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    Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    Madara has arrived! What will Minato's group do now that the Kyuubi is gone and their arch-nemesis has appeared?

    Rikudo Madara: What took you so long Zetsu?

    Black Zetsu: Heh, I was being bothered by this troublesome group. But now that you're here . . . This should be a great opportunity to test your new powers, eh, Madara-san?

    Minato: This is not good. Zetsu stole the Kyuubi before I could give it to Naruto!

    Gaara: Wha --- !!! Then how do we save him? How do we even protect ourselves against these opponents now?!

    Kakashi: Gaara! Calm down! We'll think of a plan all right? Just make sure you keep your guard up. Zetsu's ability to leak a part of himself underground will be dangerous! Sakura, do you think you can keep Naruto stable?!

    Sakura: Yes, but not for much longer! His condition is slowly deteriorating! [Tears] Even I will be powerless if this continues for too long.

    Madara: You all think you can last five seconds against me? Here, I'll show you how far I've ascended above you lowly insects. [At the tip of his spear, a black ball is formed. It launches at Kakashi and Co. who dodge it.]



    Minato: What power.

    Kakashi: [Eyes Wide]

    {SCENE CHANGE}

    Gai: Hurry my students, the power of youth must explode --- !!! [Huge Explosion meters away from him]

    Tenten: What the hell?!

    Rock Lee: Ahh! Gai-sensei!

    Gai: [Flies into dirt] Guaah . . . what was that just now?

    Tenten: I dunno, but it came from the direction you said Kakashi was at!

    Rock Lee: Yosh! Let's hurry then!

    Gai: You are right my young handsome beast! Fifth Gate Open!!!

    Rock Lee: Fifth Gate Open!!!

    Tenten: Ahh! Wait for me you idiots! [Weapons strapped on back]

    {SCENE CHANGE}

    Juugo: Karin, how much farther?

    Karin: We're almost there now!

    Suigetsu: Look! In the distance!

    Orochimaru: That power . . . Madara is getting serious.

    Suigetsu: Yeah, so when do we?!

    Orochimaru: Calm, Suigetsu. Let's find Sasuke first. Without him, our plan means nothing.

    Juugo: [Glaring at Orochimaru]

    Karin: Ah! We're here! [Lands] Sasuke!!!

    Suigetsu: [Lands] Where is he? I don't see him? [Looks around]

    Orochimaru: [Lands] [Silent]

    Juugo: [Lands] I'm watching you Orochimaru.

    Suigetsu: [Walking Around] Ugh! Karin, you suck ass! He's not even --- [Trips]

    Tobirama: [Evil Glare]

    Suigetsu: Woah! It's the old geezer man from earlier?!

    Karin: You!!! Where's Sasuke?!

    Tobirama: He's gone.

    Karin: What!

    Suigetsu: Yeah! The hell you talking about? You gone senile?

    Orochimaru: Enough you too. What happened here?!

    Tobirama: [Swallows] I had originally tried to attack Madara but he made quick work of me. Sasuke arrived as well. I think he had some sort of plan. He was stopped too. Madara stabbed him. He began bleeding out. After that, Madara left. Then, he appeared.

    {Flashback}

    Sasuke: *Hack *Hack

    Tobirama: Hold on! You can't give out! Shit! I can't move! Sasuke!!!

    ???: Calm down, Tobi. You're usually so much more reserved than this.

    Tobirama: Who the --- who the hell are you?!

    ???: [Kneels next to Sasuke] [Can't see his face] [Turns around] [Long Red Hair, Mask on his face wearing long robes and prayer beads.]



    ???: That's not important right now. The main focus is stopping Madara. I would've never guessed he'd come so far. I regret ever helping him in the past. I wonder if that young brat is still alive?

    Tobirama: Helping him?! How old are you?!

    ???: I must go. [Picks up Sasuke]

    Tobirama: Oi! Where are you taking him?

    ???: [Looks down at him] Tell you're summoner to retract this jutsu. One should not mess with life and death, especially concerning the Grim Reaper who is always aware of things. [Begins walking away]

    Tobirama: [Confused]

    ???: [Body Flicker] [Disappears]

    {Present}

    Suigetsu: Ehh?! There's another guy?!

    Karin: A fox mask?

    Juugo: What would he want with Sasuke?

    Orochimaru: Red hair . . . knows the previous generation . . . fox mask . . . !!! Damn. We have to go.

    Suigetsu: Huh? You know it this is?

    Tobirama: You do you have in mind?

    Orochimaru: [Flashback panel behind him] Hashirama's wife.

    Tobirama: Mito!?

    Orochimaru: [Nods] She had a brother, Shinto Uzumaki.

    Tobirama: !!! What you think that that fool is still alive?!

    Orochimaru: It's not entirely impossible. He was then, the leader of Uzushiogakure. Incredibly powerful and adept in sealing techniques, I wouldn't put it past him to somehow have survived. Afterall, Uzumaki's are famous for their longevity and he, Hashirama, and Madara use to all embark on missions together frequently.

    Tobirama: Then what has he been doing all this time, then?!

    Orochimaru: I'm not sure. But I'm willing to bet it has something to do with his clan's destruction.

    Suigetsu: Eh?! Karin's clan?

    Juugo: . . .

    Karin: [Sad Look] My clan's . . . destruction?

    Orochimaru: And if my theory is true, a man of his magnitude harboring a vendetta against the very village he helped build . . . that's a very dark shadow that will cover the Earth when he decides to make his move!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    This was actually great, nice work man :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    Creative as hell, damn, you're amazing.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    Nice. You even introduced a new character.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    You sir are my hero.. you should write a book or something your storyline and ideas are epic! shinto uzumaki omg uzumakis brought back into it this is beautiful stuff man
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    Exceptional work, almost felt like I was reading a real chapter.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    Really nice work man, that's awesome.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    You're really amazing!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    nice work buddy but actually it too short!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    Now that's thinking outside the box
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    I'm currently thinking about writing a series. If I get enough feedback, I'll possibly pursue this idea. Thanks to all who commented on this thread. It means a lot to me as I'm an aspiring author. I would give rep to everybody but unfortunately, I have already given rep to you in other threads, so be patient and you're green bar will increase soon.

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    great prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    First off, nice twist. Also, I liked how you maintained a lighter tone for Gai, Suigetsu, and Lee scenes. Overall, it was a great prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    Really good bro! I like the originalality.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    Quote Originally Posted by ssjsage View Post
    Really good bro! I like the originalality.
    Same here man .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    good prediction bro....! nicely done...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    This was truly incredible :-) Best ever :-)
     
         

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    A rare word for me to say: Perfection.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    This was very good!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga 665 Prediction: "The Darkest Shadow!"

    Nice prediction I just logged in to base only to give you rep.
     
         

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