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    naruto 661

    Scene shows naruto's body falling on gaara's sand, killer bee turns to look but gyuki tells him to concentrate or he ends up like naruto
    Gaara : no naruto you can't go now we need you
    Meanwhile kakshi and minato will be shown breathing heavily
    Minato : i don't know how but he has been able to counter almost all of our jutsus
    Kakashi looking: but i think he is getting exhausted, minato now looks at zetsu/obito who is also breathing heavily
    Zobito : i don't know why obito keeps fighting back.
    Just yhen minato eyes widened
    Dark kurama : it seems like madara has managed to remove my other half from your sons body
    Minato : damn, is naruto okay.
    Dark kurama : even though he has uzumaki blood in him i don't think he was as strong as his mother because i don't feel his chakra anymore he now looks up at minato your son is dead
    Kakashi : looking at minato as tears drips out of minato's eyes "whats wrong sensie"
    Minato clenches his fist " i won't let you go away with this, madara"
    Kakashi now kneels down looking at the ground " the war is over naruto can't die"
    Zobito : smiling these is my chance to end this two he says rushing towards them when he totally loses control of obito.
    Meanwhile madara stands smiling " there goes you reason for fighting he is dead, just stop fighting and i might spare you"
    Tobirama looking angrily at madara " damn you, madara"
    Hiruzen just quietly sheding tears
    Oro: " in the end it's still darkness, the boy treid but he didn't stand a chance"
    Tsunade : clenches her fist in anger screaming at top of her voice " i will kill you madara"
    Just then sakura pushes away gaara and bends down over naruto " please don't do these to me, don't do these to us, don't do these to hinata you promised her that you will finish this fight" sakura says crying
    Gaara now sees looks at madara as the second tails got sealed into the mazo " i have to help killer bee sama" he says and begins to walk away when sakura said " tell naruto i love him and he will always be my hero" gaara now turns and sees her putting her both hands on naruto's chest
    Gaara " what are you doing sakura"
    Sakura " the same thing elder chiyo did" an image of elder chiyo saving gaara
    Gaara " no, sakura you will have to die"
    Sakura : " i know but naruto's presence is more important than mine"
    Just then sasuke is shown holding her hands " don't be so reckless and selfish sakura ". Sakura widens her eyes in suprise
    Sakura : sa sa sauske kun
    Sasuke : naruto might be more important but the truth is that if you were to die bringin him back naruto will never forgive himselve and he might end up loosing himselve to hatred towards madara so just let me handle madara, gaara go help bee sama while i go handle madara
    Sasuke is shown walking towards madara an image of naruto is shown behind him.
    Sakura : "sasuke pLease don't die"
    Sasuke " you don't understand do you, the monet baruto kun died his burden became mine and even if i were to die i wiLl not die without ending this war right here, i know these sounds wrong but it is my will of fire"
    Sakura eyes widens then she smiles
    Gaara is shown helping bee while sasuke is shown walking slowly towards madar
    Madara "uchiha brat step back or you die too"
    Sasuke : smirks " me die? I have been saving this fight on the day that i am to fight naruto but since his no more, i will give it to you" sasuke says looking at madara as a ps with sage mode markings on the susanoo forms around sasuke
    Madara : " as if thats enough to scratch me"
    Sasuke : " i am not through" he says as his susanoo grows even biggerm just then madara eyes will widen
    Madara : what are these, he pauses for a moment then he smiles unbelievable a susanoo with wings
    Sasuke will be shown with a very large susanoo that has wing holding yata mirror and tsotsuka sword
    Oro : smiling my experiments has finally paid off
    Sasuke : you going down madara
    Madara : this brat seems intresting
    Just then minato and kakashi appears besides sasuke then the remaining edo kages and the four kages
    All together : you going to pay for your actions
    Madara in his thoughts things are getting interesting he then looks up and says " make me"
    Naruto will be seen in a dark place walking blindly when he heard a voice calling our his name
    He now turns and sees a man walking towards him
    Naruto : where am i ?
    Man : that thin line between the living and the dead
    Naruto looking confused : who are you?
    Man smiling : "rokudo senin"
    Naruto eyes widen : "sage of the six paths"

    The two finally meets please i know there are typing errors so please bear with me
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    not bad more believable than most
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    Quote Originally Posted by shonersage View Post
    not bad more believable than most
    Thanks man
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    Quote Originally Posted by uchiha asuku aliyu View Post
    Thanks man
    no prob if you have time let me know what u think of mine
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...1#post14077161
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    I really liked the concept of your prediction,and the dialogue is good! You should spend more time with the overall layout, making it look better, and making it a bit easier to read. And grammar aswell . You definatly have potential, and i will look forward to seeing more from you. Just spend more time writing these, and they will truly be awesome! + rep
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    Quote Originally Posted by Mattek2008 View Post
    I really liked the concept of your prediction,and the dialogue is good! You should spend more time with the overall layout, making it look better, and making it a bit easier to read. And grammar aswell . You definatly have potential, and i will look forward to seeing more from you. Just spend more time writing these, and they will truly be awesome! + rep
    Thanks man
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    Quote Originally Posted by shonersage View Post
    no prob if you have time let me know what u think of mine
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...1#post14077161
    I thinks it's even more realistic man its awesome
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    I loved sasuke part he's just badass if even naruto die.
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    thanx but im no kishi lol
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    Quote Originally Posted by Mattek2008 View Post
    I really liked the concept of your prediction,and the dialogue is good! You should spend more time with the overall layout, making it look better, and making it a bit easier to read. And grammar aswell . You definatly have potential, and i will look forward to seeing more from you. Just spend more time writing these, and they will truly be awesome! + rep
    i couldnt have worded it any better
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    Quote Originally Posted by Lietuvis123 View Post
    I loved sasuke part he's just badass if even naruto die.
    Yeah he is always bad ass
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    Quote Originally Posted by shonersage View Post
    thanx but im no kishi lol
    Yeah right
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    what an amazing prediction! I like it, especially the sasuke's part,it will be great. But i prefer naruto meet Jiraiya than rikudo. But overall your prediction is great!
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    Quote Originally Posted by Miharbi View Post
    what an amazing prediction! I like it, especially the sasuke's part,it will be great. But i prefer naruto meet Jiraiya than rikudo. But overall your prediction is great!
    Yeah thanks
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    this is awesome
    It was really touching
     
         

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    NINE TAILS!you are coalesced
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    Re: naruto 661

    laughable...





    nowadays these manga predictions are becoming a kind of addiction/
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    not the greatest but it was alright.
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    quiet interesting
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    I like your theory. Drama, death, and most importantly the Rikudou Sennin. Good job only for including a meeting between them.
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    i like it great predication
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    I do like the premises of your prediction. Chapter 662 could be named

    So6p real name... forgot it lol
    And got 661

    Sacrifice
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    ..good prediction ,i like the part when he meet with sage , but it not 100% same with the real manga ..maybe 50% same.
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661


    I really liked the concept of your prediction,and the dialogue is good!
     
         

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    Re: naruto 661

    Very, very good but Sasuke can't use sage mode on his own, last time he needed Juugo's help.
     
         

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    Its called Naruto Shippuden
    for a reason he is NarutoVerse
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    Re: naruto 661

    I like this other than everything all together but it really sounds legite so props and +respect
     
         

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