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    661: The new sage mode

    opening scene: the last of kurama chakra is extracted from naruto while he falls to the ground

    garra moves to catch naruto , forming sand around his body while naruto is falling speechless

    garra : "naruto .....*thinks* this is bad , he lost kurama already "

    he moves the sand to put him down

    naruto *in alow voice* : " how dare you ......."

    garra moves just next to naruto helping him to stand , but he stop and take a step back
    naruto face expressions turn mad while a strange black new marks is covering his face and body slowly

    naruto * raising his face up toward madara * : "how dare you take kurama from me " his face looks scary while chakra is building up around his body making a violent wave enveloping him

    madara *rape face* : " so this is ur real chakra , uzumaki kid . amazing , from all the uzumaki i encountered u have the strongest chakra " he smiles viciously looking up to see sasuke jumping in with his sword trying to make a surprise attack on madara , but he dodge jumping back

    madara : "those attacks wont get me uchiha brat , u need more than that to ......"

    naruto appears infront of madara and punch his face , madara looks surprised to naruto before he block his attack
    and pushed back couple meters away from him

    madara : *smiles* : " not bad , naruto . u got me this time "

    naruto : *in scary voice* " you bastard , am gonna make u regret this "

    chakra is building more and more around naruto while the black marks complete forming stripes all over his skin

    sasuke ,garra and madara looks surprised to him

    the 2 , 3 ,4 and 5 tails are almost sucked into the gedou mazou
    white zetsue looks to madara : " madara sama , we almost finished , just abit longer "

    madara : *thinking* " he is gathering ahuge mount of chakra now that he need to suppress the kuybi's power no more, his level is even more than hashirama , i need to stop him "

    he smiles to naruto " this is gonna be more fun than what i expected , but in order to make it more fun ....."

    he looks down next to his feet while white zetsue is showing up slowly and handing the other rinnegan to him

    madara : " just in time "

    madara raise his hand to put the other rinnegan in his eye slot and looks to every one

    madara *smirk* : "then ...shall we begin dancing "

    madara disappear from his place then appear again in front of sasuke and garra kicking them back , he appears in front of naruto punching him in the face , but naruto block his fist with his palm and punch him in the face to throw him back instead

    madara * looks surprised to naruto * : " *thinks* he stopped me at full speed !!!, but how could he ...." he looks to him more surprised

    naruto eyes change shape into total black forming the next version of sage mode
    naruto clap his palms together gathering chakra far greater than before

    naruto : " this is your end madara "

    THE END
    sorry for any misspelling
     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    ummmm ooookay then!!

    dont think there is a "new sage mode". I understand that its a prediction but this is way too unrealistic so to speak.
     
         
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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    nardo who was dying gets a powerup that fodderizes Madara and surpassing sauce with no kyuubi? Seems likw Kishi, asspulls everyday.

    Ot: idk, this wont happen i think, overall 2/5
     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    New power up?

     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    Quote Originally Posted by dvmaz View Post
    ummmm ooookay then!!

    dont think there is a "new sage mode". I understand that its a prediction but this is way too unrealistic so to speak.
    i know its abit unrealistic
    but if we put the uzumaki powers + namikzi dna +naruto anger to lose kurama + no more suprriseng for kurama powers
    i guess we should have far stronger sage mode than before while he just throw two rasen shurikens and frog fu and thats it
    i thought it could be better to give naruto anew powers instead of rasengan all of the time
    put this in my next prediction
    thank u for supporting though
     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    look guys i already know its unrealistic to put this in one manga
    and am tired of kishi giving shitty power ups to naruto
    he is uzumaki and son of kushina and minato for god sake , and all he can do is shadow clones , rasengan and guess what else more rasengan techniques
    i guess its time for him to put some of wind jutsues on this show
     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    Nice work enjoyed the read.....Pls make a second version of if
     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    Mh, okay I guess.
     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    Nice prediction there. I think naruto will jave greater chakra after his losses kurama since his chackra is no longer supressing anything. And about the sage mode nice one there. Naruto also needs other techs like wind techs and sage techs just like kabuto
     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    nice work bro
     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    Ohh i loved it every second of it
     
         

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    Re: 661: The new sage mode

    And how did he get the other eye? Don't skip step if you to make the prediction as real as possible
     
         

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