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    Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    This is my first prediction sorry about the grammar..
    Scene starts with Naruto falling as the alliance rushes to all grab him...

    page 1
    Tsunade: *thinking* Damn you Madara! "Sakura, NOW! Medical Corp, this way!"
    Sasuke: Looks as Naruto falls grows angry* He was MINE!
    *Susanoo forms and chucks amaterasu in machine gun fashion for cover fire*
    Sakura: Naruto! Not Now!!! *tears roll down her cheeks, gets angry, leaps straight to naruto as..
    Garra catches naruto as he almost crashes
    page 2
    Garra: Tsuchikage!! Doton Wall Barrier!!Mizukage!! lava!!
    Garra/oonoki/mei: CONCRETE DOME NO JUTSU!
    2nd Hokage: Orochimaru! the first! regenerate him!!
    Orochimaru: Tensei Rebirth!*hashirama is shown regenerating, and going into sage mode...again
    Hashirama: thanks for pulling out the rods brother, we must pull madara away from juubi and distract him as long as possible, Naruto is Down!
    Tobirama looks in narutos direction and sees the dome sasuke and the generals of the army, fodder and leafs chuunin mount defences around it..
    page 3
    Madara: This level of technique an embarrassment! *absorbs fire and makes woods clone who stops sasuke and battles him*
    Hashirama behind him on gedo mazo
    Hashirama: "Same old shit then huh? pierces and restrains him and uses a wooden baton to knock sage mode out of him.. Kakashi!!"
    Kakashi: Kamui!!
    Madara: I DONT THINK SO! *Uchiha Gaeshin*!!
    *flame barrier erects around juubi after kakashi sends him into kamui
    *zetsu hand is shown summoning barrier
    page 4
    Everyone around naruto nothing seems to be working
    Sakura: Master!!
    Tsunade: shakes head
    Sakura launches tsunade outside of the barrier as naruto opens his eyes
    Naruto: Sakura stop.. *closes again he passes out
    Sakura: !!!!!!! begins using chiyos jutsu as he still lives..
    Garra: kakashi got him, now what did kurama mean??? *spots gyuukis tentacle*... NO...
    Garra opens a place in barrier and instructs sakura to cease holding 8 tails tentacle
    Sakura!!!
    page 5
    A:BEE!!!
    tentacle trasforms into a killer bee gasping for air
    A: bee dont move...
    Bee: my time is up, yo im shit outta luck,so i gotta present for my 2 bros, i love ya, n dis is for naruto
    *gyuuki colored chakra reconstructs narutos broken seal as bee slaps narutos stomach
    page 6
    Garra: *so it did work*
    *naruto opens eyes a bit..*
    Naruto: huhhh? wha..BEE! Noo..!!!
    Bee: *smiles* looks up n says to naruto..
    Bee: kill madara, and brother, look after naruto, you are the strongest tag team now..
    *killer bee runs out of chakra and dies
    tears fill the room... naruto looks up to find garra angry face with tears
    Garra: Naruto u scared me, dont ever do that again!! slaps the noodles out of narutos stomach
    page 7
    The seal covers his body in red markings, his hair turns red at the ends and just as that happens
    Juubi: So the sage indeed has returned.. Payback time!!!
    Shatters barrier and madara pops back inside it in the real world with other rinnegan...
    page 8
    Madara: *Rape Face* PERFECT..
    *juubi is shown being absorbed by madara
    page 9
    Madara: a good time to test my new power as GOD!!
    sasuke is shown unaware of naruto with a new set of eyes
    Sasuke: payback indeed
    Scene closes as madara cackles... END
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Can't wait like 1 hour?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    That was just weird........
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Now you know that this will be your last prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Ok after this please don't make another one
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    no, i couldnt, besides i have a feeling its gonna be an epic chapter, why not do my first prediction b4 its out? n like fr its gonna be out maybe like 4-5 am, maybe later, japan is a little late when it really counts lol at least im not trollin..
     
         

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    Its called Naruto Shippuden
    for a reason he is NarutoVerse
    without him there will be no
    Naruto same for Saskue its
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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Wth r u like 10 yrs old man the manga will be out soon, sorry but if this is ur first time doing this i think u should not try again so please leave it to real Fans lol talk about BAKA hahahaha
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Quote Originally Posted by TunechiFan1 View Post
    no, i couldnt, besides i have a feeling its gonna be an epic chapter, why not do my first prediction b4 its out? n like fr its gonna be out maybe like 4-5 am, maybe later, japan is a little late when it really counts lol at least im not trollin..
    If you can't wait do what i do and do the HW that you have put off for so long, by the time you finish new chapter
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    i am 20, i am working, and real fan or not, i have a life and i do not stay on here 24/7 writing fanfiction unpaid LIKE a 10 yrs.. i live in america, where were free to just not give a **** not in fantasy land where the only ass u get is sakura in a hot tub.. fr.. why be cyber bullies when this is narutobase its really not that serious my nig
     
         

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    People live their lives bound
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    and true. That's how they
    define "reality".
    But what does it mean to be
    "correct" or
    "true"? Merely vague
    concepts... Their
    "reality" may all be
    a mirage.
     

    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Quote Originally Posted by TunechiFan1 View Post
    i am 20, i am working, and real fan or not, i have a life and i do not stay on here 24/7 writing fanfiction unpaid LIKE a 10 yrs.. i live in america, where were free to just not give a **** not in fantasy land where the only ass u get is sakura in a hot tub.. fr.. why be cyber bullies when this is narutobase its really not that serious my nig
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    Quote Originally Posted by TunechiFan1 View Post
    this is narutobase its really not that serious
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    thnx element master though i dnt do hw, that was a productive reply, not rude unlike others man.. wit dat type of attitude its amazing some of yall could ride a bike... fall down stop tryin, wat kinda bs? gotta be sasuke wankers then..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    I just scanned and saw Concrete Dome No Jutsu and died. I'm not gonna read anymore. Just don't man.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    The prediction is out of the box kind of deal, But seriously guys its not like you are all ****ing masters of writing and predictions.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Quote Originally Posted by Sir Blades of Chaos View Post
    The prediction is out of the box kind of deal, But seriously guys its not like you are all ****ing masters of writing and predictions.
    I suck at writing
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Quote Originally Posted by Jay swag LOL View Post
    I suck at writing
    Me too I can't Spell or use proper punctuation .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    true, my punctuation was off and hard to follow wrds, but i can really at least spell.. n thats awesome, i was definitely going for out of the box.. it gets REALLY boring reading every chapter starting off with garra using sand to catch naruto.. this was bad, but also original at the very least..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Quote Originally Posted by Sir Blades of Chaos View Post
    The prediction is out of the box kind of deal, But seriously guys its not like you are all ****ing masters of writing and predictions.
    Doesn't change the fact that I found it weird...... like most predictions on here.
     
         

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    yea, ur kool, wierd predictions is a cool statement, but i am not juugo, or tsunade im 20 n i dnt turn 10 anymore lol 21 in 2 months tho... NYC TURNUP!!!

    bt yeeaaa.... concrete dome was my ass pull of the day... kishi has done worse... ie making lime and then not fully filling up a hole lmao
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Good prediction ! Mad props . Not hating at all .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    OMG LOL. no no


    NO MORE.

    I mean was I give it .5/5 for trying and get some parts of the story right.

    but actually make it seem legit to the point it goes into current manga. -_-


    no more predictions.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    That was kind of weird.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Look it was not the best by far but good effort don't listen to the haters if you like to do this.
    Then keep at it and they should get better.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    when will the dam manga come out
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    Nice try better luck next tme
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 661: Children of Prophecy

    thnx thnx, i really didnt try that hard or sit there more than 20 mins n if it was supposed to be like the actual manga it would suck even more in my opinion.. cuz it would definately show up IN the manga... yall kno kishi dnt write ntn till after like 35 predictions lol
     
         

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