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    Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Page 1:

    Gai: Who are you?

    Guy looks closely and finally recognises the man in front of him.

    Gai: Could you be Madara?

    Kakashi: Gai! Can you still fight. We have to delay him until Naruto's return.

    Gai: Of course. (faints.....)

    SFX: Grab

    Kakashi holds Gai.

    Kakashi: Are you ok?

    SFX: Rush!

    Page 2
    Madara dashes toward them and fully prepared to land a blow with his staff

    Gai makes a flashback of when Naruto said that he won't let anyone hurt his friends.

    Gai: Forgive me kakashi. Eighth...Gate Opening!

    Battlefield explodes with white energy, sending Madara crashing on his feet.

    Madara: Hachimon? It's more powerful than last time and his chakra is....


    Scene changes to the other side of the battlefield.

    Lee is running but is stopped by Tenten.

    Page 3

    Lee: What are you doing? We have to assist gai sensei.

    Tenten: Don't Lee. He has already opened the gate of death. Gai-sensei is sacrificing himself to help us win this war.
    Tenten makes a flashback of Gai's words

    Gai: I can't stay here any longer. If it's anything, I prefer to risk my life to protect everyone over there. This time, I will use it.

    Tenten: But-
    Gai lays a hand on her shoulder.
    Gai: You have become an independent kunoichi and Lee is a hardworking ninja. You won't need me anymore.
    Tenten is shocked
    Tenten:!!!
    Gai: I am glad you have been my students. Look like I will finally be able to join Asuma.

    Gai jumps away.

    Page 4
    scene returning to present moment

    Tenten: We have to respect our sensei's will. At least let's protect what has been left to us.
    Lee closes his fist.
    Lee: Gai...Sensei


    Scene changes to Kakashi and Gai

    SFX: Powering! Rocks Crumbling!

    The ground shakes and the air is filled with white energy. Natural energy gathers and enters through the opened eighth gate.



    Page 5

    Madara: Natural Energy? (laughs...) Finally, a more worthy opponent than hashirama.

    The aura arounds Gai become more powerful and concentrated.

    SFX: Boulders rising and air current becomes wild.
    Gai: Roooooooooooooooooooar

    Tremendous energy rises into the skies

    Madara becomes more serious.
    Madara: I should play this carefully.

    Scene changes to kakashi who has moved far away from Guy

    Kakashi is bracing himself from the violent energy.
    Kakashi remembers gai when he was in academy

    Page 6
    Gai tries to mold chakra.
    Gai: Clone jutsu
    Nothing happens and all students laugh at him

    Academy class is over and everyone goes home but gai sits by the shade of a tree looking lonely.

    Kakashi tries to talk to him but instead provokes him in a fight.

    Page 7

    The two fight and kakashi wins with taijutsu.
    Gai is panting.
    Gai: How did you win with physical attacks only?
    Kakashi: Taijutsu is only as powerful as the user. It's true that ninjutsu is the most basic thing to ninjas but taijutsu is what makes a true fighter.

    Kakashi goes away.
    Gai reflects on kakashi's words
    Gai smiles
    Gai: I swear I will show everyone that hardwork and perseverance is what makes a ninja.

    Page 8

    From this day, Guy trains everyday, perfecting his taijutsu and confronted kakashi at last during a class in the academy.
    Students: Who bet that this loser can win?
    No one raises his hand.

    The fight starts and Gai loses again with kakashi on the floor.
    Kakashi: His taijutsu is strong.
    All the other students are shocked with disbelief.
    Gai tries to stand to his feet but falls unconscious.
    Gai: Finally, I..found my way of ninja.
    SFX: Eye closes

    Page 9

    Time passes, guy keeps on training. He becomes chuunin and then jounin, confronting kakashi frequently.

    Guy arrives on battlefield on time

    Kakashi is surrounded by hundreds of chuunins but gai intervenes, going eight gates' mode. The two of them manage to take out all of them.

    Scene changes to present
    Gai: Raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
    Energy explodes, creating absolute chaos on the battlefield and destroying everything.


    SFX: Stabilising
    SFX: Rocks falling
    The energy around guy starts to gain shape and finally air currents stop
    A white bird shows up in the sky


    Page 10

    Dawn arrives and the few beams of light shine the atmosphere.

    Guy is shown with an aura of white light. The marks on his hair have disappeared and his face is barely recognisable under the white energy. His hair is glowing and raised due to the powerful energy around his body.

    Guy looks more serious than ever
    Guy: I can't lose this battle because my life is on the line. It's over here and now!

    Page 11

    Madara: Fine. Finally you brats can fight.
    Madara thinking: (I can't afford to use 5 percent of my power anymore but still, this brat is not worth my time. I will go with twenty percent.)
    Madara powers up
    His staff glows, changes from black to dark purple and becomes surrounded by lightning. A chakra aura forms around his body, destroying rocks nearby.
    SFX: Crumbling
    Madara: Oumyoudon- Black Chaos
    The six bijuu damas fuse and become one.
    SFX: Air currents becoming wild

    Page 12
    Gai(I can perceive his thoughts. He is still understimating me)
    Gai performs the seals of hirudora but this time adds natural energy.
    Gai: The peacock changes into the tiger and then finally into the phoenix. I told you to not understimate me!!!
    Gai:Rooooooar!!! Yoru no hōō!!! (English: Night Phoenix)
    The atmosphere fills with light and a giant phoenix is hurled at Madara.
    SFX: Destruction! Shockwave!
    Madara:!!!!

    Scene changes to kamui dimension
    Obito is lying still on the ground
    Sakura is shocked.
    Sakura: You are....
    Naruto bears a similar appearance to Madara but has a real staff and yellow hair.
    Naruto: The founder of the shinobi world. It's time to end what has been started.

    Page 13

    Sakura: But how are you going to get out of here.
    Black Zetsu laughing at Obito: Pathetic Brat!
    Black zetsu stares at Naruto
    Black zetsu terrified: Rikudo?
    He stares at sakura and before she could react, he fuses with her body.

    Black Zetsu: Let me out of this dimension now if you want this girl alive!!
    Naruto glares menacingly at black zetsu.
    Page 14

    Naruto:Shi no teishutsu! (English: Death submission)
    Naruto holds his staff straight which glows.
    Black zetsu howls in pain
    Black Zetsu: Nooooooooo!
    Black zetsu vanishes completely.
    Sakura: Huff! Huff! Thanks
    Naruto(smiling): Let's get out of here Sakura. Jikukan Geto! (English: Space-time gate)
    SFX: Glowing staff

    Out of nowhere, suddenly a portal forms in the kamui dimension.

    A SUDDEN CHANGE IN PERSONALITY! END!!!


    Sorry for the images. I included them so that you picture the prediction
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    I liked it but you could have left out the absorbing senjutsu part, Madara negates ninjutsu not taijutsu.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Just awesome predictiction!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    This one is totally insane. I love it man. You write really like that kishi's fellow with your flashback + action. I love it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Awesome buddy

    Dont know whether it will come true or not but Liked your imagination
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Quote Originally Posted by Yin Susanoo View Post
    I liked it but you could have left out the absorbing senjutsu part, Madara negates ninjutsu not taijutsu.
    Thanks for the input. What I meant is when using the first seven gates, you rely on your chakra. But when you open the gate at the heart(the gate of death), it allows you to connect with nature. I intended a spiritual meaning but I do like your way of thinking.

    Quote Originally Posted by Bossman View Post
    Just awesome predictiction!
    Thanks. It's my third or fourth one.
    Quote Originally Posted by ajboyz View Post
    This one is totally insane. I love it man. You write really like that kishi's fellow with your flashback + action. I love it.
    Naruto is about talk no jutsu after all :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    I like it! Props to your prediction!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    I dont wanna Gai sensei die!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Good one ... . Atleast far better than mine
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Quote Originally Posted by copyninKakashi View Post
    I dont wanna Gai sensei die!
    So do I. But if he really does, then I found another reason this manga different from other manga.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Thanks everyone.

    Quote Originally Posted by copyninKakashi View Post
    I dont wanna Gai sensei die!
    In my prediction, he isn't going to die for at least 2 chapters. I believe that unlike the other gates where you use your ultimate attack and you are down, this one allows you to keep on fighting at the cost of your life, giving you power similar to a kage. If gai was to die, I think he could have been in top 10 list. Knowing kishi, he will surprise us with this one.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Awesome prediction........totally believable......
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    If Gai dies, it will be so weird. No more "the power of youth!" phrases. But props to your prediction mate. I like the sound of it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Thank you guys. Perhaps Naruto or someone else would revive everyone who died in the war because at the current moment, too many ninjas have died. If they aren't revived, the countries will look deserted.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Nice imagination but its wicked
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Sakura would've did something on her own to pull zetsu off but I like it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Quote Originally Posted by Hori View Post
    Nice imagination but its wicked
    I appreciate your feedback. BTW, is it the naruto picture?

    Quote Originally Posted by FemmeFatale View Post
    Sakura would've did something on her own to pull zetsu off but I like it
    Thanks for commenting .Don't think so because possessing others is zetsu's ability and it specialises at that. Just my opinion
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Gai solos Madera...... For the time being then Madera gets serious powers up Naruto comes out of the Kamui world and Saves Gai. Sakura saves Gai in his critical condition of going 8 gates.
    ^^^ I hope this happens..... Gai is too "young" to die.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Excellent prediction even though i don't like last pages man .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Quote Originally Posted by kishiuzumaki View Post
    Excellent prediction even though i don't like last pages man .
    I have been waiting for this kind of feedback. Thanks, I will edit it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Its awesome great prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Epic prediction you was very original

    Well done and keep up this great work
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuuybi View Post
    Its awesome great prediction
    Quote Originally Posted by KCMNaruto View Post
    Epic prediction you was very original

    Well done and keep up this great work
    Thanks. I will make future ones. BTW, I want to see your awesome prediction as always.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    Great Prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 667-Gai's awakening

    amazing, I am sure something like this will happen between Gai and Madara.
     
         

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