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    Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Hey guys, this is my first prediction so take it easy on me please. I worked hard on this so tell me what you think

    Naruto Manga 661 - The Final Stand

    *Naruto is falling down and Gaara's sand catches him*

    Gaara- Naruto!!! Are you all right??

    Naruto's friends- Naruto!!!

    *Meanwhile in Naruto's subconscious, Naruto is in a white room alone as he hears his friends calling him*

    Naruto- What is this.... this feeling... Where am I?... What does this all mean? Who is calling my name??

    ???- We have much to talk about young Uzumaki

    Naruto- *Turns around* You're.....!!

    *Back to the battlefield*

    Gaara- Tsunade and Sakura. Get over here now

    *Tsuande and Sakura start bolting towards Naruto*

    Gaara- *Crying* How could I let this happen? You saved me but I can't save you.

    *Gaara thinking* I'll make it up to you. I've got to do what Kurama said and fast... but I need time.

    *Tsunade starts healing Naruto*

    Sakura- Tsunade-sama???

    Tsuande- It's no use... He's not going to make it

    Sakura- *Crying* No... It's impossible. You haven't even become Hokage yet. You always told me.... you never go back on your word... because that's your way of the ninja

    *All of Naruto's friends jump in and surround his body*

    Lee- *Crying* Naruto, why did it have to happen this way?

    Madara- Heh heh, foolish boy. One down one to go. He was stupid to challenge my authority. It's over for him.

    *Lee looks at Madara enraged*

    Lee- You bastard. I'll end it here and now.

    *Lee gets into his stance and starts loading chakra. Suddenly, Kakashi and Guy appear out of nowhere*

    Madara- Hmm? *Looks at Kakashi* I thought that one was dealing with Obito.

    Lee- Guy sensei, Kakashi sensei, what are you doing here? I thought you were dealing with the masked man.

    Kakashi- Minato sensei is handling it.

    Guy- Lee, you don't need to waste your life. Let me be the one to use THAT JUTSU

    Kakashi- Guy, you don't plan on....

    Guy- Kakashi, I'm sorry but it looks like our rival challenges come to an end today.

    Tsunade- What is he planning on doing?

    Kakashi- Just watch. Gaara! Don't you need more time to do something. Well here's your chance

    Gaara- *Wipes away tears* Right. I'll get right on it

    Guy- *Speaking to Shinobi Force* We have let this man take the ones that we love for far too long. Do not let their sacrifices be in vain. Now are you with me???

    Shinobi Force- YEAH!!!!

    Guy- Good, now let's end this war. Madara your time has come!!!

    *Guy gets in his stance and loads up chakra. A huge explosion erupts and the floor starts shaking. You see Guy with a yellow aura surrounding him*

    Guy- You will now see the full power of youth!!! The Power of the Handsome Blue Beast of the Leaf! Eighth Gate of Death: OPEN!!!

    NEXT TIME ON NARUTO: The Final Revelation: The Gate of Death
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    It was pretty good for your first!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Interesting, I Liked It
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by kuramasage View Post
    It was pretty good for your first!
    Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by osmon11 View Post
    Interesting, I Liked It
    Thanks man
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    It was a hit and miss kind of, considering it's your first prediction.

    Next time, try making it longer, and add more subtext rather than dialouge, people want action, not talking.

    But other than that, it was good.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Pretty good for a first time. I kinda know why there is no action but people don't like it. Overall good job.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by TheSageOfNinetails View Post
    It was a hit and miss kind of, considering it's your first prediction.

    Next time, try making it longer, and add more subtext rather than dialouge, people want action, not talking.

    But other than that, it was good.
    Thanks for the constructive criticism

    Quote Originally Posted by Huzaifa View Post
    Pretty good for a first time. I kinda know why there is no action but people don't like it. Overall good job.
    Thanks for the feedback
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    I actually enjoyed the read.... Good one man...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Good Work, a little on the short side though,
    Great Work Rep added
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Despite it being short, i really enjoyed it! Am looking forward for your next prediction!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by Kronnic View Post
    I actually enjoyed the read.... Good one man...
    Thanks bro!
    Quote Originally Posted by SIXPATHSSENNIN View Post
    Good Work, a little on the short side though,
    Great Work Rep added
    Thank you and thanks for rep!!!
    Quote Originally Posted by muhachiuchiha View Post
    Despite it being short, i really enjoyed it! Am looking forward for your next prediction!
    Thank you. I just need to wait for what happens next even though most predictions never happen
     
         

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    I see your a smooth criminal because you stole my rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Pretty good for being your first prediction!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Fantastic ending man. Only thing I would say is that Kakashi would probably try to talk Guy out of it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Guy activating the 8th gate ,cool.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by TheSageOfNinetails View Post
    It was a hit and miss kind of, considering it's your first prediction.

    Next time, try making it longer, and add more subtext rather than dialouge, people want action, not talking.

    But other than that, it was good.
    ^ What he said. + rep, i enjoyed it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Good job capturing the personalities of the people. It was a good read. There's only one thing that I don't get. Why suddenly center things around Lee and Guy? Of all the people on the battle field, I think Sasuke, Minato or Gaara would take center stage in the battle department right now. Sakura and Hinata would take the center stage in the emotions department. Other than that, good job.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    nice prediction keep it up dude
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Nice guy turned up 8th gate of death oh yea something diff for once good job
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Awesome!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    .. And here you are my useless prediction: the first is going to revive form madara s chest just like orochimaru did from kabuto... With naruto spoiled of kurama, in my opinion this is going to be the only way madara wont slap everybody s asses. Another thing it came to my mind is that without kurama naruto could maybe reach a better and more stable frog-sage mode and use natural energy at a greater level than before. He will find much more easy to control energy and probably becoming more powerful. Of course we need to know what kurama and gara plotted... At first sight it just came to my mind that gaara will just encourage naruto staying strong as an ex jinchuriiki just like he did but it can also be a real plan b. Who knows?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Man, I don't like the idea of Guy being dead...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    Really nice dude :D!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 661 Prediction

    I liked it. Very good for a first timer.
     
         

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