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    Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

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    Kurama is extracted and Naruto is...!

    Garra: NARUTO!

    Garra catches narutos body with sand bringing naruto towards him.

    Garra: He's... he's

    The whole alliance looks on in shock a page with all the konoha 11's reactions are on it.

    garra: dead...

    tears are forming in garras eyes *flash back*

    Naruto: That pain of being all alone it's unbearable isn't it?

    garra: why do you do this for anyone but yourself?

    naruto: because they saved me from my loneliness and i won't let anyone hurt them.

    *different flash back*
    Naruto: You had us worried

    garra: why are you here?

    Naruto: it's not just me.

    *present*

    Garra flies off on his sand towards minato and kakashi upon arriving the rest of Naruto peers arrive. all but sasuke are crying.

    Hinata: naruto-kun

    sakura: it can't be

    Minato/kakashi: NARUTO!

    tsunade appears and begins trying to heal him.

    tsunade: you can't die naruto, you still haven't become hokage

    sasuke: it's useless he's already passed on.

    tsunade: NO, NO, NO!!!!!

    flash back

    Naruto: Until i become hokage there's no way i'm gonna die.

    present

    Tsuande: I refuse to let him go like this

    hinata: na-na- NARUTO WAKE UP! WHAT ABOUT NEJI, WHAT ABOUT ME?

    hinata breaks down crying, *flash back*

    Naruto: i never go back on my word that's my ninja way!

    present

    sakura: lady tsunade i'll help you i won't let him go like this either

    flash back

    Naruto: i'll bring sasuke back no matter what its the promise of a life time!

    present

    sakuras tears land on Narutos face as hope fades from her own face

    minato: Naruto

    flash back

    Minato: i believe he's the chosen one master jirya spoke of

    present

    shikamaru: first asuma sensei, then my father now naruto when will the akatsuki stop, DAMN YOU MADARA.

    shikamarus fist shakes in anger choji and ino are watching shikamaru with tears in their eyes *flash back*

    Shikamaru: there's something about naruto that makes me want to be by his side

    present

    Minato: This is all my fault if only if only i had noticed the masked man was obito that day me, kushina and you would all be alive right now.

    kakashi: sensei...

    obito: (Naruto i'm truly sorry )

    flash back

    Naruto: i already told you my dream is to be hokage...

    Naruto/obito: this world

    Naruto: i won't let it end

    obito: I'll end it

    present

    Obito: Naruto

    Garra: Fourth hokage there's still something we can do to bring naruto back

    mean while

    Madara: Now to begin sealing the juubi

    tobirama/hiruzen: we won't let you

    Hiruzen and tobirama release a water fire combo at madara which he simply absorbs he then pulls them in using bansho tenin hashiramas wood clones then come off of them grabbing madara he breaks them off with ease. hahsirama jumps up onto the statues head right behind madara.

    Madara: face it all your hope died with that jinchuriki

    hiruzen: Naruto i'll avenge you you would have been a great hokage madara must pay.

    tobirama: i just met that idiot but i agree he would have been a great hokage you will pay for this.

    Hashirama: He would have been a hokage that surpassed me

    Madara: So he has become a maryter and inspired you to fight till it's over, but the thing is it is over.

    The rest of the kages appear near naruto.

    oonoki: Naruto, how can the youth die before i the old man does.

    Tsunade: I'll bring him back fourth hokage after that do what garra said.

    sakura: No lady tsuande let me be the one to...

    Tsunade: sakura thank you, but this is from one hokage to the next tell naruto when he comes to, he is the sixth hokage from today on.

    sakura: you're not going to use?

    Tsunade: yes chiyos jutsu.

    black zetsu goes in to try and kill tsunade but is stopped by kakashi tsunade begins the jutsu to revive Naruto.

    tsunade: Naruto you'll be a hokage that surpasses all others before you *smiles* good bye...

    Naruto is walking in a black void similar to the one kakashi was walking in. Naruto passes neji.

    naruto: neji, i'm...

    neji turns around and keeps walking, naruto continues to walk. Kushina is ahead naruto runs to her to hug her but she disappears, naruto turns around to see all the dead shinobi from the war. he continues to walk passing several people he knew. Itachi, shikaku, inocichi. Naruto gets into a fetal position crying like how he cried when he was still hated in the village.

    ???: Naruto, its been so long.

    Naruto: That voice...

    Narutos eyes tear up as he looks up to see its his former sensei Jiryra.

    Jiryra: naruto it's ok, its over now.

    Naruto: PERVY SAGE!

    naruto hugs Jiryra crying as he does.

    Naruto: pervy sage i failed you, i couldn't bring peace i couldn't even beat madara. I've let everyone down. You must be disappointed in me.


    Jiryra: No naruto i'm proud of you, and disappointed in myself. It was my quest to find peace and all i could leave you was a cruddy message. But you beat pain and even more you redeemed him, you even turned the masked man into your ally. I couldn't do more then destroy one of pains bodies.

    naruto: But without that info pervy sage i wouldn't have been able to defeat pain.

    Jiryra: Naruto i put to much onto your hands peace is a goal the whole world should be going for not just one fool, thats why i failed. You could have succeed the entire alliance was behind you and your friends even your enemies were fighting beside you, that was the true meaning of peace.

    Naruto: Now it's to late.

    Naruto can see tsunade beginning to form behind Jiryra naruto begins to become lighter.


    Jiryra: Perhaps not the world isn't ready for your demise yet.

    Naruto: pervy sage whats happening?

    Jiryra: You're time isn't over yet, go naruto i believe you can do this.

    Naruto: But even if i come back i lost kurama how can i win!?

    Jiryra: You're naruto uzumaki not the fox you can win with your own power, but not just yours. look behind you.

    Naruto see's everyone who's died in the war.

    Jiryra: They were all as one and died together for you and there's more waiting on the other side who will fight to live with you now go and win this together with your friends.

    Naruto: Thanks pervy sage.

    as naruto fades away Tsunade appears in full in narutos eye.


    Narutos eyes open up suddenly everyone hugs him except sasuke.

    Garra: you had us worried naruto

    Naruto: garra why are you here?

    garra: it's not just me

    Naruto: i was dead what happened?

    sakura: lady tsunade brought you back.

    naruto: Grand ma tsuande!

    Minato: Naruto lady tsunade gave her life believing that you'd be the one to beat madara, the same way master jirya did her death was befitting a shinobi, but the fights not over yet you can grieve afterwards lord sixth.

    Naruto: lord sixth?

    Minato: Before she died she entrusted to you the hokage name.

    Narutos eyes full of tears stands up he opens his eyes showing that he is in sage mode.

    Minato: it's not over yet he still doesn't have the other half of kurama i'll seal it into you and..

    naruto: no this is a fight i have to win with my own power.

    meanwhile

    Madara: useless everyone one of you

    Hashirama: darn it.

    madara: Now it's time to become the juubis jinchuriki.

    shinobi: It's over not even the hokage could do anything.

    shinobi #2: we're all about to die.

    madara: look at the bright side you'll be joining the nine tails jinchuriki soon.

    Madara absorbs the juubi the same way obito did. the last page has madara in his bijuu mode

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    I doubt this but nice try.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Well I loved the part when Minato said I will seal the Yin kyuubi in you Naruto said I must use my powers ( badass moment ) then Minato says You cannot win without the Kyuubi and Naruto's like OK if you insist
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Quote Originally Posted by SIXPATHSSENNIN View Post
    Well I loved the part when Minato said I will seal the Yin kyuubi in you Naruto said I must use my powers ( badass moment ) then Minato says You cannot win without the Kyuubi and Naruto's like OK if you insist
    well i would have kept it like that but i felt like kurama had a plan or something aside from reviving naruto

    edit: alright i changed it because it felt rushed too
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    haha I love it,naruto get to fight with the other kurama.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Quote Originally Posted by -Haku Yuki- View Post
    well i would have kept it like that but i felt like kurama had a plan or something aside from reviving naruto
    Great Work anyway + Rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    That was awsome!!!!!!!
    Really cool
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    ok..it was good but firstly is too much for a single chapter and secondly Tsunade wont use the sa me justsu tgat chyo used...it wont be original...If Naruto dies he must be revived in a different way..Anyway fantastic prediction... Keep working!!! reps from me...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Tsunade can use a Tensei Jutsu? I doubt it, it would be a medic jutsu with the same power like a tensei jutsu, tsunades last feat before she dies Would be nice
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    I don't have a thing for prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    If anyone uses Chiyo jutsu it will be Sakura, Tsunade won't die from it because she is uzumaki and Naruto is uzumaki, she would only need to jump start his life force. it was a nice try but too random, and if Tsunade died Sakura wouldn't be that calm.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Quite interesting.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Good job bro!
     
         

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    :/ it dnt really make sense
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    I believe Naruto is an Uzumaki....so even if kurama is extracted...though weakened for a while he'll be alive....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    i'm sorry, this is screwed up,we don't want to see Naruto die and then brought back bcoz that just tells us that he failed and died and got "HELPED". the truth is no one must sacrifise themselve for the hero, thats just fuqed up.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    good job bro but I think it would be better if sakura died instead of Tsunade at least she can be useful for once
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Quote Originally Posted by mayibongwe View Post
    i'm sorry, this is screwed up,we don't want to see Naruto die and then brought back bcoz that just tells us that he failed and died and got "HELPED". the truth is no one must sacrifise themselve for the hero, thats just fuqed up.

    it doesn't matter, many characters in naruto verse have died and they were revived...kakashi,garra..even sasuke was near death many times but was saved by Karin or jugo..we all need help,so I wont say naruto failed because he died and came back...he will fail if he just died..like that without fulfilling his destiny(and we all know naruto can't die don't we)hehehe
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    If Naruto does die, it'd be great to have him see his mom and j-man, just lkike kakashi saw his dad.
     
         

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    It was alright it was an ok read lol +rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Quote Originally Posted by FemmeFatale View Post
    If anyone uses Chiyo jutsu it will be Sakura, Tsunade won't die from it because she is uzumaki and Naruto is uzumaki, she would only need to jump start his life force. it was a nice try but too random, and if Tsunade died Sakura wouldn't be that calm.

    I agree ur right about that
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    This has two basic mistakes.

    1. Minato Kakashi and Obito are far away, it's not they're in the middle of the action.

    2. It's nice how you depicted Sasuke without emotions still though you should have given him a little way to express even the slightest remorse or anger.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Quote Originally Posted by Byron123 View Post
    This has two basic mistakes.

    1. Minato Kakashi and Obito are far away, it's not they're in the middle of the action.

    2. It's nice how you depicted Sasuke without emotions still though you should have given him a little way to express even the slightest remorse or anger.
    Sasuke wouldn't care to much the one line he said is the most he might say its to late let's move on and beat madara and garra can fly on his sand i think he can make it over to minato they aren't that far away
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Hey anything can happen ,if we know Kishi ;he will certainly surprise us.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto chapter 661 prediction the death of naruto

    Quote Originally Posted by AlexRG23 View Post
    If Naruto does die, it'd be great to have him see his mom and j-man, just lkike kakashi saw his dad.
    great idea i added that in
     
         

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