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    Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    "This is bad, I can't sense my other half anymore!", Kurama said to Minato.
    "Naruto...!", Minato replied while fearing the worst, "I need to get to him"
    "Kakashi!",the Fourth said to his former Student, "I have to go to Naruto he needs me,
    I'm sorry but I leave Obito to you!"
    "Just where do you think you're going Fourth?",Zetsu answered for Kakashi in a mocking manner.
    "Madara just assembled all the Bijuus, that means the Juubi will be revived again and (Uchiha Kaenjin)
    your Sons fate is sealed"
    A red inprenetable barrier imprisons Naruto as he hits the ground, traumatized and heavily injured
    from the extraction of Kurama he's only able to stutter the name of is lost friend.
    "I...I swear...I'll kill you and even if it's the last thing I do!",agiated by the Words of Madara's Will Minato expieriences
    a new sensation inside him, the lust for revenge and murder.
    "Uchiha Madara you've done more than enough to this world, even during death you still messed with us."
    "Playtime is over, hurry up and retrieve my other Eye!", those were the orders of Madara to Zetsu through a telepathic link he created.
    "Already Madara-Sama? I was going to have some fun, well alright then.", Zetsu strengthens the control over Obito and grabs his Rinnegan so he can take it out of Obitos skull,"Remember Kid when you borrow something you have to return it one day"
    A loud scream engulfs the air, but that scream did not come from Obito, nor did it come from Minato, it was Zetsu's scream-caused by the loss of his arm due to Minato cutting it off with his Kunai and him stepping on the Rinnegan.
    "I won't let you!",the fourth said and took a step towards Zetsu only to realize that the Rinnegan under his foot is gone and the blood that came with it.
    "Still blind to the truth, how pitiful!",with these words Zetsu buries himself underground and leaves the battlefield.
    Having lost his eyesight and life support system, Obito firmly clings to life and hit's the ground trying to explain what happened.
    "Izanagi", he forced himself to speak,"It's a forbidden Jutsu of the Uchiha that is able to warp imagination and reality upon the user itself, at the cost of one's eyesight the user of the Jutsu can decide his own fate and avoid an unfavorable outcome, even death itself, Zetsu used that to escape and retrieve the Rinnegan"
    With his last breath Obito is grateful to Naruto, Kakashi and Minato for saving him and begs his former Teamates them end the war.
    The loss of Obito saddens Minato and Kakashi although they've lost him once in the past.
    "We will end this war", both promised to Obito.

    End.

    I was trying to make it more like a book instead of a mangaprediction, seems like it's not that easy to put some action in there.
    Either that or I just can't do it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    I like it a lot, I just don't think Zetsu would be that cocky towards Kakashi and the Fourth. He seemed more scared to leave Obito's body because of them to me, rather than having an attitude like "I can take you both with this kids body".
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    Quote Originally Posted by Cfighter View Post
    I like it a lot, I just don't think Zetsu would be that cocky towards Kakashi and the Fourth. He seemed more scared to leave Obito's body because of them to me, rather than having an attitude like "I can take you both with this kids body".

    Well you are right, but I thought it would fit him after he revealed his backstabbing nature and since he's Madaras Will, I assumed that he also took his cockyness-does that word even exist?
     
         
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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    Fourth didn't appear to be infuriated
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    nice enjoyed
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    It was quite good.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    Interesting...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    Its nice man but short you should have continued with how 4th kicks madara's BUTT
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    Quote Originally Posted by uchiha asuku aliyu View Post
    Its nice man but short you should have continued with how 4th kicks madara's BUTT
    No cause then it would of been unrealistic and went into the never ending crap hole.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    "fourths fury" shouldn't b d title... Honestly...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    It was good wish it was a lil longer
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 662: Fourths Fury

    Nice plot progression
     
         

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