE 12:


    Sasuke: "Naruto, prepare to assist him!"
    Naruto: "Right!"
    Madara: "The last time it was 5, now it's 3... Why am I always up against more opponents... Mokuton Bunshin no Jutsu!"

    Madara creates several clones, as they are shown engulfed in their Final Susanoo armors.

    PAGE 13:

    Hashirama: "This isn't good, I have to enter Sage Mode fast..."

    Hashirama claps his hands as he starts gathering Nature Energy, as Naruto and Sasuke are encountered by 5 Madara clones each.

    Sasuke: "Damn you!"

    Sasuke activates his Perfect Susanoo, as Naruto is shown next to him in Bijuu Mode.

    PAGE 14:

    Madara:
    (Thinking) "Hmph, what is this strange feeling? I have to finish this fools fast and deal with Obito..."

    Madara also activates his Perfect Susanoo, as he attempts to slice Hashirama who's still gathering Nature Energy in order to enter Sage Mode.

    Naruto:
    "Shit, this is bad!"

    PAGE 15:


    Naruto attempts to protect Hashirama with Kurama's tails, but isn't fast enough, as Hashirama suddenly vanishes.

    Naruto: "Huh, what happened?"
    Sasuke: "Over there..."

    PAGE 16:


    Minato lands with Hashirama near Hiruzen and Tobirama, as he turns back to reveal that he's been revived.

    Minato: "This feels really good... Now it's time to enter my Hiraishin's second level!"
    Hiruzen: "Minato!"
    Tobirama: "You've been revived!"

    PAGE 17:

    Naruto: "But... this looks like Nagato's jutsu..." (Tears form into his eyes)
    Sasuke: "Naruto, take a look at the entire battlefield!"
    Hashirama: "Thank you, Fourth... That must mean only one thing..."
    Madara: "Damn you, Obito! I should've killed you first..." (Angry look)

    PAGE 18:

    Kakashi is shown holding Obito on his hands.


    Obito: "Kakashi... My role in saving the world ends here... I leave the rest... to you..."
    Kakashi: "I won't let you down... I'll continue to be... your eyes!"

    The whole battlefield is shown enlightened by green light, as Obito used Rinne Tensei to revive all of the dead shinobis during the war.

    Editor's text: "HIS LAST ATTEMPT TO SAVE THE WORLD!"


    Chapter 657/END


    Well, all of this can happen in 2 chapters, but my predictions are a bit longer to begin with, so... I hope you'll like it, enjoy!
     
         
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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Epic prediction... trully outstanding one

    I enjoyed it a lot and actually felt as I would read real Manga

    Nice job Man , I hope you check and comment my predictions as well
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Well done thumbs up man .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    nice read.....! i loved the minato revival part...!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Quote Originally Posted by messip6 View Post
    Nice prediction
    Quote Originally Posted by KCMNaruto View Post
    Epic prediction... trully outstanding one

    I enjoyed it a lot and actually felt as I would read real Manga

    Nice job Man , I hope you check and comment my predictions as well
    I already checked them, they're great as always, well done!

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    Well done thumbs up man .
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    nice read.....! i loved the minato revival part...!
    Thanks a lot guys!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    That's fcking amazing! But really, but..the one thing I wanted here..is Itachi to get revived too! Haha
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Quote Originally Posted by roncato View Post
    That's fcking amazing! But really, but..the one thing I wanted here..is Itachi to get revived too! Haha
    Well, maybe he'll be revived. Alongside Jiraiya, Nagato, Kushina etc.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Nice prediction....... Like it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Great prediction bro
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    ope Kishi will actually revive Minato. He really need more time to shine.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Quote Originally Posted by Zetsueno View Post
    ope Kishi will actually revive Minato. He really need more time to shine.
    Agreed. I want to see Minato alive again, and Naruto finally with a parent.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Nice and simple
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Oh, I really liked this!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Really good! Let me know when you make more predictions. They are really good reads
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Awesome Prediction bro, Truely an epic one
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    I really enjoyed it. Great prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Although I was never a fan of an outcome like that, you intertwined it to the story perfectly.

    And Madara and Sasuke coming face to face was awesome.

    I like how you teamed up Hashirama, Naruto and Sasuke as well.

    I could go on and on. But believe me, if I could give more than one +Rep for this, I would.

    Nice job.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Good Prediction... Tho Before he dies, instead of reviving the dead
    i would like him to give his remaning sharingan to kakashi.. People dont want to see An others Nagato move... i can see why the justu was used... because it was the leaf villiage but people being brought back to life in A *War*? nah it will be better if he gave his eye to kakashi and he put it in his hand or something... Kakashi will be in the top 5 strongest probably
    But Nice prediction 4/5
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    very very very good prediction. i hope this happens. i doubt they will be revived though
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Quote Originally Posted by EternalMangeykouSharingan View Post
    Good Prediction... Tho Before he dies, instead of reviving the dead
    i would like him to give his remaning sharingan to kakashi.. People dont want to see An others Nagato move... i can see why the justu was used... because it was the leaf villiage but people being brought back to life in A *War*? nah it will be better if he gave his eye to kakashi and he put it in his hand or something... Kakashi will be in the top 5 strongest probably
    But Nice prediction 4/5
    Kakashi will instantly die if he uses two Sharingans, Susanoo etc. He doesn't have the chakra reserves to maintain them, he barely can maintain only one. Anyway thank you both guys!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Very very nice prediction!..
    I thought I would hate if more were ressurected - since their deaths would then be in vain.. but I actually liked it quite alot
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    WOw just outstanding
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    great chapter but...

    NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

    if Obito is gonna revive ANYONE, Madara better kill half of them first...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 657: "Payback Time"

    Nice prediction, and although I'm not and never will be a Sasuke fanboy, I don't think you'll ever hear him say "Then what should we do?" Just sayin'. Awesome prediction though. I loved reading it.
     
         

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